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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful.

Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are
more successful.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many would argue that those who contribute significantly to society, such as artists,
teachers and scientists, are more successful than the affluent.
In my opinion, although earnings can be a sign of success, one’s worldly impact should be
held in higher esteem.

On the one hand, wealth allows an individual to enjoy their life to the fullest. It is common
in popular culture to elevate values related to altruism; however, most honest individuals
would admit that success can be equated with what one can afford. The wealthy can afford
the possessions and lifestyle they desire and also have the free time and peace of mind to
completely enjoy their leisure. In past centuries, such people were admired as shameless
examples of personal enjoyment. Therefore, this financial freedom can be viewed as the
strictest and more direct definition of success.

However, money itself does not always engender a feeling of satisfaction in the same way as
more active pursuits in life. Many wealthy individuals feel that they have contributed little
to society and this diminishes their enjoyment of their gains. Such dissatisfaction is less
present in individuals who, as long as they are not living in destitute poverty, pursue
meaningful outlets for their energies. For example, renowned scientists throughout history
are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are considered great successes due to their
contributions and the personal joy they derive from the full exercise of their abilities. This
fact can be extended to all other professions that involve determination, creativity, and the
growth of one’s influence.

In conclusion, despite the material benefits of wealth, it is clear that one’s ability to shape
the world is a surer symbol of success. Every individual and society must locate a balance
between these two ideals.

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