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IELTS WRITING TASK 2
QUý I, 2023
(KÈM HƯỚNG DẪN CHI TIẾT NĂM 2023)
01. Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 05/01/2023 1
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01 Ngày thi
05/01/2023
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
ngày 05/01/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Rich countries often give money to

poorer countries, but it does not solve
poverty. Therefore, developed
countries should give other types of
help to the poor countries rather than
financial aid. Do you agree or disagree?
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DÀN Ý
DOL sẽ trình bày quan điểm qua 1 đoạn mở bài (introduction), 2 đoạn thân
bài (body paragraph), và 1 đoạn kết bài (conclusion).
Mở bài:
Sau khi paraphrase lại đề bài, DOL sẽ đưa ra một Thesis Statement (luận
điểm) để nêu quan điểm hỗ trợ tài chính không phải là một giải pháp xóa
nghèo tuyệt đối nhưng nó có thể quan trọng trong việc hỗ trợ các quốc
gia đang phát triển --> Đồng ý một phần.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích quan điểm giải pháp hỗ trợ tài chính là quan
trọng trong các tình huống thiên tai hoặc đại dịch
Body 2: DOL phân tích giải pháp khoa học công nghệ có thể giúp các
quốc gia nghèo phát triển bền vững hơn.
Kết bài:
DOL kết luận và khẳng định lại quan điểm của mình.
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Body paragraph 1:
Financial aid provide immediate relief in natural disasters and

pandemics
Financial assistance can provide food, medicine, and shelter
For example, the COVID-19 pandemic has devastated many
poorer countries
Financial aid helps to mitigate the impact of the virus.
Body paragraph 2:
Other types of aid is essential to complement financial assistanc

Technical assistance helps to develop economies, improve
education systems and infrastructure
Share these knowledges through partnerships with
businesses, educational institutions, and governments
Create sustainable change beyond short-term relief
Lead to long-term economic benefits for both developed and
developing nations.
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BÀI MẪU
It is a commonplace for wealthier countries to provide money to

underdeveloped countries, yet the assistance fails to reduce poverty. Others
argue that wealthy countries should help developing nations in ways other
than monetary aid. Although financial aid is not a complete solution, it may be
crucial in assisting developing nations. Moreover, other types of support are
also required to battle poverty effectively.
Financial aid is crucial in providing immediate relief during times of crisis,

such as natural disasters and pandemics. In these situations, necessities such
as food, medicine, and shelter are urgently needed, and financial assistance
can provide these resources to those in need. The COVID-19 pandemic, for
example, has devastated many poorer countries, exacerbating existing
challenges such as healthcare and economic inequalities. Financial aid
provided by wealthier nations has played a critical role in mitigating the impact
of the virus and supporting struggling communities. While financial aid is not
a complete solution to poverty, it remains an essential tool in providing
immediate relief and support during times of crisis.
To truly combat poverty, however, it is essential to complement financial

assistance with other types of aid. Technical expertise and assistance, for
example, can play a crucial role in helping poorer nations develop their
economies and improve their education systems and infrastructure. More
affluent countries can share their knowledge and experience in these areas
through partnerships with businesses, educational institutions, and
governments. By working together, developed and developing nations can
identify and address the specific needs of poorer countries, creating
sustainable change beyond short-term relief. Additionally, this can lead to
long-term economic benefits for both developed and developing nations,
fostering mutual understanding and cooperation.
In conclusion, I believe there is still a significant role that financial assistance

may play in assisting low-income nations. In addition, expertise and help from
the technological realm are also required in the fight against poverty.
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Vocabulary
a commonplace (noun). chuyện bình thường

/ə ˈkɒmənpleɪs/ Air travel is a commonplace nowadays
(noun). hỗ trợ tài chính

monetary aid
The government provided monetary aid to the victims of the natural
/ˈmʌnɪtəri eɪd/
disaster.
to battle poverty
(verb). chống đói nghèo hiệu quả
effectively
Education and job creation are essential to battle poverty effectively.
/tuː ˈbætl ˈpɒvəti ɪˈfɛktɪvli/
Develop a sense of
responsibility and
(verb). xây dựng tính trách nhiệm và tính cộng đồng
community
Doing volunteer work will allow youngsters to develop a sense of
/dɪˈvɛləp ə sɛns ʌv ri responsibility and community.
ˌspɑnsəˈbɪləti ænd kəm
ˈjunəti/
exacerbate existing
(verb). làm trầm trọng thêm những thách thức hiện có
challenges
The pandemic has exacerbated existing challenges in the healthcare
/ɪɡˈzæsəbeɪt ɪɡˈzɪstɪŋ
system.
ˈʧælɪnʤɪz/
(noun). mất cân bằng kinh tế

economic inequality
The widening gap in income and wealth has led to increasing economic
/ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˌɪnɪˈkwɒlətiz/
inequality.
(verb). giảm thiểu

mitigate
Investing in renewable energy sources can help mitigate the impact of
/ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt/
climate change.
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Vocabulary
support struggling
(verb). hỗ trợ các cộng đồng đang gặp khó khăn
communities
Non-profit organizations support struggling communities during times of
/səˈpɔːt ˈstrʌɡlɪŋ kə
crisis.
ˈmjuːnɪtiz/
address the specific (verb). giải quyết các nhu cầu cụ thể
needs Effective policymaking requires addressing the specific needs of diverse
/əˈdrɛs ðə spɪˈsɪfɪk niːdz/ populations.
create sustainable
(verb). tạo ra sự thay đổi bền vững
change
A long-term approach is necessary to create sustainable change in the
/kriˈeɪt səsˈteɪnəbᵊl
environment.
ʧeɪnʤ/
foster mutual
understanding and
(verb). thúc đẩy sự hiểu biết và hợp tác lẫn nhau
cooperation
Cultural exchange programs aim to foster mutual understanding and
/ˈfɒstə ˈmjuːtjʊəl ˌʌndə cooperation between nations
ˈstændɪŋ ænd kəʊˌɒpə
ˈreɪʃᵊn/
(noun). các quốc gia có thu nhập thấp

low-income nations
Low-income nations face significant challenges in achieving economic
low-income nations
growth and development.
the technological (noun). l ĩnh vực công nghệ

realm R apid advancements in the technological realm have transformed various
/ðə ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪkᵊl rɛlm/ industries.
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Bài tập Exercise

Mình cùng làm bài tập sau đây để ôn lại các từ vựng
và cấu trúc đã được dùng trong bài mẫu IELTS
Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Di chuyển bằng máy bay là một chuyện bình thường ngày nay.
→ Air travel is ____________ nowadays.
2 Chính phủ cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính đến các nạn nhân của thảm
họa thiên nhiên.
→ The government provided _____________ to the victims of the natural

disaster.
3 Tạo giáo dục và việc làm là cần thiết để chống đói nghèo một
cách hiệu quả.
→ Education and job creation are essential _____________

4 Đại dịch làm trầm trọng thêm những thách thức hiện có trong hệ
thống chăm sóc sức khỏe.
→ The pandemic has _____________ in the healthcare system.

5 Khoảng cách ngày càng lớn về thu nhập và của cải đã dẫn đến sự
mất cân bằng kinh tế ngày càng tăng.
→ The widening gap in income and wealth has led to increasing

_____________
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6 Đầu tư vào năng lượng tái tạo có thể giúp giảm thiểu tác động của
biến đổi khí hậu.
→Investing in renewable energy sources can help _____________ the

impact of climate change.
Gợi ý
monetary aid to battle poverty effectively
exacerbated existing challenges mitigate a commonplace
economic inequality
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WRITING TASK 2
ngày 07/01/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Some countries achieve international

success by building specialized
facilities to train top athletes instead of
providing sports facilities that everyone
can use. Do you think it is a positive or
negative development?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm về việc xây dựng các cơ sở chuyên dụng để đào
tạo các động viên thì có hại hơn lợi.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích bất lợi thứ nhất: không thúc đẩy sự tham gia thể
thao cho nhiều người dân hơ
Body 2: DOL phân tích bất lợi thứ hai: tăng khoảng cách giàu nghèo
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Neglecting the development of sports infrastructure that benefits

the general populatio
Not promote sports participation for the broader population
Public sports are essential for building a culture of fitness
The lack of access to such facilities could harm public health
Governments must invest in a diverse range of sports
infrastructure
Body paragraph 2:
Widen the gap between the rich and poo

This creates an uneven playing field
This perpetuates existing societal inequalities
Society may become more divided
Governments should prioritize community-based programs
Help to bridge the gap between the rich and poor
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BÀI MẪU
In recent years, some countries have gained international recognition by

constructing specialized training facilities exclusively for top athletes rather
than providing sports facilities accessible to everyone. This essay will argue
that this trend is ultimately harmful, as it prioritizes elite achievement over
broader societal benefits.
Investing resources in specialized sports facilities may come at the cost of

neglecting the development of sports infrastructure that benefits the general
population. While these facilities may produce elite athletes, they may not
promote sports participation for the broader population. Public sports centers,
parks, and community programs that encourage physical activity are essential
for building a culture of fitness that extends beyond elite competition,
benefiting the entire population. The lack of access to such facilities could
harm public health, particularly for those from lower socio-economic
backgrounds who may not have the means to access private sports facilities.
Therefore, governments must invest in a diverse range of sports infrastructure
that is accessible to everyone and promotes physical activity and healthy
living.
Furthermore, investing heavily in elite sports facilities can widen the gap
between the rich and poor, as only those with access to these specialized
facilities can benefit from them. This creates an uneven playing field, where
wealthier individuals have greater opportunities for success and prosperity
than those from lower socio-economic backgrounds. This perpetuates
existing societal inequalities, where the opportunities for success are
skewed towards a privileged few. As a result, society may become more
divided, with only a tiny elite able to benefit from the resources invested in
specialized sports facilities. To prevent this, governments should prioritize
community-based programs that promote sports participation and physical
activity for all. This can help to bridge the gap between the rich and poor and
foster a more inclusive and equitable society.
In conclusion, by neglecting the development of sports infrastructure

accessible to everyone, fostering an environment of extreme competition, and
contributing to societal inequalities, the focus on elite sports could ultimately
do more harm than good.
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Vocabulary
(noun). thành tích ưu tú

elite achievement
Elite achievement is often celebrated, but it can create an unhealthy
/eɪˈliːt əˈʧiːvmənt/
competition that leaves many behind.
(verb). đánh đổi

come at the cost
Pursuing a career as a professional athlete may lead to elite achievement,
/kʌm æt ðə kɒst/
but it can come at the cost of physical health and wellbeing.
lower socio-economic
(noun). hoàn cảnh kinh tế xã hội thấp hơn
backgrounds
Individuals from lower socio-economic backgrounds often face significant
/ˈləʊə ˌsəʊsɪəʊ-ˌiːkə
challenges when trying to access higher education.
ˈnɒmɪk ˈbækɡraʊndz/
an uneven playing (noun). một sân chơi không công bằng

field The job market can be an uneven playing field where those with
/ən ʌnˈiːvən ˈpleɪɪŋ fiːld/ connections or privilege are more likely to succeed.
(verb). kéo dài

perpetuate
The way we structure society perpetuates existing inequalities, making it
/pəˈpɛʧʊeɪt/
difficult for some to break out of poverty.
existing societal
(noun). bất bình đẳng xã hội hiện có
inequalities
Inequitable policies and practices within our systems can maintain
/ɪɡˈzɪstɪŋ səˈsaɪətl ˌɪnɪ
existing societal inequalities.
ˈkwɒlətiz/
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Vocabulary
(verb). nghiêng về phía
skewed towards
The justice system is often skewed towards those with more money and
/skjuːd təˈwɔːdz/
power.
(noun). một số người có đặc quyền

a privileged few
The privileged few often hold the majority of wealth and resources in our
/ə ˈprɪvɪlɪʤd fjuː/
society.
community-based
(noun). các chương trình cho cộng đồng
programs
Community-based programs can provide a safe and supportive
/kəˈmjuːnɪti-beɪst
environment for marginalized individuals to thrive.
ˈprəʊɡræmz/
foster a more
inclusive and (verb). thúc đẩy một xã hội toàn diện và công bằng hơn.
equitable society Creating policies and programs that prioritize diversity and inclusion can
/ˈfɒstər ə mɔːr ɪnˈkluːsɪv foster a more inclusive and equitable society for all.
ænd ˈɛkwɪtəbᵊl səˈsaɪəti./
do more harm than (verb). lợi bất cập hai (hại nhiều hơn lợi)
good Programs that are poorly designed or executed may do more harm than
/duː mɔː hɑːm ðæn ɡʊd/ good to the communities they aim to serve.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Thành tích ưu tú thường được tôn vinh, nhưng nó có thể tạo ra sự
cạnh tranh không lành mạnh khiến nhiều người bị bỏ lại phía sau.
→ ____________ is often celebrated, but it can create an unhealthy

