Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Nelson
Introduction
For w h o m This book is designed for people who wish to
improve their written English. They may be in a
job, like a secretary who is required to draft on
her own the replies to incoming letters, or even
to improve her employer's style. A man may
have to prepare sets of instructions for operating
a mechanism, or to set out the main points in an
awkward insurance problem. Yet others may
need to pass an examination in English, and
among these there will be many learners of
English as a second language. Some may just
want to produce better writing, for the good
reason that, for those whose native language it
is, the 'subject' is closely bound up with
personality. For instance, confused and vague
writing may be the signs of a confused and
vague mind; and an improvement in written
work helps one to sort out and make up one's
mind.
Types o f English
There are various kinds of written and spoken
English. The private diary, for example, can be in
any style; there are no rules for it, and not many
for the personal letter. But other occasions
require particular styles. For instance in an
examination the standard has to be adjusted to
the expectations of the marker or grader. A
witness's account of an accident ought to be
plain and factual and carefully arranged; and a
telephone conversation imposes on the speaker
quite a different manner from that he would
adopt for a meeting. There are as many kinds of
English as there are purposes in writing, and
each requires the appropriate mode of
expression.
Places: U.S.A., U.S.S.R., Herts, Yorks., Mass., politicians and men of affairs, when they speak
S.A. or write in this manner:
Organisations: A.A.A., B.M.A., BR, N.S.P.C.C..
N.U.M., Y.H.A. There is a good deal of uncertainty w ith
Technical terms: m.p.h., r.p.m., oz., lb., kilo, regard to the extent to w hich consumer
mm, cc. resistance was the cause of a marked reduction
in the volume of retail trade in the current year.
It used always to be the practice to put a stop
after abbreviations, as in e.g., i.e., R.N. and so What the speaker meant was:
on, though abbreviations which end with the We don't know how far trade this year has
same letter as the original word, such as Dr, been affected by reluctant customers.
Mr, Revd, Ltd, have never needed one. This
practice should be followed. There is also a See con crete expression; covering-up
tendency for abbreviations to lose their full stop language.
when they are so much part of the language that
the original is almost forgotten, as in BBC.
accent In speaking English words of more than a
It is best to keep abbreviations and contractions
to a minimum. They are a nuisance to the single syllable, one of the syllables is always
stressed: 'All students are expected to attend
reader, for they slow him up - even though he
may not be conscious of this - while he regularly'. The tendency is for this accent to fall
translates the shortened version into the full on the first syllable or the syllable containing
the root meaning of the word. There are a
form.
number of words that have the same shape as
another word, but with different meanings
-able, -ible Pronounciation ought to settle which of these according to the position of the accent. Some
endings is needed, but it does not always help. examples:
Try pronouncing the words to yourself, aloud if
possible, stressing the a or /': conduct, n. conduct, v.
c6nflict, n. conflict, v.
agreeable comfortable incurable prob able
contest, n. contest, v.
accessible aud ible edible elig ible convert, n. convert, v.
incred ible intellig/6/e legible negUgible con v ic t n. convict, v.
responsible vis ible digest, n. digest, v.
escort, n. escort, v.
ab stract nouns These are the names given to qualities and extract, n. extract, v.
states, abstracted from the people or things or frequent, adj. frequent, v.
circumstances in which they are evident. For increase, n. increase, v.
example, we think of a number of brave people, 6bject, n. object, v.
abstract or take from them what they have in refuse, n. refCise, v.
common, and call it courage. Other abstract suspect, n. suspect, v.
nouns are beauty, cheerfulness, dignity, height, transfer, n. transfer, i/.
intensity. They tend to be over-used by accusative See object.
active and passive 4 adjectives
half-way house about it, so very unique is last example is incorrect, and that we ought to
nonsense. It is much the same with: say speak more slowly.
complete perfect Adverbs ending in-ly form their comparatives by
essential priceless more, and their superlatives by most.
final superior
harmless unanimous In writing, place the adverb as close as possible
inferior worthless to the word it modifies, because otherwise there
may be confusion:
Finally, be sparing in the use of adjectives when I
writing. Consider this: I nearly made a pound last night.
(but he did not actually make anything)
In the blazing sunshine of Mexico, Don I made nearly a pound last night.
clocked up an all-time record for the 400 (but he did actually make some profit)
metres, overtaking Stewart at the psychological
moment and finishing w ith comparative ease - Again:
a major breakthrough for his team. Even she was unmoved by such news.
Four superfluous adjectives . . . To look at one She was even unmoved by such news.
only; comparative is meaningless uniess we are She was unmoved, even by such news.
told what or who provides the comparison. Five
more samples of idle adjectives, and the nouns Other adverbs that need care in placing are:
to which they are commonly stuck, are: b u ilt-in almost, ever, hardly, only, scarcely. See also:
safeguard, definite decision, integral part, double negatives; in tensifiers; 'on ly'.
necessary steps and true facts. The adjectives
add nothing to the meaning, make the writing A d v e r tis in g Some types of publicity debase the language
woolly, and give the impression that the writer by false and exaggerated usage (absolutely
is trying to be impressive. See com paratively. unique, best on the market, save pounds by . . .).
The aim is to promote the idea that the good life
adverbs Most adverbs are formed by adding -ly to an consists in earning money to spend on
adjective: vigorous becomes vigorously. But a advertised products, profitable to make. They
number of very common adverbs have no special exploit us by playing on vanity, snobbishness,
endings: sex, fear and the herd instinct. The means
before now already soon once twice adopted are words and pictures; and every
student of English should be able to recognise
here there everywhere almost much
the advertising use of language; examples of it
very rather not quite.
are sometimes set in examination papers.
And a number of adverbs have the same form In the language of advertisers fish and chips
as the parent adjective, as in these correct becomes: 'Rich golden-brown sea-food with
expressions: superfine French fried potatoes as a side dish'.
work hard run fast hold tight speak slower See 'like ' w ords.
- though grammar books may insist that the a ffe c ta tio n Students who become good writers sometimes
agreem ent agreem ent
go through a period of writing affectedly. In b The real subject. In the sentence 'A bowl of
acquiring a good vocabulary they enjoy showing apples is seen in the picture' is is correct
off their knowledge of longish or uncommon grammatically, because b o w l (singular) is the
words and phrases new to them. So that we subject of the verb. It is tempting to say ' . . . are
read of conversed instead of talked, demise in the picture', because the apples seem part
instead of death, and dentures instead of false of the subject, and they are so near the verb
teeth. It is an excellent thing to collect new that they almost push it into the plural. Again,
words, but they should be kept for exactly the if we look for the real subject in 'Each of us
right occasion. See cliches; d ig n ity w ords. has a job to do' we can see that it is Each; and
that therefore the singular has is grammatically
correct, even though a number of people have
agreem ent 1 noun and verb
been mentioned. The same rule applies to
The rule is clear: singular subjects have singular
everyone and someone. But the user of the book
verbs, plural subjects have plural verbs; and
is again advised not to worry, since so many of
when there are two or more subjects, the verb
the rules are neglected by good speakers and
is plural. writers.
There are some variations: See anybody, anyone.
a Collective nouns: when a noun like audience, c Alternative subjects, linked by or, either . . . or,
group, council or team stands for a number of neither . . . nor, as in 'Dad or I will fix it for
people it normally has a singular verb. But, as you'. The 'rules' about sentences of this type
so often, usage changes; sometimes the are broken a good deal, and we shall not try to
government of a country is regarded as singular, sort them out. However one example must be
sometimes as plural. And when a group is given, where the grammatical rule is clear. If
envisaged as a number of individuals acting on we say 'Neither Jill nor Jane is coming to-night'
their own it will be best to have a plural verb, the verb is singular, because what we have
as in: The group are going to present their really done is to compress two sentences: 'Jill is
opinions to the Minister'. We can imagine each not coming . . . Jane is not coming'; and in the
member having his or her say. There is no strict compressed version we think of the two
rule, and it is best to go by what sounds right, separately, first one and then the other. But
as in these examples: many people now would say 'Neither Jill nor
The crew consists of five experienced sailors, a Jane are coming to-night'; and their meaning
doctor and a cook. would be perfectly clear.
The committee meets regularly.
d There is . . . and There are . . . Consider these
But when we think of a number of individuals sentences:
behaving in different ways, the verb is plural:
There is only one way of getting through.
The crew have various jobs allotted to them.
There are tw o roads through the town.
The committee are going to be paid their
expenses. In the first one is is singular, because way is the
See co lle ctive nouns; subject, m ultiple. subject, and it is singular; in the second roads
alibi 10 11 almost
is a plural word, so the plural are is used. All all rig ht The authorities on language insist that we must
these There is/are sentences are turned-round not write alright as one word, though they do
versions of ordinary sentences; e.g. T w o roads allow us to use already and almost. The writer of
there are through the town'. In order to be this book thinks they are wrong in refusing to
grammatically correct we must mentally turn recognise the commonly used alright. Moreover
round a There or Here sentence, and make sure they are depriving us of a way of distinguishing
once again what the real subject is. But between two meanings; note the difference in
it must be said that the usage in ordinary these uses of a ll and ready:
conversation is often grammatically incorrect,
and the most highly educated people are heard The skis are all ready.
to say sentences like 'Here's John and Mary'. The skis are already in use.
- two meanings, two spellings. It would be a
2 Fortunately for all of us who speak and learn help if we could also have two spellings for the
English, it is a language without inflexions - two meanings in these sentences:
changes at the end of words to show gender,
etc. So agreement of adjective with noun does All right. I'll see to it.
not exist in English. There are a few exceptions: Your sums are all rignt.
the demonstratives this and that (plural: these,
those); and a minor error occurs with one of In the first example immediately above, all right
them. In using phrases like 'This kind of has exactly the same meaning as OK, and would
transistors . . .' many people, perhaps most, are be appropriately spelled alright. In the second
liable to say 'These kind of transistors . . .'. The all right has the different meaning of a ll correct,
reason for the mistake is clear; the mind and is best spelled as two words.
envisages a number of transistors, and it
therefore thinks that kin d also ought to be plural; allite ra tio n The repetition of a consonant at the beginning
thus the singular this slides into the plural these of a number of words. It was much used in Old
The 'error' is much commoner than the correct English poetry:
version. In a summer season, when soft was the sun . . .
alibi This Latin word means in another place, or and it is found in all kinds of literature since
elsewhere. It is used in English to describe the then, usually to gain effects of speed and
defence of an accused person who states that, emphasis; the English language runs naturally
at the time of the misdeed he is accused of, he to it. Nowadays it is much employed by
was in another place. It is commonly used to advertisers and newspapers to make their way
mean excuse: into our minds; Players Please, Guinness is
g ood for you - these slogans imprint themselves
I've got a good a libi for missing the opening on our memories by means of alliteration.
session, because I had to go to hospital for a See doubles.
check-up.
But it is best to leave the word for use on alm ost Especially in writing, place this adverb as closely
occasions when its original meaning is required. as possible to the word it modifies; its position
12 13 analogy
can make a great difference to the meaning of Joseph was so straight that Pharaoh made a
a sentence, thus: ruler of him.
I almost finished the job unaided. A sense of humour and a consciousness that
(but he did not actually finish it): some words have several meanings can prevent
I finished the job almost unaided. ambiguities like those immediately above. See
(he did finish the job) funny, unconsciously.
a's only; and it means similar to, on the same all short; the so-called four-letter words are
lines as. Anglo-Saxon. See fo u r -le tte r w ords.
and etc. Et cetera means and other things; thus to write antecedent The word referred to by a later pronoun or
the expression and etc. repeats the and relative pronoun. In:
unnecessarily. See redundant w ords.
The fire, which had been blazing fiercely, soon
'and' w ith relative pronoun burnt itself out
In the sentence: fire is the antecedent of which. See pronouns.
She got good results from her new TV set
equipped w ith indoor aerial and remote control an ticipa te This word means getting in first, taking in good
and which gave excellent results time the action necessitated by a foreseen event.
the second and preceding which is grammatically
incorrect. A n d is a connecting word, but all the A nticipating thundery weather. I took my mac
connecting needed is done by the relative and wellingtons.
pronoun which. Thus the and is superfluous,
sounds wrong and is wrong. If you find yourself It is too commonly misused as a dignity word
writing and who, and w hich or and where, instead of expect.
make sure you are connecting two relatives,
as in this correct sentence: a n ti-clim ax The descent from the sublime to the ridiculous:
I revisited the River Mole, in w hich I used to The trumpets all sounded; St Peter said 'Come!'
fish and where I found freshwater crayfish. The pearly gates opened and in walked Mum.
Anglicised w ords
Hundreds of foreign words have been absorbed antithesis The contrasting of words or ideas by putting
them closely together in a balanced sentence:
into English, and the assimilation of imported
words goes on every day. The accents that words I know you'd rather have tea; coffee is ready
like fete and eclair used to have tend nowadays for the others.
to be dropped, but it is useful to retain them
in words like fiancee and resume where they antonym s The same as opposites; please see entry on
make pronunciation clear. these.
A nglo-S axon The language of the invaders from Denmark and anybody, anyone
North Germany who settled in England in the These words are singular, dnd any pronoun or
6th. century. It has provided us with words we adjective referring back to one of them should
still use for some of the most important things also be singular, as in these examples:
in life - the sun and moon, the seasons and
weather, physical things, agriculture, parts of the Anybody could find his way in a little town like
human body and its activities. They have kept that.
their original force and expressiveness, and are Has anyone a bicycle pump he could lend me?
apostrophe 16 17 apposition
or if the question were asked in a girls' school Some exceptions to the singular rule must be
it would have to run: mentioned, though they are unlikely to cause
much trouble. In order to sound better, certain
Has anyone a bicycle pump she could lend me?
ancient names ending in s and a few common
But what most people, however good their expressions do without the s that indicates
education, actually say is: possession, as in: Moses' law, for goodness'
sake. The s for possession is now usually added
Has anyone a bicycle pump they could lend me? to names ending in s, as in Charles's brief case,
It is grammatically incorrect, but well established Inverness's coat-of-arms. If you ever have to
by usage; and it is easy to see that anyone who compare the front ends of certain large
makes the 'mistake' visualises a number of quadrupeds, it is probably better to say The
potential lenders and is addressing several noses of hippopotamuses have no horns like
people, and therefore quite understandably the noses of rhinoceroses' than 'Hippopotamuses'
makes the subject of could lend plural: they. noses . . .'
Note that the words are singular, so that the The possessive form of certain old words with
apostrophe comes before the s in the possessive their plural ending in -en is exemplified in:
form: m en’s, w om en’s, children's, oxen’s.
Dick and / are nominative, because a phrase in As Jim was cleaning his bicycle, it began to
apposition is part of the subject in this case rain.
The winners. But in: As I've said elsewhere, correctness is less
He welcomed the newcomers, Sally and me important nowadays.
me is correctly accusative because it is part of the He watched that doorway as a cat watches a
object newcomers. mouse.
It can also mean the same as because, but in
appropriateness rather a weak way:
This quality is tending to replace correctness as
I'll pay by cheque, as I haven't any cash.
the standard by which writing is judged; fitness
for purpose is looked for rather than adherence 2 It can also introduce comparisons, such as:
to strict rules. Thus the question now asked of
My vegetables are as healthy as my father's.
student writing is not so much 'Is this writing
correct?' as 'Is it appropriate in its style? Is the When there is a negative in the comparison, it
student using the vocabulary and kind of is best to use so in the first part:
expression that are right for the job in hand?'
But my roses aren't so vigorous as his.
And again, 'Is his style adapted to the type of
reader or audience he is writing for? Does he In the example immediately above we have
make things easy for the reader? Does he keep omitted a verb:
his own peculiarities in check and not inflict . . . so vigorous as his are.
them too generously on his reader? Has he in
general adjusted his way of writing to what the Thus the following sentence is grammatically
circumstances require?' Probably the net result correct:
of this change in climate is a greater tolerance She is not so quick as /
on the part of examiners.
with / in the nominative because it is the subject
appro xim ately In most contexts this sounds pompous, as if it of the verb am, which has been dropped. But
were used to add importance to something quite most speakers of English would say 'She is not
unimportant Say about instead. See d ignity so quick as me', and we can regard this as
w ords. normal usage. Nowadays it is unlikely that any
objection will be raised to sentences such as
archaism s These are old-fashioned words and phrases. 'I'm as old as him'; though strictly speaking it
Nowadays they are supposed to add glamour or is grammatically incorrect, and the him should
interest: 'Northgate Primary School Summer be he, as the subject of the missing verb is.
