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Some people think that strict punishments for

driving offences are the key to reducing traffic
accidents. Others, however, believe that other
measures would be more effective in
improving road safety.
#people #punishments #offences #traffic #accidents
#measures #road #safety

Many people argue about the best ways to

prevent traffic accidents. Some individuals opine
that strict penalties should give for traffic
violations. Whereas other humans think that other
methods help increase the safety of our roads. I
mostly favour consolidating both opinions that
promote better driving habits.

On the one hand, capital punishments are a

reliable approach for controlling drivers who
prefer taking risks. The person who drives a
vehicle is afraid of losing their license. Penalties
are a motivation for them. As a result, people
don't break rules and become more careful.
For example, there is a law against drunk driving
in Russia. If an individual gets alcohol and is
behind the wheel, this situation can lead to a fatal
accident. Accordingly, the government applies
the death penalty such as deprivation of driver's
license. Therefore, statistics of fatal accidents
have decreased.

On the other hand, other methods can help

develop road safety and avoid potentially fatal
consequences, such as promoting safety.
Billboards are mounted near roads to launch an
advertising campaign. As a result, people
become more aware of safety. For example,
when humans return to work they watch
billboards with a boy, who sits by a window with
a toy and waits for his father or mother. The
picture affects the emotions of the driver, in the
end, drivers control speed.

To conclude, although penalizing a traffic violator

can be a good lesson other actions, which can
prevent accidents should be primarily
considered. Undoubtedly, prevention is better
than cure and the safety of human life is of prime
importance.

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COHERENCE AND COHESION: 5.0

9 Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

9 Include an introduction and conclusion
9 Support main points with an explanation and
then an example
9 Use cohesive linking words accurately and
appropriately
5 Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

LEXICAL RESOURCE: 8.0

8 Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate

synonyms
8 Check your work for spelling and word
formation mistakes

GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 8.0

9 Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

8 Check your writing for errors

TASK ACHIEVEMENT: 4.0

4 Answer all parts of the question

9 Present and fully explain ideas
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