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S1 Q1 English for Academic and Professional Purposes ● When presenting a position or argument that

disagrees with one’s perspectives, describe


Lesson 1 the argument accurately without loaded or

ACADEMIC LANGUAGE USED biased language.

FROM VARIOUS DISCIPLINES TONE


The feelings that the
MOOD
Suggested feeling that
ACADEMIC TEXT author wants to convey. the reader received.

■ An academic text is a reading material that


3) LANGUAGE
provides information which include concepts
● It is important to use unambiguous language.
and theories that are related to the specific
● Clear topic sentences enable a reader to
discipline.
follow your line of thinking without difficulty.
● Formal language and the third person
- These may be considered writing point-of-view should be used.
which is personal, emotional, ● Technical language appropriate to the area of
impressionistic, or subjective in study may also be used, however it does not
nature. mean using “big words” just for the sake of
- It is informal in tone, and relies more
doing so.
on the emotional appeal of the
○ For example, the word virus has different
NON ACADEMIC opinions of the author.
- Therefore, anyone can write a meanings for an IT and a scientist.
non-academic text.
- Newspaper articles, e-mail messages, 4) CITATION
text messages, journal writing, and ● Citing sources in the body of the paper
letters are some examples of and providing a list of references as either
non-academic text. footnotes or endnotes is a very important
- Academic texts are critical, objective aspect of an academic text.
and specialized texts that are written ● It is essential to always acknowledge the
by professionals or experts in a given source of any ideas, research findings, data,
ACADEMIC field using formal language. or quoted text that have been used in a paper
- These are based on facts with a solid
basis.
as a defense against allegations of
plagiarism.
○ APA (American Psychological
ACADEMIC TEXTS Association) format
1. Essay
2. Research paper 5) COMPLEXITY
3. Report ● An academic text addresses complex
4. Project issues that require higher-order thinking
5. Article skills to comprehend.
6. Thesis ○ The readers need to read between the
7. Dissertation lines.
○ You make the readers analyze, not
NATURE AND CHARACTERISTICS OF AN ACADEMIC TEXT confuse them.
1) STRUCTURE ○ A technical word may be defined by the
● The basic structure that is used by an contextual clues in the text.
academic text consists of three (3) parts:
introduction, body, and conclusion which is 6) EVIDENCE-BASED ARGUMENTS
formal and logical. ● What is valued in an academic text is that
● This kind of structure enables the reader to opinions are based on a sound understanding
follow the argument and navigate the text. (suggested understanding) of the pertinent
● In academic writing, a clear structure and a body of knowledge (general knowledge) and
logical flow are imperative to a cohesive academic debates that exist within, and
text. often external to a specific discipline.

2) TONE 7) THESIS DRIVEN


● The overall tone refers to the attitude ● The starting point of an academic text is
conveyed in a piece of writing. a particular perspective, idea or position
● The arguments of others are fairly presented applied to the chosen research problem, such
and with an appropriate narrative tone. as establishing, proving, or disproving
solutions to the questions posed for the topic.
Non-Academic Other examples of one verb over two-word
Characteristics Academic Text
Text verbs:
Audience Academia Mass Public James added up the number
Calculate
Inform, entertain of attendees in his party.
Inform the readers
Purpose or persuade the
with solid evidence Purchase
readers The large company bought
(someone’s
Personal, out the smaller ones.
Formal and impressionistic,
assets)
Style
impersonal emotional or The teacher was to call off
subjective
Cancel the noisy students
Structure Standard Structure No rigid structure immediately.
Formal language
Informal and The meeting will carry on
Language avoids Continue
casual language even without your presence.
colloquialisms
Shared historical The purpose of this meeting
events or literature Personal life and is to find out what would
Subject/Content
or other forms of everyday events Discover
be your idea about our new
knowledge
project.

FEATURES OF ACADEMIC TEXT 3. Precise


1. Complex
- Facts are given accurately and precisely.
- Written language has no longer words, it is
- Straight to the point.
lexically more varied vocabulary.
- Written texts are shorter and the language
4. Objective
has more grammatical complexity, including
- The focus of the information is on the topic
more subordinate clauses and more
rather than the writer himself/herself.
passives.
- It has fewer words that emphasize the
- Subordinate clause is a clause that cannot
information you want to give and the
stand alone as a complete sentence; it
arguments you want to make.
merely complements a sentence's main
- Avoid using personal pronouns.
clause, thereby adding to the whole unit of
meaning.
- In the passive voice, the action’s target is the

- Point of view: third person.

