Lists of revisions for our undergraduate study:

1. Removal of unnecessary discussions about diseases in Chapter 2 p. 10-13.

2. Improve writing style to make the discussions in Chapters 2-5 a continuous flow.
3. Change section title of Wastewater Analysis of Roxas Avenue Canal (Chapter 2: p. 13)
4. Organize sectioning so as to reduce section numbers (Chapter 2: p. 16-27)
5. Summarize the related studies. Cluster according to topics. One subsection does not
necessarily mean a related study. Improve section numbers of related studies. (Chapter
2: p.36-50)
6. Change tense in Chapters 3-5.
7. Insert “initial analysis which includes…” in Chapter 3.1; paragraph 1; sentence 2; p. 51.
8. Insert “of the in-situ wastewater conditions…” in Chapter 3.1; paragraph 2; sentence 2; p.
51.
9. Change “technical” to “other” in Chapter 3.1; paragraph 2; sentence 2; p. 51.
10. Improve writing style of paragraph 3 in Chapter 3.1, p. 51.
11. Place Pretest in Figure 3.1, p. 52.
12. Capitalize location name of Padre Zamora St., Chapter 3 p. 51.
13. Address how to obtain flow rate in Chapter 3.2; p. 51.
14. Change “semi-log graph” to “particle-size distribution curve”, Chapters 3-4.
15. Remove Table 3.1 in p. 56.
16. Remove “Proposed” in Chapter 3.3.1.1.
17. Change proposed photos of prototype to actual photos of prototype. Chapter 3
18. Remove empty Table 3.2 in p. 59.
19. Remove Chapter 3.5 Usability Testing, p. 59
20. Remove empty Table 3.3 in p. 61.
21. Remove empty graph Figure 3.6 in p. 62.
22. Transfer methodology of charcoal activation in appendices. Chapter 4.2.1 pg. 65.
23. Capitalize words in captions of Table 4.4 in p. 69.
24. Change caption of Figure 4.8 to Particle-Size Distribution Curve in p. 70
25. Move calculations of sieve analysis in appendix. p. 70 & p. 73
26. Move procedure of Constant head permeability test to Chapter 3. p. 74
27. Attach Ideal range of water quality parameters in Table 4.6 – Treated Wastewater Test
Results. p. 76
28. Remove Chapter 4.7. p. 78
29. Remove Unnecessary info in Chapter 5.1 p. 84.
30. Remove “DAO” in Appendices D and E. Place citation for both. Pages: 109-110.