Professional Documents
Culture Documents
A Research Paper
Lili Darma
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ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
MUHAMMADIYAH UNIVERSITY OF
KENDARI
2019
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Alhamdulillah, I would like to express my grateful thanks to Allah SWT, who has
endowed upon his blessing and guidance, so that I could finish this thesis well. I also
would like to say Alhamdulillah because Allah sent the great human, Muhammad
SAW who taught to us the petience. His Sunnah showed me the best way of life how
to do this project; spirit, patient, and believes. Then, Allah bestowed my life.
I dedicate my grateful thanks and loves for my beloved parents: my father Aluani
and my mother Wa Ida, thanks for the prayers, encouragement, support and
motivation and their guidance that how to be a good woman and as well as whenever
I go you are always in my deepest heart. Thank you very much for all the donation
and fund that always given at anytime and motivated when my spirit is down.
all because you are my everything in my life. I also give my special thanks to both of
my young brother, Jamma and Dani, for my sisters, Wida, Nurmala S.pd, for my old
brother Fiadin and also for all my family that helped, motivated and support me in my
supervisors, Dr. Nurfaidah, S.Pd., M.Ed. and Titin Rahmiatin, S.Pd., M.Pd. who
always provide guidance, motivation, ideas and support during the completion of this
thesis. They also inspired me how to study well, don't give up, and always try to
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correct mistakes when completing this paper and how to be a good English teacher
too. A big appreciation and special thanks to my best lecturer, Citra Prasiska Puspita
Tohamba, S.Pd., M.Pd. who always helps, motivates and guides me in completing
this thesis.
3. Tri Indah Rusli, S.Pd., M.Pd., as the Head of English Language Teaching
Department who always helps and guides her during the arrangements of this
paper
5. The writer‟s great lectures who shares their knowledge sincerely: Isna Humaera,
S.Ag., S.Pd., M.Pd, Abd. Halim, S.Pd., M.A., TESOL, Titin Rahmiatin, S.Pd.,
6. Faridawati, S.Pd.,as the researcher‟s proofreader and always help her to finish
this paper.
Then a bunch of thanks also addressed to my beloved friends Mariana, nurul amalia khaerunnisa, Susarli
COVER ....................................................................................................................i
APPROVAL AHEET ........................................................................................... ii
PRONOUNCEMENT .......................................................................................... iii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT ....................................................................................iv
LIST OF CONTENTS ........................................................................................... v
ABSTRACT ...........................................................................................................vi
CHAPTER I ............................................................................................................ 1
INTORDUCTION .................................................................................................. 1
A. Background of The Study.......................................................................... 1
B. Research Question ...................................................................................... 5
C. Objective of the Study................................................................................ 5
D. Significance of the Study ........................................................................... 5
E. Scope of the Study ...................................................................................... 7
F. Definition of Key terms .............................................................................. 7
CHAPTER II .......................................................................................................... 9
LITERATURE REVIEW...................................................................................... 9
A. Previews Study ........................................................................................... 9
B. Theoretical Framework ........................................................................... 11
1. Students‟ Cognitive Perception................................................................ ..11
2. Corrective Feedback ............................................................................. ….16
3. Written Corrective Feedback ................................................................. 17
4. Metalinguistic Corrective Feedback....................................................... 19
5. Definition of Writing…………………………………………………… .21
CHAPTER III ...................................................................................................... 22
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY ....................................................................... 22
A. Design of the Study .................................................................................. 23
B. Research Setting ....................................................................................... 23
C. Subject of the Study ................................................................................. 23
D. Instrument of the Study ............................................................................ .24
1. Reflective Journal ...................................................................................... 24
2. Questionnaire ............................................................................................ 25
E. Technique of Data Collection................................................................... .27
F. Technique of Data Analysis ..................................................................... .28
1. Data reduction ............................................................................................ 29
2. Data display ............................................................................................... 30
3. Conclusion ................................................................................................. 31
CHAPTER IV ....................................................................................................... 32
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ABSTRACT
LILI DARMA
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
This chapter consists of background of the study, Research question, Benefits of the
study, Scope of the study, Definition of term. Each part will be discussed in different
section orderly.
