In this new era of technology, our quality of lives is being distracted affected by the noise pollution.

As a result, it causes negative/detrimental effects on us. The main reasons for noise pollution are
construction and traffic. To overcome this problem/issue, governments should impose strict
regulations for new housing and commercial constructions. In addition, public should be encouraged
to use public transportation to decrease the number of vehicles on the roads. This essay will discuss
these in the following paragraphs.Accordingly, there are several of causes due to this issue especially
at the busy area such as city centre. Moreover, this issue really affect environment in nowadays
society.

First of all, the main causes of the noise is sound of vehicle. Since we all know that in this
eraNowadays, everyone has their own cars or motorcycles and using their car frequently comparein
comparison to the last decade. Regarding it, As a result,the sound of their vehicles really gives a
bignegative/ adverse impact on people. For instance, people who ride a car or motorcycle always
use their car’s hornto react to other drivers for the signal or to complain about how other people
drive their car. It is really disturbing because they will use it anytime, they want and will not consider
about other people even in the middle of the night. Secondly, the cause of the noise pollution is
construction of the road. Not to deny that the reason of the construction is to improve the road but
the process of the construction itself making a huge noise pollution to the society. For an example,
the sounds of the tools that they are using such as excavator and bulldozer

One of the things that we can improve is using public transport like train and bus. In consequence,
we can reduce the noise from the car and motorcycle. By using a public transport like train will
reduce the noise because the fewer people will be driving their cars and riding their motorcycles.
oquantity of people that can be fix it the train is more than enough to reduce people for using their
vehicle for daily basis such go to work. Hence, less noise pollution will be produced. Other than that,
as we know that train is a new technology that do not produce any noise.. Besides, for the road’s
construction we cannot reduce it by our own effort. Thus, the management of the road’s the
authorities concerned construction needs to play a role in this matter such as use a board as putting
up dividers between the construction sites and main roads to reduce the noise.

Everyone needs to make an effort and play their own role to reduce this problem because we cannot
blame each other for this issue. In consequence, if everyone takes their own responsibilities it is not
possible to overcome this problem.

In conclusion/to sum up, there is no doubt that increasing noise level is caused by the constructions
and vehicles on the roads. This problem can be solved by imposing strict rules when constructing
buildings and the use of public transportation. Consequently, these solutions will help to decrease
the noise level.
Task Achievement: 5
Ideas are partially developed and supported

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

information not organised appropriately. Cohesive devices lack in precision

Lexical Resources: 5.5

Limited Vocabs and repetitive words like sound, people,

Grammar Range And Accuracy: 5

Limited range of sentence structure. Attempt to use complex sentences but with less accuracy and
precision

Overall score: 5+5.5+5.5+5= 21/4 = 5.25= 5.5