1.Your contextual competence needs improvement.

You
missed context in few answers. Refer (Q - 3, 4, 5,19)

2. You have written overall good content. However

there is scope of improvement in some answers Refer
(Q- 3, 4, 5, 19)

3. Your language competence needs improvement, like

work on effective sentence formation.

4. Your introduction is fine except in few questions

5. Your structuring needs improvement. You have to use

keywords from question itself for framing subheadings.
Your presentation also needs improvement like Box the
subheadings & give numbering to your point.( In most
of the answers )

6. Your conclusion competence needs improvement,

like conclude by broader theme of the question like
linking with SDG, concluding with data , committee
recommendations. ( In most of the questions )
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2. 3.5
3. 3.0
4. 3.5
5. 3.5
6. 3.0
7. 3.5
8. 3.5
9. 3.5
10. 3.5
11. 6.0
12. 7.0
13. 6.5
14. 6.5
15. 6.5
16. 6.0
17. 6.5
18. 7.0
19. 5.5
20. 6.0

Total 97.5
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introd
uction

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content

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write
proper
heading
to
understa
nd the
context

Good
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points

Better
to
give
numb
ering
to
your
points

Fair
conclusion
 :
Fair
introdu
ction

Box
the
subhe
ading

Fair
points

Better
to give
numbe
ring to
your
points
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Gender budget allocation has decreased
from 0.71% to 0.66% of GDP

Fair
points
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introducti
on

Don’t club
the intro
and body
part

Fair
points

Need to
write
issues in
supply
chain
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points

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conclusion
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Fair

:
introduction

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points
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Fair points

Need to
write
dimensions
of food
security

Fair
conclusion
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Good
start

Try to write
proper
subheading
to
understand
the context
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Write proper subheading like , Role of
precision farming in attaining sustainable
agricultural growth

Substantiate
your points

Better to
give
numbering
to your
points

Write proper
conclusion
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Fair
introd
uction

Write proper subheading

Valid
Points
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Avoid overwriting

Valid points

Don’t end abruptly , write conclusion

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Introduce
about ppp
infrastructu
re

Try to write proper subheading

1-
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points
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Valid
points

National
infrastruct
ure
pipeline

Viability
gap
funding

Fair
conclusion
 1 :
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introduction

Try to use
keywords
from the
question for
framing
subheading
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content

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Try to write conclusion

integrated approaches, policy reforms, and community participation to

effectively mitigate and adapt to erosion hazards.
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start

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content
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i.
Write the Role of the Landslide Atlas in
Disaster Risk Reduction:

conclusion
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introduction

Valid
points

1-
Write effects
of lightning
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1-
Points

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start

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points

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Inflation rates , terms of trade , CAD, Recession , speculation
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points

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give
numbering
to your
points é
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content

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1-
introduction

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you have
used recent
example

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content

PPP
REISTs
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points

Fair
conclusion
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introduction

Good
use of
data
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content
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subheadin
g context
can’t be
understood

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that
you
have
used
global
reports
data
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content

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start

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content
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points

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points
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content

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Conclude by ensuring food and nutrition security while
promoting sustainable agricultural practices.
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Link with
agriculture

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points
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Valid points

Can add
points like
Precision
farming
Remote
sensing
:
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Good

Don’t end abruptly, write conclusion

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For efficient
management
and
accessibility

Nice
explanation
with
example
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Try to write
proper
subheading

Avoid overwriting

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points
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conclusion
i
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Fair
introduction

Good
points
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content

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points
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points

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Try to write conclusion
The draft new industrial policy is a step in the right direction,
acknowledging the need to adapt to the changing global
economic landscape and address emerging challenges
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Fair
introduction

Relevant
points
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Valid points

Good
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points

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conclusion
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Valid
introduction

Write proper subheding

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Deviated
from the
demand
of the
question

Need to
write
features
and
principles
of DRI

Refer
synopsis
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content

Please write conclusion.

 1-
Your
introduction
must be
precise and
short

Valid content

Write proper
subheading
after
introduction
Good
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É
points

Instead you
Can write as

Infrastructure
Resilience

Early warning
system

Community
engagement

Explain the
above 2
points
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points

1-
Write conclusion