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I'm writing to you today to share about my recent unexpected meetup with an

old friend whom I had known in my previous school. To be honest, we were really close back then and used to call each other friends.

I'm going to

Both of us enjoyed solving cubes, shared a similar love for chess and were really good at Maths! With Aarush, every day seemed more exciting than
ever.
Sadly, we couldn't stick together for long as I left the

He had been on my mind although meeting was not possible anymore. I missed him but was also getting

used to it slowly, for what else could I do? Everything was going as usual until the most unexpected thing

happened on Saturday when I bumped into him, all of a sudden, at LULU Mall, like really!

very familiar.

It took me a couple of seconds to realise

I went up to him and held him in a tight hug. My mind was flooded with fond memories and I was overwhelmed.

spend
and satisied

with my bestie after a long time.

Hope to see you soon.

Yours lovingly
David Peter.

Remark:

1. Stronger sentence suggestions have been given.


2. Look out for the circled words, try to find a better vocabulary/alternative for those.
3. Since the topic concerns something nostalgic, you could have also ended the letter with a nostalgic tone.
4. Needed to use better vocabulary for a more sophisticated effect.
5. The format: The ending/valediction: On down left.

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