that becomes an interesting topic to discuss in second language writing. It has been
discussed over the past ten years (Elis, 2009). Interest in the contribution of
Young, & Cameron, 2005; Sheen, 2007; e.g., Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2010). In
corrective feedback (Gholaminia, Gholaminia & Marzban (2014); Azizi, Behjat &
Sorahi (2014), Hashemian & Farhang-Ju, 2018). These studies showed the effect of
context, there is a study about students‟ perception to WCF (Listiani, 2017, Rosdiana,
2016). Both of studies showed students‟ perception to WCF but one specific types of
WCF is far from research. Motivated to narrow this gap, this study is designed to see
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in writing class.
forms (Ellis, 2009). It provides L2 learners with some form of explicit comment
about the nature of the errors they have made. The explicit comment can take two
forms. One is the use of error codes that consist of abbreviated labels for different
kinds of errors. The labels can be placed over the location of the error in the text or in
the margin. L2 leaners should work out the correction needed from the clue provided.
As for the other type of metalinguistic feedback, L2 learners need to, first, locate the
error and, then, work out the correction. Some studies on the effectiveness of using
error code compared with other types of written corrective feedback gave a different
result (e.g. Lalande, 1982; Robb et al., 2001; Ferris & Roberts, 2001). Lalande found
that the group of learner of L2 German receiving correction error code outperformed
in subsequent writing than that of student‟s writing with directive feedback, though
the different was not statistically significant. While Ferris and Roberts (2001) provide
evidence that error code did assist the student to self-edit their writing and the later
the effectiveness of direct corrective feedback and metalinguistic CF found that both
are effective in increasing students accuracy of using English articles, and provide the
evidence that metalinguistic feedback was more effective than direct feedback. Khah
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& Farahian (2016) who studied on comparing the impact of metalinguistic feedback
and explicit correction also found that the group with metalinguistic feedback had
greater improvement than the group which received the explicit correction feedback.
Moreover, Chung (2015), researched about the perception of Korean EFL learners
toward feedback types on students‟ written errors. The result was students prefer to
direct feedback for their writing. In addition, in Indonesian university was from
Rosdiana (2016), her study was about students‟ perception toward WCF in writing
classroom. The study showed that the students‟ preferences for feedback and error
correction on their writing. Most students wished their teacher to mark and correct
errors for them and believe that Written Corrective Feedback was primarily the
teacher‟s responsibility. Jabu et al. (2017) also showed in their finding study that
regarding the effect of lecturers‟ corrective feedback to the students‟ uptake, there
are no reliable data showing how lecturers‟ corrective feedback directly affects the
students‟ uptake. However, it is understood that in this case study, peer-repair request
and metalinguistic feedback successfully lead repair uptake although its occurrence
shows rarity.
feedback has been examined both at global and national levels and shows that this
type of corrective feedback has an effect that can help students in writing. However,
the study about students‟ perception to WCF in Indonesia was still general. The study
still not focused on one type of WCF specifically metalinguistic corrective feedback
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and how students respond to it. Meanwhile, the advantages of the feedback are not
the only reason to implement the feedback in writing class. Knowing students‟
thought and feel toward the feedback can be another reason. What they think
and feel toward the feedback help teachers to adjust and improve the feedback
which suits their students‟ comfort and the goal of writing teaching and learning
(Listiani, 2017).
mental and cognitive process that enables people to interpret and understand the
surroundings. Pike and Ryan (2004) stated that cognitive perception is the process of
with the question of “what” (what is happening, what is going on, what is the
meaning of that information) (Baumeister et al., 1998). It explain that the relationship
depend on the cognitive process they get from what they see, feel and think in
processing information. In this study, the researcher examined the cognitive aspect
based on theory Yingxu Wang et al., (2006) that categorized the main cognitive
Friday, 1 March, 2019, WCF is already used by the lecture in their writing class. This
is based on what the lecture of writing class in fourth semester said through
interview. Since the WCF can help students to improve the accuracy of their texts in
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writing (Ferris, 2011 p.12). In addition, this issue has not been properly examined yet,
feedback seems to be an important one to be researched. The writer will conduct this
B. Research Question
follows:
feedback given by the lecture in writing class at the fourth semester English
There are two kinds‟ benefits in this research, theoretical and practical. It is as
follow:
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1. Theoretical Benefits
how the students response about it and determine the theory about written
corrective feedback.
