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water? water?
informal word usage It was stupid of me to make It was foolish of me to make
such a remark. such a remark.
contractions should not be This shouldn’t take place. This should not take place.
used
wrong transition has been His sister had a cold; His sister had a cold;
used however, Julie’s family therefore, Julie’s family
canceled the trip. canceled the trip.
parallelism error I need to go to the store, buy I need to go to the store, buy
some groceries and I deliver some groceries and deliver
the parcel also. the parcel.