competition that leaves many behind.
2 Theo đuổi sự nghiệp của một vận động viên chuyên nghiệp có thể
dẫn đến thành tích ưu tú, nhưng nó có thể phải đánh đổi bằng sức khỏe
thể chất và phúc lợi.
→ Pursuing a career as a professional athlete may lead to elite

achievement, but it can _____________ of physical health and wellbeing.
3 Các cá nhân có hoàn cảnh kinh tế xã hội thấp hơn thường phải
đối mặt với những thách thức đáng kể khi cố gắng tiếp cận giáo dục đại
học.
→ Individuals from _____________ often face significant challenges when

trying to access higher education.
4 Thị trường việc làm có thể là một sân chơi không công bằng, nơi
những người có mối quan hệ hoặc đặc quyền có nhiều khả năng thành
công hơn.
→ The job market can be _____________ where those with connections or

privilege are more likely to succeed.
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5 Cách chúng ta cấu trúc xã hội kéo dài sự bất bình đẳng hiện có,
khiến một số người khó thoát khỏi đói nghèo.
→ The way we structure society _____________ existing inequalities,

making it difficult for some to break out of poverty.
Gợi ý
come at the cost lower socio-economic backgrounds
an uneven playing field perpetuates Elite achievement
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
ngày 12/01/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Some people believe that certain old

buildings should be preserved more
than others. What types of old
buildings should be preserved? Do you
think the advantages of preserving old
buildings outweigh the disadvantages?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm: nên ưu tiên bảo tồn những tòa nhà có ý nghĩa
lịch sử và văn hóa lớn nhất; bất lợi (chi phí sửa chữa và tác động đến nền
kinh tế) nhiều hơn lợi ích
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích lý do nên ưu tiên bảo tồn những tòa nhà có giá
trị lịch sử và có đặc điểm độc đá
Body 2: DOL sẽ phân tích 2 bất lợi của việc bảo tồn những tòa nhà cũ:
tốn một chi phí khổng lồ + cản trở sự phát triển của nền kinh tế
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Buildings with significant cultural or historical value should be

preserve
As a testament to a region's rich history and cultural heritag
To maintain a sense of continuity and connection to the past
Buildings with unique architectural features should also be
preserve
Represent the pinnacle of architecture from respective eras;
remind the evolution of architectural styles over time.
Body paragraph 2:
Preserving old buildings also has its drawbacks

Maintaining such buildings can be prohibitively expensiv
Divert resources away from other pressing needs
Preserving old buildings can come at the cost of economic
developmen
Limiting land use and obstructing new developmen
Reduced job opportunities and economic prosperity
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BÀI MẪU
Preserving historic buildings is a contentious issue, with some arguing that

certain buildings should be preserved more than others. I believe we should
prioritize the preservation of buildings with the greatest cultural and historical
significance. In addition, the drawbacks of keeping historic structures exceed
their benefits slightly since preservation expenses and their effect on
economic growth must be acknowledged.
Firstly, buildings with significant cultural or historical value should be

preserved. This includes landmarks such as ancient temples, castles, and
churches, which serve as a testament to a region's rich history and cultural
heritage. Preserving such buildings helps to maintain a sense of continuity
and connection to the past, providing a window into the history and culture of
a community. Secondly, buildings with unique architectural features should
also be preserved. These could include art deco buildings, Gothic-style
churches, and Victorian mansions. Such buildings represent the pinnacle of
design and architecture from their respective eras and remind them of the
evolution of architectural styles over time.
However, preserving old buildings also has its drawbacks. Maintaining and
preserving such buildings can be prohibitively expensive, and resources are
often limited. This can divert resources away from other pressing needs, such
as the construction of new infrastructure, affordable housing, and public
services. Moreover, preserving old buildings can sometimes come at the cost
of economic development. Preservation efforts may hinder economic growth
by limiting land use and obstructing new development. This can lead to
reduced job opportunities and economic prosperity for the region.
In conclusion, the most culturally and historically significant structures

should be preserved first. Moreover, the expenses of preservation and its
influence on economic growth must also be evaluated, and these factors
marginally offset the benefits of keeping historic structures.
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Vocabulary
(noun). một vấn đề gây tranh cãi

a contentious issue
Abortion is a contentious issue that many people have strong opinions
/ə kənˈtɛnʃəs ˈɪʃuː/
about.
(noun). hạn chế

drawback
One of the major drawbacks of using renewable energy sources is the
/ˈdrɔːbæk/
high initial cost of installation.
testament (noun). minh chứng

/ə ˈtɛstəmənt/ Her success in the field is a testament to her hard work and dedication.
(noun). một cảm giác liên tục

a sense of continuity
The tradition of passing down family recipes gives a sense of continuity to
/ə sɛns ɒv ˌkɒntɪˈnjuːəti/
generations.
pinnacle (noun). đ ỉnh cao

/ˈpɪnəkl/ Winning an Olympic gold medal is the pinnacle of many athletes' careers.
divert (verb). chuyển hướng

/daɪˈvɜːt/ She tried to divert the conversation away from her personal life.
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Vocabulary
(noun). những nhu cầu cấp bách
pressing needs
In times of crisis, pressing needs such as food, water, and shelter must be
/ˈprɛsɪŋ niːdz/
addressed first.
come at the cost of (verb). đánh đổi

/kʌm æt ðə kɒst ɒv/ Achieving success sometimes comes at the cost of personal sacrifices.
hinder (verb). cản trở

/ˈhaɪndə/ Poor infrastructure can hinder economic development in a region.
(verb). cản trở

obstruct
The construction of a new building obstructed the view from our
/əbˈstrʌkt/
apartment.
(noun). sự thịnh vượng kinh tế

economic prosperity
The government's policies have led to economic prosperity for the
/ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk prɒsˈpɛrɪti/
country.
(verb). bù lại
offset
Planting trees can help offset the carbon emissions from cars and
/ˈɒfsɛt/
factories.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Phá thai là một vấn đề gây tranh cãi mà nhiều người có quan điểm
mạnh mẽ.
→ Abortion is ____________ that many people have strong opinions

about.
2 Một trong những nhược điểm chính của việc sử dụng các nguồn
năng lượng tái tạo là chi phí lắp đặt ban đầu cao.
→ One of the major _____________ of using renewable energy sources is

the high initial cost of installation.
3 Thành công của cô ấy trong lĩnh vực này là minh chứng cho sự
chăm chỉ và cống hiến của cô ấy.
→ Her success in the field is _____________ to her hard work and

dedication.
4 Truyền thống truyền lại các công thức nấu ăn gia đình mang lại
cảm giác liên tục cho các thế hệ.
→ The tradition of passing down family recipes gives _____________ to

generations.
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5 Giành huy chương vàng Olympic là đỉnh cao trong sự nghiệp của
nhiều vận động viên.
→ Winning an Olympic gold medal is the _____________ of many athletes'

careers.
6 Cơ sở hạ tầng yếu kém có thể cản trở sự phát triển kinh tế trong
một khu vực.
→ Poor infrastructure can _____________ economic development in a

region.
Gợi ý
a testament a contentious issue hinder drawbacks
a sense of continuity pinnacle
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WRITING TASK 2
ngày 14/01/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Video records are better to learn about

the way other people in the world live
than written documents. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm: Nghiên cứu về những nền văn hóa khác qua
xem video records sẽ hiệu quả hơn đọc sách.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích ưu điểm của video records: cung cấp hình ảnh
trực quan về cách mọi người sống
Body 2: DOL phân tích ưu điểm khác của video records: cho phép nhìn
và nghe những điều sách khó có thể ghi lại.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Video records provide a visual representation of how people liv

More engaging and memorable than written document
Offer an authentic insight into their way of lif
Valuable for those who have never had the opportunity to
travel to other countrie
Develop a more nuanced perspective of their way of life.
Body paragraph 2:
Video records allow to see and hear things that may be difficult to
capture in writin
For example: facial expressions, tone of voice, and body
languag
Enhance our understanding of other cultures
However, video records may present a limited or biased view
of a culture
The filmmaker's perspective influences the selection of video
content
Therefore, seeking out various sources is essential to
understand a culture better.
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BÀI MẪU
While some argue that written documents are the best way to learn about
other cultures, others believe video records are more effective. From my
perspective, video records offer a more immersive and engaging way to learn
about how other people live.
One of the main advantages of video records is that they provide a visual
representation of how people live, which can be more engaging and
memorable than written documents. Watching videos of people from different
cultures going about their daily lives, interacting with one another, and
practicing their traditions can offer a unique and authentic insight into their
way of life. This can be particularly valuable for those who have never had the
opportunity to travel to other countries or experience other cultures firsthand.
By seeing people in their natural environment, we can better understand their
habits and customs and develop a more nuanced perspective of their way of
life.
Another advantage of video records is that they allow us to see and hear
things that may be difficult to capture in writing. For example, videos can
capture the nuances of facial expressions, tone of voice, and body language
essential to communication in many cultures. This type of nonverbal
communication can be challenging to convey in written documents and can
significantly enhance our understanding of other cultures. However, it is
essential to acknowledge that video records may present a limited or biased
view of a culture. The filmmaker's perspective or agenda may influence the
selection of what is included in a video, and specific aspects of a culture may
be omitted or distorted. Therefore, seeking out various sources, including
written documents, is essential to gain a more comprehensive understanding
of a culture.
In conclusion, personally, video records offer a unique and engaging way to

learn about other cultures. However, it is crucial to approach video records
with a critical eye to gain a more comprehensive understanding of other
cultures.
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Vocabulary
a more immersive and

(noun). một cách học hấp dẫn và thú vị hơn
engaging way to learn
Playing educational video games can provide a more immersive and
/ə mɔː immersive ænd ɪn
engaging way to learn.
ˈɡeɪʤɪŋ weɪ/
a visual (noun). một sự miêu tả trực quan

representation The world map is a visual representation for displaying the geographic
/ə ˈvɪzjʊəl ˌrɛprɪzɛnˈteɪʃᵊn/ distribution of a phenomenon.
(adj ). trực tiếp

first-hand
Reading about a historical event is one thing, but experiencing it first-
/ˈfɜːstˈhænd/
hand is an entirely different level of understanding.
a more nuanced
(noun). một góc nhìn đa sắc thái hơn
perspective
Learning about both sides of an argument can provide a more nuanced
/ə mɔː ˈnjuːɑːnst pə
perspective on the issue.
ˈspɛktɪv/
nonverbal
(noun). giao tiếp phi ngôn ngữ
communication
Nonverbal communication, such as facial expressions and body language,
/nɒnˈvɜːbᵊl kəˌmjuːnɪ
can convey a lot of information.
ˈkeɪʃᵊn/
(verb). truyền đạt

convey
It's important to be able to convey your ideas clearly in order to be an
/kənˈveɪ/
effective communicator.
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Vocabulary
a limited or biased (noun). một quan điểm hạn chế hoặc thiên vị
view Relying solely on one news source can give you a limited or biased view of
/ə ˈlɪmɪtɪd ɔː ˈbaɪəst vjuː/ current events.
be omitted or (adj). được bỏ qua hoặc bị bóp méo

distorted In order to make a fair decision, all relevant information should be
/biː əˈmɪtɪd ɔː dɪsˈtɔːtɪd/ considered and not be omitted or distorted.
a more
comprehensive (noun). một sự hiểu biết toàn diện hơn
understanding Reading multiple books on a topic can provide a more comprehensive
/ə mɔː ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv understanding of the subject.
ˌʌndəˈstændɪŋ/
(adj). quan trọng

crucial
Having a thorough understanding of the company's policies is crucial for
/ˈkruːʃəl/
new employees.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Chơi các trò chơi video giáo dục có thể cung cấp một cách học
hấp dẫn và thú vị hơn.
→ Playing educational video games can provide ____________

2 Bản đồ thế giới là một sự miêu tả trực quan để hiển thị sự phân
bố địa lý của một hiện tượng.
→ The world map is _____________ for displaying the geographic

distribution of a phenomenon.
3 Đọc về một sự kiện lịch sử là một chuyện, nhưng trực tiếp trải
nghiệm nó lại là một mức độ hiểu biết hoàn toàn khác.
→ Reading about a historical event is one thing, but experiencing it