2. Practical Benefits
teachers‟ insight about how they make the best use of the students‟
For students, this study can help the students to reveal what they
need towards the feedback. The knowledge in revealing their response can
be used as their reflections to learn. Regarding with this, they may develop
This result will add the knowledge about the theory of feedback,
It can be used as the references for the next researchers who are
The scope of the study is only focus on students‟ cognitive perceptions toward
writing. That was based on their feedback in writing classroom at fourth semester of
F. Definition of Keyterm
theory dealing with this research; there are some key terms such as:
written feedback, comments, correction and/or marks are given to students‟ written
work draft. The marks may be on words or quick symbols such as underling,
circles, and other signs. According to Elis 2009, there are six types of written
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corrective feedback such us Direct CF, Indirect CF, Metalinguistic CF, the focus
comment about the nature of the errors they have made. The teacher provides some
kind of metalingistic clues as to the nature of the error that can take in two forms
Pike and Ryan (2004) stated that cognitive perception is the process of
with the question of “what” (what is happening, what is going on, what is the
CHAPTER II
LITERATURE REVIEW
This chapter discusses about literature review. This chapter describes about the theory
and definitions that is relevant to the research concept. The researcher would explain
A. Previous Study
In this part, the researcher reveals two previous studies that support this
research which also has the similar focus with the current research that is related to
study and using A Nelson English Proficiency Test to gathering the data. The subject
of this study was 60 EFL learners (36 females, 24 males) studying English at four
English language teaching institutes in Kermanshah, a city in west of Iran. This study
writing performance. The result showed that the group with metalinguistic feedback
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had greater improvement than the group which received the explicit correction
feedback. The findings suggest that providing teacher corrective feedback is effective
achievement.
This is a qualitative research. The research was aimed to explore English Department
writing classroom and collected the data by questionnaire and interview. The subject
of this study is English Department Student of UIN Ar-Raniry. It found that students
prefer to be given feedback from the teacher rather than no feedback. Students need
the correction in order to make them easily to improve their process of writing.
Based on the two previously studies above, the researcher examined about
written corrective feedback. The first researcher examined how the impact of
feedback on English as foreign language (EFL) learners‟ writing performance and the
second researcher examined about Students‟ perception, beliefs, and attitude toward
researchers are: the firs researcher used quasi-experimental study and the second
researcher used qualitative study. Besides that, the first researcher focused on how
metalinguistic and explicit written corrective feedback impacts to see which ones are
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more influential to be used in correcting student writing and the second researcher
classes. The first researcher has found that giving metalinguistic correction is more
influential than explicit and the second researcher has found how students perception
toward written corrective feedback but have not focused on any type of written
corrective feedback. Therefore, what makes this study different from the previous
study is the researchers tries to identify how students‟ cognitive perception to one
by the lecture in correcting the students writing error in writing class at the fourth
B. Theoretical Framework
In explaining perceptions, there are many experts who have given their
opinions about the aspect of perception; one of them is Pike and Ryan (2004) who
“what” (what is happening, what is going on, what is the meaning of that
information) (Baumeister et al., 1998). For example, relating to this study with
attachment (positive or negative) to people, object, ideas, etc., and ask the question
Morgan (1992) stated that affective component is related to the pleasure and
displeasure of someone. For example of this aspect is students perceive that they like
knowledge and affect to behavior and is associated with the issue of “why”. It is the
motivation, the proactive (as opposed the reactive or habitual) aspect of behavior
(Baumeister et al., 1998). Moreover, Morgan (1992) stated that conative is concerned
with the behavior or action of someone which related to an object. For example is the
From those components above, the researcher only focused on one component
examine three aspects based on theory Yingxu Wang et al., (2006) who categorized
object
have represented the three aspects of perception that will be used as the indicators to
According to Izard (1991) emotion can be divides into positive emotions like
joy, happiness, and love, and negative emotions like fear, anger, and sadness.
