Statement of Aims feedback – Conclusion

Right, I’m ready for your comments and harsh criticisms.

This isn’t a democracy, it’s a dictatorship. Don’t expect me to make any changes to my Statement of Aims.

QUESTION 1 - Out of the eight people who answered my form, only one disliked my
plot.

QUESTION 2 – Below is a table with everyone’s reasons for liking (and disliking) my
plot:
NAME OF RESPONDANT SUMMARY OF RESPONSE
Paul Ralph Said it was detailed and gave a good
overview.
Andrew Williams Said it was easy to understand. Would
watch it if it was a real film.
Emma Bown Thought it was well thought out.
Micky Hyde Likes stories about ancient evils.
James Collie Impressed with the detail, thought the
story and character creation were
alright.
Colby Savin Thought the story and the Void were
cliché.
Sam Gunner Likes how the Void can emotionally
damage Maigo (NOT AMIGO).
Eloise Abercrombie Says it’s a film about triumphing evil and
it has a good outcome.

QUESTION 3 – This is a collection of ideas I could use to improve my Statement of

aims. Again, it’s in table format.
NAME OF RESPONDANT SUMMARY OF RESPONSE
Paul Ralph Wants specific comics and scripts in
Section 5.
Andrew Williams Nothing.
Emma Bown Nothing.
Micky Hyde Wants some wording in the synopsis
changed.
James Collie Nothing.
Colby Savin Everything.
Sam Gunner Wants the intended audience section
clarified.
Eloise Abercrombie Wants the red text relocated, when it’s
fine where it is, and wants the Void to
instead “corrupt” people.

QUESTION 4 – Six people were fine with how the Void’s power works. One person
wanted it changed and one other person didn’t answer (I should’ve made every
question mandatory.)
QUESTION 5 – This was more opinionated than the rest, and 7 out of 8 preferred
Maigo as the hero anyway (The one who didn’t choose Maigo chose David).

QUESTION 6 – Four people didn’t want how Maigo got his powers to be changed.
Three people said yes and the same person who refused to answer question 4 didn’t
answer this one.

QUESTION 7 – Three people have explained their answers to questions 4, 5 and 6.

NAME OF RESPONDANT SUMMARY OF RESPONSE
Paul Ralph Wants the route to the Orb of Balance
to be more dramatic.
Emma Bown Believes the powers or how they’re
attained are cliché.
Micky Hyde Believes the orb is cliché.