_____________ is an entirely different level of understanding.
4 Tìm hiểu về cả hai mặt của một cuộc tranh luận có thể cung cấp
một góc nhìn đa sắc thái hơn về vấn đề này.
→ Learning about both sides of an argument can provide _____________

on the issue.
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5 Giao tiếp phi ngôn ngữ, chẳng hạn như nét mặt và ngôn ngữ cơ
thể, có thể truyền tải rất nhiều thông tin.
→ _____________ , such as facial expressions and body language, can

convey a lot of information.
Gợi ý
first-hand a more immersive and engaging way to learn
a more nuanced perspective Nonverbal communication
a visual representation
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WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
The best way to teach children to

cooperate is through team sports at
school. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để trình bày tóm tắt 2 lý do chính DOL không đồng ý với quan điểm
thể thao đồng đội là cách tốt nhất để dạy trẻ hợp tác.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích lý do thứ nhất: thể thao đồng đội có thể dẫn
đến tư duy cạnh tranh không lành mạnh
Body 2: DOL phân tích lý do thứ hai: thể thao đồng đội không dạy trẻ
tư duy hợp tác trong những bối cảnh khác.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Team sports can lead to a competitive mindset

Focusing on winning and being the best lead children to view
their teammates as opponents
This can result in an unhealthy approach to teamwor
Children with certain personalities would see
counterproductive result
Alternative activities (emphasizing collaboration + working
towards a shared goal)
Body paragraph 2:
Team sports not teach children the specific skills required in other
contexts
In sports: following rules, listening to the coach, achieve a
common goa
However, in other areas require a different skill se
Therefore, group discussions or role-playing scenarios are
more effective
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BÀI MẪU
Team sports in the classroom are an excellent method for developing the
value of cooperation in young minds. I completely disagree with this viewpoint,
as team sports may promote an unhealthy emphasis on competition while
failing to instill the importance of teamwork in the workplace or the classroom.
First, team sports can sometimes lead to a competitive mindset, hindering

cooperation. In team sports, there is often a focus on winning and being the
best, leading children to view their teammates as opponents rather than
collaborators. This can result in an unhealthy and counterproductive
approach to teamwork. Children with certain personalities would even see
counterproductive results when exposed to excessive competitiveness through
team sports. In such situations, alternative activities emphasizing collaboration
and the importance of working towards a shared goal rather than individual
achievement can promote a more cooperative mindset.
Furthermore, team sports may not teach children the specific skills required
for cooperation in other contexts. Cooperation in sports is often focused on
following rules and instructions, listening to the coach, and working together to
achieve a common goal. However, cooperation in other areas, such as the
classroom or workplace, may require a completely different skill set, such as
effective communication, conflict resolution, and adaptability. Therefore,
activities that teach these skills, such as group discussions or role-playing
scenarios, are more effective in preparing children for real-world situations
where cooperation is essential.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that team sports are the most effective
approach to conveying the value of working collaboratively because they may
encourage an inappropriate focus on competitiveness while failing to establish
collaboration's significance in the context of the job or the classroom.
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Vocabulary
an unhealthy
emphasis on (noun). sự chú trọng không lành mạnh về cạnh tranh
competition The coach's unhealthy emphasis on winning at all costs caused the team
/ən ʌnˈhɛlθi ˈɛmfəsɪs ɒn to lose sight of the importance of sportsmanship and fair play.
ˌkɒmpɪˈtɪʃᵊn/
fail (verb). không (làm cái gì đó)

/feɪl tuː/ I fail to comprehend their attitude
(verb). khơi dậy

instill
Parents can instill a love of reading in their children by reading with them
/ɪnˈstɪl/
regularly.
(noun). tư duy cạnh tranh

a competitive mindset
Athletes with a competitive mindset are driven to constantly improve
/ə kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv ˈmaɪndsɛt/
themselves and strive to be the best.
(verb). cản trở sự hợp tác

hinder cooperation
A lack of transparency and trust can hinder cooperation between
/ˈhaɪndə kəʊˌɒpəˈreɪʃᵊn/
departments.
counterproductive
(noun). phương pháp phản tác dụng
approach
A manager's counterproductive approach of constantly criticizing can lead
/ˌkaʊntəprəˈdʌktɪv ə
to low morale and high turnover rates.
ˈprəʊʧ/
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Vocabulary
(noun). mục tiêu chung
a shared goal
The team's shared goal of winning the championship motivated them to
/ə ʃeəd ɡəʊl/
work together and support each other.
(noun). bộ kỹ năng
skill set
The job requires a specific skill set that includes proficiency in Microsoft
/skɪl sɛt/
Excel, and strong communication skills.
(noun). giải quyết xung đột

conflict resolution
Effective conflict resolution involves active listening and finding a mutually
/ˈkɒnflɪkt ˌrɛzəˈluːʃᵊn/
beneficial solution.
(verb). truyền đạt

convey
It's important to convey complex information in a way that's easy to
/kənˈveɪ/
understand for all stakeholders
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Sự chú trọng không lành mạnh vào sự cạnh tranh trong ngành
công nghiệp trò chơi đã khiến các nhà phát triển trò chơi đổ xô phát
hành các sản phẩm chưa hoàn thành.
→ ____________ in the gaming industry has led to game developers

rushing to release unfinished products.
2 Tôi không hiểu được thái độ của họ.
→ I _____________ comprehend their attitude.
3 Cha mẹ có thể khơi dậy niềm yêu thích đọc sách ở trẻ bằng cách
đọc sách cùng trẻ thường xuyên.
→ Parents can _____________ a love of reading in their children by

reading with them regularly.
4 Các vận động viên có tư duy cạnh tranh được thúc đẩy để không
ngừng cải thiện bản thân và cố gắng trở thành người giỏi nhất.
→ Athletes with a _____________ are driven to constantly improve

themselves and strive to be the best.
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5 Sự thiếu minh bạch và tin cậy có thể cản trở sự hợp tác giữa các
phòng ban.
→ A lack of transparency and trust can _____________ between

departments.
Gợi ý
instill hinder cooperation fail to
An unhealthy emphasis on competition competitive mindset
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WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
Nowadays, not enough students

choose science subjects in university in
many countries.  
What are the reasons for this problem?
What are the effects on society?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để trình bày tóm tắt 2 lý do chính và 2 hậu quả của vấn đề.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích 2 lý do chính: do nhận thức rằng môn khoa học
khó và không có triển vọng nghề nghiệp
Body 2: DOL phân tích 2 kết quả: thiếu hụt các chuyên gia công nghệ
và cản trở phát triển kinh tế.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Two reasons that students are not choosing science subjects in

university.
The perception that science is comple
Science subjects often require much more daunting
independent study.
The need for more career prospect
In developing countries: graduates often struggle to find
suitable job opportunities as they focus on the economy.
Body paragraph 2:
Two significant implications for society

There may be a need for more skilled professionals in scienc
Hinder innovation, leading to a lack of advancements
Have severe consequences in healthcare
Hamper economic growt
As technological progress drives economic developmen
The lack of technical skills: poorer quality products and
services.
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BÀI MẪU
The declining number of university students opting for science subjects is a

growing concern in many countries worldwide. Two main reasons for this
problem are the perception of science as a difficult subject and the lack of
career prospects. This trend has significant implications for society, including
a shortage of skilled professionals in technology and limited economic growth.
One of the primary reasons students are not choosing science subjects in
university is the perception that science is complex. This perception is
compounded by the fact that science subjects often require much
independent study, which can be daunting for students who prefer a more
structured learning environment. Another factor contributing to the decline in
science students is the need for more career prospects. In most developing
countries, graduates often struggle to find suitable job opportunities, such as
researchers or astronomers, as the main focus of those countries is still the
economy. This lack of career prospects can deter students from choosing
science subjects and opting for other less intimidating majors.
The decline in science students has significant implications for society. First,
there may be a need for more skilled professionals in science and technology,
as fewer students are graduating in these areas. This could hinder innovation
and progress, leading to a lack of new ideas and advancements. This could
have severe consequences in areas such as healthcare, where technological
advancements are critical to providing better treatments. Second, this limited
innovation in science and technology could hamper economic growth, as
innovation and technological progress are essential drivers of economic
development. The lack of technical skills in the workforce could lead to poorer
quality products and services, decreasing demand and profitability.
In conclusion, the stereotype of science as a complicated subject and the

lack of employment opportunities are the two fundamental causes of dropping
science students. This trend has substantial societal ramifications, including a
scarcity of competent technology experts and hindered economic
development.
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Vocabulary
perception (noun). sự nhận thức

/pəˈsɛpʃᵊn/ Your perception of the situation may differ from mine.
(noun). triển vọng nghề nghiệp

career prospect
The job market for healthcare professionals is growing rapidly, making it
/kəˈrɪə ˈprɒspɛkt/
an excellent career prospect.
implication (noun). ý nghĩa

/ˌɪmplɪˈkeɪʃᵊn/ The implication of your decision could have serious consequences.
compound (verb). trở nên phức tạp

/ˈkɒmpaʊnd/ The problems were compounded by severe food shortages.
daunting (adj). nhàm chán

/ˈdɔːntɪŋ/ She has the daunting task of cooking for 20 people every day.
a structured learning (noun). một môi trường học tập có quy trình giảng dạy được soạn
environment sẵn
/ə ˈstrʌkʧəd ˈlɜːnɪŋ ɪn Many students thrive in a structured learning environment with clear
ˈvaɪərənmənt/ expectations and guidelines.
(verb). ngăn chặn

deter
The warning signs are intended to deter people from swimming in the
/dɪˈtɜː/
dangerous waters.
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Vocabulary
intimidating majors (noun). những chuyên ngành đáng sợ
/ɪnˈtɪmɪdeɪtɪŋ ˈmeɪʤəz./ Some students find engineering and science intimidating majors.

/ˈhaɪndə/ The bad weather could hinder our travel plans.
hamper (verb). cản trở

/ˈhæmpə/ The broken elevator will hamper our ability to move heavy items.
essential drivers (noun). những động lực cần thiết

/ɪˈsɛnʃəl ˈdraɪvəz/ Innovation and creativity are essential drivers of economic growth.
stereotype (noun). đ ịnh kiến

/ˈstɛrɪətaɪp/ There's always been a stereotype about successful businessmen.
competent
(noun). những chuyên gia công nghệ có năng lực
technology experts
The company hired a team of competent technology experts to improve
/ˈkɒmpɪtənt tɛkˈnɒləʤi
its digital infrastructure.
ˈɛkspɜːts/
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Sự nhận thức của bạn về tình huống này có thể khác với tôi
→ Your ____________ of the situation may differ from mine
2 Thị trường việc làm cho các chuyên gia chăm sóc sức khỏe đang
phát triển nhanh chóng, khiến nó trở thành một triển vọng nghề nghiệp
tuyệt vời.
→ The job market for healthcare professionals is growing rapidly,

making it an excellent _____________
3 Ý nghĩa về quyết định của bạn có thể gây ra những hậu quả
nghiêm trọng.
→ The _____________ of your decision could have serious consequences.

