IC WRITING

WORKSHEET 4A - IN PERIOD ACTIVITIES & ASSIGNMENTS

TEXT BOOK : Introduction to Academic Writing 3rd Edition by Oshima & Hague

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To do these activities and assignments, you need to look and read Chapter 4 of the Introduction to
Academic Writing, from page 61 to page 75. Answers to all of these questions can be found in the
book, especially within the pages specified in each parts.

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I. PAGE 63. PRACTICE 1. SPATIAL ORDER SIGNALS. FOLLOW THE DIRECTIONS

BELOW

STEP 1. Find and underline the spatial order words and phrases used in the model paragraph
“The Stairway” below.

STEP 2. Highlight the Spatial Order Signals word that you find.

The Stairway
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When I was two or three years old, I lived in a house that had a strange atmosphere. 2I do not
remember anything about the house except the stairway. 3It was dark, squeaking, and quite
narrow, and its steps were a little high for me to climb up. 4From the bottom of the stairway, it
seemed like an endless climb to the top. 5Beyond the darkness at the top of the stairway, there was
an elegant, middle-aged lady leaning against the wall. 6I had to pass her every time

I went to my room, for my room was the first room beyond the stairs on the second floor. 7The lady
wore a beautiful dress with a quiet pattern and a tinge of blue, and her peaceful eyes stared at me
every time I went up the stairs. 8I carefully climbed up the last step, her eyes became fixed on me.
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She didn’t talk, nor did she move. 10She just stood there and watched me clamber up the

stairs. 11One day I touched her, but she did not react. 12Her face did not change expression, nor did
she even blink. 13She just kept staring at me with her glittering eyes. 14Later, we moved out of the
house, and I never saw her again. 15Now I know that the lady was a mannequin. 16My aunt, who
lived in the house, used it for her dressmaking class. 17I did not know my mother. 18Maybe

I imagined that the mannequin standing at the top of the stairs was my mother. 19The stairway
with the strange atmosphere has an important place in my earliest memories.

Questions on the Model

1. What does the writer say about the atmosphere of the house in the first sentence?

ANSWER: strange, he feel strange with the atmosphere.

2. How does the writer describe the stairway? Underline the words that describe it.

ANSWER: third sentence.

3. When the writer first describes the woman, is he looking up at her or down at her? What does
he describe about her first? What does he describe last?

ANSWER: Elegant, middle-aged lady leaning against the Wall.

The lady wore a beautiful dress with a quiet pattern and a tinge of blue, and her peaceful eyes
stared at me every time I went up the stairs.
II. PAGE 63. PRACT1CE 2. SPATIAL ORDER ORGANIZATION AND DETAILS.

A. Read the following topic sentences for descriptive paragraphs. Think some possible details to
describe the place. Next, decide on the best kind of spatial order to use in the description: right
to left, left to right, top to bottom, far to near, outside to inside, and so on. Finally, write your
details in spatial order on the lines.

CHOOSE ONLY ONE NUMBER TO WORK ON, NOT ALL

1. After my sister spends two hours getting ready to go out, her room looks as if it had been hit by
a magnitude 8.5 earthquake.

a. From the doorway, you see nothing but a mountain of cIothes all over the floor

b. In the corner, you see lots of her make-up messy.

c. On the right, her bed gets messy and shapeless.

2. The park near my house is full of activity on a sunny weekend afternoon.

a.

b.

c.

3. My uncle’s workshop is a model of neatness and organization.

a.

b.

c.
PART B. In the space below, draw a map of your neighborhood or a floor plan of your house,
apartment, or bedroom. Then describe it in the form of bulleted points, using spatial order to
organize your description and spatial order signals. You can also draw on a piece of paper, take a
picture of the drawing, and then put the picture below.

PICTURE DESCRIPTION:

EXAMPLE: a. near the entrance to my room, on the right, there is my massive, flowery bed.

a. From the doorway, you can see the windows that lead to the street view

b. On the left, there is a desk as a workplace and a TV

c. On the right, there is a queen-sized bed facing the TV

d. Beside the bed, there are two small desks to put the night lamp

e. Next to the desk is the bathroom

f. In front of the bathroom, hanging a mirror to check our looks before we goes out
Try It Out! Page 64.

Choose one of the items from Practice 2A or 2B and write a paragraph. Use spatial organization
and spatial order signals to describe the place. If you choose to write your paragraph about 2B, be
sure to begin with a topic sentence that gives a general impression. Provide a Title as well. Write
your paragraph in no more than 100 words below:

Sunny Afternoon

The park near my house is full of activity on a sunny weekend afternoon. There are lots of

teenagers exercising, some children playing on the playground, and some people bring their pets

for a walk there. The park was a nice place to rest for a while. Some people are just sitting there

listening to some music through their headphones and enjoying the atmosphere.

III. PAGE 65. SUPPORTING SENTENCES FOR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPHS

MODEL PARAGRAPH. Descriptive Details

My Banana Garden

1
Behind my childhood home, there is a large piece of land that is surrounded by banana trees
growing in wild disorder. 2Crowds of banana trees grow freely everywhere. 3Their green leaves are
so thick that sunlight cannot pass through. 4Underneath the trees, the ground is so moist that wild
mushrooms and plants grow there all year around. 5In the center is a wild field where the children
of my village often fly kites. 6Every evening, just before sunset, some birds arrive to look for a place
to rest their tired wings. 7They want to land in the dark banana garden, but the banana leaves are
too wide to be made into nests. 8The birds cry out and then fly away, seeking a better place to nest.
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During the rainy season, it rains for days and days, and the banana leaves become glossy and slick.
10
The rain also makes the banana garden produce a very strange melody. 11On rainy days, I used to
sit near my window and listen to this wonderful song. 12Now, whenever I hear the plop-plop-plop
of raindrops on the roof of my small, tidy apartment in the city, I remember the beautiful, wild
banana garden of my childhood.

Questions on the Model

1. Find the topic sentence of this paragraph. What is the topic? The controlling idea?

My banana garden. The land of banana trees.

2. Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence?

Yes

3. Highlight any spatial order expressions you can find in the paragaph above. Is there a spatial
order pattern or no pattern?

4. What adjective is repeated four times in the paragraph (in sentences 1 , 4, 5, and 12)?

There is no adjective repeated.

PRACTICE 3 Descripti ve Details

PART A. Reread the paragraph “My Banana Garden” and notice the supporting details. Which of
the senses does the writer of this paragraph appeal to in his description: sight, smell, sound, touch,
and/or taste? List the details in the paragraph that appeal to each sense. (There may not be any
details for some of the senses)

Sight Smell Sound Touch Taste

wild disorder The birds cry out The banana

leaves become
Their green the banana
glossy and slick.
leaves are so garden produce a
thick that very strange Their green
 sunlight cannot melody. leaves are so
pass through. thick

some birds arrive the ground is so

to look for a moist
place to rest
their tired wings

In your opinion, do the details support the controlling idea, or not? Provide a reasoning as well.

ANSWER: Yes, because it can make us understand more clearly.

PART B. Brainstorm to think of descriptive details for the following topics. List as many sights,
smells, sounds, etc., as you can. You can work this part by your own. CHOOSE TWO NUMBERS TO
ANSWER. You do not have to answer all five questions, only two. No. 1 is an example.

1. A storm

dark, cloudy, dark clouds, howling wind, wet sidewalk, sIick streets

2. A subway station (or a bus stop) at rush hour

Crowded,smell bad,home restaurants,work,motel.

3. A busy airport terminal

4. The emergency room of a hospital

Doctor,bed,first aid,nurse,medicines,rooms.
5. A sunny day at the beach

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