Hi Ladies 

Please see below the Feedback sheet for the Practice question you are preparing
to answer on Lenny which we have already started in class.

PLEASE remember to FIND your 12 quotes which you are allowed to bring to
class for the actual assessment task

If you haven’t completed this essay task yet - then please continue to work on
this today. If you are not in class you will need to do this at home.          

Feedback sheet on practice essay for Lenny’s Book of Everything

Practice question:

How does the writer, Karen Foxlee, demonstrate the importance of love and diversity in
her novel?

 In a structured essay response you may like to include information about the following:

·       Characterisation

·       Setting

·       Symbolism

·       Plot
  Highly    

Essay Elements Develope Developed Areas for

d improvement

Essay introduction:      

A clearly indicated outline of your response to

the question.

Body paragraphs:      

Use of TEEL/PEEL structure

Clarity of expression:      

Clearly expressed sentences within each body

paragraph. Correct spelling and grammar
      
Supporting evidence:

Use of relevant supporting quotations, linking to

the point of each body paragraph