List of Findings · Group EF
Findings List of the Review Meeting
Group EF
June 2, 2023 (15:15 - 17:15 [Central European Time])
Location: l.2.15a
Review Description: Review Comments
Review Group EF --
Reviewed Product: Meeting Information:
» Product Name: Biking App for Bangle.js » Duration of the meeting:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
» Product Version: 0.6
» Number of findings: 38
Product References:
» Number of attendees: 7
» see Moodle
» 2023-05-28_Specification_Group_15.pdf (File
Attachment)
General impressions of the product: Final recommendation for the product:
Looks Good, undrstandable structure. Accepted (changes required)
Feels incomplete in some points.
In general in order
!!!The greatest specification so far (except
anonymous team)
The severities of the findings in this review (descending order of importance): Not rated; Critical error; Main error; Minor error;
Good
This finding has been created with RevAger on June 2, 2023
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List of Findings · Group EF
Review Meeting on June 2, 2023
15:15 - 17:15 [Central European Time]
Location: l.2.15a
The meeting took place as it has been planned.
Comments on the Meeting: Comments on the Findings List:
Experts were !!!!very well prepared In general good, missing content and *lots* of
spelling errors
The following attendees participated (7 attendees):
Keshav Mishra Moderator
keshav.mishra@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
Sean Garing Scribe
sean.garing@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
Sean Garing Author
sean.garing@study.thws.de
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
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List of Findings · Group EF
Dumitru Cepil Reviewer
dumitru.cepil@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Restrictions for the design and the implementation (Completeness) · Extensibility of the system
(Completeness) · Conflicting statements (General characteristics of the entire specification) · Grouping
of use cases (General characteristics of the entire specification) · Verifiability of the statements
(Properties of individual components of the specification)
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
Luka Brosen Reviewer
luka.brosen@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Actors in use cases (Properties of individual components of the specification) · Actions und reactions
(Properties of individual components of the specification) · Requirements recognizable (Properties of
individual components of the specification) · Clear statements (Properties of individual components of
the specification) · Correctness of the statements (Properties of individual components of the
specification)
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
Vladyslav Maurer Reviewer
vladyslav.maurer@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Numerical data (Completeness) · User interface (Completeness) · Error handling (Properties of
individual components of the specification) · Spelling (Properties of individual components of the
specification)
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
Çaan Yeti Reviewer
cagan.yetis@study.thws.de
Assigned aspects:
Introduction (Completeness) · Use Cases / Processes (Completeness) · Statements about quality
(Completeness) · Statements about the systems environment/actors (Completeness) · Terms of the
glossary (Properties of individual components of the specification)
Preparation time:
2 Hour(s), 0 Minute(s)
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List of Findings · Group EF
The following findings were recorded by the participating reviewers (38 findings):
Finding 1 Minor error June 2, 2023
Grammar and Writing -> Whole Document!!!
'Chepter' - Versioning
'Biki Tour' - Table of Contents
'Glosarry' -ToC
'Intial' - Revision History
'bluetooth' -> Capitalize -whole document
'Chest Belt' inconsistency
'recieved'
'diagramm'
'itsself'
Go through it in Word
References:
» Whole Document
Aspects:
» Spelling (Properties of individual components of the specification)
Finding 2 Minor error June 2, 2023
1.1 'fitness tracking purposes'
References:
» Ch. 1.1
Aspects:
» Spelling (Properties of individual components of the specification)
Finding 3 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 1.2.
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Finding 4 Minor error June 2, 2023
What should the readers of the document expect
References:
» Ch. 1.3
Finding 5 Minor error June 2, 2023
Specify software access to include development team
References:
» Ch. 1.4
Finding 6 Minor error June 2, 2023
Step tracking not required
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Biking app Last Paragraph
Finding 7 Minor error June 2, 2023
Unnecessary information
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Principle of Measurment for chest belt
Finding 8 Minor error June 2, 2023
First point redundant
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Biking app
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Finding 9 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Language Support
Finding 10 Minor error June 2, 2023
Redundant Information
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Time Display
Finding 11 Minor error June 2, 2023
First sentence redundant
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Bluetooth Connectivity
Finding 12 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Data Storage and Management
Finding 13 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Notifications
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Finding 14 Minor error June 2, 2023
Unecessary Information -> Hardware
References:
» Ch. 2.1 Minimal Software
Finding 15 Main error June 2, 2023
Redudant Information -> Already written in previous chapter
!! Revise
References:
» Ch. 2.2
Finding 16 Main error June 2, 2023
UI should be bigger
References:
» 3.1 UI
Finding 20 Main error June 2, 2023
Missing:
- Navigation Settings
- Introduction/Tutorial
- Road/Mountain Cycling mode
References:
» 3.1 UI
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Finding 17 Minor error June 2, 2023
Written description of functions is missing
References:
» 3.1 UI
Finding 18 Minor error June 2, 2023
recommend latest Bluetooth version instead of 4.2
References:
» 3.2
Finding 19 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» 4.1
Finding 21 Minor error June 2, 2023
Don't make Military Time dependent on language
References:
» 4.2
Finding 22 Minor error June 2, 2023
Specify requirement of metric system
References:
» Ch. 4
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Finding 28 Critical error June 2, 2023
Missing Software Updates
References:
» Ch. 4
Finding 23 Minor error June 2, 2023
Specify:
'if the paired ....'
References:
» 4.4
Finding 24 Not rated June 2, 2023
No error
References:
» 4.5 F-7
Finding 25 Critical error June 2, 2023
Current data should also be recorded and shown
References:
» 4.5 F-8
Finding 26 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» 4.5 F-9 -> F-12
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Finding 27 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 5.1
Finding 29 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» Ch. 5.2
Finding 30 Minor error June 2, 2023
Lacking Interactions:
- Entering user data (age, weight, etc.)
- specify which Bluetooth device
- connection to external sensors
References:
» Ch. 6
Finding 31 Not rated June 2, 2023
No Error
References:
» 6.2 UC1
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Finding 32 Minor error June 2, 2023
Missing exceptions
References:
» 6.2 UC2
Finding 33 Minor error June 2, 2023
no time travel invented!!
-> total tour time
References:
» 6.2 UC 3.1, UC 3.2
Finding 34 Minor error June 2, 2023
Missing Exception
specify saving data
References:
» 6.2 UC3.2
Finding 35 Minor error June 2, 2023
Specify exception numbering
References:
» UC 3.4
Finding 36 Minor error June 2, 2023
Precondition: a tour needs to have been completed
References:
» 6.2. UC 3.3
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Finding 37 Minor error June 2, 2023
At least 2 Devices
References:
» 7.2
Finding 38 Minor error June 2, 2023
Missing Terms:
GPS
References:
» 7.1
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