✅ We disseminated the information.


The researchers disseminated the
focus, and the verb acts upon the subject. Or,
information.
to put it in the passive voice, the subject is
- Avoid using too many rhetorical questions.
acted upon by the verb.

2. Formal

- Avoid emoted language.
The bystanders were shocked to witness
- Dignified Stance in writing.
- Should avoid colloquial words and

the crime scene.
The bystanders did not expect what they
witnessed in the crime scene.
expressions.

❎ Don’t
Do not

- Expanded forms over contracted forms.

✅ ✅Shouldn’t
Should not
5. Explicit
- The clarity of the writing structure.
- Clear and precise language.

- One-word verb over two-word verb.

✅ Mess up
Ruin or damage
- It is the responsibility of the writer in English
to make it clear to the reader how the
various parts of the text are related.

✅ Dept. ❎
- Avoid using abbreviations.

✅Est.
- To achieve clarity, use conjunctions and
connections (transitional devices).


Department
Ave.
Avenue
❎Established
ASAP, BRB, GTG,
LOL
Example: Schools hope to provide quality
education to the learners. However, having
this COVID-19 pandemic requires a lot of
- Avoid colloquial and idiomatic
effort to reach out to students.

expressions

✅ Kinda ❎
✅Sorta



Kind of
Gonna/gotta
Going to
Sort of
6. Accurate
- It uses vocabulary accurately.
- Most subjects have words with narrow
specific meanings.
7. Hedging ACADEMIC LANGUAGE
- This refers to how a writer expresses ● Academic language is different from everyday
certainty and uncertainty. social language.
- Often in academic writing, a writer may not be ● It is the vocabulary students or adults must
sure of the claims that are being made in their learn to succeed in the classroom or in the
subject area, or perhaps the ideas are good workplace.
but the evidence is not very strong. ● We use academic language to describe and
- It is necessary to make a decision about comprehend complex ideas, process
your stance on a particular subject, or the higher-order thinking, and understand abstract
strength of the claims you are making. concepts.
● Academic language is what students read
8. Responsible in textbooks and on tests and what they
- You must be responsible for and must be hear during instruction in the classroom.
able to provide evidence and justification ● Students with limited or low academic
for any claims you make. language skills are more than likely to have
low academic performance in classroom
9. Organized settings.
- Well-organized
- It flows easily from one section to the next Social Language Academic Language
in a logical fashion.
In everyday In textbooks, research
interactions in papers, conferences in
10. Planned spoken/written form spoken/written form
- We can say that an academic text is
well-planned if the features from 1st to 9th For everyday Used in school/work
conversation conversations
are achieved.
- It usually takes place after research and Used to write to Appropriate for written
evaluation according to specific purpose and friends, family, or for papers, classwork, and
other social purposes homework
plan.
Very formal and more
Informal, such as words sophisticates in its
ACADEMIC LANGUAGE like “cool,” “guy,” expressions, such as words
■ It is the language needed by the students to “kidding” like “appropriate,” “studies,”
do the work in schools. and “implementation”
■ It includes, for example, discipline-specific Can use slang
Don’t use slang
vocabulary, grammar and punctuation, and expressions
applications of rhetorical conventions and Can be repetitive Uses a variety of terms
devices that are typical for a content area. Can use phrases Uses of sentences
■ Why is academic language so important?
Sentences don’t follow
○ Students who master academic language Sentences begin with
grammar conventions
are more likely to be successful in appropriate transitions, like
necessarily, with phrases
academic and professional settings. “moreover” or “in addition”
like “you’re hungry?”
(Social & Academic Language Acquisition: Differences &
Characteristics, 2020)
DIFFERENCE BETWEEN ACADEMIC AND SOCIAL LANGUAGE
FOUR FEATURES OF LANGUAGE
SOCIAL LANGUAGE
● It is the set of vocabulary that allows us to
1) FORMALITY
communicate with others in the context of ● Formality reflects your dignified stance in
regular daily conversation. writing as a member of an academic
● Social language is the simple, informal language community.
we use when talking face to face with family ● This means that in your writing, you
members and friends. should avoid colloquial words and
● It allows us to use contemporary or slang expressions.
terms like “cool,” “awesome,” or “dude.” ● The language used requires precision to
● We can also communicate feelings, needs, and make it a legitimate piece of writing.
wants using symbolic hand gestures for drink,
eat, hot, cold, hurt, or tired. Formality can be achieved through the
● Social language also includes writing emails, following ways:
friendly letters, and texts or retelling stories. 1. Choosing expanded modal forms
over contracted forms, such as
using cannot instead of can’t, do not 3) EXPLICITNESS
instead of don’t. ● Explicitness in academic writing demands the
2. Choosing one verb form over use of signposts that allow readers to trace the
two-word verbs, such as damage relationships in the parts of the study.
instead of mess up. ● If you intend to show a change in your line
3. Choosing expanded terms over their of argument, make it clear by using however.
abbreviated equivalents, such as as
soon as possible instead of ASAP. EXAMPLES
4. Avoiding colloquial / idiomatic Statement 1. It is apparent that the school
expressions, such as kind of like, as a institutions hope to provide quality education
matter of fact, sort of. to the learners.

