Analytical Exposition
Purpose: To explore and analyse a topic, then persuade reader to a particular point of view
by providing supporting evidence or data.
Problem/ Thesis – state the topic to be examined and provide some data.
Position
Everybody must pay attention of drugs. Drugs are very dangerous for us. Why it is very
dangerous for us? Because its can caused harm to our body.
Data / Arguments/ Assertion
In terms of health, many organs in our body
can be harm because using drug. In general,
the impact of using drug are can
unconsciuos, make us hallucinate, can harm
our nerve, and cause addictive effect.
Beside that, using drugs can make the users
depressed, liver disease, schizophrenia,
blockage of blood vessels, dehydration,
optid nerve damage, brain damage, and
finally it can cause DEATH!
Data / Arguments/ Assertion
When viewed in terms of Islamic law, drugs
are forbidden. Because it is cause badness,
self harm, debilitate. And Islam proscribes
all that can cause badness, self harm
because it is included zhalim. Also if we
using drugs, it means we already do the
forbidden things in Islam, it means we sin.
So, in terms of Islamic law, using drugs also
dangerous.
Data / Arguments/ Assertion
Furthermore, if the users of drugs are
teenagers, it can endanger their future, and
endanger their homeland, their country.
From the data, 32 percent of drugs users in
Indonesia are teenagers, so, if many
teenagers –in this case Indonesia- use drugs,
it can be endanger this country, harm youth
generation, whereas youths are nation
expectation. If the youth using drugs, our
nation can be destroy!
Conclusion
Supporting Evidence
These reasons or pieces of evidence are
presented to support the overall claim that
drug use can have harmful effects on the
body and overall health. This constitutes an
argument because it presents a position and
provides supporting information to persuade
or inform the reader about the dangers of
drug use.
Supporting Evidence
This part forms an argument because it
presents a position (the prohibition of drugs
in Islamic law) and provides supporting
information (reasons and evidence) to
justify and persuade the reader of this
viewpoint. It demonstrates a logical chain of
thought connecting the claim to the reasons
and ultimately to the conclusion that using
drugs is considered dangerous and sinful
according to Islamic law.
Supporting Evidence
This argument presents a cause-and-effect
relationship, where drug use by teenagers is
linked to negative consequences for their
future, the nation, and its youth population.
It aims to persuade the reader that
addressing teenage drug use is essential for
the well-being and future stability of the
country
This part of your statement is called a
Restate Thesis
So, from now on we must pay attention of
drugs, because it’s very dangerous, both in
terms of health, religion (Islam), nationality
and state.
Comment
Detailed Bibliography should be included. Use ‘Citation’ on school computers.
conclusion because it summarizes the main
points and arguments presented in the
preceding text and provides a final
statement or recommendation. In this case,
it concludes that paying attention to the
issue of drugs is crucial because of its
multiple dangers, including health risks,
religious implications (in the context of
Islam), and threats to national identity and
the state. The conclusion serves to wrap up
the argument and emphasize the importance
of the topic.