Emotions are a set of states or results of perception that interprets the feelings of
unpleasant.
or physical effort so that the person can achieve some previously set goal. Botzin
(1983) states that motivation can be observed by inferring from behavior since it
which stimulate a decision to act and can be seen from behavior. Wittig (2001) also
classified motivation into two categories known as learned and unlearned. It means
that if the students learned their mistakes, they have motivation in their self. But if
they unlearned they mistakes, it means that they have not motivation in their self.
and an evaluation. Eagly and Chaiken (1992) define that an attitude is a tendency
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people, objects, events, and other stimuli. motivation and attitude have considerable
impact on behavior and influence the ways a person thinks and feels (Westen,
1999).
Yingxu Wang et al., 2006 categorize the main cognitive perception into three
components; emotional, motivation and attitude. Here is the summary of the research
1. The indicators of emotion are satisfaction and feeling toward the feedback
2. The indicators of motivation are behavior or act toward the feedback that can
be learned or unlearned
In the explanation above, the author believes that student perceptions are
corrective feedback as the object of students' cognitive perception to find out what
addition, it was explained that the cognitive aspects of perception are emotions;
motivation and attitude, there are several indicators of each aspect based on several
theories. In this study, the authors focused on the three aspects of cognitive
perceptions can be positive or negative toward objects, situations, or people that can
be seen from the emotions, motivations and attitudes of the students. So, if the
students have positive cognitive reaction, the students will accept and learn the
teacher's feedback and will never make mistakes again. If students learn teacher
feedback, it will improve their writing skills and develop their critical thinking. But
sometimes student cognitive perception can be negative so they will ignore the
teacher and make mistakes again. In this study the authors focus on: identifying
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students' positive and negative cognitive perception that can be seen through
2. Corrective Feedback
Feedback is the way of the teacher to help the students that have
problems in learning with gives comments or correction. Hence, the students can
avoid the mistakes and more understanding about the learning activity. In teaching
learning especially in writing activity, feedback is the way to make the student avoid
quality of their writing. It is true because it can improve the quality of student‟s
writing, focusing on grammar, lexis, and content. So, it can improve the students‟
writing production and accuracy. Chaudron (1988) states that corrective feedback as
“the true” correction which succeeds in modifying the learner‟s inter-language rules
Some researchers and experts have classified the various types of corrective
feedback based on its forms. It can be written and oral feedback. Ellis (2009)
reported a typology of written corrective feedback into six types: direct corrective
of the feedback, electronic feedback; and reformulation. On the other hand, oral
feedback has many forms. Lyster & ranta (1997) divided the corrective feedback into
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the information which has a relationship with the students‟ and teachers‟ skill to
increase their skill in teaching learning. The corrective feedback is an action given
by the teacher to eliminate the mistakes made by the students in learning language.
Teacher can provide correction, comments and marks on the student‟s written
work draft. The marks may be on words or quick symbols such as underlining,
circles, and other signs. The teacher should provide the specific comments on
student‟s errors with suggestion about how to improve as well as with the comments
of the positive aspect of the work. On the written feedback teacher can give direct or
indirect corrective feedback. According to Ellis (2009) teachers can provide direct or
indirect corrective feedback. The first involves the teacher identifying linguistic
errors and providing students with the correct form. Besides that, while the correction
only concerned with correcting linguistic errors. Teacher response can also include
more lengthy commentary and this can address structure, organization, style, content
et al. (1997) identifying teacher commentary and find that teachers frequently asked
for further information, make suggestions or requests and give information. The study
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also highlighted the fact that teacher commentary can also include elements of both
1. Direct corrective feedback. The teacher provides the student with the
correct form.
