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Killer Teen

Part 1 – Fight Where It All Started


There was a girl named Lola in U.S.A California. She was 15 years old.
When it comes to the lessons she was the best but it was different when
being social. She was a shy girl since her childhood because of family
issues.
Her father was a gun seller and an alcoholic on top of it he was beating
her mother. He was a very normative dad. She can’t go outside after 6
p.m and considering that she is a teenager that was a huge problem for
her. She once tried going outside at 9 p.m but when she was escaping
her dad found her and beat her for 10 minutes.
Because of her family issues, she only has two friends and their names
were Brad and Allison they were the only people who make her smile
and protect her from the bullies. The other students at school always
make fun of her because of her social skills but there was a point she
can’t play any sport because she was bad at all of them. She discovered
that everyone who made fun of her was a bad person she said this to her
psychologist and he said :
It is normal because you are different from others and stronger than
others. You should be confident!!
Her psychologist tells her this because he thought she was a special girl
with special features.
But she couldn’t stand and finally one Friday morning she started a fight.
There was this popular girl Elis and she was making fun of everyone at
school. She was gorgeous, yes but she was a devil inside!
The fight started when two girls punched each other but after 5 minutes
the fight got serious and suddenly Elis felt something wrong in her heart
but when she looked.................. There was a pen stabbed in her heart
the bleeding was coming out from everywhere then she saw the look of
Lola she wasn’t sad she was happy and angry. Suddenly Lola started
running. She ran away from school and went to the woods she felt that
the feeling the power was different.

Part 2 – Revenge
When she looked at the news she saw a report about their school. The
report tells that a 15-year-old girl was murdered in a school fight. As
soon as she got into the details she knew that the girl was Elis. But she
was feeling different she want revenge not from Elis but from all of the
people that makes fun of her.
Then she decided to punish everybody. But she realized neither a cop
nor someone else could not help her because she was already a
criminal. She had to do this by herself. She started to make a revenge
plan but most important a murder plan because she knew that
murdering someone was bad but it was going to be real revenge.

Part 3 – Plan and The Police


Her first target was Tom Bradley an arrogant boy from the school. Her
plan was really smart but she knew that this was going to be risky. She
already knew that Tom was taking a bus instead of her father's car every
Saturday because Saturday was his father's extra shift day. She followed
Tom to his home and when he tried to open the door Tom found that his
cat Mr.Luke was dead and after that, he heard a gun sound but it was too
late. The bullet hit Tom right his head and the next thing he knows that
he was DEAD. The neighbors saw Tom and called the police. The
detectives looked for fingerprints but they were not able to retrieve
anything. By the time they were leaving the building after giving up the
detective, Sam found a bracelet. To who does this bracelet belong? The
police started an investigation and after 2 days the test results came out
* that the bracelet belongs to Lola. The police informed her parents but
her parents claimed that she did not come home for 3 days. The police
started to look for Lola but when all of those were happening Lola was
already after her third victim. Two hours later the police discovered her
location. She heard sirens around her house but the thing that the police
didn’t know was that she was the one who already planned all this. She
had a tunnel under the house through which she can pass to the nearest
house. She was already in the tunnel when the police broke on the
house door. Once they were in it was too late for them as Lola had set a
bomb. After the explosion, everybody was dead or injured. Now Lola
wasn’t just a murderer she has turned herself into a serial killer and a
bomber too... Her victim's number was already 14.d

PART 4 – The FBI


After 14 deaths something weird happened that Lola wasn’t expecting.
FBI announced that half of the FBI units are coming to California. When
Lola heard the news she knew that this might be her end but there were
still 7 people that Lola didn’t plan how she was going to kill because she
knew this thing was far more serious than before. What she felt was so
strange as she have never felt so scared like this before. After 2 days she
finally finished her plan for her 15th victim. The next lucky person was
Mrs.Miley. Mrs. Miley was her math teacher. One day when she couldn’t
solve the problem Mrs.Miley embarrassed her in front of the school.
She believes that what she had done was cruel. She was her enemy.
Mrs.Miley even fought with Lolas' parents.

PART 5 – The FINAL PLAN?


Lola had planned to realize her next terror at the cafe where Mrs. Miley
always goes after school. The plan was she was going to get camouflage
like a woman after that she was going to bump into Mrs.Miley by
‘accident and when Mrs.Miley is on the ground she will put poisonous
drugs in her coffee.
The day finally come this was the day that Lola was going to murder
Mrs.Wiley but there was something that Lola wasn’t taking into account.
The FBI was predicting this because Lola’s parents told the agents to be
careful with Mrs.Miley. The FBI agents were protecting Mrs.Miley
because of the potential murder and this was something that Lola wasn’t
expecting at all.
The time was running and Lola finally saw Mrs.Miley entering the cafe.
She ordered her classic coffee and suddenly the time stopped for Lola
this was something different Lola can feel something was wrong but it
was too late when she bumped into Mrs.Miley she put the poison but the
agent saw Lola's body under the camouflage. It was too late for Lola
after that the agents have permission to shoot everywhere but not from
the head so the agent shoot at Lolas 2 feet before Lola understand what
was happening she already lost the game.
PART 6 – Everyone Knows
Lola was in court, waiting for the verdict. But the worst thing was she had
no one. You can imagine what a strange feeling she felt at that moment.
She thought they wouldn't imprison a child for life. However, the
decision wasn’t what she expected. Maybe with amnesty, her time could
be shortened, but she said: If I live 100 times, I will do it all over again! I
do not regret what I did. And with this, the decision became permanent.
Lola committed suicide at the age of 67. 14 families whose children
were killed never forgot the pain of losing their children, and Lola is one
of the most hated criminals.
There is a proverb: Society prepares the crime, and the criminal
commits it! If you read this short story carefully, you will understand
what the proverb means.

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