Statement 2. Having this COVID-19 pandemic


2) OBJECTIVITY requires a lot of effort to reach out to students.
● Objectivity means that the focus of the
information is on the topic rather on the
writer itself.
✅ It is apparent that the
hope to provide quality
school institutions
education to the
● Written language should not be personal but learners. However, having this COVID-19
rather a general objective. pandemic requires a lot of effort to reach out to
students.
It can be achieved by:
Avoiding the use of personal Statement 1. Dana appreciated the beautiful
pronouns such as you, I, my, and we. painting.

You need to follow Statement 2. A poem would be a finer gift.


Poor example:
1 instructions.
The researchers
✅ Dana appreciated the beautiful painting.
Nevertheless, a poem would be a finer gift
Improved version: need to follow
instructions. The following phrases may be useful in making
ideas explicit:
Avoiding rhetorical questions
because academic writing should not 1. This is due to the… A number of
assume that the readers know the MERALCO consumers trooped to the
answer in the statement and the author City Hall to claim a P500 cash
should express the information strongly incentive. This is due to the Supreme
and clearly. Court ruling that overcharges must be
2 returned to the end users whose electric
How can these consumption for the April-May period was
Poor example:
problems be solved? below 100kw/hr.
2. This resulted in… With the Supreme
Certain procedures Court ordering MERALCO to return
Improved version: must be discovered overcharges to the end users,
to solve problems. government offices have been tapped to
operate as claim centers. This resulted
in a number of MERALCO consumers
Avoiding emotive language that
trooping to the City Hall to claim the
shows biases. Giving an overly
P500 cash incentive.
favorable opinion of someone can
eliminate objectivity.
When two ideas seem the same, express
The police each one clearly.
3 investigators were ○ The study showed that eighty percent of
Poor example: the 200 participants involved in the study
shocked to see the
outcome of the tests. were dissatisfied with the operations of
MERALCO.
The police ○ Similarly, the data revealed that the
Improved version: investigators did not majority of the participants were not
expect the results. aware of the charges imposed on them
by MERALCO.
If you intend to give extra information Lesson 2

STRUCTURE OF ACADEMIC TEXT


in your sentence, make it clear by
writing “In addition...”
○ MERALCO has been operating as a
business conglomerate involving
PURPOSES
foreign stakeholders and independent
1. To inform
power producers or IPP.
2. To persuade
○ In addition, MERALCO owns major
3. To argue
IPPs operating in the region.
To assure the quality deliverance of the
If you are giving examples, do so explicitly
message of our academic text to our readers,
by writing “For example…”
we have to ensure that our text is
○ The MERALCO issue has led to
WELL-STRUCTURED.
disputes between opposition and
administration senators.
○ For example, those who have been STRUCTURE
labeled as against the president ■ The action of building: CONSTRUCTION.
considered the issue as the ■ A text that is arranged in a definite pattern of
administration/s way of avoiding the organization.
NBN-ZTE scandal. ■ The arrangement of the parts.
■ Structure is an important feature of academic
4) CAUTION writing. A well-structured text enables the
● Caution in academic writing requires care reader to follow the argument and navigate the
since knowledge is built on proven theories text.
and concepts. ■ In academic writing, a clear structure and a
● Caution is needed to avoid sweeping logical flow are imperative to a cohesive text.
generalizations. ■ Meaning is actually mapped onto the structure
of language.
EXAMPLE ■ While most pieces of non-academic texts follow
Government officials are corrupt. the same or similar general organizational
patterns, different academic texts can have
The statement is not completely true and the different text structures.
rhetorical impact of the statement may be ■ An academic text may present a main idea and
misleading. The statement can be improved then details, a cause and then its effects, an
through the use of devices such as modal effect and the causes, two different views of a
verbs, adverbs, or verbs. topic, etc.

