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MandaueFoam Eyebags Commercial
MandaueFoam Eyebags Commercial
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Submitted to:
Professor Rommel Roxas
July 6, 2023
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
I. Introduction …………………………………………………………………………….. 3
Background of the Mandaue Foam Company ……………………………... 4
Gigil Ad Company Background ……………………………………………... 5
II. Ang Dapat I-Flex, Masarap na Tulog! …………………………………………….… 5
Background ……………………………………………………………….……. 5
Story ……………………………………………………………….……………. 6
Content ……………………………………………………………….………….8
Script …………………………………………………………………………… 8
III. Analysis
Campaign Message …………………………………………………………..14
Confusion about the content ………………………………………………… 14
IV. Recommendation ……………………………………………………………………. 17
V. References ……………………………………………………………………………. 20
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INTRODUCTION
As a result of intense market competition, our local advertising industry
is constantly expanding. We have seen various versions of the company that we didn't
expect to associate with their product or service. The majority of the time, they create
content that causes confusion or a desire to delve deeper before revealing the true
meaning of what the company wants us to imply. It is a “Filipino thing” to get easily
engaged and involved with commercials we are seeing differently every day. However,
after the pandemic, we are all shifted to the internet world, thus reaching a customer
from a marketing point of view on social media or primarily on YouTube is much more
practical and easier compared to aired commercials on television.
Based on my observations, advertising companies attempt to
manipulate the imaginations of Filipino viewers in order to change our perceptions of
the product or service they are promoting. I also noticed that, aside from being a family-
oriented theme with a dramatic undertone, they are incorporating some comedic
themes that everyone can relate to while making us wonder if we really understand
what it is all about. Therefore, I decided to choose a commercial that showcases these
observations I have.
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STORY
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after her. She has seen herself in the mirror with the same size eye bags that Nadine
is promoting. They both screamed and danced in delight.
The commercial ended with a young girl confidently walking into a
hallway on their street wearing a white elegant shirt, jeans, wedge heels, and eye
bags, while others murmured that she had married a wealthy man. In fact, she will
just buy something in the Sari-Sari store. When she saw Nadine on television, she
noticed that she no longer has her eye bags and stated, "Of course, wala nang
designer eye bags." It's 2023 na. Laos na 'yun 2022 pa." The young girl is disappointed
and turns around to walk home.
At this point, the commercial finally ended with the quotation “Ang hindi
mawawala sa uso, masarap na tulog” and inserted the MandaueFoam price.
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Nadine will get out of the car, surrounded by paparazzi. She will slowly
remove her sunglasses in order to flex her eye bag to them.
Line1 : Patingin naman po ng eye bag, wow, tingin dito, wow (coming from different
media people).
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The news chika was being aired on television and the young teenage girl seriously
watched it while being amazed at Nadine. She was eating pancit canton with her mom
in a simple sala room without chairs and was sitting on the floor.
Scene 2: 00:15- 00:19
The young girl faces the mirror and shows her desire to obtain the same
eye bags size as Nadine. Music will start to play an old Visayan song.
Scene 3: 00:20- 00: 22
The camera focuses on the clock showing 2:49 AM in the morning time
and will shift to the girl laying on the bed, fighting her sleepiness.
Following a montage focuses on the young girl’s thing that has the image of Nadine
with her definite eye bags.
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The young girl’s mom will hand her a coffee which made the girl realize
it woke her awake. Another scene will be played for a clock showing 3:00 AM in the
morning pertaining to the effect of the coffee she drank.
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As she was too sleepy yet determined to achieve the eye bag trend of
her model idol, she went on their sala and improvised an object that would wake her
up. It was made with bottled water pooled with a rope that will bounce into her head
which would possibly bump her head.
A montage of fried dried fish on a plate “Tuyo” was prepared by the young girl’s mom.
She slowly walks ahead into the bathroom while nodding her hair with a towel on her
shoulder showing she is about to take a bath. Slow music intensifies the mood of the
scene and is followed by a focus on the mirror while the girl shouts very loudly. She
finally got the eye bag she was aiming for too. Her mom runs to her, and they dance
together celebrating her achievement of a definite eye bag.
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The scene focuses on the young teenage girl confidently walking in the
street which made her neighbors think she was married to an old rich man.
Lines: Wow! Siguro nakapangasawa ng mayaman ‘yan
Even if she was too dressed, she will just buy something in the Sari-
Sari store ( Dulche. Gab At Annas Store). A chika news was aired, apparently, it was
Nadine’s interview.
