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Writing Issues
11 Clarity
2 Passive voice misuse
7 Wordy sentences
2 Unclear sentences

21 Correctness
2 Faulty subject-verb agreement
5 Punctuation in compound/complex
sentences
2 Comma misuse within clauses
3 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
1 Misuse of quanti ers
2 Faulty parallelism
1 Incorrect verb forms
1 Confused words
1 Incorrect noun number
1 Pronoun use
1 Wrong or missing prepositions
1 Faulty tense sequence

2 Engagement
2 Word choice

1 Delivery
1 Inappropriate colloquialisms

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Unique Words 57%

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percentage of words used only once in your
document

Rare Words 26%

Measures depth of vocabulary by identifying words rare words
that are not among the 5,000 most common English
words.

Word Length 4.9

Measures average word length characters per word

Sentence Length 34.5

Measures average sentence length words per sentence

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It is believed that in order to resolve the environmental issues, the current
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human generation have to live a less comfortable life. I think that this solution
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is the only possible way to bene t future generations, otherwise we will be
leaving just a bigger problem for future generations to overcome.
First of all, humans have been leaving a huge carbon footprint all over the
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planet earth without taking any measures to prevent destruction of the
ecosystem or even slow the rate at which they are damaging the environment.
Unfortunately, the world is experiencing a range of extinct animals and
diminished biodiversity at the moment, but there are still other aspects of
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damaged environment that is reversible and not totally gone.
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Unfortunately, the world has seen a wide range of its species going extinct and
its biodiversity is diminishing at an alarming rate, but there is still hope for
preserving the current environment and reversing the damages to some extent
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if it is done properly by the right people.
Additionally, the sheer amount of greenhouse gases has increased
exponentially over the years due to the excessive demand for food and energy
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with the ever-evolving industrial needs and rising number of populations,
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drastic measures have to be put in place such as limiting the number of
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children in each household, both to maintain a natural balance on human
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population and controlling the curve.
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Flattening the curve which means to spread out the rate of environment
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degradation so as to not overwhelm
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Even though these actions might not bear immediate result, considering the
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amount of damage done by years and years of negligence, it will be fruitful in

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the long run. Moreover, it demands for a change in the mindset that it must
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become a sustainable philosophy of life not only in this generation, but also for
all the generations to come.
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To conclude, I strongly believe that it is still not too late for our generation to
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tone down the extravagant lifestyle, rethink the consumerism, and start
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working on a world where our children could also enjoy.

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1. is believed Passive voice misuse Clarity

2. in order to → to Wordy sentences Clarity

3. have → has Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

4. It is believed that in order to resolve the Unclear sentences Clarity

environmental issues, the current human
generation have to live a less comfortable
life.

5. that this Wordy sentences Clarity

6. , otherwise → . Otherwise, ; otherwise Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex
sentences

7. otherwise, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

8. earth Wordy sentences Clarity

9. the destruction Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

10. the damaged Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

11. is → are Faulty subject-verb Correctness

agreement

12. totally Wordy sentences Clarity

13. its Wordy sentences Clarity

14. , and Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex
sentences

15. appropriately done, adequately done Word choice Engagement

16. with → . With, ; with Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex

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sentences

17. number of Misuse of quanti ers Correctness

18. , drastic → Punctuation in Correctness

; drastic, , and drastic, . Drastic compound/complex
sentences

19. be put Passive voice misuse Clarity

20. , such Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex
sentences

21. limiting the number of children in each Faulty parallelism Correctness

household, both to maintain

22. controlling → to control Faulty parallelism Correctness

23. to spread → spreading Incorrect verb forms Correctness

24. environment → environmental Confused words Correctness

25. so as to → to Wordy sentences Clarity

26. not to overwhelm Inappropriate colloquialisms Delivery

27. result → results Incorrect noun number Correctness

28. it → they Pronoun use Correctness

29. for Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

30. for Wordy sentences Clarity

31. generation, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

32. strongly → rmly Word choice Engagement

33. the consumerism Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

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34. could → can Faulty tense sequence Correctness

35. To conclude, I strongly believe that it is Unclear sentences Clarity

still not too late for our generation to tone
down the extravagant lifestyle, rethink
the consumerism, and start working on a
world where our children could also enjoy.

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