4 Các vấn đề trở nên phức tạp hơn do tình trạng thiếu
→ The problems were _____________ by severe food shortages.
5 Cô có nhiệm vụ nhàm chán là nấu ăn cho 20 người mỗi ngày.
→ She has the _____________ task of cooking for 20 people every day.
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6 Nhiều học sinh phát triển mạnh trong một môi trường học tập có
quy trình giảng dạy được soạn sẵn với những kỳ vọng và hướng dẫn rõ
ràng.
→ Many students thrive in _____________ with clear expectations and

guidelines.
Gợi ý
career prospect perception a structured learning environment
implication compounded daunting
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WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
While many people go to university for

academic study, more people should
be encouraged to do vocational
training because there is a lack of
qualified workers such as electricians
and plumbers. Do you agree or
disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để cho giám khảo biết là mình Agree hay Disagree với câu hỏi. Vì
DOL đứng ở giữa nên sẽ trình bày như sau:
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL sẽ nói về kinh nghiệm thực tiễn khi học nghề
Body 2: DOL sẽ nói về cơ hội việc làm cao khi học nghề.
Kết bài:
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I agree with this viewpoint because skills

training offers greater practical knowledge and
is more likely to result in a successful job
search.
Body paragraph 1:
Vocational education is primarily beneficial because it teaches

pupils the particular tasks and procedures of a specific
occupation.
Real-world and hands-on experienc
Students may apply their theoretical classroom knowledge in
actual scenarios
Ex: plumber + electrician training includes practical applicatio
Ex: plumber + electrician training includes practical application
Body paragraph 2:
Vocational training can also be an effective way to prepare for a

successful job search.
Increase employment rat
Vocational training programs are more practical + teach skills
in high demand in the job marke
Ex: programs in healthcare, information technology, and skilled
trades --> graduates can find work more quickly
Strong connections with local employers --> give students
networking chances
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BÀI MẪU
Despite the popularity of universities, some argue that vocational education

should be promoted to help alleviate the increasing scarcity of competent
workers across many labor sectors. I agree with this viewpoint because skills
training offers greater practical knowledge and is more likely to result in a
successful job search.
Vocational education is primarily beneficial because it teaches pupils the

particular tasks and procedures of a specific occupation. Therefore, its typical
training component often involves real-world and hands-on experience. By
participating in these practical experiences, students may apply their
theoretical classroom knowledge in actual scenarios. For instance, training to
become an electrician or plumber must include practical application. They only
become proficient when using specialized tools, interpreting technical
manuals, and identifying common problems. This practical aspect of vocational
training allows learners to get a comprehensive knowledge of the abilities
required for success in their chosen sector.
Furthermore, vocational training can also be an effective way to prepare for

a successful job search. The reason is that not only does vocational training
programs are more practical it also often teaches skills in high demand in the
job market. For example, programs in healthcare, information technology, and
skilled trades like plumbing and electrical work are consistently in high
demand. Consequently, graduates of these programs can find work more
quickly. In addition, many vocational training programs have strong
connections with local employers in their respective industries. This can give
students valuable networking opportunities and access to job leads that may
not be advertised publicly. As demonstrated, graduates of vocational training
programs often have practical experience, in-demand skills, and industry
connections, all of which can help them stand out in a competitive job market.
In conclusion, personally, more individuals should be encouraged to pursue

vocational training since it provides more relevant, hands-on experience and
increases the likelihood of securing employment.
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Vocabulary
vocational education (noun). giáo dục nghề nghiệp

/vəʊˈkeɪʃənl ˌɛdjʊˈkeɪʃᵊn/ Vocational education prepares students for specific jobs.
competent (adj). có khả năng / năng lực

/ˈkɒmpɪtənt/ The company needs competent employees to succeed.
occupation (noun). nghề nghiệp

/ˌɒkjʊˈpeɪʃᵊn/ John is considering a career change to a new occupation.
real-world and hands-

(noun). trải nghiệm thực tế
on experience
The engineering students are getting real-world experience in their
/rɪəl-wɜːld ænd hændz-
internships.
ɒn ɪksˈpɪərɪəns/
theoretical (adj). mang tính lý thuyết

/θɪəˈrɛtɪkəl/ The physics class is focused on theoretical concepts.
specialized tool (noun). dụng cụ chuyên dụng

/ˈspɛʃəlaɪzd tuːl/ A surgeon needs specialized tools for a successful operation.
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Vocabulary
comprehensive (noun). kiến thức toàn diện
knowledge The training program provides a comprehensive knowledge of the
/ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv ˈnɒlɪʤ/ industry.
networking
(noun). các cơ hội kết nối
opportunity
Attending the conference provided many networking opportunities.
/ˈnɛtwɜːkɪŋ ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪti/
job lead (noun). đầu mối công việc

/ʤɒb liːd/ The career center offers job leads to its members.
pursue (verb). theo đuổi

/pəˈsjuː/ She decided to pursue her dream of becoming a doctor.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Giáo dục nghề nghiệp sẽ chuẩn bị cho sinh viên cho các công
việc cụ thể.
→ ____________ prepares students for specific jobs.

2 Công ty cần nhân viên có năng lực để thành công.
→ The company needs _____________ employees to succeed.
3 John đang cân nhắc thay đổi nghề nghiệp sang một nghề mới.
→ John is considering a career change to a new _____________
4 Sinh viên kỹ sư đang có được kinh nghiệm thực tế trong kì thực
tập của họ.
→ The engineering students are getting _____________ in their

internships.
5 Lớp vật lý tập trung vào các khái niệm lý thuyết.
→ The physics class is focused on _____________ concepts.
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Gợi ý
competent competent Vocational education
real-world experience occupation
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WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
Some people think that governments

should ban dangerous sports, while
others think people should have
freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để cho giám khảo biết là mình Agree hay Disagree với câu hỏi. Vì
DOL đứng ở giữa nên sẽ trình bày như sau:
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL sẽ trình bày lý do mọi người ủng hộ quan điểm chính phủ
nên cấm các môn thể thao nguy hiểm
Body 2: DOL sẽ trình bày lý do ủng hộ quan điểm mọi người có quyền
tự do tham gia các môn thể thao nguy hiểm.
Kết bài:
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Both views have valid points, but I believe the

latter opinion is more convincing as a total
banning of such sports would violate
individual's rights and liberties.
Body paragraph 1:
Individuals should be free to participate in any activities they

desire
These activities put individuals and others at risk of severe injury
or even death
The injuries sustained from such accidents can be life-
threatening to both participants and bystanders
Governments should prohibit these activities to a certain
degree.
Body paragraph 2:
Individuals should have the right to engage in sports they enjoy

Many people find participating in extreme sports an exhilarating
experience
Banning these activities would deprive individuals of the
opportunity to engage in activities they are passionate about
There should be only mild regulations in extreme cases where
the activity may also affect bystanders.
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BÀI MẪU
Although some argue that governments should outright outlaw dangerous

sports, others insist that individuals should be free to participate in any
activities they desire. Both views have valid points, but I believe the latter
opinion is more convincing as a total banning of such sports would violate
individual's rights and liberties.
Those who advocate for banning dangerous sports argue that these
activities put individuals and others at risk of severe injury or even death. For
instance, extreme sports such as skydiving, bungee jumping and base jumping
involve a significant risk, where accidents often occur. In some cases, the
injuries sustained from such accidents can be life-threatening to both
participants and bystanders. The government would be considered unreliable
if it allowed complete freedom concerning any danger for these activities. For
this reason, governments should be granted the authority to these activities to
a certain degree, both for the public's safety and as a demonstration of their.
On the other hand, proponents of total freedom regarding dangerous

activities argue that individuals should have the right to engage in sports they
enjoy. Many people find participating in extreme sports an exhilarating
experience that gives them a sense of accomplishment and pushes them to
their limits. Banning these activities would deprive individuals of the
opportunity to engage in activities they are passionate about. Therefore, I
believe there should be only mild regulations in extreme cases where the
activity may also affect bystanders, such as prohibiting spectators from
standing too close to racing tracks.
In conclusion, although governments must safeguard their citizens, people

also have the right to pursue their interests without interference from the state.
Thus, moderate restrictions are appropriate, but a complete prohibition on
extreme sports is unreasonable.
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Vocabulary
outright (adj). hoàn toàn

/ˈaʊtraɪt/ He won the race outright, without any competition.
outlaw (verb). cấm

/ˈaʊtlɔː/ The government decided to outlaw the sale of certain drugs.
liberty (noun). quyền tự do

/ˈlɪbəti/ I cherish the liberty to express myself freely without fear of censorship.
involve a significant
(verb). đ i kèm một rủi ro lớn
risk
Base jumping without proper equipment can involve a significant risk of
/ɪnˈvɒlv ə sɪɡˈnɪfɪkənt
injury or death.
rɪsk/
(adj). đe dọa tính mạng

life-threatening
The doctor said that if we don't perform surgery soon, his condition could
/laɪf-ˈθrɛtnɪŋ/
become life-threatening.
bystander (noun). người ngoài cuộc

/ˈbaɪˌstændə/ The bystander witnessed the accident but did not intervene.
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Vocabulary
(noun). người ủng hộ

proponent
The proponent of the new law argued that it would benefit the
/prəˈpəʊnənt/
community.
an exhilarating
(noun). một trải nghiệm thú vị
experience
Skydiving for the first time was an exhilarating experience that left me
/ən ɪɡˈzɪləreɪtɪŋ ɪks
feeling both nervous and alive.
ˈpɪərɪəns/
a sense of (noun). một cảm giác thành tựu

accomplishment Finishing the marathon gave me a great sense of accomplishment,
/ə sɛns ɒv ə knowing I had trained hard for months and pushed through the pain to
ˈkɒmplɪʃmənt/ complete the race.
mild (adj ). nhẹ

/maɪld/ The symptoms were mild.
prohibit (verb). cấm

/prəˈhɪbɪt/ The school has a strict policy to prohibit bullying of any kind.
moderate (adj ). vừa phải

/ˈmɒdərɪt/ I have a moderate appetite and don't usually eat large portions.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Anh ấy thắng cuộc đua hoàn toàn mà không có bất kỳ cạnh tranh
nào.
→ He won the race ____________ , without any competition.

2 Chính phủ quyết định cấm bán một số loại thuốc nhất định.
→ The government decided to _____________ the sale of certain drugs.
3 Tôi trân trọng quyền tự do thể hiện bản thân một cách tự do mà
không sợ bị kiểm duyệt.
→ I cherish the _____________ to express myself freely without fear of

censorship.
4 Nhảy dù mạo hiểm mà không có thiết bị phù hợp có thể đi kèm
một rủi ro lớn của bị thương hoặc tử vong.
→ Base jumping without proper equipment can _____________ of injury or

death.
5 Bác sĩ nói rằng nếu chúng tôi không tiến hành phẫu thuật sớm,
tình trạng của anh ấy có thể trở nên nguy hiểm đến tính mạng.
→ The doctor said that if we don't perform surgery soon, his condition
could become _____________ .
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6 Những người ngoài cuộc chứng kiến tai nạn nhưng không can thiệp.
→ The _____________ witnessed the accident but did not intervene.
Gợi ý
outlaw liberty life-threatening outright bystander
involve a significant risk
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
Some experts believe that when a

country is already rich, any additional
increase in economic wealth does not
make its citizens any more satisfied. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để trình bày quan điểm của mình về vấn đề được đặt ra.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phát triển quan điểm mọi người sẽ quan tâm đến việc
nâng cao kiến thức hơn là sự giàu có khi quốc gia họ ngày càng giàu
hơn
Body 2: DOL sẽ phát triển quan điểm mọi người sẽ hạnh phúc hơn khi
chất lượng các dịch vụ sức khỏe được nâng cao.
Kết bài:
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Education and healthcare contribute more to

citizen satisfaction.
Body paragraph 1:
People may become more focused on academic knowledge.

Because rich countries have more resources to invest in
education and research.
Affluent societies may have a cultural shift towards academic
achievements to gain social status + prestig
These countries may also face new challenges and
opportunities.
Body paragraph 2:
The quality of healthcare services determines people's sense of

well-being.
When people's basic needs (food, water, shelter) are met --> they
may focus on their health and well-being.
People also feel more secure when their government provides
them with quality healthcare
Access to healthcare is improved --> citizens can better care for
their health and the health of their families --> a healthier and
happier population
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BÀI MẪU
Experts have argued that a country's affluence only satisfies its population
to a certain degree, and further economic growth offers no additional
satisfaction among citizens. I completely agree with this statement, as
education and healthcare contribute more to citizen satisfaction.
As a country becomes more prosperous, people may become more focused

on academic status and knowledge rather than absolute levels of wealth.
This is because an already-wealthy country may have more resources to invest
in education and research, increasing the emphasis on knowledge and
intellectual pursuits. Additionally, in more affluent societies, there may be a
cultural shift towards valuing academic achievements to gain social status
and prestige. These countries may also face new challenges and opportunities
requiring higher education and knowledge. For example, as technology
advances and new industries emerge, such as interstellar travel, there may be
greater demand for skilled astronauts and innovators who possess specialized
knowledge and expertise from higher education investment rather than purely
funds.
Furthermore, in affluent societies, additional increases in wealth do not

equate to happiness; instead, people's sense of well-being is determined
mainly by the quality of their healthcare services. When people's basic needs
for food, water, and shelter are met, they may focus on other areas of their
lives, most prominently their health and well-being. People also feel more
secure when they know their government is providing them with quality
healthcare needed to maintain good health. As access to healthcare is
improved, citizens can better care for their health and the health of their
families, leading to a healthier and happier population.
In conclusion, when a nation is already financially secure, more money does

not bring its residents fulfillment. However, investments in education and
healthcare may have a more significant impact.
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Vocabulary
academic status and

