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    This examiner's comments discuss an exhibition that received an 8 out of 10 marks. While the exhibition attempted to focus on the prompt and used objects with real-world context, it did not fully justify the contribution of each object or support points with sufficient evidence. The exhibition explored how theory of knowledge manifests in the world, but lacked excellence to receive a top band mark because it did not strongly justify each object's contribution or adequately evidence its points.

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    This examiner's comments discuss an exhibition that received an 8 out of 10 marks. While the exhibition attempted to focus on the prompt and used objects with real-world context, it did not fully justify the contribution of each object or support points with sufficient evidence. The exhibition explored how theory of knowledge manifests in the world, but lacked excellence to receive a top band mark because it did not strongly justify each object's contribution or adequately evidence its points.

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    This examiner's comments discuss an exhibition that received an 8 out of 10 marks. While the exhibition attempted to focus on the prompt and used objects with real-world context, it did not fully justify the contribution of each object or support points with sufficient evidence. The exhibition explored how theory of knowledge manifests in the world, but lacked excellence to receive a top band mark because it did not strongly justify each object's contribution or adequately evidence its points.

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    Exhibition example E: Examiner’s comments

    TOK exhibition examiner‘s comments


    Mark awarded 8

    Marks available 10

    Example E
    This is an example of an exhibition where the objects do have specific real-world context and where there is a genuine
    attempt to focus on the prompt. However, the particular contribution each object makes to the exhibition itself is not fully
    sustained. To have been awarded a mark in the top band, this response would have needed to have a strong justification
    for the contribution of each object and to support more of the points with appropriate evidence. It is a good exhibition that
    does explore how TOK manifests in the world, but it is not excellent.

    Theory of knowledge assessed student work 1

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