Fayre') and a hotel will hope that Bill of Fayre' Two cautions: equally goo d as is not accepted as
will make up for high prices and dull food. standard English. Instead we must say equally
good or as good as. See equally. Secondly, as
arrangem ent See m aterial. must not be used as an alternative to that in
sentences like 'I've decided that Brighton is best
as 1 This word can introduce clauses, such as: for our holidays this year'.
assonance 20 21 bi-
bi-m onthly periodical appears twice a month. b o ttle-n ec k This is a good metaphor in a sentence like:
Therefore this confusing little prefix is best The new by-pass has solved all the problems of
avoided, even though longer expressions such the Exeter bottle-neck
as 'twice a year’ have to be used instead.
because the writer has recalled the difficulty
blam e The correct use is shown in this example: encountered when a sticky liquid has to be
passed through a narrow bottle-neck, and applied
They blamed me for it. it to traffic. Too often however it is used in a
Not They blamed it on me'. muddled and careless way:
The new manager quietly ironed out the bottle
b lu e-p rin t This word is very commonly used for dignity
neck over wages.
purposes, where plan or scheme would be better;
it is best left to architects and engineers who D ifficu lty would be better here; there is no
use it with its rightful meaning of detailed question of shifting anything comparable to a
drawings or design. See jargon. liquid, and in any case bottle-necks do not
yield to treatment with a hot iron.
both . . . and The two words connect similar expressions or
similar constructions: brackets The normal kind, ( ), are used for expressions in
parenthesis, i.e. spoken or written as an aside;
She excelled both at swim ming and at diving. in conversation the voice is usually dropped a
(tw o nouns preceded by a preposition are little for words in parenthesis:
connected)
She excelled at both swim ming and diving. Jane got a pass in geography (as her teacher
forecast), but failed in maths.
(tw o nouns are connected)
Square brackets, [ ], indicate something
Those are examples of the correct use of both . . .
inserted and not part of the original report or
and. What we are not supposed to do is to link
message:
two different items. Thus we should not say:
'She excelled both at swim ming and diving', He told me that he had found a mus troglodytes
because we are now linking two items of [a rare kind of mouse] in the course of the
different shapes - at swim ming (preposition + expedition.
noun) with diving (noun). It must be stated, The rebels announced the fall of the capital
however, that most speakers of English make this morning [in fact it had surrendered a week
this 'mistake' every day of their lives. The earlier] ow ing to shortage of food.
words are wrongly used in conversation all the
time; distinguished authors are careless about See parenthesis.
them; and examiners have been known to make
serious errors of this type in the papers they brevity In writing it is normally better to use few rather
set. In this case 'wrong' usage rarely makes any than many words. In conversation we might
difference to the meaning, though it could be say:
argued that the mistakes cause writing to look I went over to Jack Lee's house - he's a
untidy and inelegant. neighbour of mine - and borrowed a saw.
business English 24 25 capitals
for greetings and exclamations, like H u llo ! and pronouns are said to be in one of three
G ood morning. G osh! cases:
for the phrases that begin and end letters, such Nominative:
as Dear S ir . . . Yours faithfully (note the small
the subject of a sentence is always in the
'f). nominative case:
to begin lines of poetry, with some exceptions.
Has Jim arrived? He's not here yet.
2 Capitals are also used: Objective:
for the pronoun / and often for the names of
relatives. Father. Mother. U n de John the objective case is used for the object or
indirect object of a verb, and for words that
proper names, including the names of countries follow a preposition:
and places: Wales, Edinburgh
I saw him yesterday.
titles: M rs Fenton. Lord Smith, the Archbishop of
York, Prince Philip Give her the tea-pot, please (her, indirect object;
tea-pot. direct object).
organisations and firms: West Yorkshire County
Council. Imperial Chemical Industries I had a nice birthday present from her.
most terms connected with religion: God. That's OK by me.
Buddha, the Talmud. St John, the Bible Possessive:
days of the week, names of the months, special to indicate ownership or connection:
days and times like Christmas and Lent. (The
seasons — spring, summer, autumn, winter - Jane's bicycle
normally have a small letter). Players' entrance
There is a tendency for proper names that have woman's magazine
passed into daily currency to lose their capitals, his turn
like bath bun, brussels sprouts, diesel engine,
indian ink, puritan, Venetian blind, volt, watt, Nouns in English cause no difficulty, as they
and a great many others. change only in the possessive case; see also
apostrophe, 2. But the pronouns do change and
this list of cases must be known:
In some languages the work done in a sentence
by nouns and pronouns is shown by changes — Nominative Objective Possessive
inflexions - at the end of the word. But English 1 me my
has few inflexions; and the relationship of a you you your
word with other words in a sentence is normally she her her
shown by its position in the order: he him his
it it its
Subject Verb Object we us our
I am reading this book they them their
According to their function in a sentence nouns who whom whose
Christian names 28 29 cliches
In addition the nominative is used when a noun I usually eat marg because it's better for me.
or pronoun completes a sentence: People w ho are liable to heart trouble avoid
If I were he, I wouldn't go in for that exam. butter.
It was she who first told me about it. Careful punctuation or rearrangement will be
The exception is It's me; this is now good needed to avoid the kind of confusion
standard English. exemplified in:
See ap p o s itio n ; case. At the dog show I met Joan who was showing
her dog and her father. (Remedy: put and her
Christian Publicity men and sports reporters started the father immediately after Joan)
names practice, now too common, of referring to people Astrology is the science of writing about what
by their Christian names or forenames. This might happen in a Sunday newspaper. (Remedy:
rather sickly familiarity has now spread all over put in a Sunday newspaper immediately after
the media, but it should not be imitated. w riting)
Christian names are used in families, among
friends and among groups of people working or See conjunctions.
playing together, but they lose their point if they
are applied indiscriminately. See names, cliches Expressions which have lost force through
Christian, for sources. overwork, such as:
He is exploring every avenue to find a solution.
circum locution The term applied to round-about expressions, We are leaving no stone unturned in our
used to create an air of dignity and importance, efforts to discover the truth.
such as:
He is trying hard . . . We are trying hard . . .
In the case o f cricket the school will supply
would probably be more convincing than the
equipment. (Say 'fo r cricket')
phrases in italics. Of course most of us employ
From the heating p o in t o f view double glazing is cliches every day as labour-saving devices;
o f considerable importance to a house. (Say there is simply not time to stop and think out
'Double glazing helps to keep a house warm') exactly what we mean, and then find a suitable
In the m ajority o f cases essays were well written. way of putting it. We need cliches in
(Say ‘M ost essays . . .') conversations with friends, to start a discussion
The Director of Education is causing an or just show that we are friendly and sociable,
investigation to be made w ith a view to with a few remarks about the weather or the
ascertaining . . . (Say 'is trying to find out') news. But they should be avoided in writing,
because they produce a tired, stale effect and
See d ig n ity w o rd s; longwindedness. suggest that the writer has really nothing to say
of his own. Some examples are: desperate killer,
clause A sentence that forms part of a larger sentence: babbling brook, psychological moment,
whispering trees, in this day and age.
May I have the butter when you've finished.
please. But one caution must be offered to those who
clumsy expression 30 31 colon
correct other people's work. There is a stage in singular verb after such collective nouns, though
the writing progress of nearly every learner when sports reporters have a fixed habit of regarding
he uses a cliche for the first time; it is not then a names of countries, counties and towns as
clich§ for him. It is a phase which has to be got plural. Thus they say: 'Manchester United are
through; and there are students whose first use through to the final.'
of a clich6 shows the beginnings of fluency and
is therefore an occasion for rejoicing. See When a collective noun is followed by the
a ffe c ta tio n . possessive case in the plural, the verb is
generally pulled into the plural by the near-by
plural noun, even though strictly and
clum sy expression
grammatically speaking the subject is singular,
Here are two examples, in which the writers
as in these examples:
have not thought out what they wish to say:
A group of housewives are going to see their
When you drink anything hot you should not
M.P.
pour it in the saucer but drink it by the handle.
A number of students were without books.
The Irish have a great love of their country from
a distance. See ag ree m e n t; subject, m ultiple.
With muddles like these, the only thing to do is
to make a fresh start, even if it means writing colloquialism s Expressions in very large numbers used in
at rather greater length, thus: everyday conversation, such as skint, haywire,
flaked out, not my cup o f tea. They should not
When you drink anything hot, do not pour it
normally appear in writing; they can make it
into your saucer; drink it from the cup, holding
sound lazy and slapdash, and they give the
the latter by the handle.
impression that the writer is not troubling to
When they are a long way from home, the Irish adjust his style to the matter in hand, and is
have a great love for their country. showing no consideration for his reader, as in
this sentence from a student's examination
collective nouns answer:
Examples are: a flock o f sheep, the House o f
Commons, a herd o f cows, the audience. There Lady Mabeth properly mucked up Makbeth's
are hundreds of them, including a large number plans.
for groups of animals: a gaggle o f geese, a string
Two colloquialisms and inconsistent spelling
o f race-horses, a litter o f puppies. The only
indicate a very casual approach. See slang.
question that arises is: should such words be
followed by a singular or a plural verb? For
example: colon This stop (:) is used:
The congregation are/is invited to join the hymn. To introduce a long quotation or a passage of
direct speech, as in:
There is no absolute rule; it is best for the writer
to say what sounds best to him in the context. After the Chairman had welcomed him, the
There is something of a tendency to put a minister spoke as follows:
com m a
To introduce a list of items: The people on the plane, who had lost their
Among the objects found in the suspect's car luggage, went to the office. (They had all lost
were: a saw. a torch, rubber gloves and a jemmy. their luggage).
To divide a sentence into two parts without Here is an example of how lack of a comma
using a conjunction: makes a statement nonsensical or ambiguous:
Members of the party who had anoraks did not Our washing machine, guaranteed fo r twelve
get wet. (But some had no anoraks and did get months, broke down in the thirteenth.
wet). Separating words or phrases like on the whole,
Members of the party, who had anoraks, did not however, none-the-less:
get wet. (They all had anoraks and nobody got In conclusion. I'd like to thank the Chairman for
wet). his patience.
And again: Note that when commas act like brackets there
The people on the plane who had lost their must be two of them. Otherwise we get
luggage went to the office. (Only some of the mistakes like this:
people had lost their luggage). List of subjects, thought likely to interest
comparative adjectives 34 35 comprehension tests
students for dissection by a committee under Once again it must be admitted that most
Dr Price. speakers would make the mistake of saying
There are two important cautions. First, commas youngest.
must not be used to end sentences; in this See adjectives; adverbs.
connection see full-stop for the quotation from a
recent report on the work of GCE candidates. com pound w ords
Secondly, commas must not be used to Frequently in English two simple words are
separate two sentences, as in: linked to form a new noun or adjective or verb,
as in
It was very w et near the Falls, sou'westers and
macs were provided. double-decker double-glaze folk-tale
headstrong makeshift manhandle
This error could be righted by replacing the toolshed w indow -ledge
comma with a semi-colon or a full-stop, or by
inserting and or so. There is a tendency for the hyphen to be
dropped. In pronouncing these the stress falls
on the first of the two parts. See hyphens.
com parative adjectives
See adjectives; com parison. com prehension tests
These are supposed to measure a candidate's
com paratively Use this word only when it is clear what is ability to understand his own language; they
being compared with what. For example, does merely invite us to put into writing the kind of
the sentence 'Hawfinches are comparatively thing that we do mentally every day of our lives.
rare this year' mean that they are rare compared They may include an exercise in summarising, on
with other birds? or is the comparison with which there is a separate section later in this
other seasons or other countries? It would be book, and a passage, usually of prose, on which
better to say rather rare. In this sentence at a number of questions are set.
least there is the possibility of a comparison, but
the word is often used where there is no hint of It is not worth doing many practice tests. Books
a real comparison, and it is inserted to add of them exist, but once a candidate has worked
sound and dignity. See relatively. through two or three tests and familiarised
himself or herself with the kind of question set,
it is a waste of time to do more. It is much
com parison Adjectives have three stages, or degrees, of better to spend the time on books of a
comparison: reasonable quality and to do some fairly
positive comparative superlative attentive reading.
good better best In addition to summarising, other types of
Very often in conversation the superlative is used question may be asked. They involve:
in comparing two items, but in writing the
extracting information about characters, their
comparative is appropriate:
reasons for w hat they say and do
Edward is the younger of the two. explaining phrases and single words
comprehension tests 36 37 concrete expression
explaining figurative language and idioms 4 Answer directly without wasting words. Use
single words for your reply only if a single-word
commenting on an author's style
answer is clearly required; otherwise use
In answering be sure you are supplying what the complete sentences.
question requires. If a sentence is specified, See sum m aries,
give one. If you are asked to explain briefly, be
brief. If asked to provide words or phrases to concord See agreem ent.
replace words in the passage, supply words or
con crete expression
phrases that will fit in, e.g. a verbal equivalent
Here is an example:
in the place of a verb, a noun or noun phrase
for a noun, and so on. The news of the war is very bad; we are sure
For example in the three sentences below the that in the end all w ill come right. - Winston
Churchill
words in italics - an adverb, a noun and a
verb - have to be replaced by phrases that will and here is the same statement muffled up in
explain their meaning. Suggested replacements abstract words:
are in brackets: note that they can be
The position w ith regard to the war is extremely
substituted for the words concerned without
serious. We have however absolute confidence
altering the rest of the sentence.
that eventually the situation w ill be restored.
He accepted the post diffidently, (w ithout
Note, first the greater length, and secondly how
confidence that he would do it well)
the length is caused. Instead of war we have
Undoubtedly the protagonist in 1944 was position w ith regard to; instead of bad we have
Churchill, (one w ho played the main part in the extremely serious - and so on, so that the edge
action) and impact of Churchill's statement are blunted.
He anticipated arrest by fleeing the country, Therefore use concrete expressions if you wish
(took action in advance to avoid) your meaning to be clear. This however is just
what certain speakers wish to avoid, for example
See fig u ra tiv e language; m etaphor;
in advertising, propaganda and politics. Suppose
sim ile; slang. that in a country a power-seeking group has
A reasonable amount of time is provided for turned out the elected government by force, shot
these tests. The candidate may have his or her all who appeared to resist, shelled housing
own method of timing, but if not here is a areas where resistance was expected, and
possible scheme: machine-gunned people trying to escape from
1 Skim through fairly quickly, for the general idea. them. 'Peace' means that the capital is silent but
for the rumble of patrolling tanks, that
2 Read again, slowly and carefully - aloud if you everything is shut up, and that bodies lie about
are practising at home, otherwise as if aloud, in bloodstained streets. The usurpers would use
shaping the words and phrases without language full of abstractions to conceal the
sounding them. truth:
3 Study the questions carefully; they are
precisely worded. The liberty of our people is now assured. The
conjunctions 38 39 correction of work
military arm of our democratic government has contrast a cramped, out-of-date and battered
triumphed over dissident elements, now purged hospital with a nearby new block of 'luxury'
from our realm by the bravery and devotion of flats or prestige offices, spacious, warm and
our gallant forces. Peace now reigns in the comfortable, in order to show the way in which
capital. spending for private profit and convenience
outstrips spending on urgent public needs like
See ab stract nouns; covering-up language.
medical services. Poets can condense a world of
meaning into a few contrasting words:
conjunctions There are two main types. First, those such as
and, but, for, neither . . . nor which link Lilies that fester smell far worse then weeds.
sentences of equal grammatical value: April is the cruellest month.
He marched them up to the top of the hill and conversation No one teaches a child his language; no one
he marched them down again. could. He learns it on his own, by hearing other
They are known as co-ordinating conjunctions. people talk, and then trying it out himself.
Conversation does not stop being important; it is
Secondly, the conjunctions which introduce a one of the means whereby people keep in touch
clause that depends for its meaning on the main with each other and stay human. It is also a
sentence: means of education. The writer gets ideas and
I'll certainly come, i f you let me pay. facts, learns new words and new sentence
patterns. The learner-writer therefore should be
These subordinate clauses, starting with a ready to make his contribution to a conversation,
conjunction, are of eight kinds: time {when, not only as a social duty but also as a means of
before, till, etc.); place (when, whence, etc.); developing his English. Incidentally if you are
causal (because,etc.); conditional (if, unless); stuck for a topic, try entertainment; it is a subject
concession (although, even if); manner (as, that everyone knows something about and
as if, as though); purpose (to, lest, in order that); probably has news about. It provides a good
result (so that, w ith the result that). The terms start because it can so readily lead on to other
co-ordinate and subordinate, and the names of subjects.
types of subordinate clause, are included for
reference, and need not be learned. See clauses; correction o f w o rk
correlative conjunctions. Individuals working on their own can, by
exchanging with another candidate, make up
consonants AH the letters of the alphabet except the vowels for the help that they would get from a school
a, e, i, o, u. Y ranks as a consonant (York, or college; it can be a very effective method. If
yeoman), but it can also act as a vowel (happy, you are reading someone else's writing, the
m ultiply). first thing is to get a general impression of how
far the writer has supplied what the question
con tractions See abbreviations. set has asked for. If it is an imaginative
composition, look for interest; freshness;
con trast This device is used by most writers when it sincerity; and truth to the writer's own
suits their needs. For example, a writer might experience. That is the most important point:
correction of work 40 41 correctness
correlative conjunctions
They are: both . . . and, either . . . or, neither . . . D
nor, n o t only . . . b u t also, rather . . . than, dash This punctuation mark is used for three
whether . . . or. They connect alternatives and purposes:
items of a similar kind, e.g. a noun and a noun, To indicate a break in thought, or to add an
a sentence and a sentence, and (as in the afterthought:
example below) an adjective and an adjective, I was dreaming - can't remember what it was
and so on: about, though.
She was both well qualified and suitably To add a summary or explanation:
experienced for the job.
Hooliganism, inexperienced teachers, stupidity,
Here the correlatives link an adverb and bad buildings - all these are connected with
adjective with another adverb and adjective.
poor discipline.
See neither . . . nor.
