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ESSAY MAP 1 (EXPOTION STORY ESAY)

THE INFLUENCE OF ONLINE SHOPPING ON STUDENTS


Introductory Paragaph Include the meaning of online shopping, the
impact of online shopping,and thesis
statement.
Thesis Statement Currently online shopping has become very
popular in various circles ,quite a few
students are also users of online shopping
applications ,thus causing the real market to
experience a decline interest,which has an
impact on the country’s economy.
Backgroud paragraph

Shopping online has become an activity that


is often carried out by people in line with
Topic sentence the very rapid development of technology
and the internet. Shopping is an activity
carried out by consumers because of a need
or simply to fulfill a desire. Currently, it is
made easier for consumers by the
emergence of online shopping sites, so that
consumers do not need to leave the house
and carry their shopping items heavily.
Because of this, the popularity of online
shopping is increasing among the public.

Question to be answered in The paragraph Why students like online shopping?

What is the influence of brand on student


buying interest?

Support The reasons for online shopping are familiar


among students.

Body paragraph 1

Topic Sentence : Online Shopping has a big impact on


students
.
Question to be answered in the Paragraph: What is the impact of online shopping for
studends.?
Body paragraph 2
Facts about online duct influence .

Topic sentence :

Efforts to reduce the negative impact of


Question to be answered in The paragraph shopping only .

How to reduce the negative impact of online


shopping.
Support:

Several ways to reduce the negative impact


of online shopping.
Concluding paragraph Shopping online is considered more
practical to do. Especially
supported by supporting technology such as
smartphones
makes it easier to carry out shopping
activities online. In Indonesia
Shopping online is no longer a strange thing
to do. Even Indonesia
is one of the largest online shopping or e-
commerce business market shares
This can be seen from the increase in
internet users every year.

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