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Creative writing
Adewale Maja‐Pearce
Published online: 18 Jul 2008.

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THREE NIGERIAN SHORT


STORIES
Adewale Maja-Pearce
THE WITNESS She went through to the bedroom. In a moment she was
She came out with it as soon as they had finished breakfast. back again.
'Akin, don't you think it's time you started thinking 'I don't suppose you want to come to the shops with me,'
seriously about what you're going to do with your life? The she said without looking at him.
war has been over nearly three months now . . . ' 'No.'
He looked away from her and stood up. He lit a cigarette 'Don't forget your parents are expecting us this evening in
and went over to the window. case you were thinking of going somewhere.'
'Look, I'm not trying to push you into anything you don't 'I haven't forgotten.'
want to do' 'I'll see you later,' she said.
'I know, Elizabeth, I know,' he said. He waited until she was about to close the door behind her
'Before you went away you used to be so eager for life.' then he called: 'Elizabeth.'
She came up behind him and touched his shoulder. 'You're She paused. 'What?'
wasting your talents. If you don't want to join your father's Swish, swish, swish went the blade. 'I love you,' he said.
firm there's lots of other things you can do.' He could lie now without even thinking about it.
He turned to look at her. 'Elizabeth . . . " He shrugged and She looked at him and shook her head. 'Oh, Akin.' She
turned away again. could not remain angry with him for long.
'If only you would talk to me,' she said. 'Just a little more time, that's all I need, then everything
'I need time,'he said. will be alright,' he said.
She moved away from him. 'That's what you've been saying She gave him a half-hearted smile. 'Why do I always end up
ever since you got back. You make me feel as if I'm trying to believing you,' she said.
bully you into something you don't want, but you've had He gave her half-an-hour then let himself out. The gardener
plenty of time as it is and where has it got you?' looked up at him and said something which he did not catch.
He threw the cigarette out of the window. If only he could The bus rounded the corner and he ran for it.
feel something — love, pain . . . He got off at the hospital. The heat had become oppressive
'I'm sorry, Elizabeth,' he said. and his shirt was soaked. He entered the overcrowded ward. It
'Sorry, sorry, that's all you can say. You're destroying was dark and smelly and noisy.
yourself, our marriage, and all you can say is you're sorry. 'Akin, so you've come.'
What good is that?' He sat down on the bed. 'Remi, how are you?'
He watched the gardener attacking the grass with his blade. 'They won't let me out of here.'
It was going to be another scorching day. Swish, swish, swish: 'Why not?'
with each stroke the blade defined a perfect arc. 'They told me yesterday that they now have to chop above
'At least say something can't you?' she demanded. the knee.'
He turned to her. 'What can I say?' 'I thought it was all over with.'