To indicate an aside, or parenthesis:
covering-up language
Before the blast-off - which frightened me, I
This is employed by governments and others
must admit - there was much to be done.
when they wish to conceal or tone down
something unpleasant or cruel. The liquidation date as postm ark
of the Jewish problem' was how Hitler Slovenly and inefficient; postmarks are
described the murder of millions of Jews. An sometimes illegible, and envelopes are usually
American newspaper wrote, of one of its thrown away. There is some justification for use
country's actions in Vietnam: 'One village so of the phrase when large numbers of bills have
persistently resisted pacification that finally it to be posted.
was destroyed.' In our own time, when houses
are destroyed to make motorways for the driving day and age, in this
minority, we are told by well-meaning people Nowadays is shorter and less pompous.
that 'Alternative accommodation will be
arranged for those persons displaced by decided to In students' writing the word is often applied to
motorway construction.' And an expression matters of the most trivial importance that do not
like 'Most of the poor will starve' can be made deserve such steps as consideration and
much less frightening when disguised in this decision, as in: 'We decided to have an
way: ice-cream.' The word is best kept for occasions
when real decisions have to be made.
A considerable proportion of the lower-income
groups will be liable to experience an inadequate
level of nutrition. defin ite, d e fin ite ly
These words mean dear, precisely:
See ab s tract nouns; con crete expressions;
euphem ism . There was a definite change in the composition
of the gas.
currently N o w or at present is preferable. It was definitely a natterjack toad.
definition 44 4b aenvaxions
Each of these is divided into ten parts, and Can you walk?'
among the ten parts devoted to science we have, 'Yes.'
for example, 530 Physics and 580 Botany. Then
'Then for God's sake go out just once more and
there are further divisions, so that in
see if you can't get some caribou!'
Mathematics we have 511 Arithmetic and 512
Algebra. The process goes on till every class of Note the use of commas after Francis and yes,
book has its own place on the shelves, the within the quotation marks; and the commas
books within each class as shown by its round M itchell said and he answered. Single
decimal number being arranged in alphabetical inverted commas are generally used nowadays
order of authors. Careers books are all numbered for quoting direct speech; and a quotation
371.425, and books on birds are labelled 598.2. within a quotation has double inverted commas.
See qu o tatio n marks.
Libraries usually have charts showing the main
sections, and the shelves themselves have
d iction ary Students are strongly advised to own and use
guides giving numbers and contents; the
a good one. As well as telling us the
numbering usually starts with the lowest
pronunciation and meaning of a word, its
numbers on the left as you enter. The key to the
special uses and frequently its origin, dictionaries
whole lot is the card index, with the aid of
provide a good deal of general information.
which you can trace any book to its place, if
you know the author. d id n 't oug ht Ought is a single-tense word:
present:
dialect The variety of English spoken in a limited area
I ought to get some new shoes,
is often a complete language within a language;
it tends to be more lively and vigorous than the past:
standard speech of the media. Dialect should I ought not to have bought those cheap ones.
never be despised, for it is a source of the sap
in the tree of language. It is vivid - sto/chy, for Note that in the second sentence the past tense
a sticky muddy path in Norfolk; and terse, as in is conveyed by the words in italics. It is not
the Norfolk do, meaning i f this happens: good English to try to put ought in the past by
adding didn't. Writers who find themselves
I hope it won't rain - do. I'll get wet through. using didn't might try the alternative method
It is not easy to manage in writing, except by and use shouldn't. 'I shouldn't have bought . . .'
people who know it well and can reproduce it. See ought.
See flo w e r names.
d iffe re n t The normal idiom is to say different from :
dialogue The use of direct speech adds life to narrative This season's fashions are very different from
or description. This is how it is punctuated: last year's.
'Francis,' Mitchell said, 'have you got three boys But different to is becoming acceptable.
who can walk?' Different than should be avoided, and a
'Yes,' he answered, rather doubtfully. sentence like 'The results were different
51 d ire c t speech
than what I'd hoped for' should be altered: The dim inutives These are forms of words used to indicate
results were different from those I'd hoped for'. smallness, usually in friendly way. Common
die, dye Die {died, dying) means to leave this life. Dye endings are -let, -ling, -kin, and -ie: booklet,
seedling, pipkin, lassie.
(dyed, dyeing) means to colour.
dig n ity w ords These are unnecessarily long expressions, used
to make speech or writing sound more direct speech The turning of direct into indirect or reported
important. Because they occur so frequently in speech tests fluency and flexibility in using
student writing a number of them are listed language. Here is an example of the exercise:
below; the alternatives that can be used instead Direct Indirect
are in brackets: 'You going to the Jane asked Sue if she
accommodate (hold, take) dance this evening. was going to the dance
adjacent to (near) Sue?' asked Jane. 'I that evening. It was
approximately (about) think it will be a good likely to be a good
at an early date (soon) one — we're having one, she thought, as
at this moment in time (now) the Doughboys Disco they were going to
concerning (about) to run it, and they do a have the Doughboys
conspicuous by their absence (not present) good job.' Disco to run it,
declared redundant (sacked) 'No, I don't expect I because they did a
discontinue (stop) will,' Sue replied. 'I've good job o f such
despite the fact that (although) got to sew up the things. Sue replied
donate (give) woolly Mum knitted — that she d id not expect
extinguish (put out) and I'll watch the serial to go; she had to sew
face up to (face) on the telly. Besides, up a woolly her Mum
in addition (also) Bob can't come; he'll had knitted for her. and
in spite of the fact that (although) be at the Tech.' she w ould watch the
locate (find, place) serial on the telly.
'Never mind, then,'
made their way (went) Moreover, she added.
Jane went on. 'Come
occasioned by (caused by) Bob w o uld not be able
next week! — and bring
previous to (before) to go; he w ould be
Bob with you. There'll
revealed (said) busy at the Tech.
be a big crowd.'
seating accommodation (seats) Sue to ld her not to
subsequent to (after) worry and invited her
succeeded in (omit as superfluous) to come the follow ing
together with (with) week and bring Bob
venue (place) with her. There w o uld
weather conditions (weather) be a big crowd.
with regard to (regarding)
Note, that generally the sense is filled out and
See also circu m lo c u tio n ; cliches; padding; made more formal; conversation takes a good
long w indedness. deal for granted, and uses colloquial forms that
disinterested 52 53 due to
will not go into reported speech at all; and then double past tense
note; This sentence is grammatically correct:
changes of tense in verbs I should like to have seen Caesar cross the
changes in pronouns Rubicon.
changes in demonstrative adjectives (e.g. this But this is incorrect:
becomes that)
a direct question changed into an indirect one I should have liked to have seen Caesar cross the
loses its question mark. Rubicon
disinterested This means 'having no axe to grind', 'without because the past tense is unnecessarily doubled:
the kind of interest that would bring advantage have liked, have seen.
to the person concerned'. It is not the same as
uninterested (without interest). Unfortunately doubles These are extremely common in English,
many 'educated' people mix them up, so that a especially in conversation, and most people have
useful pair of words for conveying quite a large stock of them without being conscious
different meanings is lost, and the language is the of the fact. They are used for emphasis, and as
poorer. This is a case where it is worth trying to a short way of saying what would otherwise
resist a decay in language that makes for fuzzy need more words. Examples are: odds and ends,
thinking and poor communication. For example: give and take, wear and tear, head and
shoulders, hard and fast. A number of them use
Jack Roberts is very interested in doing the alliteration: kith and kin, m ight and main, safe
club's accounts, but he's quite disinterested - and sound, rough and ready. See a llite ra tio n .
he doesn't get paid.
do Note the difference between: doubt This word is followed by the conjunctions
whether and if.
English Have you got a time-table on you?
I doubt whether he's got the necessary stamina.
American Do you have a time-table on you?
He doubted //th e news was true.
do c to r The abbreviation is D r without a stop, because
the shortened form ends with the same letter Doubt is followed by that only when it is
negatived:
as the complete word.
double com parison She didn't doubt that this actually happened.
Once employed for emphasis, the usage: See w h eth er.
Ian is more faster over the shorter distances
due to Due is an adjective:
is no longer current. Note also, that words like
inferior and superior which have the idea of the He hoped to get the money due to him.
comparative built in cannot have the word more Many accidents were due to icy roads.
added to them.
It is widely used as a conjunction, with to:
double negative
See negative, double. Mother slipped due to a hole in the pavement.
duly 54 s| 55 epic
Until very recently this was considered a Halfway through this sentence it sounds as if
grammatical mistake, but it now looks as if it is there is to be alternative to going to the ice-rink,
becoming accepted usage. However it would such as staying at home. But the alternatives
be better to say ow ing to or because o f in a are the ice-rink and the theatre; and the correct
sentence like the last example. version brings this out:
duly This is too commonly used as a dignity word; We shall go either to the ice-rink or the theatre.
it rarely adds anything to what is being said, and ellipse The omission from a sentence of words that can
is best omitted. be understood or supplied from the context.
Especially common are the omission of that
from indirect statements, and the omission of
E the relative pronoun:
We thought (that) the train would make up lost
each The word is singular and is followed by a
time.
singular verb;
The purse (which) I lost yesterday has turned
Each player has his own locker. up.
Note also the position of the apostrophe-for- Note the difference in meaning between these
possession in other s in this example: examples; the words usually omitted (shown in
We accidentally took each other's umbrellas. brackets) make the distinction quite clear:
write about something they are really interested of . . ., the pros and cons, past and present, and
in, and that should help the candidate to choose the contrast they or any other viewpoints
his subject. Those with a special knowledge of a suggest, the development o f . . ., the way
particular sport or hobby get their chance, but different classes of people (e.g. town or
they must beware of letting a private interest country, young or old) regard . . ., the value or
run away with them; the aim must be to make special claim to interest at present o f . . ., the
the specialism interesting to the general reader. particular purpose or relevance to current
One-word subjects, such as 'Loneliness', are problems of . . ., and so on.
less commonly set now; they are harder because When you have a scheme, write your essay. Do
approach and treatment are left to the candidate; not worry about style, but say directly and
the easier topics are those which indicate what simply without fuss or pretentiousness what you
is wanted, engage the student's personality and wish to set down.
are within the range of his or her way of life. An
example is: 'You missed a holiday this year This last - having something to say - is the key
owing to illness. What holiday would you like to all good writing. If you never have anything to
next year, and exactly how would you plan it say, acquire some interests; develop them; read
from the start?' This subject provides many about them; think how they fit in with your own
clues; you might very briefly start with a mention and other people's lives; branch out into
of the holiday missed, to introduce next year's connected reading. All problems in learning
holiday and the detailed planning for it. English for any purpose are solved by practice -
in reading, listening to broadcasts, conversation
Collecting material and writing in situations that are as close as
If you have plenty of material the rest of this possible to those of real life.
paragraph is irrelevant. However if you are short See d escriptio n; explanations; n arrative;
of matter, jot down rapidly and briefly all the m aterial: collecting, selecting, arranging;
points about your subject that come into your style.
head in three or four minutes, quite at random.
If it is a concrete subject, visualise it, and that will etc. Three points to note are:
supply ideas; if it is an abstract one, 'Courage'
for instance, think of concrete examples. See 1 It is wrong to write and etc. because etc. is
m aterial. short for two Latin words meaning and other
things.
Arranging material
2 It should be written etc., &c.
The wording of the question often decides the
scheme on which you will arrange your 3 It is often used rather lazily, so that the reader
material. Otherwise glance through your jottings, is left to do the work of thinking what the other
and you will probably see that it falls naturally things are. It may be better instead to specify
under three of four headings. Settle on an order one or two more items and give the reader a
for the three, and put figure 1, 2 or 3 against all clear idea of what the writer has in mind.
your items. If no arrangement suggests itself,
think of possible schemes, such as: the future euphem ism The use of a name to tone down facts considered
61 examination hints
impolite or unpleasant to mention plainly. In Everyone knows what happened.
U.S.A. public lavatories are sometimes called
com fort stations, while here at home workers do But in conversation a plural verb is often heard,
not strike because the word recalls the harm because the speaker thinks of more than one
done to wives and children and perhaps to an person; and this is accepted as good English.
industry, but instead take industrial action. When See each, nobody, none.
an employer sacks employees he declares them
redundant, for similar reasons. See covering-up exaggeration This is also known as hyperbole, and is applied
language; d ig n ity words. to such expressions as 'He's as strong as a
horse', 'I told you about it ages ago', which are
even Like other adverbs this word should be placed as common in conversation.
close as possible to the word it is meant to bring
out or stress. Consider the difference in meaning
between: exam ination hints
The following points are obvious, but some of
Even she left the door open them are neglected every year by hundreds of
(She is contrasted w ith other people) candidates:
She even left the door open
1 Spend a little time on reading and fully
(The action is compared w ith other acts of the
understanding the instructions, e.g. about
same person)
length, and especially about the number of
She left even the door open questions to be answered. Choose carefully those
(One m ight have hoped that after leaving that really fit your particular skills or knowledge,
everything else open she might have shut the tick them and ignore the rest. Get a general
door). idea of the timing required; sometimes the
See adverbs. questions advise you about this.
2 Answer the question set. Observe the minimum
ever There is a difference in meaning between length if specified, but do not write too much -
What ever made you do that? it only annoys the marker.
(ever is added for emphasis) 3 Number your questions and subsections if any,
and so as to make things easy for the examiner.
Whatever you earn should be recorded. Note any special instructions about this.
(Whatever means all that) 4 Produce your most legible writing. Any crossings
In conversation the difference is brought out by out should be as neat as possible.
the voice. The account just given applies also to 5 Spend any spare time on re-reading, closely and
when, where, who and how. critically, for punctuation, spelling, idiom,
agreement of subject and verb, consistency of
everybody, everyone, every . . . tenses; you may also be able to find exacter
These are normally followed by a singular words. Re-read as if aloud; this really does help
verb: to pick up mistakes.
examination, planning for 62 03 reeling in words
good way to learn punctuation, which was neuter). Do not be misled by grammars which
devised to show pauses in speech. tell us that English has four genders, masculine,
feminine, neuter and common; be guided by
The full-stop is used at the end of a sentence, your dictionary. See neuter.
and the next sentence starts with a capital
letter.
generalisations These can be too sweeping and lead to
It is also used with abbreviations', please see misunderstanding and ill-feeling. 'All Rumanians
separate entry for this. are swindlers' says a tourist who thinks he was
cheated out of 5p at a Ruritanian hotel; and
funny, unconsciously then after an expensive bad meal at a 'luxury'
Other people's unconscious humour is a restaurant a Ruritanian visitor to England
warning as well as an entertainment. comments, 'English cooking is the worst in the
world'. And so on. Both speakers generalised
As I've already told six customers this morning, too readily on a single case; one can hear
we don't stock it because there's no demand similar examples every day of judgments being
for it. made on the basis of inadequate facts about
Only low conversation is allowed here. students, parents, the police and politicians. Of
(library notice) course generalisations are useful; they save
Please excuse the circular form of this letter. time; we have to make them to carry on living.
But we should always have reservations at the
The new headmaster comes to fill a very welcome
back of our minds.
gap-
Sherlock Holmes was created by Conan Doyle gen itive See possessive case.
who hitherto had been quite a respectable
doctor. genteelism s See d ig n ity w o rd s ; euphem ism .
After washing the cups please stand upside
down in the sink. gobbledygook The use in quantity of dignity words and
See am biguity. phrases, often to make a letter sound official or
impressive. This example is made up;
G In general there is no obligation upon clerks on
gender From a grammatical point of view English nouns duty to supply change for any sum tendered,
do not have gender, though the third person should circumstances arise in which a customer
singular form of the pronoun has masculine, offers for goods or services rendered a coin or
feminine and neuter: he, she, it; and the relative note of larger denomination than its total
pronoun has who (masculine and feminine) and indebtedness, and expresses a wish to receive
which (neuter). Otherwise to talk about gender change. It must be borne in mind, on the other
in English language is merely to introduce an hand, that clerks have not been issued w ith
unnecessary complication from inflected any authority that w ould warrant their requesting
languages like French (with masculine and change from a customer in the circumstances
feminine) and Latin (masculine, feminine and already stated.
got 70 71 hardly
In the genuine plain English of an actual Grammatical points are dealt with throughout,
notice: but especially under:
Desk clerks are neither bound to give change, adjectives adverbs conjunctions number
nor authorised to demand it. object prepositions pronouns subject
See dig n ity w ords. sentences verbs
Once again we must remind readers that a
got This valuable utility word can make writing theoretical knowledge of grammar counts for
sound thin and poverty-stricken if used to little, and that it is best learned by using the
excess; books on style have been objecting to it language, not just by reading how to use it.
for two hundred years. To get rid of a few gots The grammar of English is neither difficult nor
and gets from a passage overloaded with them extensive. It has few inflexions and a logical
improves one's writing muscles as well as the word-order. See order.
style of the piece. It is very easy to better this:
great The word is often used where a more precise
I got my breakfast early, but when I g o t to the adjective would be clearer. In this example the
office I couldn't get in - the lock had got improved alternatives are in brackets:
jammed. By the time I g o t hold of a locksmith it
was g etting on, so I got a cup of coffee while There was great (widespread, deeply felt, etc.)
the man was getting it right. grief in Exton when the factory was closed, but
the news of a fresh light industry was a great
g o tten Good American for / have got, but less good
(most welcome) relief. Great (much, extensive,
English.
etc.) unemployment had been feared, but
fortunately there was no great (severe) cold that
gram m ar The meaning of the term has changed. It used
winter, and with the spring came a great
to refer to a set of rules, drawn up by specialists,
(marked, considerable, decisive, etc.) improve
for the use of English in speech and writing;
ment in the employment figures.
and the observance of this 'correct' grammar was
for many years a sign of social status. However See synonyms.
in this century linguistic study has shown that
languages have a life of their own, cfevise the group names See co lle ctive nouns
grammar they need, and are rarely influenced by
official prescription. Thus grammar now means a
description of the way a language works, and as H
there are several ways of regarding and had used to be
explaining the complexity of a living language, Omit had, used is enough to indicate past time.
there are several ideas of English grammar in See used to.
circulation. However if people are to understand
each other, they must observe certain hardly This word, like scarcely, is a near-negative,
conventions of speaking and writing, and the meaning very little or w ith difficulty.
term grammar is used in this book to indicate
He had hardly any money
the conventions generally accepted nowadays.
hate words 72 73 hyphen
There was hardly time to change h ow The word is sometimes used in an awkward
My cold was so bad that I could hardly breathe. way:
Hardly is not a complete negative. In the She mentioned about h o w she had done well in
examples above, 'he' had a little money, there a dress-making exam.
was just a little time but not much, and 'I' could Her teachers referred to h o w neat her sewing
breathe. The mistake learners make is to add a was.
negative in order to stress the shortage or
In the first example it is simpler and better to
difficulty:
use that instead of the italicised words, and to
I could/?'t hardly breathe re-cast the second thus:
If we replace hardly in that last example by Her teachers referred to the neatness of her
w ith difficulty, we get sewing.
