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INT.AN APARTMENT-NIGHT
An attractive girl in her twenties who exudes merely sex. She
had pacific ocean eyes, her hair was neatly tied in a bun,
some strands were stuck to her face because of sweat. She
wasn't that much of a fashionista but people did appreciate
her fashion sense because of her attractiveness.
She is sitting on the ground with her back rested on a
greyish-brown couch. A barely used PINK COLOURED GUITAR on
her right and a BLOODY VERNIER CALLIPER on her left.
 

THE GIRL
I always try to see the kindness in
people even though they hurt me
over and over again because that is
what I was taught to do.
Does that make me bighearted,
George?
From audiences' POV. George lays there without having
anything to say. He's dead. He's been stabbed so many times
that some flesh was lying near the untreated, open wound.
The girl bends over to check his heartbeat.
THE GIRL (CONT'D)
You're dead and I killed you.
Tears start falling from here eyes. She starts sobbing. Was
she really devasted for killing her boyfriend? Or was it just
all an act?
She lifts her head and looks to the right and starts playing
the Guitar, after what it looks like a command from someone.
She starts playing and also sings 'Treat her Right' by Roy
Heads.
Camera zooms on to the LOWER BOUT of the ACOUSTIC GUITAR. THE
GIRL'S name is revealed, EMMA.
FADE IN.
TITLE CARD APPEARS.
EMMA.

INT. ADAM'S COFFEE SHOP-MORNING

Young man 1, a BLONDE dude in his late twenties, who dyes his
hair for every inconvenience that occurs in his life.
 2.

And this time it was because, his girlfriend broke up with

him. Young man 2, in his early thirties, a cocaine addict and
that was his whole personality.
YOUNG MAN 1
I still have no fucking clue why
she broke up with. I don't need
that bitch, she needs me.
 
YOUNG MAN 2
I agree.
YOUNG MAN 1
But I really like her. I guess,
especially whenever she wears that
goddamn neon hoodie. She is so
fucking pretty.
YOUNG MAN 2
I agree.
YOUNG MAN 1
You agree? Do you? Motherfucker you
weren't in rehab, were you? Jessie
told me.
YOUNG MAN 1 (CONT'D)
You still doing that shit, aren't
you? Really George? Fuck off dude
I'm leaving. You are on your own.

Proceeds to leave, with his jacket and a muffin in his mouth.

George stops him.
GEORGE
Seb Seb, Don't leave. I'll explain.
Seb sits back, gives his forever friend a gross look,
finishes his muffin. He takes George's pancake, dips it in
maple syrup and stuffs his mouth, full.
SEB
(With his mouth full of
pancake)
Go on, motherfucker.
George adjusts himself, comes back to reality.
 3.

GEORGE
(He apparently seemed
nervous)
Seb, I think, I killed someone.
CUT TO:A YOUNG WOMAN'S APARTMENT

INT. ALDO'S APARTMENT-BATHROOM-MORNING

A young woman comes out of the bath tub, it's all red,
covered in blood, trying to catch her breath. She had
drowned, she bends down as she feels a rip in her abdomen.
BLOOD everywhere. She gets out of the tub, she stumbles,
leaving behind bloody handprints on the bathroom walls.
She walks over to the hall, trying to find her phone,
miserably. She finds it and calls someone.
CUT TO:ADAM'S COFFEE SHOP
SEB
Motherfucker, what are you
blabbering. You ODing or something?
Georgie gets a call, Seb starts panicking and stuffs more
pancake in his mouth.
GEORGE
Martha darling. I am really sorry.
I really wanted to call.....
GEORGE (CONT'D)
Martha baby, you don't sound well.
Shit, shit, shit. Why would you do
that? Oh shit, fuck, fuck, fuck.
I'll be there babe.
SEB
You killed Martha?
Seb knows some serious shit is going on and leaves a twenty
dollar bill. And follows George who already is outside the
shop. Like always he didn't forget his third pancake.
They get into Seb's car. Seb has barely started the car.
SEB (CONT'D)
Motherfucker, did u stab her? What
the fuck did u do?
 4.

GEORGE
(whimpering)
I didn't kill her, you
motherfucker. She slit herself.
SEB
Suicide? She isn't suicidal, is
she?
GEORGE
How am I supposed to know?
SEB
(exaggerated)
You're her boyfriend!
GEORGE
(guilty)
I was.
SEB
What? When? Why?
GEORGE
Yeah, last 2 months when you went
to Cambodia. I-I-I-II..
SEB
Dude, what happened?
 
George stars at Seb, with guilt in his eyes. Camera zoom out,
through the window of the drivers' seat.
George starts to cry, Was he in love with her? Or was it his
fault? Seb is devastated he has never seen his friend like
this before. Seb drives sprightly to Aldo's apartment.
They get out off the car, hurriedly. George is sprinting with
Seb right behind his back, they reach third floor, using the
stairs. The lift is occupied.

INT. ALDO'S APARTMENT-LIFT-MORNING

YOUNG WOMAN, somehow had got herself inside the lift, blood
everywhere. She presses on the ground floor, the lift
reaches, the doors open. YOUNG WOMAN'S POV, George was
carrying unconscious Martha, Seb right behind his back. Like
any human's nature, Seb looks at the lift.
 5.

SEB
(Questioning his whole
life, utter shock and
appalled.)
Martha?

MARTHA
(weary)
Seb, what are you--oh shit--can you
help--Seb...
Seb has no idea what is going on, but for sure he knew he was
looking at the right MARTHA. He had known Martha, his whole
life. The way she moved, her likings and dis-likings,
everything. WITHOUT a second thought, he went and grabbed her
by the waist and back-knees. But who was George CARRYING?
This thought made him drop Martha.
Seb hadn't even finished the thought. THE GIRL whom George
was carrying, was unconscious, her head was motionless
because of which it looked as though, she were dead.
All of a sudden, she turned her head to the right. Took out a
knife from nowhere, slit George's neck. And was racing
towards Martha and Seb, SHE was running. Seb, who never
thought quick on his feet, started to panic, looking utterly
at exhausted Martha.
THE GIRL was only few feet away, she didn't look unconscious
anymore, there was pure evilness in her eyes, but for WHAT?
She pulled out a knife pocket from her jeans, approaching
Seb, he grabbed THE GIRL'S wrist, and to their surprise,
Martha pulled out a TASER and tasered THE GIRL.
Seb looked at Martha waiting for an answer.
MARTHA (CONT'D)
She's my twin sister.