List of Findings · Group EF

Findings List of the Review Meeting

Group EF

June 2, 2023 (15:15 - 17:15 [Central European Time])

Location: l.2.15a

Review Description: Review Comments

Review Group EF --

Reviewed Product: Meeting Information:

» Product Name: Biking App for Bangle.js » Duration of the meeting:

2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
» Product Version: 0.6
» Number of findings: 38
Product References:
» Number of attendees: 7
» see Moodle
» 2023-05-28_Specification_Group_15.pdf (File
Attachment)

General impressions of the product: Final recommendation for the product:

Looks Good, undrstandable structure. Accepted (changes required)

Feels incomplete in some points.
In general in order
!!!The greatest specification so far (except
anonymous team)

The severities of the findings in this review (descending order of importance): Not rated; Critical error; Main error; Minor error;
Good

This finding has been created with RevAger on June 2, 2023

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List of Findings · Group EF

Review Meeting on June 2, 2023

15:15 - 17:15 [Central European Time]
Location: l.2.15a

The meeting took place as it has been planned.

Comments on the Meeting: Comments on the Findings List:

Experts were !!!!very well prepared In general good, missing content and *lots* of
spelling errors

The following attendees participated (7 attendees):

Keshav Mishra Moderator

keshav.mishra@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

Sean Garing Scribe

sean.garing@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

Sean Garing Author

sean.garing@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

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Dumitru Cepil Reviewer

dumitru.cepil@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Restrictions for the design and the implementation (Completeness) · Extensibility of the system
(Completeness) · Conflicting statements (General characteristics of the entire specification) · Grouping
of use cases (General characteristics of the entire specification) · Verifiability of the statements
(Properties of individual components of the specification)

Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

Luka Brosen Reviewer

luka.brosen@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Actors in use cases (Properties of individual components of the specification) · Actions und reactions
(Properties of individual components of the specification) · Requirements recognizable (Properties of
individual components of the specification) · Clear statements (Properties of individual components of
the specification) · Correctness of the statements (Properties of individual components of the
specification)

Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

Vladyslav Maurer Reviewer

vladyslav.maurer@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Numerical data (Completeness) · User interface (Completeness) · Error handling (Properties of
individual components of the specification) · Spelling (Properties of individual components of the
specification)

Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

Çaan Yeti Reviewer

cagan.yetis@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Introduction (Completeness) · Use Cases / Processes (Completeness) · Statements about quality
(Completeness) · Statements about the systems environment/actors (Completeness) · Terms of the
glossary (Properties of individual components of the specification)

Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)

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The following findings were recorded by the participating reviewers (38 findings):

Finding 1 Minor error June 2, 2023

Grammar and Writing -> Whole Document!!!

'Chepter' - Versioning
'Biki Tour' - Table of Contents
'Glosarry' -ToC
'Intial' - Revision History
'bluetooth' -> Capitalize -whole document
'Chest Belt' inconsistency
'recieved'
'diagramm'
'itsself'

Go through it in Word

References:
» Whole Document

Aspects:
» Spelling (Properties of individual components of the specification)

Finding 2 Minor error June 2, 2023

1.1 'fitness tracking purposes'

References:
» Ch. 1.1

Aspects:
» Spelling (Properties of individual components of the specification)

Finding 3 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 1.2.

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Finding 4 Minor error June 2, 2023

What should the readers of the document expect

References:
» Ch. 1.3

Finding 5 Minor error June 2, 2023

Specify software access to include development team

References:
» Ch. 1.4

Finding 6 Minor error June 2, 2023

Step tracking not required

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Biking app Last Paragraph

Finding 7 Minor error June 2, 2023

Unnecessary information

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Principle of Measurment for chest belt

Finding 8 Minor error June 2, 2023

First point redundant

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Biking app

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Finding 9 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Language Support

Finding 10 Minor error June 2, 2023

Redundant Information

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Time Display

Finding 11 Minor error June 2, 2023

First sentence redundant

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Bluetooth Connectivity

Finding 12 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Data Storage and Management

Finding 13 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Notifications

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Finding 14 Minor error June 2, 2023

Unecessary Information -> Hardware

References:
» Ch. 2.1 Minimal Software

Finding 15 Main error June 2, 2023

Redudant Information -> Already written in previous chapter

!! Revise

References:
» Ch. 2.2

Finding 16 Main error June 2, 2023

UI should be bigger

References:
» 3.1 UI

Finding 20 Main error June 2, 2023

Missing:
- Navigation Settings
- Introduction/Tutorial
- Road/Mountain Cycling mode

References:
» 3.1 UI

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Finding 17 Minor error June 2, 2023

Written description of functions is missing

References:
» 3.1 UI

Finding 18 Minor error June 2, 2023

recommend latest Bluetooth version instead of 4.2

References:
» 3.2

Finding 19 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» 4.1

Finding 21 Minor error June 2, 2023

Don't make Military Time dependent on language

References:
» 4.2

Finding 22 Minor error June 2, 2023

Specify requirement of metric system

References:
» Ch. 4

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Finding 28 Critical error June 2, 2023

Missing Software Updates

References:
» Ch. 4

Finding 23 Minor error June 2, 2023

Specify:
'if the paired ....'

References:
» 4.4

Finding 24 Not rated June 2, 2023

No error

References:
» 4.5 F-7

Finding 25 Critical error June 2, 2023

Current data should also be recorded and shown

References:
» 4.5 F-8

Finding 26 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» 4.5 F-9 -> F-12

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Finding 27 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 5.1

Finding 29 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» Ch. 5.2

Finding 30 Minor error June 2, 2023

Lacking Interactions:
- Entering user data (age, weight, etc.)
- specify which Bluetooth device
- connection to external sensors

References:
» Ch. 6

Finding 31 Not rated June 2, 2023

No Error

References:
» 6.2 UC1

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Finding 32 Minor error June 2, 2023

Missing exceptions

References:
» 6.2 UC2

Finding 33 Minor error June 2, 2023

no time travel invented!!

-> total tour time

References:
» 6.2 UC 3.1, UC 3.2

Finding 34 Minor error June 2, 2023

Missing Exception
specify saving data

References:
» 6.2 UC3.2

Finding 35 Minor error June 2, 2023

Specify exception numbering

References:
» UC 3.4

Finding 36 Minor error June 2, 2023

Precondition: a tour needs to have been completed

References:
» 6.2. UC 3.3

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Finding 37 Minor error June 2, 2023

At least 2 Devices

References:
» 7.2

Finding 38 Minor error June 2, 2023

Missing Terms:
GPS

References:
» 7.1

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