I could not breathe with difficulty how ever With much the same meaning as but, this word
- which is nonsense. No one would want to should be placed as near as possible to the
breathe with difficulty; anyone who could not beginning of its sentence.
breathe at all would soon be dead. See adverbs;
negative, double. hyperbole See exaggeration.
hate w ords See feeling in w o rd s; snarl words. hyphen This mark (-) is used to link words with words,
Till recently this verb was always followed by the or prefixes with words: walkie-talkie, m id-
help
infinitive: 'H elp me to wash up'. The American Atlantic, one-third. English tends to simplify;
idiom, ‘help me wash up', is now acceptable and so that when hyphenated words have been in
may well become normal usage. circulation for a long time they lose the hyphen,
as in: farmhouse, today. These linked pairs then
hom ely Readers who have to talk to Americans should become single words with only one syllable
watch the use of this word. In England it has a stressed, as in: banknote, lifelike, siinrise.
pleasant meaning: friendly, simple, unpretentious. Therefore hyphens should be kept for when they
In America, as applied to a girl's looks, it means are really needed:
very plain. 1 To make words easy to say and understand:
hom onym s These are pairs of words which sound the same, co-op head-on lean-to re-elect stand-in
but have different meanings: breakfast cereal, tail-less pre-Elizabethan anti-injection
serial story; there was a mist, so we missed the
2 To avoid confusion. Note the differences in:
boat. Do not learn lists of them; do not even look
at lists of them. To do so only causes confusion a glass-stoppered bottle a glass stoppered-bottle
where there need be none; the context in which a half roasted-chicken a half-roasted chicken
you read or hear such words will always help. So an old-clothes shop an old clothes-shop
will the linkage with related words; for examples, re-cover recover
connect serial with series, missed with miss. re-creation recreation
i before e 74 75 idioms
The expression should not be confused with angry I was angry with my (angry with a person,
e.g. which means for example, from the Latin friend. at a thing or event;
exempli gratia. He was angry at the the error is to use the
poor turn-out. wrong preposition)
idea The sentence: anxious Mother is anxious about (Not of)
the bread supply.
She was seized w ith the idea to go to the sea
between Between you and me. (Not /)
is unidiomatic, and the words in italics should be
replaced by o f going. See idioms. blame The judge blamed the (Not: blamed the
solicitor for the long long delay on the
idioms These are phrases,methods of expression and delay. solicitor)
shades of meaning that specially belong to a
language. A young visitor to England once different My tim e-table is (It is permissible to
referred to an English friend as 'a bloody man', different from yours. say different to. but
i.e. he was fresh-complexioned. It was a good never different than)
shot at a description, and it was literally true - equally Anne and Jennifer are (Not: Anne is equally
but it was not idiomatic. Again, 'I thought to go equally good at as good as
to the dance tonight' conveys the speaker's cooking. Jennifer . . .)
meaning, but the right English idiom is to say (Not: The committee
opinion The committee formed
'I thought of going'.
its own opinion about made its own
There are four main types of idiom in English: the plan. opinion . . .)
1 Almost any noun, some verbs and pronouns can outside A detective was waiting (Not: outside o f the
be used as adjectives: footb all team, gutter outside the theatre. theatre)
77 indirect speecn
prefer If you'd prefer a cool (Not: than coffee) wishes to keep himself and his opinions out of
drink to coffee, just say. his writing; as for example a civil servant is
required to do when he is sending an official
reason The reason w e chose (Not: . . . is because
letter. In quantity such impersonality makes for
that restaurant is that we've never been rather dull and colourless writing. Another place
we've never been kept kept waiting)
for impersonal writing is in the setting out of
waiting.
instructions for the use of a device or kit. Here
same The model you got (Not: the same which the writer will be anxious not to be too
from the shop is the I bought in York) assertive, and will avoid such phrases as 'You
same as the one I must now . . .' Instead he will write in this
bought in York. style:
substitute We'll have to (Not: by butter) Lubrication is effected by removing the circular
substitute marg for black cap on the gear-box. Sufficient grease
butter. should then be inserted until the box is tw o-
thirds full. The cap should be replaced tightly.
superior We find unbranded (Not: superior than)
lines superior to See one.
advertised stuff.
im ply, infer These words have different meanings, but they
up The firm kept up the (It is unwise to leave are often confused. To keep them distinct is an
quality and reputation the word up till late aid to clearer expression. Im ply means strongly
of their goods for many in the sentence, i.e. suggest:
years. after goods)
He implied that he was a member of the club,
In addition, certain words are rarely used in the w ith out ever asserting it.
plural; advice, assistance, co-operation and
inform ation are examples. Infer means to gather or learn.
And those present inferred from his
See w h e th e r, if. knowledgeable conversation that he was in
fact one of them.
im perative The name given to that part of a verb which is
used for a command: H a lt! Cheer u p ! Go slow/ in-, un There is no rule for deciding which of these
prefixes should be used to negative a word. On
impersonal constructions the whole, words that come from Latin or
Examples are: French have in-: impossible, irresponsible,
indirect, and words of Old English origin have
It appears t h a t . . . un-, as in unhurt, undying, unw illing. But there
It was said that . . . are many exceptions, and as usual practice
It looked as i f . . . makes perfect. See also un-, in-.
The next step was to . . .
indirect speech Sometimes known as reported speech. See
Such expressions are useful when a writer dire c t speech.
individual /y in t e r v ie w s
individual This word is often used rather loobely to mean a substantial increase (strengthens a noun)
just a man, a person, somebody. It is probably rinse thoroughly (strengthens a verb)
best to keep it for use in cases in which an
individual is being contrasted with a group or Used sparingly, such intensifying adjectives and
crowd: adverbs can add muscle to what is being said.
But like muscles, they can be weakened by
Ford's first cars were all black; he did not cater being overworked without rest; and they are
for individual tastes. often overstretched in this way by people who
infin itive See fin ite and infinite. wish to stress points and make out a strong
case. For example, a broadcaster on road
inflated conditions might say:
English The use of too many words produces this. For In this month's weather a substantial proportion
example 'He voiced the opinion . . .' is a of winter nights are undoubtedly going to be
blown-up version of said) and instead of telling decidedly foggy and frosty, with the result that
a civil servant to buy a book a government an appreciable num ber of motorists will
department wrote: definitely be in very real danger of a serious
You are authorised to acquire the work in accident.
question by purchase through the ordinary This would probably have more effect on the
trade channels. hearer if it read thus:
See gobbledygook; d ignity w ords. Winter nights are liable to frost and fog, and
many motorists will risk accidents.
innuendo A suggestion that is hinted, but not expressed
outright. Here is an example from an exchange Some of the intensifying adverbs that should be
of words between a judge and a barrister in a used sparingly in writing are:
court of law: appreciably completely considerably
Barrister: Now if I saw your lordship going into a public definitely literally perfectly practically
house. . . really simply terribly truly very
Judge: 'Coming into a public house' I think you mean, interjectio ns These are single words usually, like h a llo ! rig h t!
Mr Smith. g osh! Such expressions as shut up, go away,
inside The correct usage is: There was a seat inside the are not interjections, but complete sentences.
shelter'. The common mistake is to say inside of. See exclam ation mark.
insinuation See innuendo. interview s Facility in the use of appropriate English can be
a great help to candidates for jobs or places in
intensifiers The term sometimes used for words that educational institutions. An example of how not
strengthen the meaning of other words: to respond is provided by the candidate for
University entry who was asked if he read much.
seriously ill (strenthens an adjective) He replied, 'Ah'm not fussy' - in other words he
very hurriedly (strengthens an adverb) showed no discrimination in his reading, and
intransitive tf'l ita lic s
implied that it did not matter to him what he press, besides setting up concentration camps
read. This was unwise. Not only did he reveal a for such of their opponents as have not escaped
weakness, but he made the mistake of using the from this paradise on earth.
wrong vocabulary; 'fussy' in this context is
Clearly the reporter thinks the usurpers are
altogether too chatty a word.
anything but democrats and their regime a
Interviewers are normally anxious to give the repressive and cruel one; and he exposes their
people they are seeing every opportunity to show claims by attaching their fine 'democratic' labels
themselves at their best. Interviewees can help to the facts of suppression. Similarly with
themselves by thinking in advance of the likely paradise; he reminds his readers that conditions
questions and the appropriate answers; by are anything but paradisal by saying that they
answering fully — not just yes, but yes, are, thus stimulating an immediate denial in the
because . . . and so on; and by using rather more minds of those readers.
formal language (e.g. no slang) than that The second kind is dramatic irony. Here (for
spoken in everyday conversation. The selectors
example) one of the characters in a play says
may ask candidates to give information which
things with a double meaning that is fully
has already been supplied on an entry form.
understood only by the audience. In
This is not stupidity on their part, but merely
Shakespeare's Macbeth, Duncan, a popular and
their wish to hear the candidate speak up for
successful king of Scotland, is about to visit one
himself. of his generals - Macbeth himself. The latter
and his wife plan to murder Duncan on this
in tran sitive See transitive.
visit and then to seize the throne. In the scene
just before the arrival of Duncan to put up for the
inverted com m as
night, Lady Macbeth says:
See qu o tatio n marks.
He that comes must be provided fo r . . .
irony The word describes
The audience, but not the characters,
1 a particular use of words and understand the real meaning ('We must kill
him') that lies under her politeness.
2 special situations in films, plays and reallife. In
the first, a person chooses words in speech or
-ise, -ize Should words like standardise, criticise end in
writing to convey a meaning opposite to that of
-ise or -ize? Americans tend to use -ize, but
the words. Imagine that in a certain country a
we recommend the use of -ise as a general rule,
group of politicians or soldiers seizes power by
because there are some words like surmise,
force and sets up what it calls 'a people's
exercise that must have an s. But all the -ize
democracy', applying any and every method to
words can be spelled -ise. See spelling, 1.
make themselves secure. The reporter for a
British paper describes the process for us:
italics There are three uses of these sloping letters:
These upholders o f democracy and people's
1 For titles of books, plays and films.
rights have imposed a curfew, forbidden public
meetings, censored the media and muzzled the 2 Occasionally for emphasis, to bring out a word
its, it's 83 kind
that would be stressed in conversation. They finalise global medical adviser (for doctor)
should be sparingly used for this purpose. overall phobia redundant target
3 For imported foreign words. See technical term s.
It is worth noting that when material, such as a
programme, is sent to a printer any words that journalism Newspapers exist by turning out a regular
need to be set in italics should be under-lined. supply of arresting news. However exciting
events do not happen often enough to provide
its, it's Its is the possessive case of it. morning and evening headlines, so a special
monosyllabic language has been evolved to make
The dog can't find its bone. small news seem big. This jabbing shorthand
It's is short for it is; includes words never used in real life with their
journalistic meaning:
It's buried in the garden.
ban bid blast boost claim crack dash
Keep them separate by remembering that it's is grim king ('oil king') lash out pact
an abbreviation, just as it 'll is short for it will. probe quit quiz rap rush shock slash
soar top
For example, a bishop might suggest that it
J would be tactless to supply wine or beer at a
lunch to which Arabs were invited, because
jargon Groups of specialists like civil servants, Muslims are forbidden to drink alcohol. This
scientists, business men, critics and craftsmen small piece of tact would be blown up thus:
develop a language of their own for use on the
job and in conversation with their fellows. Such Bishop's Beer Ban Bid
a language is their jargon, and if they use it in
Further examples: Show Biz Pay Slash Shock;
ordinary speech or writing confusion can be
Police Probe Oil Kings Pep Pact; Rogue M.P.
caused, because outsiders cannot be expected to
Raps British Bread. See allite ra tio n .
know what they are talking about. Also
ordinary people sometimes use jargon, because it
sounds impressive or clever, and bring in
roundabout expressions and unnecessarily long
K
words. For example we read about 'prowess in kind It is correct English to say:
the field of academic achievement' instead of This kind of transistors needs an aerial
'academic success'. Here is a selection, from
politics, medicine and the civil service, of jargon but in conversation we often say:
words that are best left alone - except when These kind of transistors need an aerial.
using allergic, ceiling; overall, phobia, redundant
and target in their literal sense: We think of many examples of one type, and so
put these in the plural, forgetting that the word
accommodation unit (for dw elling) allergic k in d is singular. In written English it is best to
bottleneck breakthrough ceiling escalation avoid the error if possible. See agreem ent, 2.
language, changes in 84 85 letter writing
legible; people who have difficulty in writing branches and thousands of employees. The
their names clearly should type or write them in content of the letter should be brief and relevant,
capitals below the signature. keeping strictly to the matter in hand. The style
should avoid slang and chattiness on the one
In all letters the principle of good writing applies:
hand and business jargon on the other. By
the style should be suited to the occasion.
'business jargon' (now avoided by good firms) is
On the envelope there should be a space of at meant by writing of this kind:
least 1 £ inches above the address so that it is
clear of the post-mark. Use numbers of houses Yours of the 5th inst to hand. In reply we would
where possible rather than names; put the name intimate that when our Mr Robson called at
of the post town in capitals, followed by the your residence on the 29th u lt . . .
county name in full, unless it has an accepted What should have been said is:
abbreviation, such as Lancs.) add the post code
below. It is a good idea to put your address on Thank you for your letter of June 5th. When our
the back of the envelope, so that if it goes representative called on May 29th . . .
astray it will be returned unopened. See See business English.
addressing.
If you receive an impolite letter, do not reply in
the same way; rudeness in a letter should
letters, style o f : opening, close, contents always be avoided. The most telling reply is to
The ways of beginning and ending a letter vary be polite. It you have occasion to complain, a
according to its purpose and the relationship reasonable letter is always the best move towards
between the sender and receiver. There are getting things put right. In short, whether a
three main types: business or a government department is
1 Business and official letters, for example between concerned, time is saved and irritation avoided by
an individual and a firm supplying goods, or letters which are clear without being brusque,
between a government department and a polite without being smarmy, and firm without
member of the public. This type starts: being rude or domineering.
'flu injection; the style will be relaxed and other. Again if a pupil or recent pupil at school
informal. writes to someone on the staff for a testimonial,
she or he should employ the 'Dear M r . . .
3 Completely informal letters between close
Yours sincerely' style. The fact that something
friends or relatives start 'Dear Joan' or in other
is being asked for shows a degree of
ways; they have endings such as 'Yours ever',
acquaintance and perhaps friendliness that
'With love to you all' and so on.
debars strict formality; it is positively unhelpful
There are variations such as 'Yours truly' and to use a cold informal manner in such cases.
'Yours very sincerely' and in very informal letters licence,
such expressions as 'Yours till hell freezes'. But license You get a new licence (noun with a c) but you
on the whole endings like the last should be license (verb with an s) a car. The two get a
avoided, because what is bright and amusing good deal confused, and it does not greatly
when said on the spur of the moment can seem matter. Remember the difference by advice
very dead when written down. (noun) and advise (verb), where the
pronunciation settles it.
In recent years there has come from America a
tendency for formal letters of Type 1 to begin
like This adjective ('He's like his mother') is very
and end in the style of Type 2. This may have
often used as a conjunction in conversational
been due sometimes to commercial reasons; a
English:
firm like a mail-order house that exists by
persuading people to part with money by If you write like I do, you'll fail!
appearing friendly and helpful, will adopt an
Standard English would correctly use as:
informal manner to get on good terms with its
customers, and thus sell more of its wares. In If you write as I do . . .
governmental letters too there has been a trend
At present it is advisable to use as in such
towards greater friendliness, to show the
sentences in written work.
recipient of an official letter that she or he is
regarded as a human being, and not just as a
'like ' w ords These tell us more about the user's feelings and
number in a file. Letters from civil servants used
the way he wants us to feel than about the
to start 'Sir' or 'Madam' and end 'I am, Sir,
subject mentioned. In the sentence:
your obedient servant', but nowadays, unless
there is a special reason for coolness, they write There's an old-fashioned stone sink in the
'Dear Mr' and end 'Yours sincerely'. kitchen
Thus the way a letter is written is decided by its we are given information; the sink is probably
purpose and the relationship between sender about forty years old. But if a shop tries to sell
and receiver; so think of your reader all the time us 'Old-fashioned Hot Cross Buns' the term
you >are writing one. For example, letters old-fashioned contains no factual information
between a student and the principal of his whatsoever, and tells us nothing at all about the
college should never use the 'Dear Sir' buns. They are newly made, according to a
approach; it is much too stiff for a message modern recipe, by up-to-date methods in a
between people who are supposed to know each modern bakery, etc. But the vendor wants us to
literally 90 91 majority
feel that they are made of good old-fashioned because it is the people (plural) who have
materials with unmodern individual care entered. See co llective nouns.
according to a traditional recipe; if he can make
us feel that way his hand is halfway into our This can have two adverbs, lo ud and loudly, one
purse. See feeling in w o rd s; snarl w ords. for short expressions in everyday speech:
You're playing your trannie too lo ud
literally The adverb of literal means according to the and loudly for other uses:
letter, taking things in their usual and obvious
sense. Thus: The gears protested loudly when mishandled.