Improved versions: ALL ACADEMIC TEXTS ARE ESSAYS


Some government officials may be corrupt.
1) Reaction Paper
Corruption is commonly linked to some key
● Essay with your response about something
government officials.
you have seen, watched, or experienced.
● To provide valuable information for an
audience.

2) Position Paper
● Essay with your arguments about a
debatable issue.
● Supported with valid evidence from credible
sources.

TWO COMMON STRUCTURES OF ACADEMIC TEXT


(1) THREE-PART STRUCTURE
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● It may define, give examples, or provide (2) IMRaD STRUCTURE
statistical information about JUVENILE I for Introduction
DELINQUENCY (example lang) which will ● The introduction details the
allow the readers to better understand the ○ purpose of the research,
arguments you will discuss about the topic. ○ the research question, and
● Its purpose is to clearly tell the reader the ○ the hypothesis or hypotheses.
topic, purpose and structure of the paper. ● This may include a discussion of the
● As a rough guide, an introduction might be current state of research in the field, with
between 10 and 20 percent of the length of an explanation of how the author’s study
the whole paper. augments or fills a gap in that research.
Three (3) Main Parts of Introduction (a) What is the problem?
(a) The most general information, such as (b) Why do you want to study the problem?
background and/or definitions. (c) What did other researchers find about
(b) The core of the introduction, where the problem?
you show the overall topic, purpose, your
point of view, hypotheses and/or M for Methods
research questions (depending on what ● The methods section describes the manner
kind of paper it is); and describing the in which the author conducted their study.
scope and structure of your paper. ● This may include when and where the study
(c) The most specific information. was done, what materials were used, who
was involved, and whether quantitative or
Body qualitative methods (or a mixture of the two)
● This is where the writer discusses the topic were used.
elaborately by giving definitions, classifica-
tions, explanations, contrasts, examples and (a) How did you gather the data?
evidence. (b) When and where did you gather the
● It contains the major points to discuss the data? Who are your respondents?
topic. (c) What instrument/s did you use?
● This is considered as the heart of the essay
because it expounds the specific ideas for the R for Results
readers to have a better understanding of the ● The results section reports the research
topic. findings.
● This is usually the longest part of the ● This may include tables and/or graphs, with
essay/academic text. the text pointing the reader to the most
important or noteworthy information.
Conclusion
● This is where the writer closes his/her (a) What are your findings?
essay. (b) What have you collected?
● Briefly summarizes the author’s major (c) Did you find what you are looking for?
points.
● Usually has a closing statement. D for Discussion
● The conclusion is closely related to the ● The discussion summarizes and analyzes
introduction and is often described as its the main research findings and connects
‘mirror image’. these findings to existing research.
● This means that if the introduction begins with ● The author may acknowledge the flaws and
general information and ends with specific limitations of the study and posit any
information, the conclusion moves in the necessary future research.
opposite direction.
● The conclusion usually begins by briefly (a) What is the meaning of the result?
summarizing the main scope or structure (b) What interpretations have you gained
of the paper, confirms the topic that was from the result?
given in the introduction, and ends with a (c) What future actions/s do you
more general statement about how this recommend?
topic relates to its context.
● This may take the form of an evaluation of
the importance of the topic, implications for
future research or a recommendation about
theory or practice.
IMRaD Structure vs. Thesis Format STRUCTURE OF ACADEMIC TEXT
■ It refers to the construction or arrangement of
IMRaD STRUCTURE the parts of the text.
■ Text structure refers to the way an author
arranges information in his writing.
■ Text structure provides the format and enables
writers to organize their thoughts as they
write.
■ It also helps the reader in a way that it provides
a structure in which information can be found
and understood while it is being read.