Nadine: Of course, wala nang designer eye bags, It’s 2023! Laos na ‘yon- 2022pa.
As a result of her disappointment, the girl slowly turns her back and
walks slowly back to her house.
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III. Analysis
Campaign Message
You will not know the true meaning of the commercial if you will not
finish it until the end. It wants the viewer to realize that having a good sleep is timeless
regardless of the year we are in. To do so, we can buy foam with Mandaue to have a
good sleep at an affordable price. It also implies how dangerous it interests and
engages young ages to be influenced by the artists they are idolizing up to the point
their health could be compromised and even our parents may support us.
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brand, it was really seen at all in 90% of the video. Thus, it was not visually
recognizable as MandaueFoam Brand.
• Unable to connect with their direct customers
I am also wondering why they have represented their main character at
that young age, per my observation the girl is in the age group 12-16 years old. Also,
the involvement of her mom in terms of sleeping together was not featured which may
add up something that moms can sleep together with their children enjoying the
comfort that the mattress would give them.
• Irrelevant Characters
Going deeper, Nadine’s character does not have anything to do with
the MandaueFoam. She was an artist that does not even show she is a user or does
have foam at all. The mother of the main character also does not have any association
with the product they are promoting, you might think they are promoting a canton brand
or instant noodles brand.
• Negative message
One of the main reasons I chose this commercial was that it conveys a
negative image of the brand. It was now associated with the risky admiration to
an artist who forced a teenage girl to jeopardize her health without reiterating what
could have been done better in the end, does she order the foam to get a good night's
sleep? It also fails to emphasize that ignoring our health in order to stay awake is not
a healthy habit. If a young audience watched it, it might teach them that it is okay to
be sleepless as long as you follow the trend, and they might not even realize it is for a
foam brand. It could lead to other people’s justification to compromise their health as
it is really happening, it becomes their validation that eye bags are beautiful and
aesthetically accepted.
Furthermore, it was emphasized how her mother was supportive of her
unhealthy admiration, how her mother handed her a cup of coffee and was with her
during the time they saw the artist's beautiful face with an eye bag, and how her mother
was the one she celebrated with after she had the eye bag.
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IV. RECOMMENDATION
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appeared on chika news as the new endorser of Mandaue Foam as the reason for her
new look. It will make more sense and be more formal if the emphasis is on the product
rather than highlighting the video's comedy theme.
Highlight call-to-action
Together with the changes in the filters and end. The call to action can
be placed during the scene where the young teenage girl is about to rest. Such
phrases could be as below:
The actual ending of the Ad
By actually highlighting the price it will be the first thing that the customer will
remember. It will give them an idea “Is it cheaper compared to brand x?” and will
increase their curiosity about the product we are promoting. Also, it is not effective
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now it only just states your official website at the end, it could be better if you will let
the audience know what they will be looking forward to once they visit your promotion.
link. In the above example, I re-do it by putting “Go to, to place your order” instead of
just the link itself. It also let them know that they can place an order online not just
virtually seeing their other products to offer. It directly calls an action to the customer,
and answers the question, “What do I do next?” I remember listening to a podcast
where most of the endings have a great call to action. Instead of leaving your audience
to guess and wonder how to proceed, you provide the answer in the form of an eye-
catching, brightly colored button that directs them to the next stage of the purchasing
process. You've provided your customers with the quickest path to the next step,
removing the need for them to solve a problem.
Matulog ka na! , this is one of the best examples of a call to action, it
does not mean the literal meaning you should sleep now. But since we have edited
the content we have associated the imagination of our audience with we need sleep
after what the young girl has experienced, which means buy now! It will give your
customers the impression that this is something they must do right away. If they wait,
they will either miss out or pay a price. As a result, the word now creates urgency and
provides a clear action to take.
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• After the girl ran after her disappointment, we could highlight her look become
pale and changed gradually once she got into a bed. Would it make confusion?
Not for me, we all know that advertisements are overhyped. The changes in
the filter can also be applied to this suggestion.
• Instead of her mom dancing with her after she has achieved her eye bags, what
can be replaced is a scene wherein her mom does not want to dance or
celebrate with her but instead leaves her and will enter the room. This is a scene
that will also highlight the emblem of the product, MandaueFoam to sleeping.
50 % product and 50% story
• I also mentioned earlier that making sure the proportion participation of the
characters in terms of the product will leave confusion. For example, removing
the pancit canton, and putting brand X in the sachet of the coffee if they want
really to highlight the trash bin with overflowing coffee sachets. Or otherwise, a
scene on the table where the young girl continuously drinks coffee from a
container.
References
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