The refugees were literally starving See adverbs.
means that they were likely to die unless fed.
However the adverb is often wrongly used to
strengthen and intensify a speaker's meaning: M
M y heart literally jumped into my mouth when main verb Dickens' novel Bleak House starts with a whole
the bus skidded. page without a main verb. He is describing a
London fog which blankets the sight and
Delilah's singing literally brought the house thwarts all movement, and he uses nouns and
down. adjectives to convey the sense of deadness:
loan This is a noun; the verb is lend. Thus Lend me an For everywhere. Fog up the river, where it flows
umbrella is correct - not loan me. among green aits and meadows; fog down the
river, where it rolls defiled among the tiers of
longw indedness shipping, and the waterside pollutions of a great
This has been mentioned under other headings, and dirty city.
but it is necessary to insist once again that too
But examination candidates should see that all
many words for the purpose just obscure the
their sentences have main verbs. See sentences.
meaning and irritate the reader:
On reaching m y residence (home) I was greatly m ainly This adverb, like only, should be placed next to
concerned (worried) by observing (seeing) the word it modifies. Note the difference
black smoke in the vicinity o f (near) the back between these two:
door, to which / endeavoured to gain access
That afternoon she mainly washed the floor for
(which I tried to enter).
her mother.
See circum locution. That afternoon she washed the floor mainly for
her mother.
lo t o f This and lots o f have come to be regarded as See adverbs.
adjectives. So that it is correct to say:
A lot of people have entered for the cross m ajority This tends to be used as a dignity word where
country most would be better; and it should in any case
malapropism 92 93 may, might
be used only for number and not for quantity. The longer the subject in the exam paper, the
It is correct to say: easier it will be to answer, because in this way
the examiner provides candidates with ideas for
The m ajority of householders like a garden.
arrangement, such as 'pro-and-con' or 'past-
But The m ajority of his garden is covered with present-and-future'.
weeds' is incorrect.
The points jotted down should be sorted out
under two or three main headings; others that do
m alapropism The word applied to a ludicrous mistake made not fit in may provide a beginning or a
by a person who tries to use long impressive conclusion. It often happens that a glance at the
words and gets them comically wrong. list of points suggests a good arrangement. A
Once I heard a man say 'I can't domesticate my capital A should be put against points suitable
food properly till I get my new teeth'; and a for an opening, B, C and D for the main
cleaner is reported as saying 'I've to consecrate paragraphs, and E for those that will help to
on Mr Smith's room this morning'. But not all form a conclusion. It is advisable not to have
such mistakes should be laughed at; they may too tight a scheme; it would take up too much
just show a respect for education on the part of time. When there seems to be enough material
people who wish they had had more of it. for the paragraphs, start writing; fresh points will
occur as you go along.
m aterial: collecting, selecting, arranging
It is helpful to write skeleton essays: that is, to
You may have all the matter needed for writing
jot down material on a particular subject, and
an essay ready in your head, or you may be
then to sort it out and arrange it in note form. If
stuck for material. If your subject does not
possible the opening and concluding paragraphs
suggest ideas at once, try visualising; for
should be written in full. This is an excellent
example if you are given the abstract word
exercise in assembling material and mobilising
'Loneliness', visualise people in lonely situations
the mind, and it is specially useful if time is
- men in a lighthouse, women alone in the house
short.
all day, children in a big new school, workers in
a vast factory, and other obvious examples. You See essay w ritin g .
may find that they fall into two classes, such as
physical loneliness and mental loneliness. Again, m athem atics If the e is pronounced the spelling will not slip.
you can just ask the 'wh' questions: who, what, The word is singular when it means a branch of
why, when, whither, whether, where. Or employ learning:
the free association method: jot down any and
Mathematics is her best subject,
every point about the subject that comes into
your head, however trivial some of them seem. but plural when it refers to calculations:
One will lead rapidly on to another; about
If the bank's mathematics are correct. I'm hard up.
twenty will be a good start.
The selection of material will depend on your
may, m ig ht Examples of the difference:
approach to the topic, and this approach will
often be decided by the way the question is set. She may break the record (i.e. it is quite possible).
metaphors 94 9b most
She m ight break the record (i.e. it is just meaning through mis-use, as a chisel used as a
possible, but not very likely). screwdriver loses its edge. Examples are:
m etaphors Two examples of one metaphor: alibi means 'in another place'. It is not a
synonym for excuse.
Grammar schools are said to have creamed o ff
the most able children (i.e. they are said to have anticipate means 'to take action early, in good
taken the most able children, like someone time' as in 'He anticipated the coffee price rise
taking the cream off the top of the milk). by purchasing a hundredweight of it'. It does
You're the cream in my coffee (i.e. you're the not mean expect.
finishing touch of perfection for me, just as infer means 'deduce' or 'conclude'. It is not an
cream makes a cup of coffee perfect). alternative to imply, which means 'suggest'.
Note how long and cumbersome are the while means 'during the time that':
explanations of each of the metaphorical
expressions. The aim in using metaphor is always W hile I was cutting bread tw o wasps got into
to pack in the maximum meaning by describing the jam.
one thing in terms of another: It also shifts its meaning a little to mean although
The group's latest number rocketed to the top in some sentences:
of the table. While his father did not expect brilliant results,
A group of pop singers is not a rocket but its he did w ant his son to work hard.
sudden rise to popularity is illustrated by See errors, com m on; vogue w o rd s; 'w h ile '.
comparing it to the speed of a rocket. English is
full of metaphors: wages axed; prime minister 'm om ent in tim e, a t th is '
hits back; prisoner's bid for freedom; star turn; Does this expression mean more than n o w ?
a dog's life; the penny dropped at last; a web of
deceit; a flood of complaints. Newspapers love more This must not be used with words like unique,
metaphors, and sometimes get very muddled in inferior, superior, preferable, because each of
using them: these words already includes the idea of
comparison. For example, a thing is either
Homes target hits ceiling. unique or it is not; for though it is reasonable to
m id -a tla n tic A form of language used solely on the media, say nearly unique, it is absurd to say more
never in real life, in which the speaker puts on a unique. Similarly with superior and inferior, they
semi-American accent. It is favoured by already have the comparative more or less built
sports casters and TV advertising. into them. Again, preferable already means
m ore-to-be-chosen, better-to-choose-this-one.
m in ority Too frequently a m inority o f (6 syllables) is used See adjectives.
as a dignity expression for few (1 syllable).
m ost It is good American to say:
m is-used Most all people present enjoyed the singing.
w ords There are many of these; they lose a clear M ost everyone put a coin in the plate.
M r,M rs , Dr 96 97 narrative
But it is not current English, and to use most in A multiple choice comprehension test will
this way makes the speaker sound as if he were consist of up to twenty-five such sets of
putting on an affectation of being American. suggested answers. Apart from doing a practice
paper, no special preparation is needed for these
M r, M rs, D r No full stop is needed after these abbreviations, tests, and there is no point in working through a
because the shortened form in each case ends number of them.
with the same letter as the complete word.
Note that M r and D r are not used with Esq., so multiple subject
that we write on an envelope either See subject, multiple.
Mr John Smith
or
John Smith, Esq.
Esq. is thought to be more dignified than plain
Mr. M s is coming into use as a written term of
address for women; it does not indicate whether N
the person addressed is married or not. See names, Christian
abbreviations. Also known as forenames, these come from the
Old Testament (e.g. David), the apostles and
m u ltip le choice questions others in the New Testament (John), saints and
These are set by some examining bodies, as part martyrs of the Christian Church (Cecilia,
of a comprehension test. The candidate is asked Bernard), and heroes and heroines of myths and
to read a passage of prose and then to answer a legends and history (Helen, Arthur, Harold,
series of questions. A point in the passage - the Florence). For misplaced use, see Christian
meaning of a word or a phrase, the drift of a names.
paragraph, the significance of a particular
expression - is selected; and five or so answers narrative The first step in writing narrative is to decide
are presented, of which only one is correct. The what events and other material you are going to
candidate is then required to indicate which he put in. There may be good reasons for skimping
thinks is the right answer by ticking or blocking a dull series of events and giving more space to
one of the spaces next to the suggested an important episode. It may also be necessary
answers. Here is an example: to look at things from more than one point of
view. Shakespeare did this in the last act of
Question 3 Macbeth, where the action takes place
The w ord m yriad in line 3 means: alternately inside the castle with the besieged
minute □ murderer, and outside with the besiegers, till
innumerable □ they both meet in the final scene. The same
tense will have to be used throughout, the
shining □
present being introduced in dialogue at
abundant □ dramatic moments; direct speech enlivens a story
perfumed □ and keeps it going. See dialogue; time.
negative, double 98 99 nominative
Jill and / (not me) and a lot of others went to % also for secretaries, journalists and researchers.
the disco. JF The best notes are short. If you are making
Brian and she (not her) came to the meeting " notes on a book, you can usually refer back to
early. | the book to fill out a point you are uncertain
about. If you are making notes on a lecture, a
See case; subject. speech or a discussion it is a mistake to try to
get in everything, because all that happens is
none This is usually singular and followed by a singular « that you miss the important points and fail to get
verb: 1 the general drift of what is being said. Follow the
speech closely, noting occasional single words
We invited three people, but none has replied.
or phrases of importance; keep your eyes on the
None of my friends is on the phone. speaker as much as possible.
None of the food is appetising. Since they are for your eyes only, notes can be in
But it is often used in conjunction with a plural any style you like. People who often need to
word, and followed by a plural verb, as in this make notes evolve a shorthand of their own.
example: Here are some obvious contractions for a start:
None of the competitors were ready.
Br British rt right
The writer can go by instinct; and if his instinct C19 nineteenth century shd should
is wrong, it matters very little as in this case. cd could t the
See everybody. esp especially tn -tion (relatn)
Fr French V very
n ot only . . . b ut also g -ing (e.g. reading wd would
Normally no t only is followed by the complete becomes readg)
b u t also. However it is quite permissible to omit 0 of
the also, if it sounds right to do so: ot of the
He not only promised to repair the roof, but You can also get into the habit of omitting
came the same day. vowels, and writing the first syllable only of
words that are unlikely even in a much
Like other correlatives the not only should be shortened form to be mistaken for another word:
placed as close as possible to the first of the org for organisation.
words or phrases it correlates, as in:
They brought not only their guitars, but also a
nothing This is always singular and followed by a
lot of music.
singular verb. The possible error is in sentences
The common error is to place the not only in like
between They and brought. See correlative
conjunctions. Nothing but meatless dishes are available today.
N othing is the subject of the verb, which should
note m aking This is a useful skill not only for students, but be is; but in the example the verb has been
notices 102 object
attracted into the plural by the nearby dishes. A number of passengers are w aiting for the
This is not a serious mistake. See nobody. next plane.
('A number of passengers' [meaning several]
notices Road signs must be brief and commanding, like is the subject of this sentence and is therefore
GIVE WAY. But private notices with no force of plural.)
law and plenty of time for reading are best
But when it stands for a figure it can have a
phrased in a polite way. For example, 'Please
singular verb:
keep off - seeds sown' is longer than the rude
Keep Out, and better also than this one, which The number of passes in English was reduced
was seen in Lincoln's Inn Fields in London: by bad spelling.
(The num ber'[meaning 'the am ount'] is the
This ground is temporarily closed for the grass
subject of this sentence and is therefore
to become re-established after re-instatement.
singular.)
With notices for sale and similar items of the
num bers In ordinary writing the tendency is to express
kind displayed in local post offices it is essential
figures in words:
to get in all the necessary facts as briefly as
possible, because people simply do not read He was seventy-five years old.
long notices in which nothing is prominent. The He made a m illion pounds.
notice below gives all the information needed
His chauffeur was ten times happier.
in the briefest form:
But where precise amounts, dates, sums of
money and times are stated, figures are normal:
FOR SALE
A ship of 5,000 tons displacement.
R oller Skates, beginner's size,
There are now 855,000 unemployed.
as new, boxed £5
15th February 1927 was his date of birth.
12 Abbey Lane
The rates came to £220 a year.
The bus is due at 14.45.
nouns Many nouns can also act as adjectives and
verbs:
Garden tools for sale (adj.) O
I'll be gardening all the afternoon (verb). object In a sentence the name of something on which
action is taken is called the object.
When writing it is best generally to choose the
short rather than the long word: to say home We painted the doors.
rather than residence, and end rather than They saw her in the distance.
termination. See also ab s tract nouns;
Whom have you in mind for the jo b?
a g ree m e n t; co llective nouns; spelling.
There may be slight difficulty with pronouns. In
num ber This usually takes a plural verb: the sentence:
of 104 105 one
They w ill expect you and me in good time officialese This is the language used by civil servants, local
government officials and others for drafting
the word me is correct, because it is the object
letters, notices and regulations. Such writing has
of expect. Learners sometimes use /, thinking
to allow for all sorts of things that might happen,
perhaps that it is right because they would
and it has also to anticipate the ingenuity of
never use it themselves in conversation. In the
people who will try to twist a rule to their
third example above it is becoming quite
advantage, or get out of conforming to a
common to say who instead of whom, and it
regulation. This style cannot help being clumsy
very much looks as if a grammatical error is
and longwinded at times, and it should be kept
becoming standard English.
for occasions when it is really needed.
Words that are objects are said to be in the See gobbledygook; legal language;
objective case - him, her, them for example. longw indedness; padding; paraphrase;
Prepositions also cause words to be in the notices.
objective case: 'I'll go without him'. The
on This can be used to convey the position of
objective case is also known as the
something without movement, as in:
accusative case. See case; transitive.
The cat's asleep on the rug.
of A spelling mistake due to recording sound, not It can also indicate movement:
sense, and undetected through sheer lack of Put your washing on top of the pile.
thought, is must o f instead of must have in
sentences like: It is best to keep on for meanings where no
movement is involved, and to use onto or on to
I must have left my camera in the coach. where movement takes place, as in:
When a noun + of + plural noun is the subject of He threw the rubbish onto the compost heap.
a verb, the verb is usually singular to go with the
singular subject: one This impersonal pronoun is used mainly when
A queue o f cars was waiting at the crossing. the speaker wants to keep himself at a distance
and to detach himself from what is being said;
But the tendency is for the verb to be attracted for example when he wishes to give advice
into the plural by the nearby plural noun: without poking it directly at his hearer. A parent
A flock o f geese were honking at the back door. might say to a child:
This sounds quite acceptable, because one Don't put out dirty milk bottles
visualises a number of birds each making a or he might put it more mildly, in a way less
noise; whereas in the earlier example the queue likely to cause resentment:
of cars is seen and regarded as one thing, like a
snake perhaps. One just doesn't put out dirty milk bottles.
A superfluous o f sometimes creeps in: The possessive form is one's:
I took it off o f the table. If one has the misfortune to drop one’s watch . . .
only 106 107 -os, -oes
as, or in any way the equivalent of the original. on; and it must be closed, or it will get mixed
It is an interpretation of part of the meaning, up with the main sentence. A parenthesis can be
and once made it can be scrapped. Here the taken out of a sentence without damaging its
person making the paraphrase has been made to structure and meaning, as in the examples
think. A tiger does not really burn, but with its above.
power and colour it has something of the force
Too long a parenthesis, or too many of them,
and brightness and warmth of a fire at night;
hold up the drift of what the writer has to say,
and this has to be brought out by turning the
and this can be trying to the reader.
metaphor burning into a simile: 'Your brilliance
See brackets; com m as, 3.
resembles (Or is like) a fire'. Then does 'forests
of the night' mean a real but very dark forest, participles There are two kinds in English. The past
or a night which has the darkness of deep, participle ends in d or t, as in shaped, found,
sunless forest? Note also that sentences are dealt, taught, or in n, as in broken, given, seen,
broken up into shorter units, so that points can torn.
be understood one at a time; and that the
paraphrase is longer than the original, as one The present participle ends in -ing-, sleeping,
would expect. writing. (Note that when -ing is added to a
word ending in silent e, the e usually drops out,
If you are required to make a paraphrase, use as in ride, riding-, and that when -ing is added
language as simple as possible. Simplify long to a stressed vowel and consonant, the
sentences by breaking them up into shorter
consonant doubles to take the weight of the
sentences. Turn metaphors into similes; e.g.
stress, as in: tap, tapping-, fit, fitting-, prefer,
M isfortune dogged us will become Ill-lu c k preferring.)
follow ed us as closely as a hound follow s a
scent. Omit nothing; explain or simplify There are two uses of the present participle that
everything. Do not be afraid of writing at grammarians tend to disapprove of.
greater length than that of the original. 1 In the sentence:
parenthesis An aside inserted into a main sentence: Coming home late, we found the house very
cold.
