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Brainstorm

Using Hair Straightener 

Advantage

Saving time and money for going to the salon

Easy to style hair 

Disadventages

Make hair becomes damaged and dry

Hair falls
Allergies
Change hair textures

Draft

Using Hair Straightener

Using hair straighteners is something women usually do every day. Using a hair straightener
makes our hair look more organized and neat. But frequent use of hair straighteners is also
not good for hair health, the adverse effects of frequent use of hair straighteners is that hair
becomes dry and dull, hair falls out more easily and can change hair texture. Frequent use
of hair straighteners can also cause allergies to the scalp such as itching and damage to the
hair roots. 

However, on the other hand, using a hair straightener also has many benefits, such as
making hair neater and less tangled, saving time and money for going to the salon because
it can be done at home, making it easy to change the hairstyle as desired.

 In conclusion, using a hair straightener is not dangerous if using a hair straightener is
balanced with hair care such as using conditioner or hair serum before using a hair
straightener, it will reduce the risk of hair damage.

Outline

Title : Using Hair Straightener

Topic Sentence: Using hair straighteners is something women usually do every day.

Topic Sentence : Using hair straighteners is something women usually do every day.

Reason : 
The reason why we dont use hair straightener everyday :
Using a hair straightener makes our hair look more organized and neat. But frequent use of
hair straighteners is also not good for hair health, the adverse effects of frequent use of hair
straighteners is that hair becomes dry and dull, hair falls out more easily and can change
hair texture. Frequent use of hair straighteners can also cause allergies to the scalp such as
itching and damage to the hair roots. 
Concluding Sentence :
In conclusion, using a hair straightener is not dangerous if using a hair straightener is
balanced with hair care such as using conditioner or hair serum before using a hair
straightener, it will reduce the risk of hair damage.

Fact : using a hair straightener also has many benefits

1. making hair neater and less tangled, 
2. saving time and money for going to the salon because it can be done at home
3. making it easy to change the hairstyle as desired