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    The document discusses two potential answers to an exam question about teenage years. Answer 1 describes teenage years as a time of stress, anxiety and pressure due to hormones, exams, and comparing oneself to unrealistic social media images. Answer 2 argues that descriptions of teenage years as the "best days of your life" are nonsense, and that stress, angst, and terror are more accurate. The document asks which answer best achieves the highest mark and how the lower-scoring answer could be improved.

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    The document discusses two potential answers to an exam question about teenage years. Answer 1 describes teenage years as a time of stress, anxiety and pressure due to hormones, exams, and comparing oneself to unrealistic social media images. Answer 2 argues that descriptions of teenage years as the "best days of your life" are nonsense, and that stress, angst, and terror are more accurate. The document asks which answer best achieves the highest mark and how the lower-scoring answer could be improved.

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    English Language Transactional Writing

    Article Writing
    Which would achieve the highest mark and why?

    Answer 1 Answer 2

    ‘You make me feel like a teenage dream’: so said Katy Perry, but what does she The best days of your life indeed. What a load of nonsense! This
    actually mean? Is it the freedom and complete lack of responsibility that she is myth, put around by people too old to remember what it really
    referring to? Does she think that at the moment, all we have to worry about is was like to be sixteen, needs exploding … now! Stress, angst
    who fancies who and what new lip-gloss we are going to buy at the weekend? and terror might be more appropriate descriptions. From the
    Teenage years are a nightmare of spots, stress about our exams and constantly yuckiness of exploding blackheads, to the pressure of oncoming
    seeing images of perfection on Instagram that we can only aspire to replicate GCSE exams; from the black hole of an unknown future to the
    in our bedroom mirrors. How can we be young and carefree when we have an known-by-everybody humiliation of being ignored by the boy
    incessant tsunami of hormones surging through our veins? or girl of your dreams. This is what it is like.

    Which did it best? Add additional features to the answer that you think is
    Most suitable for audience lowest to improve it.

    Uses a range of connectives to help it flow

    A range of sentences

    Accurate punctuation

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    English Language Transactional Writing

    Word Bank

    Vocabulary Sentence Openers Techniques You Could Use

    Inexcusable advanced
    Inevitably, metaphor
    trepidation lethargic
    Undoubtedly, imperative
    apprehensive pressure
    Facing facts, it is clear… one-word paragraph for effect
    diminish untroubled

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