They told me (and I could w ell believe it) that
there'd been no rain for tw o years. the participle com ing is attached to we, and
We crossed in the new boat - the old one having that is correct. But in
developed engine trouble - w ith a very large Sitting drowsily in the sun sipping our coffee, a
party of pilgrims. large black cat rubbed against our legs.
The Manchester group, consisting of Dan and the participle sitting has nothing to attach
Charles and Damian, is at present rehearsing. itself to, except the cat which was unlikely to
As in the examples above, parentheses can be be sipping 'our' coffee. The meaning of the
marked off by pairs of brackets, dashes or writer is clear, but the grammar is shaky, and
commas. If a parenthesis is opened with a strictly speaking the sentence should be altered
bracket it must be closed with a bracket, and so to: As we were sipping . . . This grammatically
parts of speech phrase
incorrect usage is described as the floating For sale —past exam papers.
participle; a few years ago it would have been
considered a mistake, but it is less and less Just a few yards past the post office.
likely to be reckoned a serious error.
passive See active and passive.
2 In this sentence, spoken by a parent:
I don't like you coming home so late at nights. percentage This is best kept for use where a proportion of
a hundred is intended:
what the speaker dislikes is the coming home
late, but from the grammar point of view you is 77 is a much lower percentage of successes
the object of like, making it seem as if the than last year.
speaker dislikes the person he is speaking to -
It is liable to be used loosely for dignity
which is clearly untrue. In order to put the
purposes:
sentence right from their point of view, the
grammarians would like it to be altered thus: A very high percentage o f motorists w ill not
re-license this year.
I don't like your coming home so late at nights.
Here the object of like is coming, and there is no In the last example most would do as well or
better than the words italicised.
possible doubt. However the 'mistake' we have
just looked at, like the previous one, is much
made by distinguished writers, and is most periphrasis A roundabout way of saying things. See
unlikely to cause much trouble today. longw indedness; officialese.
Use past for all other purposes: Travelling lig h t w ith little luggage is advisable,
(noun)
Half -past five.
Members w ith green tickets come this way.
Pop stars are past it at tw enty-tw o. (adjective)
plural words 116 117 postcards
With a deep sigh the dog subsided on the mat. Words ending in -on. Automaton, criterion
(adverb) and phenomenon officially form their plural in
-a, like criteria, but increasingly they are treated
By themselves phrases do not make complete like normal English words, and have their
sense; they cannot be separated by full-stops, plural in s.
like sentences. In this piece of teenage writing,
note the phrase wrongly standing by itself, as Words ending in -us. Most of them form their
if it were a sentence, but without a main verb: plural with -es, like bonuses, buses,
prospectuses. But a few keep their Latin plural,
To stay alive we must find a new planet, as in radii, stim uli, tumuli.
somewhere we can begin a new life. Going
outside our ow n galaxy at the speed o f light. Words ending in -is. Analysis, basis, oasis and a
few others change the -is to -es: crisis, crises.
To improve it the words going outside must be
replaced by we shall go outside. It is a very Finally, a miscellaneous group of plurals to
common error to use phrases by themselves remember: handfuls, handkerchiefs, lay-bys,
without a main verb, and good writers do this spoonfuls, trade unions. See spelling 3 ; also
on purpose. But candidates for examinations end o f entry on idioms.
should make sure that anything standing
between full-stops has a main verb. See poetry The most effective form of expression and
sentences. communication. Concentrated, subtle and
flexible, it can get more meaning, and more
plural w ords The words below stand for things made up of kinds of meaning, into a few words than any
two parts. The words are plural in form, and other medium. It does this by means of metre,
take a plural verb, but if used with a pair of, rhythm, sound and imagery. See fig u ra tiv e
the verb is singular: language; m etap h o r; rhythm .
There is a pair of trousers in the top drawer, possessive
pincers pliers shears tweezers scissors case A noun in the possessive case tells us that the
goggles glasses spectacles boots braces person or thing referred to owns or is connected
briefs garters gloves knickers pants with something:
shoes shorts slippers socks suspenders Eileen's cycle needs a new chain.
tights trousers This m onth's figures show a great improvement.
plurals Some special cases are: East Africa is a naturalist's paradise.
Words ending in -um. These come from Latin,
Possession is shown by 's or s'; see apostrophe.
and a few of them have kept their Latin plural:
Addendum, addenda; datum, data. The general
tendency is to make them plural by adding s;
aquariums, premiums. Some seem to be postcards These should have the date and the writer's
halfway: you can say memorandums or address, but no opening or closing words - no
memoranda, depending on which sounds best 'Dear Sir' or 'Yours faithfully'. They are informal
to you. and should not be used for anything private or
practice, practise 118 119 pr6cis
The result of . . . was But nowadays . . . neighbours and his church, for they were
im portant threads in the fabric of life where all
The next step . .. Moreover . . . these things were woven together in a single
Eventually . . . In addition. . . design.
In the end . . . Another reason . .. Now the sharp division of work from play and
Therefore . . . the natural from the supernatural has turned
holy days into holidays, and the compelling
What the candidate must not do is just to pick restlessness and ugliness of towns has made
out the important sentences and write them holidays an occasion for escape from home.
down without links; a version on these lines So there is this new form of mass migration -
shows that the reader has not grappled with and no longer for fishing or fow ling or the visiting
understood the passage. To make sure that the of shrines. Instead a flight from a man-made
candidate understands the writing before him, w orld too hard, dirty and hideous to allow its
the instructions commonly advise him to use inhabitants to rest, to lie down on the ground or
his own words. Nothing reveals a candidate's to dance upon it, to turn back to their
failure to understand a passage so much as a surroundings for refreshment. Three hundred
number of sentences or groups of words taken years ago how impossible it w ould have seemed
over from the original without alteration. that England should be cumbered w ith towns
built as an escape from towns, that half its
Below is an example, a fairly difficult one, of a
south and east coasts should be encrusted w ith
passage for precis. It contains just over 300
red bricks, walled behind concrete, the sea
words, which you should try to reduce to about
itself grasped after w ith iron piers. If the
100 words, using the method suggested above.
migrations have largely defeated their purpose by
Then read the precis provided, and the
spreading more hardness and a new ugliness,
comments. It does not matter if your version is
at least the resorts are clean, and human beings
different; it may well be better.
can find just room enough to stretch their bodies
on the sand.
Holidays, medieval and modern
Jacquetta Hawkes, A Land
One curious result of the Industrial Revolution
can claim a special place in this chronicle of the Please do not read the version below till you
relationship between men and their land. For the have made your own shortening of the passage
medieval peasant eight weeks of the year were above.
holy days, days when a service in the parish
church was follow ed by freedom for rest and The Industrial Revolution made a distinct change
celebration. Each chosen black- and red-letter in the relationship between man and his
day, each Church festival, was a part of the environment. The medieval peasant enjoyed fifty
wheel of the year and served for rites so much six holy days a year, when after a church service,
more ancient than Christianity as to be almost no work was done. These holy days were an
as old as the consciousness of man. No integral part of life and were essentially local.
countryman could have celebrated them away
from his own cottage, fields and animals, his But now, as a result of changes in work and
prefer 122 123 prefixes
religion, holy days have become holidays. The prefix meaning examples
environment has become so unsuitable for rest a, ab, abs away, from avert, abnormal,
and recreation that people want to get away abstract
from their homes. Consequently the coast is ad to admit, adhere, attach
ringed w ith towns built as escapes from other
ante before antecedent,
towns; they may be ugly, but they do provide
antediluvian,
access to the sea.
ante-room
Comments auto self automatic, autograph
1 The reduced version is on the long side at 106 bene good benefactor, beneficial
words. Is any further shortening possible? bi twice, tw o bicycle, biplane,
2 Should there be some connecting link after the biennial, biscuit
opening sentence, such as 'notably in the circum round circumference, circumspect
matter of holidays' ?
co, com. together co-education, communicate.
3 What is summed up by a 'an integral part of concentric
con
life'and b 'essentially local'?
contra against contradict, contrary
4 Note the contrast and connection provided
by 'But now . . .' de down, from depress, descent
5 Note what is summed up by 'unsuitable for rest dis not, apart disappear, disinter, different
and recreation'. ex, e out of eccentric, extract, eliminate
6 Note how 'consequently' links 'want to get fore before forecast, foreman, foresee
away' with 'as escapes'. hyper over, in excess hyper-inflation, hyper
prefer This word is followed by to: market, hypercritical
in in, into include, ingress, import
She prefers jam to honey.
in not inefficient, illegal,
A common mistake, and one to be avoided, is impossible, irrational
to say She prefers jam than honey. If the
inter between international, interrupt
infinitive of a verb is introduced, we have to
say rather than: male bad malevolent, m alnutrition
Really I'd prefer to do some canoeing rather than micro small microphone, microscope
go for a walk. mis wrong misfire, misfit, misuse
ob against obstacle, obstruct
prefixes These are small groups of letters, mostly from
Latin or Greek, placed in front of words to alter peri round periphery, periscope
their meaning, as in: co-operate, disconnect. poly many polyglot, polytechnic
Anyone using or learning English eventually post after postpone, postmortem
knows what all the following prefixes mean; it
pre before predict, prepare, preface
is best to learn them as one comes across them,
rather than to memorise the list. pro forward promote, progress
prepositions 124 125 prepositions
re again, back repeat, return, re-wind averse from identical w ith
sub under substandard, submarine blame for independent of
syn together synthetic, synchronise, comment on inspired by
sympathy
compared with, to liable to
tele distant teleprinter, telephone,
complain of oblivious of
television
congratulate on opposite to
trans across transcontinental, transmit
contrast w ith regard for
un not unfit, unhappy, unsafe
(contrast as a noun, rely on
vice instead of vice-consul, vice-president w ith accent on the first
similar to
syllable, can be followed
by between or with) suffer from
prepositions These cause pronouns to be in the objective (or
accusative) case: die of sympathise w ith
differ from tendency to
Are you coming w ith me?
w orthy of
Keep seats for us.
He beckoned to her.
Note also, that prepositions are often more
Note that if a preposition governs two pronouns,
efficient and more economical than phrases.
or a noun and a pronoun, both must be in the
For example, in:
objective case:
It was clear to him and me. More progress has been made in the case o f
They sent a taxi for Angela and us. Manchester with regard to housing than in the
case o f any other city.
It is in order to end a sentence with a
preposition: the prepositions by, in and by (in that order)
Who are you going with? would be much better than the italicised
phrases. The phrases below should normally be
What's this gadget fo ri
replaced by the bracketed prepositions:
A number of nouns and verbs are followed by
particular prepositions. The list below includes in respect of (of)
some of the common usages: in relation to (towards, w ith)
w ith regard to (in, to)
agree to (a plan) disgusted at (a thing)
agree w ith (a person) disgusted w ith (a Certain prepositions are attached to verbs to
person) give them distintive meanings, e.g. about,
aim at equal to away, by, down, in, off, on, out, over, through,
angry w ith (a person) full of up. Here are some examples of such linkages:
ashamed of guilty of dig dow n dig in dig over dig up
presentation of work 126 127 pronouns
singular ones are this and that, the plural, Proof correcting
these and those. Anyone may be called on to correct the rough
copy w hich the printer of a programme,
3 Relative and interrogative fixture card, catalogue or booklet supplies to
These are used for connecting, or for asking the person who has ordered it. If you have to
questions: send such material to a printer, make sure that
it is accurate and legible; alterations can be
Would people who keep brief-cases in lockers very expensive. For correcting proofs, use the
please collect them. symbols that printers understand; they can be
Which model do you prefer? found in many reference books, such as Pears'
Cyclopaedia, or in a leaflet supplied by the
For people For things
British Federation of Master Printers, 11, Bedford
Singular ("Nominative who which, what Row, London, W .C.1. See italics.
and plural < Objective whom which, what
I Genitive whose which proportion This word should be kept for expressing the
relationship of parts to wholes:
That is also used as a relative pronoun:
In 1976 a larger proportion of candidates
The car that I saw had a shattered windscreen. passed than in 1975.
Put the noun first, then the pronoun, so that It should not be used to mean many or most.
there is no doubt:
A large proportion o f (most) customers use
When Jane w ent to the post-office, she found cheques.
it closed.
(Not: 'When she w e n t . . ., Jane found it p rotagonist The chief actor in a drama of any kind; even in
closed') a battle you cannot have tw o protagonists.
Be careful to avoid ambiguity: proverbs These are comments and ideas, made in the
conversation of ordinary people, that have
The starter gripped his pistol, bent his head
down, and let it off. become accepted as wise and sensible, and so
passed into the language for use on suitable
p ronunciation The letter c can be pronounced in three ways. occasions. Sometimes they conveniently
Hard: sceptic, eccentric, vaccinate; soft: express an idea better than the speaker can,
abscess, irascible, eccentric, vaccinate; and and help him to produce a wise-sounding
like ch in cello. thought: 'There's no smoke w ith out fire'. Very
ch can be hard, like k: Chaos, chiropodist, commonly they are consoling, and help the
hierarchy, loch; or soft, like sh: brochure, speaker to put up w ith a misfortune: 'It's a long
chagrin, charlatan, nonchalant. lane that has no turning'. They can appear to
And a few importations w ith their contradict each other:
pronunciation in brackets: bona fide (bona
Too many cooks spoil the broth.
fydy), coup (coo), debris (daybree), maestro
(mystro). See acc en t; spelling. Many hands make light work.
punctuation 130 131 question, whether
punctuation The oldest known writing is found in the form sentences (like those in the example just given)
of carved inscriptions, incised clay tablets and which are about the same subject, and so do not
ancient battered manuscripts. They have one need the decisive break indicated by a full-stop.
feature in common; lack of punctuation. The
writing runs straight on, and it must have been Competence in punctuating comes from
difficult to understand. Eventually a number of familiarity with a number of sentence-patterns;
marks were devised to assist writing to attain the and this familiarity is acquired through reading
clearness of the spoken word. Two of them and listening.
merely indicate the tone of voice of the speaker:
the question mark and the exclamation mark;
they help the written word to reproduce the Q
sound of a question, or of surprise or alarm. question m ark This (?) is placed at the end of a direct
Quotation marks can also indicate the way in question:
which words should be read.
Have you heard the news?
The remaining punctuation marks are discussed
It acts like a full-stop; a capital letter is needed
in their own entries: full-stop. comma, colon,
for the next sentence.
semi-colon, dash, hyphen, quotation marks,
apostrophe, brackets. These are meant to enable Polite requests are sometimes put in the form of
a writer to make his meaning clear, and they a question:
should supply this aid unobtrusively, smoothing
Will you let us know your arrival time?
the reader's path without his being aware of it.
and then they are usually, but not always,
Full-stops should be used fairly generously; they followed by a question mark. In such requests
are basic, dividing up written matter into units there is probably a tendency for a full-stop to
that are easy to take in. It is a good idea to be used instead of a question mark.
re-read work, as if aloud; and this will show, not
only where full-stops are needed, but also where Question marks are sometimes used in brackets
they can be omitted or replaced. Short sentences to express the writer's doubts or wish to be
are readable, but too many short sentences can funny:
be very trying to the reader. The commonest He bought an old car (?) which he is now
error with full-stops is to omit them where
repairing.
needed.
This usage is best avoided.
Next in importance is the comma, which serves
a variety of purposes. We repeat the advice that question, w h e th e r
it must not be used to separate complete The correct usage is:
sentences: 'He buys ballpoints by the dozen, he
uses nothing else'. In expressions like this the The question whether she qualifies will soon be
comma must be supplemented by a conjunction settled.
(e.g. because), or replaced by a semi-colon.
Not 'the question o f whether . . .', or 'the
The latter stop is useful for separating two
question as to whether'.
questions 132 133 quotation marks
questions There are two main kinds: direct, and indirect. difficult to draw up tidy rules for using them.
Direct questions reproduce word for word what The basic rule is that the quotation marks enclose
has been asked: what was actually spoken:
Where on earth are my gloves? T o-day's coach is booked up', said the clerk.
They are formed by putting the subject after the Note, as well as the quotation marks, the comma
verb instead of before it; and as stated above after up. When a piece of direct speech is
they need a question mark. broken up by such words as 'he added', 'she
replied' and so on, the inserted words are
Indirect, or reported, questions are in this form: comma-ed off, as if they were in brackets:
The customs officer asked me w hat I had 'There's no point', she went on, 'in catching the
paid for the watch. early train.'
Note that no question mark is required; it is a When the inserted words are put in at a point
mistake to insert one. where there is a stop in the original, that stop is
In addition there are direct questions that expect retained. For example:
no answer; they are used for example to make 'The small hall w ill do; we haven't sold enough
an argument or statement sound more tickets for the big one.'
convincing:
becomes:
Whoever w ould have thought it?
T he small hall w ill do', he said; 'w e haven't
And what, may I ask, are the Opposition doing
about it? sold enough tickets for the big one.'
The semi-colon that followed do in the original
They are known as rhetorical questions, because
is placed after he said in the quoted form.
they are commonly used by public speakers.
