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MS YẾN - WRITING TASK 1
MS YẾN - WRITING TASK 1
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Shopping on the internet = Shopping online = purchasing items/ products online/ via/ through the Internet/ e-
commerce platforms
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OUTLINE:
1. INTRODUCTION
pie bar chart
các dạng khác là graph
dưới 10 ghi chữ
trên 10 ghi số
The A graph/ chart compares A,B,C&D in terms of sth in/over (time)
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of citizens in 5 European countries accessing the Internet, while/
whereas the pie chart compares those 5 countries in terms of the amount of money spent on online shopping in
2000.
2.OVERVIEW: All in all, it is clear that (1). Another noteworthy feature is that (2)
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3. a. BODY 1:
BODY 1: As can be seen from the bar chart, Sweden recorded the biggest the percentage of people using the
Internet, which was 35%. Meanwhile, the fraction of the Internet users from the UK was 20%, which was two times
as much as France. In addition, Spain is the country with the least significant proportion of citizens browsing the
Internet, which was one third as much as that of Germany (30%).
BODY 2:
It is apparent in the bar chart that the UK was the country with the greatest money spent on online shopping,
which was 87 euros. In the second place was France, whose expenditure on purchasing via e-commerce platforms
was nearly six times as much as that of Spain. Finally, the budget that the German allocated for purchasing goods
on the Internet was 46 euros, which was 30 euros less than that of Sweden.
The chart and table below give information about what nursing graduates did after finishing their course in the
UK in 2009.
pursue
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the distributions of nursing degree holders, while the table compares
several health majors in terms of the proportion of employees who worked in the health sector in several health
sectors in the UK in 2009
The given pie chart depicts the proportion of graduated destinations of British nursing degree holders amongst
different areas, whereas the table compares six distinct majors in terms of the percentage of people working in the
medical field in the UK in 2009.
The initial impression from the chart is that the majority of the graduates chose to work in medical field. Also, it is
obvious that hospital nurse is the most popular major.