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Remi sighed. A tear trickled down the side of his face. The English woman and a half-caste man living alone in the wilder-
man in the adjoining bed started to groan. ness. We bought what we needed, which was quickly done, and
'You see that man. They let him out last year and he's back then there was no further excuse for us to hang around. It was
again,' Remi said. about noon by the time we set off, and the earth was like an
'What's wrong with him?' oven.
'They removed his stomach. Imagine that. They took the One evening, as we sat talking, a huge black dog appeared
whole thing out just like that. Now his intestines are infected.' out of the night and stopped before us.
'Remi, is there anything I can get you?' 'Get away,' I said, and kicked out at it. My foot caught it
'What do I need? I want to be a whole man again, can you under the belly.
arrange that for me?' 'What did you do that for?' Bridget cried.
'Remi...'' 'It's probably diseased,' I said impatiently, but she didn't
'You can't help me, go away.' listen. She coaxed it into the house and put some food down
'Remi, I'm sorry.' for it.
'You're not the only one. My wife was here yesterday. That was how we acquired a dog. At first it was frightened
That's what she said, meanwhile she is enjoying another man.' of me, but it followed Bridget around everywhere. I didn't
'Will I go and see her for you?' much like the animal but she was happy enough to have it
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'If you like.' around. It took to sitting at her feet in the evenings while she.
'I'll see the doctor as well.' told me stories about her childhood. Her father beat her; her
'Do what you want, none of it can help me.' father ignored her; her father locked her in a cupboard for
He stayed a few minutes longer and then left. In the corridor six, seven, eight hours; her father raped her. Each time fresh
he met one of the nurses. She had been in the ward when he details were added, tamer ones discarded. I suppose I came to
had first entered. He called her aside and gave her some money. hate the poor man almost as much as she did.
As if it would do any good. She would spend it and forget The next time, we went to the village the dog came with us.
why he had given her. Because of the animal we attracted even more attention than
He drank a bottle of cold beer before he caught another bus usual. We were soon surrounded by the children. I tried to
to Suru-lere. Remi's wife was in the kitchen, feeding the baby. shoo them away. Then I saw the first stone lob through the
She made him tea. air and hit the dog on its back. It gave a yelp. I grabbed
'I've been to see him,' he said. Bridget and took her out of the area. The children were
'He wants to die,' she said. 'Yesterday he accused me of screaming with delight as they stoned the dog, and then
sleeping with other men. He asked me for their names, but suddenly Bridget broke away from me and flew at the children.
when I said it was not true he started shouting at me and calling They scattered in all directions so that she didn't know which
me a liar and a harlot.' way to go.
'He needs time, he has to get used to his new condition.' The dog was dead and lay in a bloody heap on the scorching
'I know, I know, but we must eat.' sand.. She went over to it and knelt beside it. It was horrible
'Did you speak to the doctor?' to listen to the sounds she made in the back of her throat.
'What do they know? Because they went overseas to learn Some of the women ventured near and stood in a group shaking
long words they think they are God.' their heads.
He stood up. 'I must go,' he said. He put some money on I was wondering what to do when someone tapped me on
the table and left. my shoulder. A squat and very black man carrying a spade
Elizabeth was still out when he got back to the apartment. smiled at me. Then he pinched his nostrils with the thumb and
He stood by the window and watched the gardener. Swish, forefinger of his free hand and pointed at the dead animal. I
swish, swish went the blade. went over to Bridget.
'Let them bury the dog,' I said. I wasn't sure whether she
had heard me. I was about to repeat it when she suddenly
A PLACE IN THE WILDERNESS turned on me:
'You're no better than them, nobody cares in this world, do
After the sun had gone down we would sit on the front steps, they?' she shouted and ran off. The little group of women
and sometimes we were silent, just smoking cigarettes and shook their heads once more and went about their business.
holding hands, and sometimes she talked about her childhood The children were still nowhere in sight. The man with the
and about how unhappy she had been. She told me many spade began digging a hole.
contradictory stories about her childhood, but I always listened A week later she went back to England. I sold the small
carefully because it was in the way she spoke, and not what she plot in the wilderness and moved back to the city. A few days
said, that the truth lay. later I received a letter from her. It depressed me because in it
In the daytime we never left the house except to collect she did her best to distance me. She told me she had moved in
water from the stream. Since it hadn't rained in such a long with her father. Apparently he had recently suffered a stroke
time the water was muddy and tasted bad. We boiled it, put it which paralyzed him down one side. His third wife had left
through muslin, made tea with it, but it always tasted the same. him and he had no-one else to turn to for help.
But sometimes the isolation became too much for us, and
then we would walk the four miles to the village. There was
always the excuse that we needed to buy food, but the real THE WOMAN OF THE LAKE
reason was that we had to see other faces. So we walked under
the blazing sun, holding hands at first but disengaging after a Kolawole had been out in the fields checking his yams until
-short while because it was intolerable to clasp another's sweaty late in the afternoon. He had been up since dawn and as he
palm. made his way home he was exhausted. When he reached the
The village was tiny, and not much more than a market lake he paused to splash water on his face and arms, and then
where farmers sold their produce: yams, beans, plantain, he thought to lie down for a moment before setting off for
peppers and fruit. To them we were incomprehensible: an home. Immediately he closed his eyes there came before him