2. Indirect Corrective Feedback. The teacher indicates that an error exists but
a) Indicating + locating the error. This takes the form of underlining and
b) Indication only. This takes the form of an indication in the margin that
a) Use of error code. Teacher writes codes in the margin (e.g. W-w: wrong-
the text.
This concerns whether the teacher attempts to correct all (or most) of
the students‟ errors or selects one or two specific types of errors to correct.
comment about the nature of the errors they have made. The teacher provides some
kind of metalingistic clues as to the nature of the error that can take in two forms.
1) Use of error code. Teacher writes codes in the margin (e.g. W-w: wrong-
grammatical description for each numbered error at the bottom of the text.
(See example 2)
Example # 1
Example # 2
(1), (2) You need a before the noun when a person or thing is
(3) You need the before the noun when the person or thing has
provided solid evidence that lends support to Bitchener‟s (2012) claim that
(e.g.,Rassaei, Moeinzadeh, & Youhannaee, 2012; Shintani & Ellis, 2013). In this
the gap between their knowledge and the received metalinguistic feedback.
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5. Definition of writing
Writing is most likely to encourage thinking and learning when students view
thoughts and ideas, and make them visible and concrete, writing encourages
thinking and learning for it motivates communication and makes thought available
for reflection (Gaith, 2002). In order to have a good writing that represents the
writer‟s thought, it is necessary to do some series of steps that usually called as the
writing process. In the case of learning, the writer is the student. When the students
start to write, they might have difficulties in putting the ideas and organizing them. It
is better to give them an understanding that writing is not a matter of writing the
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
This chapter consists of design of the study, subject of the study, instrument of the
study, technique of the data collection, technique of data analysis, and triangulation of
the data.
collect the data systematically. This type of research "refers to the meanings, concepts
their "counts or measures. Besides that, this research answers how and when a certain
phenomenon occurs. Confidently, the aims of this study are to know how the
class. This design used because it can be best obtained from reflective journal and
questioner.
way students receive the teacher any feedback in their writing form that must be
studied in detail based on the way of students‟ perception in natural way. However,
the writer wants to find out and try to analyze the extent to which the positive and
negative cognitive perception can be seen through students‟ reflective journal and
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that the design of this study have done through descriptive qualitative research.
B. Research Setting
As Creswell (2007) stated that the natural setting in collecting data is one of
Selecting the precise place is important because it will influence the result of the
of the research. In this research the researcher focused on the fourth semester students
of the English department in the 2018/2019 academic year class B. They were taking
advance writing subjects. This class consisted of 35 students. There are 30 female and
5 male but the researcher only choose 5 students as the subject of this research
because they had received metalinguistic corrective feedback from their lecture.
In this study, there were 5 students who were fourth semester students of the
English department in the 2018/2019 academic year class B as the subject of this
research. They were taking advance writing subjects. There are 35 students is this
There are some students among them who understand and are not
There are students who‟s the writing gets better after receiving
not.
