MGTS7610 MANAGEMENT COMMUNICATION

Video 1: Coherence

Coherence is about...

To achieve coherence...

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A good thesis statement should...

Linking the thesis statement to topic sentences

MGTS7610 Week 3 Lecture Notes 1

Video 2: Five parts of a “body” paragraph:

[1] Increasingly, insurance within superannuation is becoming

more important in differentiating fund services to members.
[2] An important consequence of this is increasing complexity
compounded by the strategic move of lawyers into the claims
process. [3] This is evident in the volume of claims to be
managed increasing significantly since 2011 with an expectation
that it will not diminish in the future. [4] Consequently, financial
administrators will need to provide management services in
relation to insurance and the complicated circumstances around
specific complaints. This is where we come in.
Septimus Wigglesworth Financial Advisory Services are able to
provide the best services for…

conceptual/
general

concrete/ beginning middle end

specific

Structure Explanation
1)Topic sentence
2)Restriction/
elaboration
3)Evidence/
example
4)Interpretation

5)Cohesive tie

Things I want to ask my tutor…

MGTS7610 Week 3 Lecture Notes 2