How to write an essay?

| B2 First (FCE)
An essay is always written for the teacher. It should answer the question given
by addressing both content points and providing a new content point of the writer’s own.
When writing a professional essay, you can choose whether to give it a title or not. This could
be the same question provided in the task. As for the structure, it should have an introductory
paragraph and a conclusion at the end. The body should consist of 2 or 3 main paragraphs,
depending on how you decide to structure your ideas.

B2 First (FCE) Essay: Structure

Introduction
Present and develop the essay question in your introduction

1st body paragraph

State your 1st argument and give a reason. This should be your main point.

2nd body paragraph

State your 2nd argument and give a reason.

3rd body paragraph (optional)

State your 3d argument and give a reason.

Conclusion
Give your opinion

B2 First (FCE) Essay: Writing Guide

We will use the example question below in our writing guide advice:
In your English class you have been talking about the fashion industry. Write an essay using all
the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives. Do you agree?
Write about:
1. the price of clothes
2. whether people’s appearance is important
3. …………………… (your own idea)

Introduction..

In the introduction, paraphrase the essay topic so that the reader know what you are going to
write about.
Do not express your opinion at the beginning of your essay, leave it to the last paragraph
(conclusion)
 
Introduction: The society we live today is characterised by technology in constant development,
fast speed processes, information travelling and getting to people at a blink of an eye and a
complex web of social networking.

Main Body: 1st – 3rd body paragraph 

in the remaining paragraphs, you write on the points you got in the task, where  each
paragraph should describe exactly one point/argument
How do I write them?
List the points that you need to comment in your essay
Place each point in a separate paragraph.
Describe each point with facts, details, and examples
Connect paragraphs with transition words
See example below…

Paragraph 1 – comment on question 1 – “the price of clothes”

(facts, details, and examples)
On one hand, the fashion industry is undeniably a source of profit and income. It hires millions
of people all over the world and generates millions of dollars every year……Paragraph 2 –
comment on question 2 – “people’s appearance is important”
(facts, details, and examples)
It is stated that people place too much importance on appearance and the material, world,
sadly true, and the fashion industry just spurs on such situation…. 
Paragraph 3 – comment on question 3 – “…………………… (your own idea)”
(facts, details, and examples)
Nevertheless, for those who are neither impressed nor motivated by numbers and figures, the
fashion industry is seen as one which segregates people, isolating those who not fit their laws
and commands….. 
To connect your supporting paragraphs, you should use special transition words, see below. 
On one hand
It is stated that
Nevertheless
as a matter of fact
in addition
in the same fashion / way
first, second, third
Transition words link your paragraphs together and make your essay easier to read. Use them
at the beginning and end of your paragraphs.
Conclusion
The summary paragraph comes at the end of your essay after you have finished developing
your ideas. The summary paragraph is often called a “conclusion.” 
It summarizes or restates the main idea of the essay. You want to leave the reader with a sense
that your essay is complete.
I do believe that the fashion industry, as it is today, has a harmful effect, because it values a
minority of people in detriment to the majority. However, it has such a wide reach that, it put
into a good use, it can save lives.
The society we live today is characterised by technology in constant development, fast speed
processes, information travelling and getting to people at a blink of an eye and a complex web
of social networking. In this context, the fashion industry is becoming increasingly important
and having a more and more paramount role in our lives.
On one hand, the fashion industry is undeniably a source of profit and income. It hires millions
of people all over the world and generates millions of dollars every year. Furthermore, such
profitable business is also believed to be able to spread and make known the culture of a
people, encouraging and enhancing a better understanding of each other.
Nevertheless, for those who are neither impressed nor motivated by numbers and figures, the
fashion industry is seen as one which segregates people, isolating those who not fit their laws
and commands. It is stated that people place too much importance on appearance and the
material, world, sadly true, and the fashion industry just spurs on such situation. Moreover, not
only are the costs of fashion item unrealistically high, it is thought to be a money better spent
on more pressing issues, such as poverty and hunger.
I do believe that the fashion industry, as it is today, has a harmful effect, because it values a
minority of people in detriment to the majority. However, it has such a wide reach that, it put
into a good use, it can save lives.

Subject:
In your English class you have been talking about the environment. Write an essay using all the
notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment.
Do you think these problems can be solved?
Notes:
Write about:
1. transport
2. rivers and seas
3. ………………………… (your own idea)
Student’s FCE Essay Answer:
DEVELOPMENT VS ENVIRONMENT
If we surf the web looking for pollution and environmental catastrophes, we will find out that
every country in the world suffers them. This is a natural consequence of the struggle between
development and environment.
If a country decided to live isolated from the rest of the world, living on what it can naturally
grow and produce, it surely wouldn’t be highly polluted. But we all want exotic food and
technological items from all over the world, so we have to pay the price.
Investing on electrical transport would benefit the environment a lot. Even more if this
electricity came from a natural source of energy like wind, rivers and solar boards. It’s difficult
to achieve this because petrol companies will fight against these actions.
We also have to take care of our rivers and seas. We all have heard about factories throwing
highly toxic substances to rivers, without minimizing their poisoning effects. A really strict law
should be applied to fine these factories and make them change their policy.
But what about ourselves? We also can do a lot! If, when possible, we bought larger packs of
food, we would be producing less rubbish. And this is only an example!

Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a
recent newspaper article:
Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?
Write about:
clear the air
shade
 ………….( your own idea)

Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a
recent newspaper article:
Nowadays children are suffering from obesity, that was once considered to be meant for adults
only. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
Write about:
diet
busy lifestyle
………………(your own idea)
Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a
recent newspaper article:
Is it better to be the oldest or the youngest in a family?
Write about:
parents
role of older sibling
………………(your own idea)