REVIEW

1. It is the language that should be used in writing


academic texts. FORMAL LANGUAGE
2. It serves as the writer’s goal in writing an
academic text. PURPOSE
3. It is a feature of language that requires you to
be careful of your writing. PURPOSE
4. It is a feature of academic language which
prohibits you to include emotions in the text.
OBJECTIVITY
5. This refers to the attitude conveyed in a piece of
writing. TONE

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Lesson 3 (2) CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER/SEQUENCING

USING KNOWLEDGE OF TEXT ● A chronological pattern of organization


arranges information according to a
STRUCTURE TO GLEAN INFORMATION progress of time, either forward or
backward.
TEXT STRUCTURE ● It answers the question ‘What happened?’
and ‘What happened next?
■ A text that is arranged in a definite pattern of ● A topic is best understood in terms of
organization. different segments of time when a
■ Generally, it is composed of text types, parts, chronological format works well.
transition words and phrases, patterns of ● How will this pattern work well?
organization, sentences, and paragraphs. ○ This is through driving the topic into
“past-present-future” or
“before-during-after segments.
Common Types of Text
Patterns of Organization
Structures
1. Comparison/Contrast 1. Comparison/Contrast Signal Words Example
2. Chronological 2. Chronological First, second, later, A morning in the life of a
Order/Sequence Order/Sequence before, next, as soon Disney princess. First, I fix
3. Cause and Effect 3. Cause and Effect as, after, then, finally. my hair before I fix my bed.
4. Spatial/Description 4. Spatial/Description meanwhile, Then, I open the curtains as I
5. Problem-Solution 5. Problem-Solution following, last, open my beautiful voice to
6. Classification and during, in, on, until sing, ‘I’ve been dreaming of a
Division true love's kiss…’ After this, I
7. Advantage and went straight to the bathroom
Disadvantages to fix myself using these
8. Exemplification and thingamabobs. Lastly, I went
Enumeration to the doorstep and knocked,
9. Pro’s and Con’s then I will ask my sister if she
10. Topical Pattern wants to build a snowman.”

PATTERNS OF ORGANIZATION (3) CAUSE AND EFFECT


(1) COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ● This pattern is used to show the different
● A compare and contrast pattern arranges causes and effects of various
information according to how two or more conditions.
things are either similar to or different ● Cause and effect is one way of organizing
from one another. information in a text.
● It explains reasons why something
happened.
Signal Words Example ● It can be ordered as cause to effect or vice
Like, Similar to, Also, Mangoes and durians are versa.
Unlike, Similarly, Same both fruits. They both have ● It is generally used in expository and
way, Compared to, In seeds inside of them. persuasive writing modes.
contrast, on the Each has a skin, ● This pattern is particularly effective
contrary, however, but, (COMPARISON)
when writing a persuasive document in
on the other hand,
While, at the same time but durian skins are thick which the writer advocates some action to
and difficult to peel. solve a problem, because it demonstrates
Mango skins are thinner important relationships between
and peel easily. Durians variables.
have a distinct stench
while mangoes have a
sweet smell, Signal Words Example
(CONTRAST) Causes: because, Many people think that they
because of, for, since, can acquire illness by going
but both fruits are stems from, one cause into. cold weather
delicious. is, one reason is, improperly dressed.
(COMPARISON) leads to, causes,
creates, yields, However, illnesses are not
produces, due to, caused by temperature.
breeds, for this reason They are caused by germs.
(CAUSE)
Effects: consequently,
results in, one result So, trembling outside in the
is, therefore, thus, as cold probably won’t opinion or behavior by establishing that a
a result, hence strengthen your immune problem exists, then providing a solution.
system, but you are likely to
acquire illness outdoors
(EFFECT) Signal Words Example