There are also students who do not understand at all even though their
1. Reflective Journal
perception that will be know from students emotion, motivation and attitude
establish belief upon a „firm basis of reasons‟. What should noted from
learners with educational practices that cause them to establish their own set of
experience on the lecturer feedback process after reduce written material. Upon
having feedback by the lecturer, the participants was writing their experience on
cultural comprehension (Borg, 2006). Finally, the reflective journal was taking
2. Questionnaire
open-ended items. The questionnaire adapted from Wahyu Dwi Pratiwi (2013)
more freely as there are no fixed options. However, the answers have to be
still related to the topic of the questions. The researcher chose this type
underlining the respondents‟ view. There are eighteen open questions in the
the test could also be determined by a blueprint (Hughes, 1989: 22). The
blueprint can also show that questionnaire is divided into some parts. The first
In the interest of collecting the data, the writer organizes some of steps which
The writer would take the reflective journal students from the lecturer who
teach in the class, in order to look how students perception toward metalinguistic
corrective feedback given by the teacher when teaching writing. When having the
d. Concluding the reflection account through writing the important aspect when
2. Open-ended questionnaire
c. Asking the students to click the link and fill out questionnaires in accordance
Moelong (2001: 103), analyzing the data is called as process of organizing and
arranging the data into pattern, category and a set of basic classification to find
the theme and to formulate the research hypothesis as what the data advised. In
terms of analyzing the data, the researcher utilized steps adopted from Miles and
Huberman. As stated by Miles and Huberman (1994) who define data analysis as
“comprising three concurrent flows of activity they are data reduction, data display,
a. Data reduction
Reduction the data is the first step in analyzing qualitative research. It means
looking for themes and patterns. Thus the data that has been reduced will provide
a clearer picture, and make it easier for researchers to carry out further data
collection, and look for it if necessary. In this research, the data reduction will be
done during the research take place and it is done in line with the two key steps in
collecting the data. Therefore, the data reduction would be reduced by using the
following steps:
1. Reflective journal
c. Using blue color codes for positive student perceptions then yellow for
d. Store relevant data from aspects of this research in the form of concise,
concise descriptions.
2. Questionnaire
b. Data display
Data display is the second main stage later in data reduction. It is done in the
form of short descriptions, graphs, relationships between categories, and the like.
The data most often used to be presented in qualitative research is narrative text.
description by the researcher. As a result, relevant and important data that has
been arranged in the data reduction process is displayed in the form of a short
description. Therefore, the process allows the author to understand the situation
and develop the concept of further research. Display of the data will be carried out
1. Reflective journal
a. Select items from reflective journals that are in accordance with the research.
2. Questionnaire
c. Conclusion
Conclusion is the last stage in analysis techniques after data reduction and
display. The writer must arrive at conclusions and carry out verification, both in
subject in whom the study was conducted. The meaning formulated from the data
must be tested first about the truth, compatibility, and resilience. The author must
realize that in searching for meaning must use the views of key informants and
1. Reflective journal
a. Compare each note and list from the previous data analysis.
2. Questionnaire
CHAPTER IV
This chapter consists of two sections, the first section was finding which presents the
A. Findings
Writing Class
Based on the research question, the findings of this study is to find out how
class purposed by theory Yingxu Wang et al., (2006) who categorized cognitive
perception into three aspects; emotions, motivation and attitudes. The data obtained
from the reflective journal and questionnaire of 5 students as the subject of this
study. The researcher combined the results between reflective journal and
metalinguistic corrective feedback in writing class. The researcher used blue color
codes for positive student perceptions then red for negative student perceptions in
1. Students emotion
& II). Based on reflective journal and questionnaires, the researchers found that
students liked and happy toward the use of metalinguistic corrective feedback in
correcting their writing error because it helped them to correct their grammar errors.
But students also gave their negative emotion because the lecture used pencils in code
the error, so there are some unclear codes and the students prefer oral and written
feedback.
metalinguistic corrective feedback but also gives a negative response toward the code
used because the lecturer corrects using a pencil on her writing. As quoted in her
writing journal:
refer to students' emotional aspects see (appendix II.1-6), students respond positively
Then, the Student 2 (S2) also gave positive and negative emotion toward
appendix 2).
Student 3 (S3) revealed in his reflective writing that she liked toward the use
of errors code in correcting her writing error because it was easy to understand.
“I am very happy with the type’s correction of the teacher by used error
codes in correcting student errors so it was easy to understand” Which I
don't really like toward the feedback is the teacher used a pencil to correct
our writing and it's not too clear. The correction is clearer if the lecturer
uses a marker or pen".
positive responses (see appendix II). However, she also gave negative responses same
with Student 1 and 2. She complains about the use of pencil by the lecture.
