English 1

Professor:

Jose Antonio Villalona

Student:

Ashley Isabel Linarez Berroa

Id:
10146180

Date:

06/02/2023
Outline:

Introduction:
My ideal city is a calm and orderly city where everyone feels safe and welcome. This city is
a place where community and nature meet in harmony. Image Wake up in the morning,
have an excellent breakfast and leave your house at any time without worrying about the
traffic you may encounter. Sounds like paradise, right?

1.Aspect: weather

Topic sentences: the city with the best weather.

Main point: Temperature

Detail 1: Warm climate
Detail 2: Smooth Breeze

Main point 2: Clothes

Detail 1: Choice
Detail 2: comfiness

Main point 3: Agriculture

Detail 1: Season
Detail 2: harvest

Conclusion sentence:
As I already saw, with the conditions of the city it would have the best climate and maybe
we can get rid of the mosquitoes.

2.Aspect: Environment

Topic sentences: the city could get the cleanest population and lifestyle

Main point: Streets

Detail 1: Diary cleaning
Detail 2: education

Main point 2: Parks

Detail 1: trees
Detail 2: Animals

Main point 3: recycle

Detail 1: organization
Detail 2: reuse
Conclusion sentence:
Only the best for the environment.
3.Aspect: Traffic

Topic sentences: Traffic in an ideal city must be safe and friendly for all road users.

Main point: Balance

Detail 1: transport
Detail 2: infrastructure

Main point 2: Vial education

Detail 1: signals
Detail 2: speed

Main point 3: Rules

Detail 1: respect
Detail 2: penalties

Conclusion sentence:
Strict penalties should also be established for those who do not respect the traffic rules.

4.Aspect: Education

Topic sentences: education is a top priority

Main point: budget

Detail 1: qualified personal
Detail 2: facilities

Main point 2: funds

Detail 1: programs
Detail 2: extra activities

Main point 3: more organization

Detail 1: promotions
Detail 2: evaluation

Conclusion sentence:
As a promotion of trained teachers, effective evaluation methods and performance in the
quality of studies and morality, thus leaving a generation of thinking beings significantly.
My ideal city

My ideal city is a calm and orderly city where everyone feels safe and welcome. This city is
a place where community and nature meet in harmony. Image Wake up in the morning,
have an excellent breakfast and leave your house at any time without worrying about the
traffic you may encounter. Sounds like paradise, right?

First the weather, my city would be a city with the best climate. The temperature oscillates
between 20-25 degrees, with a climate not so cold and not so hot, a warm environment.
That also accompanies the soft breeze through the parks and enters the windows. Because
of this climate, clothing could be worn in any way, sometimes short or long. We would not
have this incessant heat and comfortable and medium light clothing would predominate.
But not only that, agriculture would be developed, the climate would make multiple types
of fruits grow and it would be possible to have everything. As I already saw, with the
conditions of the city it would have the best climate and maybe we can get rid of the
mosquitoes.

Second, the city could get the cleanest population and lifestyle. Starting with the streets,
which would be on a daily cleaning schedule, they would always be clean and tidy, not to
mention the education that people would have to keep it that way. In addition, many parks
with good maintenance, the trees will remain leafy, and small animals that live in these
parks give life to the environment. And lastly, recycling will remain as a priority in the free
space, the organization of sectioned garbage cans for their different types of garbage, later
counting on factories that use the reuse of these materials in an environmentally friendly
manner. Only the best for the environment.

The third aspect, Traffic in an ideal city must be safe and friendly for all road users. This
means that there must be a balance between private transport and public transport, as well
as adequate safety infrastructure so that all road users are protected. In an ideal city, drivers
must have a good traffic education and respect traffic signs, as well as have a responsible
attitude towards other road users. This means respecting the maximum speed allowed, not
driving under the influence of alcohol, and not performing dangerous maneuvers. Strict
penalties should also be established for those who do not respect the traffic rules.

Finally, in my ideal city, education is a top priority. This implies that significant efforts
have been made to ensure a high-quality education system for all its inhabitants.
In this ideal city, enough budget has been allocated to meet the basic needs in education.
This includes funds for the construction of adequate facilities and for qualified personnel.
Funds are also available for special programs, such as arts, physical education, science, and
technology, to ensure that students obtain a well-rounded education.
In addition to financial resources, the ideal city has also made significant efforts to improve
the level of education. As a promotion of trained teachers, effective evaluation methods and
performance in the quality of studies and morality, thus leaving a generation of thinking
beings significantly.
In conclusion, it can be seen how these aspects such as climate, environment, traffic, and
education can significantly change a city, perhaps in the future with our help the city we
live in can become the same in some way as the one we describe. From education and
respect for the public environment, to the same ingenuity to be able to drive correctly.