because you will greatly be Because, so, so that, It seems like there has
exposed to germs. if…then, consequently, been a surge in teen
(CAUSE) thus, since, for, for this pregnancies these days.
reason, as a result of, (PROBLEM)
therefore, due to, this is
(4) SPATIAL/DESCRIPTION how, nevertheless, and Teen pregnancies make
● This pattern of organization arranges accordingly. it very difficult for young
mothers to pursue their
information according to how things fit dreams and meet the
together in physical space. demands of an infant.
● Spatial organization may also be called
descriptive writing and it is most Fortunately, most teen
frequently used when the narrator pregnancies can be
describes how something looks. easily prevented by
● This pattern works well when a writer using birth control;
wishes to create a mental picture of (SOLUTION)
something which has various parts however, even birth
distinguished by physical location. control is not 100%
effective.
(PROBLEM)
Example
“I am sitting along the beautiful sandbars of The most effective way
Boracay. I am seeing the beautiful sun that sets to prevent teen
along with the gradient color of red and orange sky pregnancies is
that meets the sea; and with birds that’s flying high. abstinence, which is
While I feel the cold wind breezes onto my skin as I 100% effective.
was being surrounded with palm trees.” (SOLUTION)

(6) CLASSIFICATION AND DIVISION


● Classification and division is a rhetorical
style that, in essay format, takes a whole
and splits it up into parts and then
places the divided information into
various categories.
● It combines two different techniques.
○ First, you would divide a complex and
difficult topic into subtopics for clarity
A spatial/description should create a mental picture and explanation purposes.
in the readers’ minds. The example of ○ Next, you would determine what
spatial/description pattern of organization pertains categories are needed and what
to the picture above.
information fits into those categories.
● You have to be very clear in a
(5) PROBLEM-SOLUTION classification and division essay. Your
● Problem and Solution is a pattern of reader needs to understand how you
organization where information in a came up with your categories and why
passage is expressed as a dilemma or information fits into these categories.
concerning an issue (a problem).
● And something that was, can be, or Signal Words Example
should be done to remedy this issue
(solution or attempted solution). First, finally, to begin, Think of a newspaper. All of
next, in addition, on the information is divided into
● This type of text is usually interchanged the other hand, for different parts: news,
with cause and effect type of structure but example, then advertisements, and
the only thing that they should remember classifieds.
is that cause and effect text structure do
not offer a solution. Then the information is
● The pattern is designed to compel the classified into different
reader to make some kind of change in categories. For example,
news may be categorized as REVIEW
sports, international, local,
lifestyle, etc. 1. This type of structure sets up a dilemma,
explains the remedy, and discusses the effect of
(7) ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE the remedy. PROBLEM AND SOLUTION
● This pattern organizes information about a 2. This structure presents the causal relationship
topic by dividing it up into its "good" and between a specific event, idea, or concept.
"bad" parts, or pro's and con's. CAUSE AND EFFECT
● It is effective to use when a writer wishes 3. This type of text structure features a detailed
to objectively discuss both sides of an description of someone or something to give the
issue without taking a persuasive reader a mental picture.
stance. SPATIAL/DESCRIPTION
● This allows the reader to weigh both 4. This structure gives readers a progression of
sides of an issue. events or a list of steps in a procedure.
CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER/SEQUENCING

Example WORD HUNT


Advantages and Disadvantages of attending a
two-year course in college. 1. It is an act of stating something again or
differently. RESTATEMENT
One way to arrange the information is to divide it
into two main sections, one for the advantages and 2. It is a general description or plan giving the
one for the disadvantages. In this scenario, the essential features of something but not all the
information contained within each main section will detail: a skeleton of something. OUTLINE
represent the specific topics of analysis (cost,
accessibility, short, period of class schedule; limited
3. It refers to the capability of understanding
educational program, quality of instruction) something. COMPREHENSION
4. It is the most important thought about the topic.
(8) EXEMPLIFICATION AND ENUMERATION MAIN IDEA
● Exemplification uses one or more 5. It refers to a non-fiction writing that is produced
particular cases, or examples, to as part of academic work. ACADEMIC TEXT
illustrate or explain a general point or an 6. It refers to the information to clarify, prove, or
abstract concept. explain the main idea. SUPPORTING DETAIL
● While Enumeration means counting or 7. It is the act of composing a text. WRITING
reciting numbers or a numbered list. It’s 8. It refers to extracting the essential meaning of
a rhetorical device that occurs when a
something. DISTILLING
writer chooses to list out items, events,
ideas, or other parts of a story/setting. 9. It means extremely important. ESSENTIAL
10. It is an exchange of diverging or opposite views.
ARGUMENTS
(9) TOPICAL PATTERN
● A topical pattern is one of the most
= SUMMARIZING
commonly used patterns in all writing.
● Essentially, this is a great organizational
pattern to use if you are having difficulty
finding another pattern that will work well.
○ Best alternative pattern of
organization to use.
● One topic is often broken up into multiple
subtopics, making it easier for the reader
to follow along.
Lesson 4