Student 4 (S4) also revealed that she liked the use of metalinguistic corrective
fedback in correcting his writing. It will be seeing from students‟ reflective journal
and questionnaire (see appendix I&II). However, students also advise lecturers to use
colored pens to make the correction clearer. Negative comments between S1, S2, S3
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and S2 same are giving suggestion for the lecturers to use colored ink so that the code
given is clearer and in the questioner answered in number1. The students more prefer
oral feedback.
"My feeling when I got metalinguistic correction from the lecturer I am very
happy. As for my input, it was better for the lecturer to use colored pens in
correcting the students to understand again when improving their writing.”
The last student or Student 5 (S5) also has positive and negative emotion
toward metalinguistic corrective feedback but have different negative perception from
other students.
The student likes toward metalinguitik corrective feedback but she prefers
answer, where she is more inclined to positive emotion such as metalinguistic are
But based on the questionnaires results of S1, S2, S3 and S5, in number one
(see appendix 2) the students prefer the oral and written feedback. It means that
students prefer if the teacher does not only give the code but also explains it orally to
make students more aware toward their mistakes so it is easy to correct those
b. Students Motivation
revealed, namely student motivation. This aspect only obtained from the students‟
questionnaire (see appendix II, 7-11) and only one student that the researcher found
the aspect of motivation in students‟ writing journal. So, the researcher used
feedback from their lecture that can be learned or unlearned. Based on the result of
questionnaires, all students have cognitive positive perceptions because their learned
the mistakes after got metalinguistic corrective feedback from the lecture and correct
their writing. The students stated that they got motivation to improve their writing
The student statement was supported by the questionnaire that she had
responded. She stated that after getting metalinguistic corrective from the lecture, she
was motivated to always correct her mistakes such as rearranging the sentence
marked by the lecturer, rewriting the corrected part of the lecturer, always trying to
improve her mistakes so that she got a good score from the lecturer (See appendix II).
All students (S1, S2, S3, S4 and S5) stated that they were motivated after
getting metalinguistic corrective feedback from the lecturers which can be seen from
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students' responses in appendix II (see number 7-11). All students stated that
c. Students’ attitude
The third aspect of cognitive perception shows that students have positive
The Student statements are supported by answers from the questionnaire (see
appendix 2.11). She agreed with the response stating that her writing was better after
appendix 2). She stated that metalinguistic corrective feedback is very optimal, very
Students 4 (S4) also said that metalinguistic feedback helped her to know the
"After being corrected, I understand better how to use good and right
grammar"
that metalinguistic is very helpful to know the organizational structure of the correct
sentence.
The other students (S2 and S5) also have positive reaction toward
metalinguistic corrective feedback. All of students agree that the feedback is very
But, in questionnaire number 16, all students preferred to consult with smart
B. Discussion
In this section, the researcher will explain and explore the results of the research
that will be linked to the theory that is consistent with what the researcher explained
in chapter 2.
Feedback is the way of the teacher to help the students that have
problems in learning with gives comments or correction. Hence, the students can
avoid the mistakes and more understanding about t he learning activity. In teaching
learning especially in writing activity, feedback is the way to make the student avoid
the mistake (Ellis, 2009). Through feedback from lecturers, students can improve
their quality writing, focusing on grammar, lexis, and content. It supported by Ferris
(1999) who stated that feedback is beneficial for students to improve the quality of
their writing. This theory is relevant with the results of this study that showed almost
subjects in this study said that they realized the mistakes in their writing after
receiving feedback from lecturers so that the quality of students' writing became
into six types namely direct, indirect, focus, unfocused, metalinguistic, electronic and
metalinguistic corrective feedback, the lecturer can use two forms of correction
namely error code and grammatical description. from the results of the student's
writing which has been corrected by the lecturer, the researcher sees that the lecturer
only uses error codes in correcting student errors such as Art (article), pro (pronoun),
V (verb), WW (wrong word), prep (preposition) and other codes. In the results of this
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feedback. It means that the use of metalinguistic feedback is very effective in helping
students improve their writing. It was supported by previous study that has find out
Writing Performance of Iranian EFL Learners”.. This study was to investigating the
performance. The result showed that the group with metalinguistic feedback had
greater improvement than the group which received the explicit correction feedback.
reducing EFL learners‟ grammatical errors and improves their writing achievement.
effectiveness of direct corrective feedback and metalinguistic CF found that both are
effective in increasing students accuracy of using English articles, and provide the
evidence that metalinguistic feedback was more effective than direct feedback.
