Hello! I am Angel and I am 19 years old. I am from Pisco in Peru.

My
dad is from Pisco just like my mom, and this post is to inform you
about my daily schedule and my activities. This is my second year of
university and I want to make new friends! On weekdays, I wake up
at 6 am and then take a shower. At 7 I have breakfast and then I get
ready for my classes. My dad takes me to college at 7:30 and then he
goes to work. My mom stays at home. My classes start at 8:30, and
sometimes they are virtual, so on those days I take my lunch break
and then I go for a walk or run, to distract myself for a while, in the
afternoon I continue my classes that I have some scheduled that are
3 :30 to 6:00. In the evening, we have dinner at 7:30. After that, I
watch some TV and chat with my friends. at 9 o'clock I read a book or
do my homework and go to bed around 10:30. On weekends I try to
be alone. This is all about me!

Criteria Yes No
Does the student describe his/her routine and leisure activities? x
Does the student describe the routine and leisure activities of a relative? x
Does the student comply with the text length (40-60 words?) X
Is there a logical sequence between sentences?  x
Does the student use the rules of the present simple in the first person correctly? x
Does the student use the rules of the present simple in the third person correctly
x
?
Does the student use the vocabulary learned in the course? x

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