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a picture of his wife and seven children, the oldest a boy often ground and waited. But for what? She had only heen a dream,
and the youngest a baby of three months. He thought of this surely? So whythis foolishness? He stood up and turned to go
year's harvest. It would not be good. The excessive rains had and as he did so he heard her call his name. .
done a lot of damage. He would have to go to his brother in 'Kolawole.' He looked round. The lake remained undisturbed:
the city again to look for work to tide them over. He felt there was nobody there. He started off again, and again he heard
weary. He thought how hard his life had been, how little luck his name: 'Kolawole;' Again he turned, and again there was
he had had, and then, out of the silence around him, he heard nothing there. He hesitated for a moment, and then he stripped
a woman call his name, but softly: off his clothes and plunged into the water.
'Kolawole.' He opened his eyes. Dusk had already fallen. An hour later his son came to the lake and called for him
He was about to sit up when she called out again, louder this •but got no answer. Darkness was falling^ a light breeze
time: disturbed the tops of the trees, and the boy was frightened.
'Kolawole.' He sat up, and there before him, rising out of Presently he came across his father's clothes in a small heap.
the water, was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, He knew his father"could not swim, and he ran home in terror.
her skin glistened from the last rays of the dying sun, and she Early the next morning the people of the village went down
held out her arms to him. to the lake. The strongest swimmers dived into the water.
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'I have been waiting for you to come to me for so long, why None of them could reach the bottom because the lake was too
didn't you come to me before?' she said. deep. They searched until the sun had passed the middle of the
'I don't know,' he whispered. sky and then they gave Up. Kolawole has not been seen since.
'But you're here now,' she said and smiled. She beckoned to
him: 'Come, come to me.'
He stood up and walked towards her, wading through the
water until it reached his chest. She put her arms around him
and pulled him down with her, all the time whispering in his
ear, 'Come, come.'
They went down, down, down until they stood on the
bottom of the lake. Then she took him by the hand and led
him to a hut made of shells of many colours.
'This is your new home,'she said. 'Do you like it?'
'Yes.'
She made him lie down on a couch and cradled his head on
her lap.
'I've been so lonely here without you. Every day I waited
for you and when you didn't come I thought you had forgotten
all about me and I was sad. Why didn't you come before? Why?'
He thought of his wife and children, and how they would be
waiting for him.
'Everyday when you didn't come I came back here and I
wept, but I won't say any more about it because now you are
here. We'll live here forever and we'll be so happy, just you
and I.'
He thought again of his wife and children. How could he
leave them without even a word? He sat up quickly.
'I must go back,' he cried.
'Papa, papa,' a voice called. He turned round. His eldest
child was standing behind him. He stood up and looked about
him. The sun had almost completely disappeared over the
horizon, and the lake before him was calm.
'I fell asleep', he said, and rubbed his eyes.
'We were waiting for you, papa. When you didn't come,
mama sent me to look for you.'
'Yes, let us go home,' he said.
He hardly slept all that night. Every time he closed his eyes
there she was, so real that it was as if all he had to do was reach
out and he would be able to touch her. Finally, when the first
light of the new day crept in through the open doorway, he got
dressed and went out.
All day he was busy in the fields lifting his yams. He kept
reminding himself that it had only been a dream, nothing more.
He thought of his wife, but all he saw was a prematurely old
woman broken by poverty and continual childbirth, no longer
the young woman he had once wooed, but an old woman with
sagging breasts and roughened hands. And then he thought of
the woman of the lake, beautiful and fresh and promising
everything.
By late afternoon he was finished. He started for home but
when he reached the lake he stopped. He squatted on the

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