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Nowadays, music is believed to bring only benefits to individuals and

societiestie. However, some argue that it can have a negative effect on both.
This essay will examine both points of view, but personally, I strongly
advocate music brings more benefits to people.

FirstlyOn the one hand, music has many mental benefits. For example,
a man feels more relaxed when listening to music after working hard all
day. It showed that music can magically elevate our mood, research showed
that music can help stabilize our mood, reduce the sense of loneliness (Giam
cam giac co don, ko phai la giam co don), and so on. Depending on the type
of music we listen to, it can improve our mood in a certain way. Therefore, it
is obvious that with a good mood we will be able to do everything in the
best way.

On the other hand, there are some kinds of music that brings sadness
to people. It may make people’s moods become worse. In fact, there were
many people who wanted to commit suicide after listening to music with a
tragic melody. It showed that music can alsoe have a bad effect on people’s
moods. However, in the world of music, there are not many such genres of
music. MoreoverBesides, people tend to listen to cheerful music when they
feel sad. Thus, we can see that music brings more benefits than negative
influences.

In conclusion, the music is an inevitable part of the human life. I


believe, although, it may cause some negative effects, also it plays a
significant role in the development of human personality. Music is similar to
food, when we eat delicious food, we feel good but when we eat unsavory
food, so does our mood.

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