My feedback to Mr.

Lee is that I really liked the slideshow where you put a lot of pictures to

make the presentation not boring and having less context. Also like the way that you did not just

read off your slideshow but try to give us more detailed and specific explanations in your own

words. The enthusiasm was okay and it doesnt show that you believe in your content. Showing

your enthusiasm in your actions especially when speaking to a large group from the

stage, smile, let the excitement shine through in your voice, and maintain eye contact

with people in the audience. Be genuinely excited! See and feel your passion. One thing

that really stood up to me was your gestures. The movement draws attention to what you're

saying and draws attention to the important parts of your speech. The hand gestures

often help to emphasize certain points of speech and strengthen your message as well.

But I hope you depict something and involve not just hands but the upper body and

deliver with hands open, not with fists or pointing fingers. I also loved how you looked very

relaxed and not tense. I think that it's important to look and feel relaxed during a presentation.

No matter how nervous you may feel, a speaker who seems to be afraid of his audience will not

win their trust. When you are presenting, strong, positive body language becomes an essential

tool in helping you build credibility, express your emotions, and connect with your listeners. It

also helps us listeners focus more intently on you and what you're saying. Also try to present in

a way that is cause for curiosity. Make people interested in what you have to say to really

captivate them. Like pretending to show us a video or in the camera. And the pauses, during

the presentation, I really thought that you were talking way too fast and I was kind of lost and

jumping in your topics everywhere. When you’re nervous, it’s easy to speed up your

presentation and end up talking too fast, which in turn causes you to run out of breath, and get

more nervous. Don’t be afraid to slow down and use pauses in your speech. Pausing can be

used to emphasize certain points and to help your talk feel more conversational. Overall, the

presentation was good.