Single quotation marks(' . . . ') are the most
quicker This word is primarily the comparative form of commonly used nowadays; double quotation
the adjective quick, but it is also used as an marks are kept for quotations within quotations,
adverb: thus:
In heavy traffic you can get there quicker on 'We expect a big "yes" in the referendum', he
foot. added.
See adverbs. Note that where passages of dialogue occur in a
quo tation story, every speech starts with a fresh paragraph:
marks These are a comparatively late addition to the list 'Ransome', I asked abruptly, 'how long have I
of devices for punctuation, and they are well-
been on deck? I am losing the notion of
established; though one authority (G. H. Vallins)
time.'
writes: 'one of the simplest and most beneficial
reforms in English would be their total abolition'. 'Fourteen days, sir', he said. 'It was a fortnight
His dislike was probably due to the fact that it is last M onday since we left the anchorage.'
quotations 134 135 relatively
Then I noticed the broad shadow on the horizon. recipient Do not say 'He was the recipient of a silver cup',
instead of he received . . . or he was given . . .
See dialogue.
See active and passive.
quo tations When a piece of verse, or more than a sentence redundant w o rd s
or two of prose, is to be quoted, it is best to let In the sentence 'I met up w ith some friends' the
the passage stand out by writing it as a words in italics are not needed; they add no
separate paragraph. meaning to met. A similar redundancy is found
in expressions such as 'co-operate together',
where together merely repeats what has already
been said in the co- of co-operate. Other
examples are:
raise, rise Raise is transitive and must have an object: I can't seem to be able to . . . (I seem unable
The firemen raised the escape to the fifth floor. too . . .)
check up on
Rise is intransitive:
face up to
Wages rose even faster than prices.
forecast of our future needs
Note the correct form of the noun: mix together
An increase in pay is called a rise. recur again
The words in italics merely repeat what has
re This word is half a Latin phrase, in re. It belongs
already been said. See tautolo gy.
to legal language and is best left there. It is not
a good alternative to about.
reference Those who have to fill application forms for
reason, it stands to employment should note that this word does
In an argument this is often a sign that the not mean testimonial; it means the reply sent to
speaker is being unreasonable. a potential employer by a person who has
agreed to act as a referee for a candidate.
reason w as The correct usage is:
reflexive pronouns
He was late. The reason was that his bicycle See pronouns.
chain broke.
The common mistake is to say The reason was regard to , w ith , as regards
because . . .'. From the grammar point of view A b out or concerning should be used instead
reason is a noun, and is followed by the relative of these weak phrases.
pronoun that. Because is a conjunction, and is
correctly used to link a sentence and a clause. relative pronouns
See pronouns.
He was late, because his bicycle chain broke.
See because. relatively The word should be used only in expressions
repetition 136 137 save
where the idea of comparison is present, as it is The word sorts them out to their holiday
in this example: destinations. It is however often added to a
sentence to make it sound dignified:
She is relatively young for such responsibility.
She is being compared with other holders of We shall vote for our respective candidates.
responsible posts. See com paratively. All the writer means here is 'We shall vote for
our own candidates'.
repetition The reiteration of a word or phrase for emphasis
can be very effective, as in the opening chapter right The normal form of the adverb from right is
of Bleak House, where the repeated fog brings rightly.
home the choking effect that Dickens wanted. In
ordinary writing too much accidental repetition Ann was rightly chosen as our representative.
can make the work look somewhat threadbare, But when the adverb follows the verb, right is
and here the writer can find help in the great the normal usage:
variety of synonyms that is offered by English.
For example, instead of saying The match was The puzzle w o n 't come out right.
twenty minutes old when . . .' a reporter could
use such words as play, game, contest, tie,
battle, fixture, according to the context. The use
S
of synonyms to avoid duplication of a nearby same The word occurs in business letters instead of
word always brings about an improvement. the pronouns it or this:
For example: We acknowledge receipt of your order for a
Said Eight settee. Same w ill be delivered in
We took the upper road, but progress on this about eight weeks' time.
road was slow because the road was covered
w ith loose chippings. This usage sounds clumsy and old-fashioned,
and it is better to stick to the simple it or this.
This reads better if the repetition of road is
avoided, thus; sarcasm There may be a place for this, though it is too
We took the upper road, but progress on it was commonly used by people in authority to show
slow because the surface was covered w ith their superiority:
loose chippings.
That w asn't very clever of you. was it?
See variety. It can easily make the user sound sour and
reported unpleasant, and is therefore best avoided.
speech See d irect speech; questions.
respectively This is correctly used to link ciosely two series of This word has been wrecked by mis-use. It
items: means to conserve resources by storing them in
a bank etc., but commonly it is used to mean
Jane t Betty and Eileen are going to Spain. spend money at once on. If you respond to
Scotland and Norway respectively. the invitation 'Save £5 on this special offer
scarcely 138 139 shades of meaning
suit at £35' you are saving nothing at all; you that the reader considers each item a little longer
are £35 poorer. than would be possible if commas were used:
I shall take w ith me a rucksack; a sleeping bag;
scarcely This is a near-negative word, correctly used in: cooking equipment; a geological hammer; and
I have scarcely any cash. some emergency rations.
It is incorrect to add a further negative: sentences These are complete units of expression, standing
on their own, and conveying a clear meaning to
I have scarcely no cash. the reader or listener. The verb is the essential
I haven't scarcely any cash. part of a sentence, and a sentence cannot exist
without one. For example:
See hardly.
A t the end of the day, a sleepy ride home in a
Scotch, Scots, Scottish warm crowded bus
It is best to keep Scotch for things, and use is not a sentence because there is no verb, and
Scots and Scottish for people. thus no subject; we do not know who the
sentence refers to or what happened. However
selecting m aterial if we add we quite enjoyed after day the
See m aterial. sentence is complete and there is no doubt about
the action, who is concerned, and when. The
-self The correct forms of the -self pronouns are: verbless example we gave above is a phrase, and
myself ourselves yourself yourselves it is quite a common fault for writers to employ
himself, herself itself themselves. phrases as if they were complete sentences:
In addition there is oneself. Note that hisself and There was a lot to do on our first day at the
theirse/ves are mistakes; and that it is poor Tech. in Collier Road. Such as registering and
English to say: getting timetables and a plan of the building.
Buy tickets for your sister and self. The words from Such to the end have no main
verb and do not constitute a sentence. The
Yourself is required here. See pronouns, 1 solution is either to make it a sentence by
saying 'We had to register and get timetables . . .'
sem i-colons This stop is placed between two sentences that or to replace the full-stop after Collier Road by
are about the same subject, but are grammatically a dash. If the latter is adopted, such will need a
complete and can stand on their own: small s. See clauses; ord er; phrases; main
verb.
He took the book back to the shop; there were
sixteen pages missing.
shades o f m eaning
The old hospital should be closed as soon as With its enormous vocabulary English is able to
possible; it is very difficult to keep it clean. record fine shades of meaning. In a trade or
The semi-colon can also be used to slow down craft many people make these fine distinctions
a sequence of sentences, phrases or words, so every day of their lives, when they select a
s n a il, w i ll 140 141 singular or plural
special tool with a special name for a particular We had our slices served out, as i f we were tw o
job; and seedsman's catalogues may describe thousand troops on a forced march.
hundreds of different roses. People with
extensive vocabularies at their disposal acquire The simile starts with the words as if, and it
them gradually, by practice, not by learning off brings out the haste, the compulsory nature and
lists; and by practice we all come to know the the parade-ground aspect of the operation.
difference between the words in such pairs as: Similes usually start with such expressions as:
reside, live social, sociable surprised, amazed like, as. as if. as though, faster than. There are
restive, restless skilled, skilful fellow-feeling, hundreds of them invented every day; some
sympathy just serve the needs of the speaker and then are
forgotten, while others pass into the language.
See synonyms. And then the latter keep their freshness for a
time, but end up by being tired and battered, so
shall, w ill The future tense in English is expressed by that they cannot do much work and perhaps go
auxiliary verbs, thus: into retirement. Examples of the overworked
simile are: as cool as a cucumber, like water o ff
I shall go you w ill go he/she w ill go
a duck’s back; as poor as a church mouse-, as
we shall go you w ill go they w ill go
sound as a bell', and scores of others. See
Note that if w ill is used with the first person (/, fig u ra tiv e language.
we) it conveys wish and determination:
sim ple as th a t The expression 'It's as simple as that' is rarely
I w ill get that job done, however long its takes.
quite true.
sim ilar, like Like is the commoner word, and is useful since it sim plicity In general, this should be the aim of writing
can be used both as an adjective: (complicated material, however, may need a
My camera's like yours, difficult set of words, and fine shades of
meaning may necessitate longer, less common
and as an adverb: words). Most of us suffer from the temptation
A centrifuge works like a milk churn. to use too many and too long words. 'Be
worried', if you like, but do not 'view with grave
similar is sometimes used as a dignity word; it is disquiet'; have 'talks', but do not get 'involved in
most at home in text-books, especially of deliberations'; and if you want to get away for a
science, where it has an air of exactness that is holiday, by all means 'escape', but do not delay
appropriate. to 'make good your escape'.
Speaking a language is the best way of little - and that before his time the same word
improving one's knowledge of it; and good was sometimes found with different spelling in
writing is usually not far removed from living the same line of writing. Even nowadays in
speech. In some forms of conversation, not English there are a number of allowable
very much is communicated; when people chat variations —gray, grey and learned, learnt are
about the weather or the state of the roads, two examples.
they do not exchange real information, they There are very few truly hopeless spellers. A
just keep on friendly terms as human beings. number of causes lie behind weak spelling;
A more practical form of speech is needed in bad teaching is one, merely telling a child that
shopping and at work. Expressive speech he or she is a bad speller is another. Sometimes
conveys our feeling about people, the it is a result of a person's going through a
environment and the lives we lead in it; in this difficult phase of life, when he or she is
way dialect and slang have their place (see erratic, easily upset, untidy, inconsistent and
entries on both). It used to be a disadvantage so on; and it has been proved by experience
to use a dialect or speak with a local accent; that when such people settle down, their
these are much less of a handicap nowadays, spelling improves.
and are sometimes an advantage. But it is
useful for speakers of dialect to know Reading is good for spelling, because readers
Standard English, as the common language of make progress as they become familiar with a
the country and the one taught to all learners, good range of words and get to know certain
at home or abroad. For practice in spoken patterns, such as the formation of adverbs by
English, see Atkinson and Dalton, The Living adding ly, and various families like the -age
Tongue, and Ch. 6 of Peter Wright, group: average, damage, manage, message,
Language at Work. sausage and voyage.
The important information can be grouped
spelling Learners of English as a second language find under the headings below. It is best to consult
this the most difficult part of their task, and them as the need arises, rather than read them
some English-speaking people also find it hard.
all at once.
But it is not all-important; those who need the
language only for speaking need not trouble 1 Additions to words
much about it. Even when it comes to writing, a At the beginning (prefixes)
it is more a social matter than an obstacle to
communication, for good spellers may despise A ll loses an /, as in almighty, almost, alone,
bad spellers as uneducated, and an ill-spelled already, also, although, altogether, always.
letter of application gives a bad impression of But all right is not - yet —written as one word,
the writer. In examinations only very bad so nothing is dropped; and when for our own
spelling is penalised. People with a serious purposes we prefix a word with all, as in
spelling weakness may be consoled by the all-conquering, we can use a hyphen without
facts that Shakespeare spelled his name in altering the all.
several ways - the language was then much
more fluid, and consistency in spelling mattered
spelling 146 147 spelling
Most prefixes do not change when they are mad maddening
added. For example:
transmit transmitter
dis+appear becomes disappear
The doubling of the consonant seems natural,
dis+satisfy dissatisfy to enable the syllable to take the weight of the
in+accurate inaccurate stress. But when the last syllable of the main
m is+trust mistrust word is not stressed, there is no need to double
the final consonant; the suffix is added without
mis+spent misspent change:
pre+caution precaution
focus focusing
sub+marine submarine
benefit benefited
un+noticed unnoticed
When these suffixes beginning with a vowel are
ad- con- dis- in- sub- added to words ending with a silent e, like
accommodate collapse difference immoral suffer give, the e is normally dropped, as in
accept collect difficulty immediate suppose
hope hoping
account collide irreligious support
attract command irresponsible like likable
appearance correction illegal The important exception is that the silent e is
alliteration kept when it is necessary to show the softly
b At the end (suffixes) pronounced g or c in words like changeable,
singeing and peaceable. It is also kept in words
There is no difficulty when -ly or -ness is like dyeing, to avoid confusion with dying
added, though if either of them begins with (about to die).
the same letter as that which ends the main
word, both parts keep the letter, so that it is There are some additions that cause no
doubled: trouble. When -m ent is added to argue, the e
at the end is dropped; argument. This is fairly
final+ ly becomes finally important; leaving that e in is one of the
thin + ness „ thinness commonest mistakes made by people who
usually spell accurately. With judgm ent you can
Care is needed with -ed, -ing and other suffixes
please yourself about the e after g, though it
beginning with a vowel. When one of them is
seems best to drop it, and then it is consistent
added to a word ending in a single consonant,
with argument. When -hood and -ness are
the consonant is doubled if the syllable is
added to words ending in y, the y becomes /':
stressed. Thus:
lively livelihood
slim slimming
busy business (a very commonly
occur occurred
mis-spelled word)
begin beginning
Remember the single / in words like careful and
refer referred grateful. And without trying to fit them in to a
spelling 148 149 spelling
set of rules, bear in mind daily, duly, truly, Thus: relief, believe; but (after c with the 'ee'
wholly, awful, width, ninth and original. They sound) ceiling, deceit. There are a few
are not difficult words, but people who can exceptions to this rule, such as seize, weird,
spell sometimes make mistakes with them, counterfeit.
though they see at once what is wrong if their
mis-spelling is queried. 3 Plurals
With the endings -ise, -ize there should be no Words ending in -o
trouble, unless one wishes to argue about Nouns in common use that have long been
them. The authorities and the big printers, who established as English words have th air plurals
have their own rules in these matters, do not in -oes:
agree on which alternative should be used, and
when. Meanwhile it is perfectly safe to use the cargoes mosquitoes potatoes tomatoes
-ise ending. See -ise, -ize. volcanoes
At the same time we should consider the few Words that were originally abbreviations but
words that can end in -ce or -se; here the now exist in their own right have their plural
spellings are positively not alternatives, because in -os:
the meanings differ; the -se indicates a verb,
curios photos radios
-ce is kept for nouns, thus:
And words which, though quite common, still
verb noun
seem to keep a little of their foreignness also
advise advice have their plural in -os:
license licence
practise practice (in America practice is commandos dynamos magnetos solos
used for both verb and noun) stilettos studios
prophesy prophecy It is worth remembering those you can eat —
It is worth noting that a number of words potatoes, tomatoes - but the others should not
resemble those we have just listed in being be worried over too much. It is not an
able to act as nouns or verbs, but without any important matter, and perhaps one day they
change in spelling. The pronunciation varies will all settle down to having their plural in
according to their use as nouns or verbs; in the -oes.
noun-use the s is pronounced like an s
Words ending in -y.
(or soft c, as in ceiling), whereas the s sounds
like z when the word is used as a verb, thus: In nouns ending with a consonant + y, the y
close excuse grease house refuse changes to /, with -es for the plural, thus:
2 T before 'e' babies ladies lilies territories
The rule is: But nouns ending in a vow el + y add the s
7 before 'e' without changing, as in:
- except after 'c' alloys buoys chimneys convoys displays
if the sound is 'ee'. donkeys galleys monkeys turkeys valleys
spelling 150 151 s p e llin g
Words ending in -f and -fe . jealous dealt meant pleasant weather health
wealth - and some others
There is no rule, though most of them change
the f into v and add -es, like: 5 Spelling families
calf calves Experience shows that one of the soundest and
knife knives most reliable methods of improving spelling is
shelf shelves for the writer to think of words in their
wife wives 'families'. The truth of this is borne out by
research, an example of which is now
Some keep the / when plural, like: quoted:
chiefs proofs roofs If we know that in the word 'courteous', the 'e'
And writers w ho feel that their spelling is is follow ed by 'ous' not 'us' we are prepared by
inconsistent may like to be reminded that our knowledge of precedent to write 'ous' in the
English spelling is inconsistent also, for hoof, word 'beauteous'. We im plicitly associate
staff, and w harf can have their plural in -fs or structurally similar words. This is because the
-ves. See foreig n w ords. probability of words conforming to spelling
precedent is very high, and it is by becoming
familiar w ith spelling precedents that we become
4 Special cases good spellers. In other words familiarity w ith a
The special thing about these groups is that coding system is half the battle in learning to spell.
they are often mis-spelled by quite good Margaret L. Peters, Spelling: Caught or Taught?
spellers, through haste or carelessness. Three family groups have already been
Double consonant neglected introduced: the -age ending (damage,
manage . . .), the -a/ beginning {almost,
accommodate annual apparatus appearance already . . .) and the keeping of e before able to
arrangement brilliant committee efficient indicate pronunciation (changeable,
embarrass exaggerate excellent immediately manageable . ..) . If the attention of a weak
occasion occur opportunity possess speller is called to a mistake, it w ill be worth his
possession possible succeed suppress while to see if the word concerned is to be
Single consonant neglected found in one of the families, and then to read
aloud all the words contained in it.
