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Writing - Part 2
Writing - Part 2
** Use different word to start every sentence in a paragraph. (using the same word is
boring) OR
** Use a transition word or words. For example, using in addition links the sentence you
are writing now and the sentence before it. It avoids he use of ‘I’ to start two sentences
in a row.
Example:
I think working for extra pocket money will give me a sense of achievement. In addition,
I believe that working will help me develop new skills.
Your class has been discussing how to earn extra pocket money and your teacher has asked you to
write an essay about what you would do to earn extra pocket money.
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
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From the question, identify the content requirements to be included in the essay.
Content 1:
Content 2:
Content 3:
Elaboration 1
Content 2
Elaboration 2
Content 3
Elaboration 3
Closure
One way to earn extra pocket money is to be a private tutor. As a fifth-former, I have
adequate knowledge of school subjects to help younger students. The hours are flexible
since I can schedule classes to suit myself. In addition, coaching others also enhances my
own knowledge.
I would use the money I earn to buy a motorcycle. Soon, I will be going to college and
having my own transport is a necessity. With the extra money from tutoring, I will not have
to burden my family.
To conclude, private tutoring is a good way to earn extra money. It is not only easy to
do but also beneficial to me.
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The amount of pocket money we receive can occasionally fall short of our needs. We
shouldn't just rely on our parents to provide us more, in my opinion. I believe we ought to
work to earn the additional funds.
As a private tutor, you could be earning extra pocket money. I am sufficiently adept in
academic subjects as a fifth-form student to assist younger children. I can arrange my classes
whenever it's convenient, thus the hours are flexible. Additionally, mentoring others helps
me grow as a coach.