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In the question we get the visual and a statement explaining what is shown in the visual.
Type of visuals
1. Bar chart
2. Pie chart – in pie chat whole circle represent the 100% of something. pie chart usually use for comparison
3. Line graph – this use to show changes over time
4. Table - table represent data using combination of text and numbers
5. Diagram – this have a combination of text and visuals. Diagrams progress from left to right (top to bottom)
6. Flow chart – use to represent how something works or produce. Using arrows we can identify the direction
of progress. Using title of the flow chart we can identify the topic
7. Map – we need to describe location of certain places in relation to other places
Assessment criteria
1. Cohesion and coherence – this means your ability to write clear and organize answer that is easy for
reader to follow and easy to understand. And also we need to organize the essay into paragraph group
information logically. Try to make ideas clear in sentence and between sentences. This can be done using
variety of linking words and phrases.
2. Lexical resource – use of range of vocabulary accurately and appropriately. This include the correct
spelling and the words are in correct form.
3. Grammatical range and accuracy – use of range of grammar accurately and appropriately. This also
include the punctuation.
4. Task achievement – accurately, appropriately, relevantly written the answer. And it should have minimum
of 150 words. We should paraphrase the first paragraph of the question without copying it. We also need
to summarize the visual using good a overview sentence. The overview need to include correct data or
labels from the visuals.
Sample answer:
The tables give information about the changes in different types of transport used by commt1ters over a ten year
period. Overall, the use of vehicles such as cars, trucks and vans decreased noticeably whereas walking and
using bicycles became more popular.
Looking at 2004, cars, trucks and vans were used by 74.6% of people for transport. This easily outranked the
train, which was the next most popular mode of transport with 6. 7%. In this year, walking and cycling were used
by 3.9% and 1.2 % of commuters respectively.
In contrast, moving forward to 2014, the use of cars, trucks and vans had declined significantly by 9.1%. On the
other hand, a higher percentage of people used bicycles (6.5%) in 2014, demonstrating a 5.3% rise, while
travelling on foot had increased to 8%. Other forms of transport, namely tram, ferry, taxi and motor bike, had all
stayed below 1% and changed little. Additionally, the percentage of people who did not travel only fell slightly to
7.2%
Task response:
Lexical resource:
Writer used wide range of vocabulary in the answer and use correct spelling ad correct form:
Grammatical Range:
1. Write has use complex sentences with using relative clauses with “which”, “also” and subordinate clauses
“whereas” and “while”
2. Use different of past tenses “became”, “was”, “had increased”, “did not travel only fell”
3. There is not error in the punctuation also
First and last sentences in the question are the instructions. Other than the instructions there is always two other
paragraphs. First paragraph gives the information about the visuals. Second paragraph tell you what to write
about.
We have to write one or two sentences introduce general topic of the visuals and explain the type of visual it
shows.
Example:
Using paraphrasing we shows the examiner that we understood the information correctly and we can use variety
of vocabulary and grammar.
Analyzing and describing key features
It is important to take time to analyze the information in order to identify key features. If you miss a key feature it
will affect your score.
1. Overview:
“Overall, it can be seen that the general trends was upward, with all countries showing and increase in the totals
of atomic energy produced”
2. Key features:
We can include the overview at the after the introduction or at the end.
It is better include overview at the beginning just in case you run out of time.
When analyzing the graph at the beginning it is important to identify main trend or trends to include in the
overview.
Example overview:
“Overall, it can be seen that the use of petroleum and coal fell slightly over the period. On the other hand, there is
were slight increase in the use of natural gas and nuclear energy”
Describe the information
Describing trends
We have mention the above trends in the overview, but we have to more describe these data in the body.
“The consumption of petroleum peaked at over 50% in 1973 and gradually declined over next 12 years. Since
1985, global petroleum consumption has remained stable at 40%”
“For the first decade after 1970, the rate of nuclear energy consumption was unchanged at around 5% worldwide.
After 1980, it slowly increased, and since 1995, it has plateaued at 12%”
In the above two pictures we used past tense for describe the change finished happened and present perfect to
describe change started in past and currently happening.
To increase cohesion we used the reference “it” rather than repeating the same word.
Doing Comparison
In this sentence we include the data. We have change the noun increse to verb
“In contrast, Greek, other languages and proper names have had a significantly smaller influence on the origins
of English, at 6% , 6% and 4% respectively”
This means we have that we have to transfer information in given visually into written summary. We have to do
more than list information we have to identify, present, highlight and illustrate the important features of the visual.
And organize the data in the visual in a logical way.
Example:
From the tile of the question and the visual we can identify three main important part of the process. That is
production, storage, distribution.
We can start from the left. Usually flow chart start from left, and also arrows also help us to identify the direction.
And we can group the followign three as the start.