Review

 The topic should be specific, concise, and more clear.

 Avoid making repetition of same expressions in different ways.
 The hypothesis and hypothetical questions should be written.
 Balanced and impartial analysis is lacking. For instance, you suppose that SAARC has
had no achievements since its establishment. In this regard, you should have built
arguments first to make conclusive remarks.
 Need to elaborate on the evolution of regionalism and its impact on regional and
international politics. Like; make a comprehensive assessment of how regionalism helps
protect the national interests of each member state.