(noun). tình trạng học vấn và kiến thức
knowledge
His academic status and knowledge was elevated after publishing his
/ˌækəˈdɛmɪk ˈsteɪtəs ænd
research in a top-tier journal.
ˈnɒlɪʤ/
knowledge and (noun). theo đuổi trí tuệ và kiến thức

intellectual pursuit She devoted her life to knowledge and intellectual pursuit, always seeking
/ˈnɒlɪʤ ænd ˌɪntɪˈlɛktjʊəl to learn and expand her understanding of the world.
pəˈsjuːt/
(noun). xã hội giàu có

affluent society
The country's affluent society enjoyed a high standard of living and
/ˈæflʊənt səˈsaɪəti/
access to many luxuries.
valuing academic
(noun). coi trọng thành tích học tập
achievement
The school placed a high value on academic achievement, rewarding top-
/ˈvæljuːɪŋ ˌækəˈdɛmɪk ə
performing students with scholarships and recognition.
ˈʧiːvmənt/
prestige (noun). uy tín

/prɛsˈtiːʒ/ There is a lot of prestige attached to owning a car like this.
specialized (noun). kiến thức chuyên môn

knowledge The medical field requires specialized knowledge and training to provide
/ˈspɛʃəlaɪzd ˈnɒlɪʤ/ effective treatment.
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Vocabulary
(verb). đánh đồng

equate
Some people equate success to financial wealth, but others value
/ɪˈkweɪt tuː/
personal growth and happiness more.
shelter (noun). nơi ở

/ˈʃɛltə/ In developing countries, more than 640 million are without shelter.
(adv). nổi bật

prominently
The artist's work is prominently displayed in the museum's main exhibit
/ˈprɒmɪnəntli/
hall.
(noun). thõa mãn

fulfillment
Finding fulfillment in life requires pursuing your passions and finding
/fʊlˈfɪlmənt/
purpose in your daily activities.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Tình trạng học vấn và kiến thức của anh ấy đã được nâng cao
sau khi xuất bản nghiên cứu của anh ấy trên một tạp chí hàng đầu.
→ His ____________ was elevated after publishing his research in a top-

tier journal.
2 Cô ấy cống hiến cuộc đời mình cho việc theo đuổi trí tuệ và kiến
thức, luôn tìm cách học hỏi và mở rộng tầm hiểu biết của mình về thế
giới.
→ She devoted her life to _____________ , always seeking to learn and

expand her understanding of the world.
3 Xã hội giàu có của đất nước được hưởng mức sống cao và tiếp
cận với nhiều thứ xa xỉ.
→ The country's _____________ enjoyed a high standard of living and

access to many luxuries.
4 Trường đặt một sự coi trọng thành tích học tập cao, khen thưởng
những học sinh có thành tích hàng đầu bằng học bổng và sự công
nhận.
→ The school placed a high _____________ , rewarding top-performing

students with scholarships and recognition.
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5 Có nhiều uy tín gắn liền với việc sở hữu một chiếc xe như thế này.
→ There is a lot of _____________ attached to owning a car like this.
Gợi ý
knowledge and intellectual pursuit academic status and knowledge
affluent society prestige value on academic achievementt
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WRITING TASK 2
ngày 16/02/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
In the modern world it is possible to

shop, work and communicate with
people via the internet and live without
any face-to-face contact with others.
Is it a positive or negative development
in your opinion?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm: mặc dù những lợi ích lớn của công nghệ, nó
cản trở việc xây dựng mối liên kết sâu sắc giữa mọi người.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích lợi ích của việc tăng sử dụng internet
Body 2: DOL phân tích tác động tiêu cực của Internet và công nghệ.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The benefits of online activities

The rise of the Internet
Allowed people to conduct various activities onlin
This is because technology offers tremendous convenience
Improved the quality of life for those living in isolated areas.
Additionally, online communication has brought about greater
understanding
As people can connect with others from different cultures and
backgrounds.
Body paragraph 2:
Technology's negative consequences

Prevent individuals from building deep relationships.
Relying heavily on technology to communicate may cause people
to experience social isolation
Adverse mental health and well-being effects
Therefore, balancing online and offline interactions is vital.
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BÀI MẪU
In contemporary times, many do activities like shopping, working, and

interacting with others through the internet without needing in-person
interactions. Despite technology's great convenience, it can hinder people
from forming profound and significant connections.
The rise of the internet and technology has allowed people to conduct
various activities online, from shopping to working and communicating with
others. This is because technology offers tremendous convenience, as
individuals can buy products and services from the comfort of their own
homes, work remotely from anywhere in the world, and communicate with
people from different parts of the globe. This has dramatically improved the
quality of life for many individuals, especially those living in isolated areas with
mobility limitations. Additionally, online communication has brought about
greater diversity and understanding, as people can connect with others from
different cultures and backgrounds. As demonstrated, the ability to carry out
various activities online has numerous advantages and has significantly
impacted how people live.
Despite the benefits of online activities, there are also negative

consequences associated with the lack of in-person interactions. The
impersonal nature of online communication can prevent individuals from
building deep, meaningful relationships essential to human connection.
Furthermore, when people rely heavily on technology to communicate, they
may experience social isolation, especially among younger generations who
spend much time on social media. Social isolation has been linked to adverse
mental health and well-being effects, such as anxiety and depression.
Therefore, balancing online and offline interactions is vital to maintain healthy
relationships and social connections in today's digital age.
In conclusion, while there are advantages to the ability to shop, work and
communicate with people online, the lack of face-to-face contact can have
negative consequences. Therefore, it is essential to balance using technology
to our advantage and maintaining personal connections with others.
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Vocabulary
(preposition). trong thời hiện đại

in contemporary time
In contemporary time, social media has become a primary means of
/ɪn kənˈtɛmpərəri taɪm/
communication for many people.
(noun). tương tác trực tiếp

in-person interaction
In-person interaction is important for building strong relationships and
/ɪn-ˈpɜːsᵊn ˌɪntərˈækʃᵊn/
understanding others' emotions.

/ˈhɪndər/ Fear can hinder one's ability to take risks and pursue their dreams.
profound and
(noun). kết nối sâu sắc và mạnh mẽ
significant connection
/prəˈfaʊnd ænd sɪɡ
Meeting someone who shares your values and beliefs can lead to a
profound and significant connection.
ˈnɪfɪkənt kəˈnɛkʃᵊn/
offer tremendous
(verb). mang đến sự tiện lợi to lớn
convenience
/ˈɒfə trɪˈmɛndəs kən
Online shopping offers tremendous convenience for people with busy
schedules.
ˈviːniəns/
(noun). khu vực biệt lập

isolated area
/ˈaɪsəleɪtɪd ˈeərɪə/
Living in an isolated area can be challenging for individuals who crave
social interaction.
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Vocabulary
(noun). hạn chế di chuyển

mobility limitation
Mobility limitation can make it difficult for people to access public spaces
/məʊˈbɪləti ˌlɪmɪˈteɪʃᵊn/
and engage in social activities.
the impersonal nature

of online (noun). bản chất thiếu tương tác của giao tiếp trực tuyến
communication The impersonal nature of online communication can make it challenging to
/ði ɪmˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ˈneɪʧər ɒv establish a sense of trust and connection.
ˈɒnˌlaɪn kəˌmjuːnɪˈkeɪʃᵊn/
deep, meaningful
relationship (noun). mối quan hệ sâu sắc và ý nghĩa
/diːp, ˈmiːnɪŋfʊl rɪ A deep, meaningful relationship requires time, effort, and mutual respect.
ˈleɪʃənʃɪp/
experience social
(verb). trải qua sự cô lập về mặt xã hội
isolation
Many individuals who live alone or far from family experience social
/ɪksˈpɪərɪəns ˈsəʊʃəl
isolation.
ˌaɪsəʊˈleɪʃᵊn/
adverse mental health

(verb). ảnh hưởng xấu đến sức khỏe tinh thần và sự hạnh phúc
and well-being effect
Adverse mental health and well-being effects can result from chronic
/ˈædvɜːs ˈmɛntl hɛlθ ænd
stress, lack of social support, and other factors.
wɛl-ˈbiːɪŋ ɪˈfɛkt/
(noun). thời đại kỹ thuật số

digital age
The digital age has transformed the way we communicate, work, and
/ˈdɪʤɪtl eɪʤ/
access information.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Trong thời hiện đại, phương tiện truyền thông xã hội đã trở thành
phương tiện giao tiếp chính của nhiều người.
→ ____________ , social media has become a primary means of

communication for many people.
2 Tương tác trực tiếp rất quan trọng để xây dựng mối quan hệ bền
vững và hiểu được cảm xúc của người khác.
→ _____________ is important for building strong relationships and

understanding others' emotions.
3 Nỗi sợ hãi có thể cản trở khả năng chấp nhận rủi ro và theo đuổi
ước mơ của một người.
→ Fear can _____________ one's ability to take risks and pursue their
dreams.
4 Gặp gỡ một người chia sẻ các giá trị và niềm tin của bạn có thể
dẫn đến một kết nối sâu sắc và mạnh mẽ.
→ Meeting someone who shares your values and beliefs can lead to
_____________ .
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5 Mua sắm trực tuyến mang lại sự tiện lợi to lớn cho những người
có lịch trình bận rộn.
→ Online shopping _____________ for people with busy schedules.
6 Sống trong một khu vực biệt lập có thể là một thách thức đối với
những người khao khát giao tiếp xã hội.
→ Living in an _____________ can be challenging for individuals who crave

social interaction.
Gợi ý
a profound and significant connection hinder isolated area
offers tremendous convenience In-person interaction
In contemporary time
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WRITING TASK 2
ngày 25/02/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
An increasing number of people are

choosing to have cosmetic surgery in
order to improve their appearance.
Why do people have operations to
change the way they look? Do you
think this is a positive or negative
development?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm: hoàn toàn đồng ý với quan điểm: phẫu thuật
thẩm mỹ gây ra nhiều tác động tiêu cực đến sức khỏe con người.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích lý do ngày càng có nhiều người lựa chọn phẫu
thuật thẩm mỹ để thay đổi vẻ ngoài
Body 2: DOL phân tích những nguy cơ về mặt thể chất và tâm lý của
những người phẫu thuật thẩm mỹ.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The reasons why people have operations to change the way

they look
People want to meet society's expectations for beauty
Those with ideal facial features have advantages in
professional settings
For example, acting and flight attending
Recruiters may eliminate candidates who do not meet beauty
standards
In Korea, plain-looking citizens: face difficulties in securing
jobs + appearance-based discrimination.
Body paragraph 2:
The risks of plastic surgery

Plastic surgery can pose physical and psychological risks
Physical risks: infection, scarring, and post-anesthetic issues
In severe cases: facial dysmorphia, cardiovascular or
respiratory complications, or even death
Psychological risks: dysmorphia disorder
They may also suffer from depression and anxiety or become
addicted to plastic surgery.
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BÀI MẪU
People worldwide increasingly opt for plastic surgery to enhance their

appearance, a trend fueled by the societal emphasis on beauty standards.
However, I believe this development is negative as it can harm a person's
health.
Cosmetic procedures are in high demand because people want to meet

society's expectations for beauty. Those with ideal facial features or body
shapes have advantages in social and professional settings. Some
professions, such as acting and flight attending, are especially concerned
with physical appearance. Even in other job vacancies, recruiters and HR
representatives may eliminate candidates who do not meet beauty standards
before assessing their skills or experience. In Korea, where appearance is
particularly important, plain-looking citizens not only face difficulties in
securing jobs but also appearance-based discrimination.
While plastic surgery can offer benefits, it also poses physical and
psychological risks. Complications such as infection, scarring, and post-
anesthetic issues are common. In severe cases, patients may experience
facial dysmorphia, cardiovascular or respiratory complications, or even death.
Patients may also become dissatisfied with the results, leading to body
dysmorphia disorder, a mental health condition in which they become overly
preoccupied with perceived flaws in their appearance. They may also suffer
from depression and anxiety or become addicted to plastic surgery, all of
which contribute to poor mental health.
In conclusion, the pressure to conform to beauty standards has led to the

popularity of the cosmetic surgery industry. However, indulging in plastic
beauty can have a negative impact on people's health. Therefore, this trend
should be monitored and controlled.
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Vocabulary
fuel (verb). thúc đẩy

/fjʊəl/ Yesterday's meeting is likely to fuel further speculation about a takeover.
(noun). phẫu thuật thẩm mỹ

cosmetic procedure
She decided to get a cosmetic procedure done on her nose to improve
/kɒzˈmɛtɪk prəˈsiːʤə/
her appearance.
meet society's
expectations for (verb). đáp ứng kỳ vọng của xã hội về cái đẹp
beauty Many people feel pressured to meet society's expectations for beauty,
/miːt səˈsaɪətiz ˌɛkspɛk even if it means undergoing extreme measures.
ˈteɪʃᵊnz fɔː ˈbjuːti/
(verb). xóa bỏ
eliminate
The government's new policy aims to eliminate poverty and inequality in
/ɪˈlɪmɪneɪt/
the country.
(noun). người có vẻ ngoài giản dị

plain-looking citizen
Plain-looking citizens often feel overlooked and undervalued in a society
/pleɪn-ˈlʊkɪŋ ˈsɪtɪzn/
that values physical beauty.
secure job (verb). đảm bảo việc làm