(i.e. words in which unnecessary doubling may
occur) -ar ending
around arouse control develop enemy calendar circular grammar particular
explanation familiar harass necessary regular salary sugar
om it opinion origin prefer recommend
c silent
- and an extra vowel is sometimes inserted in ascent crescent descent discipline
prove. muscle scent scene schedule scientist
Words w ith ea sound scissors
spelling 152 153 spelling
c like s 6 Pronunciation helps
city centre concern criticise deceit and The cause of some mis-spelling is bad or
other '-ceit' words defence mercy parcel slovenly pronunciation, faults to which most of
recent us are liable. The sentence 'I must have picked
ch like k the wrong one' is pronounced in a way that is
usually written 'I must've picked the wrong
character chemist chorine choir chorus one'; but it can all too easily be written 'I must
scheme Christian stomach technical ache of . . .' by writers who fail to connect what
eigh sound they say with what they see. It is a help to
weak spellers to take every opportunity of
eight deign freight feign weigh reign saying aloud words which cause them difficulty,
weight reading them off a page or list.
-ence ending First a short selection of one-syllable words, in
convenience experience preference which the addition of silent e to a consonant-
difference occurrence reference vowel-consonant word makes a word with a
different meaning and different pronunciation.
-fin - words
Verbs have been chosen so that we can see at
with root meaning 'boundary', including a word the same time what happens to them when
very commonly mis-spelled -ing is added:
affinity finish confine finite define bar (barring) bare (baring)
infinite definite refine fine hop (hopping) hope (hoping)
gu = hard g mat (matting) mate (mating)
mop (mopping) mope (moping)
disguise guard guerilla guess guide rat (ratting) rate (rating)
guild guilt guinea guitar intrigue league sit (sitting) site (siting)
rogue tongue vague vogue tap (tapping) tape (taping)
-or endings
Next, correct pronunciation of words ending in
author councillor debtor inspector -tion ('shun') will prevent confusion with
prospector radiator refrigerator solicitor words ending in -sion ('zhun'):
supervisor surveyor tractor tutor
completion delusion effusion erosion
See -er, or. exclusion fraction ignition profusion
other endings question suggestion traction transfusion
captain certain dictation dubious And lastly in this section a list of words that are
fountain invention mountain porous very commonly mis-spelled by people who have
relation station treacherous vigorous only to say them aloud and carefully to get
them right:
actually amateur architect arctic athletic
spelling 154 155 style
comparative competitive cruel depth reading aloud, to the family, children, blind
different district duel education family people . . .
February fuel generally government Do not put too many words in your private
gradually introduce laboratory length spelling dictionary. Do not try to learn too many
library lightning mathematics mischievous words at one go. The rule for learning by heart
picture probably quietly real recognise is: little and often — say five minutes daily. This
relatives remember responsibility separate is more useful, even in a train or bus, than a
surprise single hour every week.
7 A small group of words in which correct split in fin itive Examples of the infinitive form of a verb are
spelling is helped by thinking about the way in to eat, to read, etc. The term split infinitive is
which they are formed: used for the separation of to from its verb by an
because disorder dissect, etc. holiday adverb, as in:
misprint mis-spelled, etc. ordered to quickly eat
something sometime they're uneatable to slowly read
unnecessary, etc. wasn't
On the whole the split infinitive should be
Recommendations avoided. But if it makes better sense to put the
It is important not to worry about spelling. It adverb in the middle of the infinitive, then by all
usually comes right enough in time, if the means let it go there:
person really wants to improve; and I do not I'm anxious to really believe in ghosts.
know of anyone whose career has been badly
hampered by poor achievement in this direction. spoonerisms These are mistakes in speech of the kind said to
Some readers may find that this recipe is have been made frequently by William Spooner,
helpful with particular words: dean of New College, Oxford, who died in
1930. Losing his hat in the High Street on a
a Look at the word carefully; note its syllables windy day, he said:
and say it aloud with careful pronunciation,
W ill nobody pat my hiccup?
b Shut your eyes and try to get a mental picture
of the word, And when delivering a sermon to a very small
c Check that in your mental picture the spelling congregation:
is right. It's beery work talking to empty wenches.
d Write down the word from memory,
Lastly, someone who asked what was on the
e If difficulty persists, note it down in your own menu received the answer: Greeks au Latin.
small dictionary of troublesome words.
Reading aloud helps a learner to associate the stories See narrative.
word as written with the spoken word, and is a
most valuable aid. So every opportunity should style This is a word applied to the way in which any
be taken, and more opportunities made, of message is expressed. For example, we can say:
style 156 157 subject, multiple
There won't be enough dry batteries, a means of catching oneself being pompous or
or: pretentious.
The position with regard to the supply of See a ffe c ta tio n ; business English; c lic h e ;
dry batteries is certain to deteriorate in the g o b bledygook; in flated English; slang;
near future. verbosity.
Everyone has his own style of speaking and subject The subject is italicised in each of these
writing, because everyone has his own ideas sentences:
and feelings and beliefs. Style cannot be laid on
from the outside, like paint. It comes from the Gerry has gone home.
way in which a writer is influenced by three The jo b will be finished on time.
factors. First, the content of what he has to say.
An account of an escape from a car caught by What you feel about the holiday matters a lot.
a river in full flood will be different in style from She disagrees.
an account of the same river in a geography
Note the italicised pronouns in examples below;
book. Secondly, the person or persons to whom
they are in the nominative case, because they
the message is addressed will cause the style
are part of the subject of the verb. Some
to be at one extreme chatty and familiar, as in a
students make the mistake of putting these
letter to a relative, and at the other cool and
pronouns in the accusative case.
formal, as in an official report. Thirdly, the
occasion may make a difference; a gossip Jane and / were first off the coach.
round the fire at home or in a pub will
Her friends and we three queued for tickets.
encourage a different kind of speech from that
needed in a public hall or political meeting. Who do you think will be there?
David and he won their events.
If you have something to say and really want
to say it, the style will look after itself; there are See case; nom inative,
people who cannot read or write who can tell subject, choosing a
a story or give a description in a style that is See essay w ritin g ; m aterial.
just right for the purpose. In a narrative the
order of events settles a good deal; in an subject, m ultiple
explanation the logical order of action to be When the subject of a sentence consists of more
taken acts as a guide. In a description it is best than one item, the verb must be plural. Examples
to visualise the subject, and record the most of these multiple subjects and the verbs that go
interesting and important material without with them are italicised in these sentences:
exaggeration; it is very easy to pile on the
He and / were right after all.
adjectives and comparisons. Avoid humour, as a
general rule; be sparing with slang and Eliot and Harvey are expected to be in the first
colloquialism; do not use abbreviations. Reading five.
your own work aloud to yourself is not only a What you think and what you do are two
useful check on spelling and punctuation, but very different things.
subordinate 158 159 suffixes
Occasionally groups of words have been closely gallery. The remedy is to place the such as . . .
connected for so long that they are regarded clause next to the word it qualifies - in this
as a unit; and then they take a singular verb. case, pictures:
Here are some examples of such 'parcel'
expressions: Many famous pictures, such as Botticelli's
'Primavera', can be seen in Italian galleries.
Bacon and eggs is always on the menu.
'Plain Tales from the Hills' is on my book-list. suffixes Most nouns in English can be used as
Whisky and soda costs too much nowadays. adjectives:
dictionaries, and they are a great help w ith 'We look forward to receiving the death
synonyms. See shades o f m eaning. certificate'.
syntax This is the word applied to the rules for tau to lo g y This is the technical term for needless
constructing sentences, but no one ever built a repetition; the italicised words in the follow ing
good sentence through only know ing the rules expressions merely repeat an idea already
The best way to make good sentences is present in the other word:
practice w ith a purpose, backed up by hearing
a variety of sentence patterns in conversation, and etc.
over the air, and in print. co-operate together
final completion
jo in t partnership
meet up with
T prejudge in advance
See redundant w ords.
- t, -ed The follow ing words can have their past tense
and their past participle in either -ed or -t:
technical
burn burned burnt
term s These are the groups of words used in pursuing
dream dreamed dreamt
a particular craft, hobby, science, trade,
kneel kneeled knelt
profession or branch of learning. A layman is one
lean leaned leant
w ith out the special skill or knowledge belonging
leap leaped leapt
to these pursuits. Most people are laymen at
learn learned learnt
one time, experts at another. An engineer is a
smell smelled smelt
layman when music or cooking are being
spell spelled spelt
discussed, whereas cooks and musicians are
spill spilled spilt
usually laymen when an engineering topic come;
spoil spoiled spoilt
up. In conversation and w riting technical terms
tab u latio n This is a useful way of setting out statistics or should be used sparingly, and then w ith an
lists of items; for examples, see the entry explanation. Too many of them can make the
immediately before this one, and the entry on hearer or reader feel out of it. See jargon.
suffixes. The place for tabulation is in w riting
about science, geography and so on; there is tense There are three tenses, present, past and future,
not much scope for the device in English essays. and each has three types:
one's mind; it assists the writer to reach a stand for actions that affect something
detached point of view and take a fresh look at mentioned in the sentence concerned, as in:
facts that may be doubtful and arguments that
may be unsound. Has the dog eaten its dinner?
The cat snatched it.
through Do not abbreviate this word in written work. Explain what you're doing.
tim e Stories and narratives are usually told in the past Intransitive verbs have no object:
tense, but for the sake of vividness some Here I am.
episodes are put in the present tense, especially
The birds are singing.
at the climax of a story. In conversation too the
present is often used: They'll sleep when the sun sets.
I goes into this bar, see, and this guy offers me And here are examples of verbs that can be
a drink, and I get talking and we play darts an either transitive or intransitive:
hour or two. The clock ticked quietly, (intransitive)
Speakers sometimes mix up the times at which She ticked the items on her shopping list,
things happen: (transitive)
We stroll around the shops till evening and We parked in the multi-storey, (intransitive)
then we all went into the disco. They've parked that car awkwardly, (transitive)
But in writing, unnecessary shifts in time should It is useful to know these terms, as they are
be avoided; they can produce real muddles if commonly used by teachers. See object.
used carelessly.
try and Some authorities argue that this expression
title s Titles of books, films, plays and names of ships should never be used, and that we should
are printed in italics; in writing and typing they always say and write try to, as in:
are underlined. Anything from a book, like the
heading of a chapter, subject of a section, or a Try to do better.
poem, should go in single quotation marks: But there is a slight difference in meaning. 'Try
and do better' is encouraging: 'Try - and you'll
'Smoke and Steel' is the best section of
do better'. 'Try to do better' is much more of a
Sandburg's Harvest Poems.
command.
V
variety A piece of writing can be intelligible and clear in
its meaning, and yet be rather dull and heavy to say said said speak spoke spoken
read. One reason for this may be the repetition seek sought sought think thought thought
of a word where an alternative would provide sell sold sold write wrote written
variety and brighten things up. Here are three send sent sent
examples of tedious repetition from the work of See active and passive; ag ree m e n t; double
one student writer:
past ten se; -ed, - t ; fin ite and in fin ite ;
Steve made a cup of tea w hile we made the im p erative; tra n s itiv e ; m ain verb ;
last checks before setting course for Jupiter. sentences; singular and p lural; split
(Replace the second made by carried out.) in fin itiv e ; subject, m u ltip le; tense.
The main character lives in a country style house verbiage, verbosity
in the country. (It is not clear w hat country The use of too many words or too long words,
style indicates. Omit.) where brevity would be more effective. Here are
A large cylinder embedded in the ground was some examples, with suggested improvements
watched by a large crowd. (There are plenty of in brackets:
synonyms for large.) a considerable amount of (much)
See rep etition. as to whether (whether)
at this moment of time (now)
verbs, fo rm o f The important forms of some common verbs are: cost effective (economical)
I I would also add that (om it the words)
Past Past in this day and age (nowadays)
Present Past Participle Present Past Participle only too glad (glad)
until such time as (until)
am was been get got got
bear bore borne give gave given See business English; cliches;
become became become go went gone gobbledygook; in flated English;
begin began begun grow grew grown redundancy; dig n ity w o rd s; woolliness.
break broke broken keep kept kept
bring brought brought lead led led very This word is sometimes overworked, and when
buy bought bought know knew know n used (for instance) at the rate of four times in
catch caught caught lay laid laid four lines of writing, it loses its strength. The
choose chose chosen leave left left re-reading of one's work will usually reveal
come came come lie lay lain excessive use. When this happens, consider
do did done lose lost lost first if the words are really wanted; and if they
drink drank drunk make made made are, seek alternatives for some of the verys,
eat ate eaten meet met met such as exceedingly, exceptionally, noticeably,
fall fell fallen pay paid paid completely, remarkably and so on. See
feel felt felt rise rose risen intensifiers.
vogue words 172 173 while
vogue w ords These are terms that come into fashion and M alnutrition is when a person has inadequate
flourish for a time. They are usually meant to food over a long period.
impress the reader or hearer; they are quite
frequently used w ithout a knowledge of their The verb is could be strengthened to develops
true meaning, like the second and last of these or occurs, and then the sentence w ill be correct.
samples, current at the time of writing: Smog is where poisonous exhaust gases from
ambivalent catalyst involvement cars collect over towns.
meaningful protagonist streamlined top-level
Here again the verb is should be changed to is
viable found, collects, is formed. Or the sentence can
vow els The letters a, e, i, o and u are used, sometimes be re-cast:
singly, sometimes in pairs, in the written Smog consists of poisonous exhaust gases from
versions of the various vowel sounds heard in cars, which collect over towns.
English speech. The letter y can also act as a
vowel. The 'w rong' sentences are intelligible, but they
are not good English.
What we w ant for refugees is hot water bottles, He asked i f tea was ready.
Let me know //there's anything in the paper
the verb is is correct, because the idea of want is
about our concert.
singular. But the common usage is to say and
write are in such sentences, and it very much If there is a negative alternative, whether must be
looks as if usage is winning the fight against used:
correctness.
They asked the clerk whether their tickets were
available or not.
w h en , w h ere These words are sometimes used wrongly,
especially in definitions: w h ile The word is often used as a change from and'.
which 174 175 words
Joan Brett was elected Chairman and Mrs. Drivers whose licences have expired must apply
French vice-chairman, while Sylvia Jones for renewal.
became treasurer. There are very few clubs whose membership is
However there have been some slips involving increasing.
odd simultaneous actions: For which, who, whom, whose see pronouns, 3.
The vicar preached the sermon, while Mr Day
w ill See shall, w ill.
read the lesson.
While can also be used to mean much the same w ith o u t This is commonly used in conversation instead
as although'. of unless:
While I disagree w ith them, I do think your I w o n 't go on the river w ithout you come too.
points are well worth making.
But it is sub-standard English, and is best
w h ich This relative pronoun is applied to things, never avoided in writing.
people:
I use special film which can't be bought in w oolliness An examiner's report complained: It is a pity
ordinary shops. that too many candidates muffled their thoughts
in words which have become so hackneyed as
w ho This is used for people and sometimes for to be practically w ith out meaning. Such words
favourite animals: as "factor, trend, avenue, field, facet, situation”
People who've finished please hand in their were used rather like crutches to help a limping
answers. writer; they certainly did not convey thought'.
Miss Burrows was always accompanied by Meg, Here is an example from an examination paper:
who had been her guide dog for ten years.
The author mentions zest to let it reflect on how
much drive education had in its pure state on the
whom This word will not be in use much longer, but
people and how much it would then be useless
grammar books still try to insist that who
as an incentive at all.
should be replaced by whom in these examples:
It is difficult to extract any meaning from this
Who are you looking for? writing. It is not an extreme case, for
Who are you going with? thousands of them occur every year. This
I can’t think w ho w e'll choose. woolliness in writing shows that the writers do
not know what they want to say; they have not
In speech the use of whom would sound thought enough, nor have they had practice
affected, and it would be out of place in all but enough. See verbiage.
the most formal writing.
w ords 1 Choice
w hose This is normally applied to persons, as in the
first example below, but it is more and more With its enormous vocabulary English offers a
used of things, as in the second example: range of words for what appears to be a single
words 176 177 you and I
2 Easily confused
The follow ing words are liable to be mis-used:
Y
accede, exceed innocuous, innocent you and I Mistakes are rarely made w ith the normal:
affect, effect lightening, lightning
complement, compliment luxuriant, luxurious You and I are sharing the same room again.
contemptible, contemptuous negligent, negligible
/ is nominative because it is part of the subject
continual, continuous official, officious
of the verb are sharing; and are is plural because
credible, credulous practice, practise it has a double subject, You and /. But this is
eligible, illegible principal, principle what happens w ith either . . . or, neither . . . nor.
explicit, im plicit recourse, resource
industrial, industrious sociable, social Neither you nor I am leaving.
infer, imply stationary, stationery
The conjunctions neither . . . nor cause you and
uninterested, disinterested
/ to be regarded separately, one at a time; so the
verb is singular. Then we have you in the
3 Foreign second person, and / in the first person; when
this happens the person of the verb is decided
English has borrowed w ith profit a large
by the pronoun nearest to it. The verb is
number of words and phrases from other
therefore am leaving. But it must be admitted
languages. Here is a selection of them:
that most English people, however well
a la carte anorak apartheid au pair circa educated, would say are leaving w ith out
cul de sac data de facto ex officio hesitation. See subject, m ultiple.
yours 178 179
Note that in between you and me, the pronoun
me goes in the objective cause because it is
governed by the preposition between.
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