However, the effectiveness of the feedback is not the only reason to implement the
feedback in writing class. Knowing students‟ thought and feel toward the
feedback can be another reason. What they think and feel toward the feedback
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help teachers to adjust and improve the feedback which suits their students‟
comfort and the goal of writing teaching and learning (Listiani, 2017).
qualitative research same with this research. The research was aimed to explore
type of written corrective feedback and what perceptions the researcher will see as
said by Pike and Ryan (2004) that there are three components of perception namely
happening, what is going on, what is the meaning of that information) (Baumeister et
al., 1998). The cognitive perception of students can be seen from students' emotion,
skills.
In this research, the researcher used theory Wang et al., 2006 which
categorizes cognitive perceptions into three aspects namely emotions, motivation and
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attitudes. Through these aspects, the researchers want to know whether students have
According to Izard (1991) emotion can be divides into positive emotions like
joy, happiness, and love, and negative emotions like fear, anger, and sadness. Wittig
(2001) also classified motivation into two categories known as learned and unlearned.
It means that if the students learned their mistakes, they have motivation in their self.
But if they unlearned they mistakes, it means that they have not motivation in their
self. Eagly and Chaiken (1992) define that an attitude is a tendency of a human
So, from these three aspects, through reflective journal and questionnaires
answered by students, the researchers found that students had positive cognitive
their writing error. For students cognitive perception negatively, students only
suggest to the lecturer to use colored pencils or ink in giving the code to be clearer
CHAPTER V
recommendations for this research. The first part of this study describes the final
corrective feedback is used by the lecturer in correcting students‟ writing errors. The
second part of this chapter presents the limitations of the study and the last section
study.
A. Conclusion
This research was conducted to find out how students' cognitive perception
corrective feedback were positive which could be seen from the emotional aspects,
motivation and attitudes of students. From the emotional aspect, students feel happy
when their writing is corrected by using metalinguistic feedback. While from the
metalinguuistic correction from the teacher and from the attitude aspect, it was
revealed that students had positive reactions because they said that metalinguistic
corrective feedback was very important to use in correcting their writing error.
B. Limitation
below:
1. The researcher only focuses on cognitive perception among the three aspects of
perception proposed by Pike and Ryan (2004); cognitive, affective and conative.
5. The researcher only used reflective journal and questionnaire to get the data.
C. Recommendation
In giving corrections in students' writing error, the teacher must use clear and
feedback given by the lecturer is very influential on the results of student writing. So
based on the results of this study, the researcher considered a number of suggestions
for lecturers, students and next researchers. The writers' suggestions are as follows:
a. The lecture should use colored pencils or pens to give the student error codes to
be clearer
b. The lecture should combine between written and oral feedback. The point is that
the teacher does not only code the student's writing error but also explains it to
Students are expected to be able to use the results of this study as a reference
a. Researchers suggest that the next researcher can examine the three aspects of
b. The next researcher can examine more deeply about the three aspects of
c. The next researcher can also examine the two forms of metalinguistic corrective
feedback because in this research, the researcher only finds the error code used
d. The next researcher can use documentation and also interview to explain clearly
4. Pedagogical implication
to be an important point to note for teachers who teach writing skills because
before the teaching and learning process begins, lecture must understand the
level of students' abilities so that the teacher can use his/her teaching strategies
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when teaching and learning in the classroom. As a result students are easier to
that they must be aware of their responsibility to guide students in the learning
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APPENDIX I
Summary of students’ reflective journal
Blue: Positive cognitive perception
Red: Negative cognitive perception
APPENDIX II
Summary of Students’ Questionnaire answer