/sɪˈkjʊər ʤɒb/ Securing a job can be difficult in today's competitive job market.
appearance-based
(noun). phân biệt đối xử dựa trên ngoại hình
discrimination
Appearance-based discrimination can lead to social exclusion and a lack
/əˈpɪərəns-beɪst dɪsˌkrɪmɪ
of opportunities.
ˈneɪʃᵊn/
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Vocabulary
pose physical and (verb). gây ra những rủi ro về thể chất và tâm lý
psychological risks Some cosmetic procedures pose physical and psychological risks, and it's
/ˈpəʊz ˈfɪzɪkəl ænd ˌsaɪkə important to weigh the potential complications before deciding to undergo
ˈlɒʤɪkəl rɪsks/ a procedure.
complication (noun). biến chứng

/ˌkɒmplɪˈkeɪʃᵊn/ She developed complications after the surgery.
overly preoccupied (adj). quá bận tâm

with She was overly preoccupied with her appearance, constantly checking
/ˈəʊvəli ˌpriːˈɒkjəpaɪd wɪð/ herself in the mirror and seeking validation from others.
suffer from
depression and (verb). bị trầm cảm và lo lắng
anxiety Many people who suffer from depression and anxiety also struggle with
/ˈsʌfə frɒm dɪˈprɛʃᵊn ænd low self-esteem and body image issues.
æŋˈzaɪəti/
to conform to beauty (verb). tuân thủ với tiêu chuẩn cái đẹp
standard The pressure to conform to beauty standards can be overwhelming,
/tuː kənˈfɔːm tuː ˈbjuːti leading some people to resort to extreme measures to achieve the
ˈstændəd/ desired look.
to conform to beauty (verb). đam mê vẻ đẹp thẩm mỹ

standard (verb). đam mê vẻ đẹp thẩm mỹ
Some people indulge in plastic beauty, spending thousands of dollars on

/ɪnˈdʌlʤ ɪn ˈplæstɪk ˈbjuːti/
cosmetic procedures to enhance their appearance.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Cuộc họp ngày hôm qua có khả năng thúc đẩy thêm suy đoán về
việc tiếp quản.
→ Yesterday's meeting is likely to ____________ further speculation about

a takeover.
2 Cô quyết định phẫu thuật thẩm mỹ mũi để cải thiện ngoại hình.
→ She decided to get a _____________ done on her nose to improve her
appearance.
3 Nhiều người cảm thấy áp lực phải đáp ứng kỳ vọng của xã hội về
cái đẹp, ngay cả khi điều đó có nghĩa là phải trải qua các biện pháp cực
đoan.
→ Many people feel pressured to _____________ , even if it means

undergoing extreme measures.
4 Chính sách mới của chính phủ nhằm xóa bỏ đói nghèo và bất bình
đẳng trong nước.
→ The government's new policy aims to _____________ poverty and

inequality in the country.
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5 Những người có vẻ ngoài giản dị thường cảm thấy bị coi thường

và bị đánh giá thấp trong một xã hội coi trọng vẻ đẹp hình thể.
→ _____________ often feel overlooked and undervalued in a society that

values physical beauty.
6 Đảm bảo việc làm có thể khó khăn trong thị trường việc làm cạnh
tranh ngày nay.
→ _____________ can be difficult in today's competitive job market.
Gợi ý
cosmetic procedure Plain-looking citizens fuel eliminate
meet society's expectations for beauty Securing a job
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WRITING TASK 2
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ĐỀ BÀI
Some people say free time activities for

children should be organized by
parents. Others say that children
should be free to choose what they do
in their free time. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm sự kết hợp cân bằng giữa các hoạt động trẻ tự
chọn và các hoạt động do cha mẹ tổ chức là giải pháp hiệu quả nhất.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích những lợi ích của việc để cha mẹ chọn các hoạt
động vào thời gian rảnh cho trẻ
Body 2: DOL phân tích những lợi ích của việc để trẻ tự chọn hoạt động
ưa thích vào thời gian rảnh.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
Parent should help their children to choose free-time activities.

Parents are better equipped to choose appropriate activities
This is because parents can select enjoyable and educational
activities
Thus contributing to their children's development.
Organizing a schedule can instill a sense of discipline and time
management skills
For example, parents may organize a weekly family game
night
Develop social and cognitive skills.
Body paragraph 2:
Children should choose what they want to do

Exploring their interests and discovering new hobbies
Help them develop a sense of independence and self-
confidence.
Foster creativity and critical thinking skill
Foster creativity and critical thinking skills
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BÀI MẪU
Some individuals believe that parents should plan children's free time
activities, while others believe children should be able to pick their activities. A
balanced approach is the most effective method to guarantee that children's
leisure time is useful and pleasurable.
On the one hand, those in favor of parent-organized activities argue that

parents are better equipped to choose appropriate and productive activities for
their children. This is because parents can select enjoyable and educational
activities, thus contributing to their children's development. Additionally,
organizing a schedule for children's free time can instill a sense of discipline
and time management skills, which are valuable traits children can carry into
adulthood. For example, parents may organize a weekly family game night
where they play board games or engage in other group activities that develop
social and cognitive skills.
On the other hand, proponents of child-led free time argue that children
should choose what they want to do. Children can benefit from exploring their
interests and discovering new hobbies, which can help them develop a sense
of independence and self-confidence. Furthermore, allowing children to
make decisions can foster creativity and critical thinking skills. For instance,
children may participate in extracurricular activities such as sports or music
lessons, which can help them discover and develop their talents. Nevertheless,
while both approaches have advantages, parents can take responsibility for
organizing educational activities while permitting children to explore their
interests is the best way to ensure that children have productive and
enjoyable free time.
In conclusion, parents can ensure that their children's free time is productive
and enjoyable by planning educational activities while still allowing them to
pursue their interests.
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Vocabulary
(preposition). ủng hộ
in favor of
I am in favor of parent-organized activities because they provide a
/ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv/
structured environment for children to learn and socialize.
parent-organized (noun). hoạt động do phụ huynh tổ chức

activities Many parents believe that parent-organized activities are a great way to
/ˈpeərənt-ˈɔːɡənaɪzd æk keep their children active and engaged outside of school.
ˈtɪvətiz/
instill a sense of (verb). truyền ý thức kỷ luật

discipline As a teacher, I believe that it's important to instill a sense of discipline in
/ɪnˈstɪl ə sɛns ɒv ˈdɪsɪplɪn/ my students so that they can stay focused and motivated to learn.
(noun). phẩm chất có giá trị

valuable traits
Learning responsibility and respect are valuable traits that children can
/ˈvæljʊəbᵊl treɪts/
use throughout their lives.
social and cognitive

(noun). kỹ năng xã hội và nhận thức
skills
Participating in social and cognitive activities can improve a child's social
/ˈsəʊʃəl ænd ˈkɒɡnɪtɪv
and cognitive skills.
skɪlz/
(noun). những người ủng hộ

proponents
Proponents of homeschooling argue that it allows parents to tailor their
/prəˈpəʊnənts/
child's education to their specific needs and interests.
(noun). thời gian rảnh do trẻ làm chủ

child-led free time
C hild-led free time can give children a sense of control over their own
/ʧaɪld-lɛd friː taɪm/
lives.
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Vocabulary
develop a sense of
independence and
(verb). phát triển ý thức độc lập và tự tin
self-confidence
Giving children opportunities to make decisions and try new things can
/dɪˈvɛləp ə sɛns ɒv ˌɪndɪ help them develop a sense of independence and self-confidence.
ˈpɛndəns ænd sɛlf-
ˈkɒnfɪdəns/
foster creativity and (verb). thúc đẩy sự sáng tạo và kỹ năng tư duy phản biện
critical thinking skills Extracurricular activities can foster creativity and critical thinking skills by
/ˈfɒstə ˌkriːeɪˈtɪvəti ænd encouraging children to think outside the box and solve problems in
ˈkrɪtɪkəl ˈθɪŋkɪŋ skɪlz/ innovative ways.
extracurricular
(noun). các hoạt động ngoại khóa
activities
/ˌɛkstrəkəˈrɪkjʊlər æk
Joining extracurricular activities, such as clubs or teams, can help children
develop new interests and skills outside of the classroom.
ˈtɪvətiz/
(verb). chịu trách nhiệm

take responsibility for
/teɪk rɪˌspɒnsɪˈbɪləti fɔː/
By participating in extracurricular activities, children can learn to take
responsibility for their actions.
productive and
(noun). thời gian rảnh hiệu quả và thú vị
enjoyable free time
Providing children with productive and enjoyable free time can help them
/prəˈdʌktɪv ænd ɪn
relax and recharge.
ˈʤɔɪəbᵊl friː taɪm/
(verb). theo đuổi sở thích của họ

pursue their interests
Children should be encouraged to pursue their interests and passions, as
/pəˈsjuː ðeər ˈɪntrɪsts/
this can help them find meaning and purpose in their lives.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Tôi ủng hộ các hoạt động do cha mẹ tổ chức vì chúng cung cấp
một môi trường có tổ chức để trẻ học hỏi và giao tiếp.
→ I am ____________ parent-organized activities because they provide a

structured environment for children to learn and socialize.
2 Nhiều phụ huynh tin rằng các hoạt động do phụ huynh tổ chức là
một cách tuyệt vời để giữ cho con cái họ năng động và tham gia bên
ngoài trường học.
→ Many parents believe that _____________ are a great way to keep their
children active and engaged outside of school.
3 Là một giáo viên, tôi tin rằng điều quan trọng là truyền ý thức kỷ
luật cho học sinh để chúng có thể tập trung và có động lực học tập.
→ As a teacher, I believe that it's important to _____________ in my

students so that they can stay focused and motivated to learn.
4 Việc học tính trách nhiệm và sự tôn trọng là những phẩm chất có
giá trị mà trẻ em có thể sử dụng trong suốt cuộc đời của chúng.
→ Learning responsibility and respect are _____________ that children can

use throughout their lives.
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5 Phát triển các kỹ năng xã hội và nhận thức là điều cần thiết cho
sự phát triển toàn diện và sức khỏe của trẻ.
→ Developing _____________ is essential for children's overall growth and

well-being.
6 Những người ủng hộ giáo dục tại nhà cho rằng nó cho phép cha
mẹ điều chỉnh việc giáo dục con cái họ theo nhu cầu và sở thích cụ thể
của họ.
→ _____________ of homeschooling argue that it allows parents to tailor

their child's education to their specific needs and interests.
Gợi ý
parent-organized activities instill a sense of discipline in favor of
valuable traits social and cognitive skills Proponents
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WRITING TASK 2
ngày 04/03/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Some students take a gap year after

graduating high school to work and/or
travel. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of this.
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm taking gap year gây ra bất lợi nhiều hơn lợi ích:
tốn nhiều chi phí + không khuyến khích học sinh đi học đại học.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích quan điểm taking gap year giúp học sinh phát
triển các kỹ năng và kiến thức thực tế + mang đến sự phát triển cá
nhâ
Body 2: DOL phân tích quan điểm taking gap year gây ra nhiều bất lợi:
ngăn cản học sinh đi học đại học + tốn nhiều chi phí.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The benefits of taking gap year

Improve their academic skills by enrolling in academic courses or
workshops
For instance, a science student may work in a laboratory
Equip them with the practical skills and knowledge for their
future academic endeavors.
Offers personal growt
They can introspect, cultivate healthy habits, and enhance
their physical and mental well-being
A refreshed outlook and vigor to resume academic work.
Body paragraph 2:
Some potential drawbacks

