MrBi’s IELTS Overall

WRITING 22
QUESTION Today more people are overweight than ever before.

What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?

NOTE
 Write ONE paragraph below (5 sentences, 100-150 words)
 1st: Topic Sentence (2 causes: X & Y)
 2nd: Idea 1, describe the 1st cause in details (what is X?)
 3rd: Effect of Idea 1, leading back to obesity
 4th: Idea 2, describe the 2nd cause in details (what is Y?)
 5th: Example of Idea 2

The increase in the obesity rate of a large number of people today appears to be attributable to two
main causes. The first reason involves the sedentary lifestyle along with a lack of moderate-vigorous
physical activities could be negatively associated with obesity. There are a majority of people
nowadays who work nine-to-five jobs and drive private vehicles to work, which means that they have
less time for exercise and gain weight more easily. As recent evidence has suggested, extended
periods of inactivity can reduce metabolism and impair the body’s ability to control blood sugar
levels, regulate blood pressure and break down fat. Another reason for that could be the unhealthy
diets among many people. This is partly because high calories food, which is high in fat and sugar,
often has become cheaper and more convenient, and is heavily advertised and promoted. For
example, teenagers are likely to eat junk food, while workers usually consume highly processed foods
due to hectic schedules.

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