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# 01 – The First Day at a New School

Patty is worry about her new school she has no friends there. She get on the

jellow school bus. a girl greets Patty in the bus. “you are new at my school,

right? she says. “My name is Lisa What s your name?” Lisa says. “i’m patty.

I’m in Miss Pine s class ” Oh I know her. She is very kind You’re lucky,” lisa

says. She talk to Patty about Miss Pine and the school now Patty has a new

friend at her niu school.

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# 02 – Lunch Break

Mindy like to play with her friends at lunch break mindy and her friends play

tag on the playground today. Mindy is “It.” She close her eyes and counts “One,

two, three, four…tweny!” Mindy opens her eye and see one friend she runs

very fast. But she fall over and hurts her knee. The skool girl gives mindy a

band-aid. Mindy fills pain in her knee But she want to play tag again. Playing

tag is very fun

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# 03 – The School Bazaar

Many schools hold a school bazar every year children collects old clothes, books,

toys and even games. each class can have a small stall. They put price tags on

Every thing. Parents come and helpout They also sell home-made food

everything is very cheap. People can buy alot of things with a little bit of mo ney.

Many pipol come early and the market quickly come crowded. Its a fun day for

everyone.

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