A loss of motivation to return to academic pursuits
Causing students to struggle with resuming their studies upon
their return.
Traveling during a gap year can be costly
Students may encounter financial difficulties
These potential drawbacks should be weighed against the
advantages.
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BÀI MẪU
After finishing high school, some people take a gap year to get professional
experience and explore the world. While this tendency helps students develop
their practical knowledge and personal growth, it may be prohibitively costly
and discourage them from continuing their higher education.
Taking a gap year allows students to improve their academic skills by

enrolling in academic courses or workshops during this time. For instance, a
student who intends to pursue a career in science may utilize their gap year to
participate in a research internship or work in a laboratory. Such experience
equips them with the practical skills and knowledge necessary for their future
academic endeavors. Additionally, a gap year offers personal growth as
students can take a break from their academic pursuits and concentrate on
self-development. During this time, they can introspect, cultivate healthy
habits, and enhance their physical and mental well-being. The result is a
refreshed outlook and vigor to resume academic work with renewed vigor.
While a gap year presents many benefits, some potential drawbacks should
be considered. Firstly, taking a break from education can lead to a loss of
motivation to return to academic pursuits, causing students to struggle with
resuming their studies upon their return. Students may also find it challenging
to regain their academic focus and catch up with their peers, which can
impede their academic progress. Secondly, traveling during a gap year can
be costly. Students may encounter financial difficulties while trying to
finance their trip or secure employment that provides adequate remuneration
to cover their expenses. These potential drawbacks should be weighed
against the advantages of taking a gap year to determine if it is the right
choice for the student.
In conclusion, although having a gap year benefits students' academic and

personal development, it may be financially burdensome and deter them from
continuing their higher education.
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Vocabulary
prohibitively costly (adj). cực kỳ tốn kém

/prəˈhɪbɪtɪvli ˈkɒstli/ The cost of purchasing a private jet is prohibitively costly for most people.
enroll in academic
courses (verb). ghi danh vào các khóa học
/ɪnˈrəʊl ɪn ˌækəˈdɛmɪk I plan to enroll in academic courses next semester to improve my skills.
ˈkɔːsɪz/
(verb). theo đuổi sự nghiệp

to pursue a career
John decided to pursue a career in medicine after completing his
/tuː pəˈsjuː ə kəˈrɪə/
undergraduate degree.
endeavor (noun). nỗ lực

/ɪnˈdɛvə/ She made an endeavor to finish the project before the deadline.
introspect (verb). nhìn lại

/ˌɪntrəʊˈspɛkt/ After the breakup, he took time to introspect and reflect on his behavior.
a refreshed outlook
and vigor (noun). một triển vọng và sức sống tươi mới
/ə rɪˈfrɛʃt ˈaʊtlʊk ænd The new CEO brought a refreshed outlook and vigor to the company.
ˈvɪɡə/
(noun). nhược điểm tiềm ẩn

potential drawbacks
One potential drawback of remote work is a lack of social interaction with
/pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈdrɔːbæks/
colleagues.
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Vocabulary
impede their
academic progress (verb). cản trở tiến trình học tập của họ
/ɪmˈpiːd ðeər ˌækəˈdɛmɪk The lack of resources can impede their academic progress.
ˈprəʊɡrəs/
encounter financial
(verb). gặp khó khăn về tài chính
difficulty
Some students may encounter financial difficulty when paying for tuition
/ɪnˈkaʊntə faɪˈnænʃəl
and living expenses.
ˈdɪfɪkəlti/
(noun). thù lao

remuneration
The company offers competitive remuneration packages to attract top
/rɪˌmjuːnəˈreɪʃᵊn/
talent.
(verb). được cân nhắc với

be weighed against
The benefits of the new policy should be weighed against its potential
/biː weɪd əˈɡɛnst/
costs.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Chi phí mua máy bay riêng cực kỳ tốn kém đối với hầu
→ The cost of purchasing a private jet is ____________ for most people.
2 Tôi dự định ghi danh vào các khóa học trong học kỳ tới để cải
thiện kỹ năng của mình.
→ I plan _____________ next semester to improve my skills.

3 John quyết định theo đuổi sự nghiệp y học sau khi hoàn thành
chương trình đại học.
→ John decided to _____________ in medicine after completing his

undergraduate degree.
4 Cô ấy đã nỗ lực để hoàn thành dự án trước thời hạn.
→ She made an _____________ to finish the project before the deadline.
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5 Sau khi chia tay, anh ấy đã dành thời gian để nhìn lại và suy ngẫm
về hành vi của mình.
→ After the breakup, he took time to _____________ and reflect on his

behavior.
Gợi ý
to enroll in academic courses introspect pursue a career
endeavor prohibitively costly
đây:
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
ngày 11/03/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
The advantages of the spread of

English as a global language will
continue to outweigh its
disadvantages. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để đồng ý với quan điểm việc phổ biến tiếng anh như là ngôn ngữ
toàn cầu có nhiều lợi ích hơn là bất lợi --> Hoàn toàn đồng ý.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích nhược điểm của sự phổ biến tiếng Anh như là
một ngôn ngữ toàn cầu và biện pháp để giảm thiểu chúng
Body 2: DOL phân tích lợi ích của việc tiếng Anh trở thành ngôn ngữ
toàn cầu.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The spread of English as a global language has numerous

downsides
Cultural homogeneity
A lack of linguistic variet
Harm the preservation of languages and civilizations.
Persons who speak English may be preferred over those who do
not.
Mitigating the disadvantages by language preservation initiatives
and educational policies.
Body paragraph 2:
English also offers significant benefits

It has enabled worldwide communication, especially in business
and commerce
Individuals from many nations may now communicate with one
another in English.
Access standard international educational resources.
English has become the predominant language in technology,
research, and medicine
Hence, those who speak English may comprehend the most
recent information in these domains.
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BÀI MẪU
The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue

to outweigh its disadvantages. I fully agree with this viewpoint as the language
has enabled worldwide communication and accessibility to the academic
world.
English is now the most widely used language in the world, which regrettably
has numerous downsides. It may result in cultural homogeneity, in which
English-speaking cultures dominate and repress the cultures of non-English-
speaking nations. Moreover, English's predominance might result in a lack of
linguistic variety, which can harm the preservation of languages and
civilizations. Regarding education, employment possibilities, and access to
information, persons who speak English may be preferred over those who do
not due to the expansion of English. Nevertheless, the disadvantages may be
mitigated by language preservation initiatives and educational policies that
foster linguistic variety. This will ensure that English remains a viable
instrument for global communication and mutual understanding.
Despite these problems, English also offers significant benefits. It has

enabled worldwide communication, especially in business and commerce.
Individuals from many nations may now communicate with one another in
English, hence removing communication obstacles. Second, the English
language has enabled non-native English speakers to access standard
international educational resources, such as online courses and academic
research. In addition, English has become the predominant language in
technology, research, and medicine. Hence, the common knowledge in these
domains is in English, giving those who speak English an advantage in
obtaining and comprehending the most recent information.
In conclusion, English, although having certain manageable difficulties, has

genuinely facilitated international communication and exposure to the
academic community. This is why I completely agree that the benefits of
English's globalization will continue to exceed its drawbacks.
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Vocabulary
(noun). đồng hóa

cultural homogeneity
The country's cultural homogeneity has led to a lack of diversity in its art
/ˈkʌlʧərəl ˌhɒməʤəˈneɪəti/
and cuisine.
(verb). đàn áp
repress
The government tried to repress the political dissidents by limiting their
/rɪˈprɛs/
freedom of speech.
(noun). chiếm ưu thế

predominance
The predominance of technology companies in the region has led to a
/prɪˈdɒmɪnəns/
concentration of wealth.
(verb). giảm bớt

mitigate
The government is taking steps to mitigate the effects of climate change
/ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt/
on the local ecosystem.
language preservation
(noun). sáng kiến bảo tồn ngôn ngữ
initiative
The language preservation initiative aims to protect endangered
/ˈlæŋɡwɪʤ ˌprɛzəˈveɪʃᵊn ɪ
languages from extinction.
ˈnɪʃɪətɪv/
foster linguistic
(verb). thúc đẩy sự đa dạng ngôn ngữ
variety
The school's program to foster linguistic variety encourages students to
/ˈfɒstə lɪŋˈɡwɪstɪk və
learn multiple languages.
ˈraɪəti/
business and (noun). kinh doanh và thương mại

commerce The city's thriving business and commerce sector attracts entrepreneurs
/ˈbɪznɪs ænd ˈkɒmɜːs/ from around the world.
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Vocabulary
communication (noun). những trở ngại giao tiếp

obstacle The language barrier can be a communication obstacle for international
/kəˌmjuːnɪˈkeɪʃᵊn ˈɒbstəkl/ travelers.
to access standard
international
(verb). được tiếp cận nền giáo dục chuẩn quốc tế
educational resource
The library provides resources to help students access standard
/tuː ˈæksɛs ˈstændəd ˌɪntə international educational material.
ˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ˌɛdjʊˈkeɪʃᵊnᵊl rɪ
ˈsɔːs/
(noun). những khó khăn có thể kiểm soát được

manageable difficulty
Learning a new skill can be a manageable difficulty with consistent
/ˈmænɪʤəbᵊl ˈdɪfɪkəlti/
practice.
has genuinely
(verb). đã thực sự tạo điều kiện
facilitated
The new technology has genuinely facilitated communication between
/hæz ˈʤɛnjʊɪnli fə
people from different countries.
ˈsɪlɪteɪtɪd/
(verb). vượt quá

exceed
The demand for the product has exceeded the company's expectations,
/ɪkˈsiːd/
leading to a shortage.
drawback (noun). nhược điểm

/ˈdrɔːbæk/ A major drawback of the project is the high cost of implementation.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Sự đồng hóa của đất nước đã dẫn đến sự thiếu đa dạng trong
nghệ thuật và ẩm thực.
→ The country's ____________ has led to a lack of diversity in its art and
cuisine.
2 Chính phủ đã cố gắng đàn áp những người bất đồng chính kiến
bằng cách hạn chế quyền tự do ngôn luận của họ.
→ The government tried to _____________ the political dissidents by

limiting their freedom of speech.
3 Sự chiếm ưu thế của các công ty công nghệ trong khu vực đã dẫn
đến sự tập trung của cải.
→ The _____________ of technology companies in the region has led to a

concentration of wealth.
4 Chính phủ đang thực hiện các bước để giảm thiểu tác động của
biến đổi khí hậu đối với hệ sinh thái địa phương.
→ The government is taking steps to _____________ the effects of climate

change on the local ecosystem.
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5 Sáng kiến bảo tồn ngôn ngữ nhằm bảo vệ các ngôn ngữ có nguy
cơ tuyệt chủng khỏi bị tuyệt chủng.
→ The _____________ aims to protect endangered languages from

extinction.
6 Chương trình thúc đẩy sự đa dạng ngôn ngữ của trường khuyến
khích học sinh học nhiều ngôn ngữ.
→ The school's program to _____________ encourages students to learn

multiple languages.
Gợi ý
foster linguistic variety cultural homogeneity repress
mitigate predominance language preservation initiative
đây:
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
ngày 18/03/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Some people think that the increasing
use of computers and mobile phones
for communication has a negative
effect on young people’s reading and
writing skills. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm việc sử dụng máy tính và điện thoại trong giao
tiếp có nhiều lợi ích trong việc tăng khả năng đọc và viết >>> Hoàn toàn
không đồng ý.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích quan điểm công nghệ giúp tăng khả năng đọc
viết đáng kể qua hình thức viết hiện đại (tin nhắn) + truy cập vào vô số
bài báo trên web
Body 2: DOL phân tích một lợi ích khác của việc sử dụng điện thoại
vào việc tăng khả năng đọc viết: cung cấp khả năng tiếp cận vào các
nguồn giáo dục trực tuyến.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The increased use of reading and writing skills that technology

has caused is substantial
Mobile phones are often linked with messaging
Offer access to social media, abundant with reading material
As a result, we may improve our literacy
For instance: sending and receiving emails at work.
Body paragraph 2:
Modern technologies provide accessible education on reading

and writing
It possible to access various online educational resources
In addition, they are common means of accessing modern
academic world
Students are to make progress in reading and writing through
distance learning
For instance, children learned reading and writing skills entirely
through computers during Covid-19 period.
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BÀI MẪU
Some individuals believe that the growing use of computers and mobile
phones for communication has a detrimental impact on young people's
reading and writing abilities. I completely disagree with this viewpoint since
modern technologies offer more opportunities to read and write and accessible
lessons on these abilities.
First, the increased use of reading and writing skills that technology has
caused is substantial. It is because mobile phones and computers are often
linked with texting and messaging, modern forms of writing. These devices
also offer access to social media, abundant with reading material in the form
of countless web articles and news stories. As a result, we may improve our
literacy via exposure to contemporary technology and routine activities like
texting, emailing, and reading the news. For instance, the everyday need to
send and receive emails at work greatly improves the writing and reading skills
of those who do so.
Furthermore, modern technologies also provide accessible education on

reading and writing. The Internet has made it possible to access various online
educational resources, including comprehensive degree programs,
individual tutoring sessions, and instructional films. In addition, computers
and mobile phones are today the most common means of accessing this
modern academic world. Thus, they are essential if students are to make
progress in reading and writing through distance learning. As a result of the
widespread school closures caused by the recent Covid-19 outbreak, for
instance, many children learned essential reading and writing skills entirely
through computers.
In conclusion, I disagree entirely that mobile phones and computers

negatively affect our reading and writing skills as they make reading and
writing instances more common while also connecting us to online academic
platforms to improve reading and writing skills further.
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Vocabulary
(noun). tác động bất lợi

a detrimental impact
The deforestation had a detrimental impact on the ecosystem of the
/ə ˌdɛtrɪˈmɛntl ˈɪmpækt/
Amazon rainforest.
substantial (adj). đáng kể

