Commented [MG1]: Good critiques on limitations and

how you would go about solving the problem

Commented [MG2]: If you had time, how would you have

gone about repairs and improvements? What kind of tests
could be performed?
Commented [MG3]: Good range of improvements, needs
some explanation of how and why you would go about these
improvements.

Commented [MG4]: Why didn’t it work? How could this

be
improved?
Commented [MG5]: What are your predictions since you
were unable to test? Could they be supported by literature?

Commented [MG6]: Great explanation of your solution,

this could be enhanced by delving into the energy
transformations and transference more.

Commented [MG7]: Good consideration of the Kaurna

people when it comes to ethics. To improve thought could
go into what parts of their histories and culture could be
affected by the CAES System. Also you would need to ask for
permission as well as negotiate for use of their land.

Commented [MG8]: Great considerations and reasoning.

Commented [MG9]: This is a great supporting comment

and should be cited with literature (references).

Commented [MG10]: Good economic considerations

Commented [MG11]: Good conclusion, to improve it can
be a lot more concise

Commented [MG12]: This is a new way of explaining and

should be placed elsewhere in your report. *No new
information in the conclusion!

Commented [MG13]: Over the word count, try to be

more concise and picky with the content.
Commented [MG14]: These references are good, and
have the correct formatting. To improve cite these in text to
show how they support your content
 Very well thought out and comprehensive report. You explained your solution
very well, and had a lot of good critiques and improvements to your project. The report was well laid
out and easy to follow with correct spelling and grammar. References were in the correct APA
format however it could have been improved with more literature citations to support the content.
More explanation on energy transfer and transformations would enhance your solution explanation.
Connecting your project to the CAES System in Canada shows that you have thought about and
researched technological advanced in the industry. Inclusion of the Kaurna people in your ethical
considerations was very important, and well thought out. Overall this report is granted a B grade,
well done