/səbˈstænʃəl/ The company reported a substantial increase in profits this quarter.
offer access to social (verb). cung cấp quyền truy cập vào phương tiện truyền thông xã
media hội
/ˈɒfər ˈæksɛs tuː ˈsəʊʃəl The school decided to offer access to social media to students in order to
ˈmiːdiə/ promote collaboration and communication.
countless web (noun). vô số bài viết trên web

articles There are countless web articles on the benefits of meditation for mental
/ˈkaʊntlɪs wɛb ˈɑːtɪklz/ health.
literacy (noun). khả năng đọc viết

/ˈlɪtərəsi/ Reading books from a young age can greatly improve literacy skills.
exposure to
contemporary (verb). tiếp xúc với công nghệ đương đại
technology Growing up in a tech-savvy household provided me with early exposure to
/ɪksˈpəʊʒə tuː kən contemporary technology.
ˈtɛmpərəri tɛkˈnɒləʤi/
online educational
(noun). nguồn giáo dục trực tuyến
resources
Online educational resources such as Khan Academy and Coursera have
/ˈɒnˌlaɪn ˌɛdjʊˈkeɪʃᵊnᵊl rɪ
made learning more accessible than ever before.
ˈsɔːsɪz/
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Vocabulary
comprehensive
(noun). chương trình cấp bằng toàn diện
degree programs
Many universities now offer comprehensive degree programs online,
/ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv dɪˈɡriː
making higher education more accessible to working adults.
ˈprəʊɡræmz/
individual tutoring
(noun). các buổi dạy kèm cá nhân
sessions
The student struggled in class until they began attending individual
/ˌɪndɪˈvɪʤuəl ˈtjuːtərɪŋ
tutoring sessions.
ˈsɛʃᵊnz/
(noun). học từ xa
distance learning
Distance learning has become increasingly popular as a way to obtain a
/ˈdɪstəns ˈlɜːnɪŋ/
degree while balancing work and personal responsibilities.
online academic (noun). nền tảng học thuật trực tuyến

platforms Online academic platforms such as Canvas and Blackboard are commonly
/ˈɒnˌlaɪn ˌækəˈdɛmɪk used for course management and communication between students and
ˈplætfɔːmz/ teachers.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Việc phá rừng có tác động bất lợi đến hệ sinh thái của rừng nhiệt
đới Amazon.
→ The deforestation had ____________ on the ecosystem of the Amazon

rainforest.
2 Công ty báo cáo lợi nhuận tăng đáng kể trong quý này.
→ The company reported a _____________ increase in profits this quarter.
3 Nhà trường đã quyết định cung cấp quyền truy cập vào phương
tiện truyền thông xã hội cho học sinh để thúc đẩy sự hợp tác và giao
tiếp.
→ The school decided to _____________ to students in order to promote

collaboration and communication.
4 Có vô số bài báo trên web về lợi ích của thiền định đối với sức
khỏe tâm thần.
→ There are _____________ on the benefits of meditation for mental

health.
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5 Hầu hết học sinh ở đây cần được giúp đỡ về khả năng đọc viết và
tính toán.
→ Most of the students here need help with _____________ and numeracy
Gợi ý
a detrimental impact offer access to social media literacy
substantial countless web articles
đây:
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IELTS
WRITING TASK 2
ngày 25/03/2023
ĐỀ BÀI
Some cities have vehicle-free days

when private cars, trucks and
motorcycles are banned from the city
center. People are encouraged to use
public transportation such as buses,
taxis and metro on vehicle-free days.
To what extent do you think the
advantages of this outweigh the
disadvantages?
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DÀN Ý
Mở bài:
điểm) để nêu quan điểm vehicle-free days gây ra nhiều bất lợi hơn là lợi
ích.
Thân bài:
Body 1: DOL phân tích 2 lợi ích vehicle-free days mang lại: giảm ô
nhiễm không khí và thúc đẩy các phương tiện công cộng
Body 2: DOL phân tích 2 bất lợi vehicle-free days mang lại: cản trở
công việc kinh doanh và các phương tiện y tế.
Kết bài:
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Body paragraph 1:
The significant advantages of implementing vehicle-free days

The reduction of air pollution caused by vehicles
Carbon dioxide and nitrogen oxide pose a risk to human
health
Reducing the number of vehicles reduce air pollution
People can experience better respiratory health.
Vehicle-free days also promote public transportation
Fewer vehicles on the road, leading to less traffic congestion.
Body paragraph 2:
Vehicle-free days also have some disadvantages to consider

Businesses may suffer during vehicle-free days
They may face difficulty in delivering goods on time, resulting
in losses
Resulting in a drop in customer satisfaction levels.
Medical transportation may challenge to access necessary
medical services
This could have severe consequences for their health
Therefore, it is crucial to find alternative transportation
arrangements.
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BÀI MẪU
During vehicle-free days in some cities, private vehicles, trucks, and

motorbikes are prohibited from the city center. Moreover, people are also
urged to utilize public transit, such as buses, taxis, and the metro. Personally,
the advantages of vehicle-free days are eclipsed by their drawbacks, as this
policy can significantly hinder businesses and medical services.
One of the significant advantages of implementing vehicle-free days is the

reduction of air pollution caused by vehicles. Carbon dioxide and nitrogen
oxide are the primary pollutants emitted by vehicles that pose a risk to human
health. Reducing the number of vehicles on the road during vehicle-free days
significantly reduces air pollution. By breathing cleaner air, people can
experience better respiratory health, reduced risk of heart disease, and
overall improved quality of life. Furthermore, vehicle-free days also promote
public transportation, a more sustainable and efficient mode of transport.
Public transportation systems are designed to transport more people with
fewer vehicles, reducing road congestion. When more people use public
transportation during vehicle-free days, it results in fewer vehicles on the road,
leading to less traffic congestion.
However, vehicle-free days also have some disadvantages to consider.

Firstly, businesses that rely on transportation, such as delivery services, may
suffer during vehicle-free days. They may face difficulty in delivering goods on
time, resulting in losses. The reduced accessibility to vehicles could result in a
drop in customer satisfaction levels, and delivery services may have to find
alternative methods to deliver goods. Secondly, people who rely on private
transportation for medical reasons, such as the disabled or elderly, may find it
challenging to access necessary medical services. This could have severe
consequences for their health, as they may not be able to receive timely
medical treatment. Therefore, it is crucial to find alternative transportation
arrangements for medical services and address the concerns of businesses
that rely on transportation during vehicle-free days.
In conclusion, I believe the disadvantages of vehicle-free days outweigh

their benefits since this legislation may greatly impair companies and health
services.
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Vocabulary
vehicle-free days (noun). ngày không có xe cộ

/ˈviːɪkl-friː deɪz/ Many cities have implemented vehicle-free days to reduce air pollution.
(verb). Cấm
prohibit
The government may prohibit the use of certain substances that are
/prəˈhɪbɪt/
deemed harmful.
urge to utilize public

(verb). kêu gọi sử dụng phương tiện công cộng
transit
Governments around the world urge citizens to utilize public transit to
/ɜːʤ tuː ˈjuːtɪˌlaɪz ˈpʌblɪk
reduce traffic and carbon emissions.
ˈtrænsɪt/
eclipse (verb). lu mờ
/ɪˈklɪps/ Though a talented player, he was completely eclipsed by his brother.

/ˈhɪndər/ Heavy rain can hinder travel plans and make it difficult to get around.
(verb). thải ra
emit
Cars emit pollutants that pose a risk to the environment and human
/ɪˈmɪt/
health.
(verb). gây rủi ro

pose a risk
Poor air quality can pose a risk to respiratory health and exacerbate
/pəʊz ə rɪsk/
breathing conditions.
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Vocabulary
(noun). sức khỏe hô hấp

respiratory health
Regular exercise and a balanced diet can have a positive impact on
/rɪˈspɪrətᵊri hɛlθ/
respiratory health.
a more sustainable
and efficient mode of
(noun). phương thức vận chuyển bền vững và hiệu quả hơn
transport
Cycling or walking can be a more sustainable and efficient mode of
/ə mɔː səsˈteɪnəbᵊl ænd ɪ transport for short distances.
ˈfɪʃənt məʊd ɒv
ˈtrænspɔːt/
(noun). tắc đường

road congestion
Road congestion can lead to longer travel times and increased stress for
/rəʊd kənˈʤɛsʧən/
drivers.
a drop in customer
(noun). sự sụt giảm mức độ hài lòng của khách hàng
satisfaction levels
A drop in customer satisfaction levels can lead to decreased sales and
/ə drɒp ɪn ˈkʌstəmə
revenue for businesses.
ˌsætɪsˈfækʃᵊn ˈlɛvlz/
address the concerns

(verb). giải quyết những nỗi lo của doanh nghiệp
of businesses
It is important to address the concerns of businesses when implementing
/əˈdrɛs ðə kənˈsɜːnz ɒv
new policies that may affect their operations.
ˈbɪznɪsɪz/
(noun). pháp luật

legislation
Legislation is often necessary to ensure that companies are held
/ˌlɛʤɪsˈleɪʃᵊn/
accountable for their actions and to protect the rights of citizens.
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Bài tập Exercise

Writing nhé!
Exercise 1:
1 Nhiều thành phố đã thực hiện những ngày không có xe cộ để
giảm ô nhiễm không khí.
→ Many cities have implemented ____________ to reduce air pollution.

2 Chính phủ có thể cấm sử dụng một số chất được cho là có hại.
→ The government may _____________ the use of certain substances that
are deemed harmful.
3 Chính phủ trên khắp thế giới kêu gọi công dân sử dụng phương
tiện giao thông công cộng để giảm lưu lượng giao thông và lượng khí
thải carbon.
→ Governments around the world _____________ to reduce traffic and

carbon emissions.
4 Mặc dù là một cầu thủ tài năng, nhưng anh ấy hoàn toàn lu mờ so
với anh trai của anh ấy.
→ Though a talented player, he was completely _____________ by his

brother.
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5 Mưa lớn có thể cản trở các kế hoạch du lịch và gây khó khăn cho
việc đi lại.
→ Heavy rain can _____________ travel plans and make it difficult to get
around.
6 Ô tô thải ra các chất ô nhiễm có nguy cơ gây hại cho môi trường
và sức khỏe con người.
→ Cars _____________ pollutants that pose a risk to the environment and

human health.
Gợi ý
hinder eclipsed vehicle-free days prohibit emit
urge citizens to utilize public transit
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Rich countries often give money to

Financial aid provide immediate relief in natural disasters and

Other types of aid is essential to complement financial assistanc

It is a commonplace for wealthier countries to provide money to

Financial aid is crucial in providing immediate relief during times of crisis,

To truly combat poverty, however, it is essential to complement financial

In conclusion, I believe there is still a significant role that financial assistance

a commonplace (noun). chuyện bình thường

(noun). hỗ trợ tài chính

(noun). mất cân bằng kinh tế

(verb). giảm thiểu

(noun). các quốc gia có thu nhập thấp

the technological (noun). l ĩnh vực công nghệ

Bài tập Exercise

→ The government provided _____________ to the victims of the natural

→ Education and job creation are essential _____________

→ The pandemic has _____________ in the healthcare system.

→ The widening gap in income and wealth has led to increasing

→Investing in renewable energy sources can help _____________ the

exacerbated existing challenges mitigate a commonplace

Some countries achieve international

Neglecting the development of sports infrastructure that benefits

Widen the gap between the rich and poo

In recent years, some countries have gained international recognition by

Investing resources in specialized sports facilities may come at the cost of

In conclusion, by neglecting the development of sports infrastructure

(noun). thành tích ưu tú

(verb). đánh đổi

an uneven playing (noun). một sân chơi không công bằng

(verb). kéo dài

(noun). một số người có đặc quyền

Bài tập Exercise

→ ____________ is often celebrated, but it can create an unhealthy

→ Pursuing a career as a professional athlete may lead to elite

→ Individuals from _____________ often face significant challenges when

→ The job market can be _____________ where those with connections or

→ The way we structure society _____________ existing inequalities,

an uneven playing field perpetuates Elite achievement

Some people believe that certain old

Buildings with significant cultural or historical value should be