USING VARIOUS TECHNIQUES IN


4. Outline the writer’s argument.
5. Summarizing in chronological order.
SUMMARIZING ACADEMIC TEXTS EXAMPLE 1
A typhoon is a powerful, twisting hurricane. It
SUMMARY begins high in the air, among the winds of a giant
storm cloud. People who have watched a typhoon’s
■ It is a brief statement or restatement of main howling winds reach down from the sky have said
points. it’s the most frightening thing they have ever seen.
■ Summarizing a text, or distilling its essential In some parts of the Philippines, these tropical
concepts into a paragraph or two, is a useful storms are called cyclones.
study tool, as well as good writing practice.
■ Summaries are not a place for your SENTENCE SUMMARY
opinions, background knowledge, and Typhoons are frightening, powerful, twisting
personal information. hurricanes sometimes called cyclones that start in
■ Summaries can range in length from two giant clouds.
sentences to several pages.
■ In any case, use complete sentences to
describe an author’s general points to your
EXAMPLE 2
reader. Tornadoes are not the only windstorms that move
■ Do not quote extensively. through earth’s air. Dust devils, hurricanes and
■ If you quote, use quotation marks and typhoons all have twisting winds, but they are
document the quotation. different from tornadoes in important ways.
■ If you fail to document the quotation, even one
word that author usd, you are plagiarizing SENTENCE SUMMARY
material. Dust devils, hurricanes and typhoons also have
twisting winds, but they are different from
tornadoes.
EXAMPLES OF SUMMARIZING
● When retelling a move
● When recalling how your day was VARIOUS TECHNIQUES IN SUMMARIZING A VARIETY OF ACADEMIC
● When telling stories about your love life TEXT
1. Read the work first to understand the author’s
TWO AIM OF SUMMARIZING intent.
1. To reproduce the main idea and the key 2. Present information through facts, skills and
points of text. concepts in visual formats.
2. To restate these in as few words as possible. 3. To avoid difficulty, you need first to know the
main points and the supporting details.
4. Analyze the text to save time in thinking about
Main Idea Key Point what you will do.
It is the topic of the These are arguments 5. Think about what information you will put in
text. used to explain the main your summary.
idea. 6. Restate the words into different ones.
7. You willfully understand what the document
BENEFITS OF SUMMARIZING is, when you organize all ideas.
1. It helps you learn to identify key ideas of a 8. Write down all information in a coherent and
text and ignore irrelevant information. precise form.
2. It improves our memory and by extension, our 9. Represent information through using
comprehension. dimensional constructions in representing
3. It is an effective tool to self-evaluate what is concepts, skills, or facts.
understood about the original text. 10. Paraphrasing is one of the skills you can do in
writing a summary.
SUMMARIZING TIPS
1. Read the text very carefully SUMMARIZING TECHNIQUES
2. Highlight, underline, or jot down what you 1. Somebody Wanted But So Then
think is the main point of the text. 2. SAAC Method
3. Ask yourself these questions: 3. 5Ws, 1H
- What is the main idea? 4. First, Then ,Finally
- What are the crucial details necessary for 5. Give me the Gist
supporting the ideas?
1) SOMEBODY WANTED BUT SO THEN Who The tortoise

Somebody Who is the story about? He raced a quick, boastful hare


What
and won
What does the main character
Wanted When A long time ago
want?
Identify a problem that the main Where Where did the story happen?
But
character encounters. The tortoise was tired of hearing
Why
How does the main character the hare boast about his speed
So
solve the problem? The tortoise kept up his slow but
How
Then Tell how the story ends. steady pace.

Somebody Cinderella The tortoise got tired of listening to the hare


boasting about how fast he was, so he
Wanted She wants to go to the ball
challenged the hare to a race. Even though he
But Her stepmother forbids her to go. was slower than the hare, he won by keeping up
Cinderella’s fairy godmother his slow and steady pace. The hare stopped to
So take a nap.
helped her to go to the ball.
She met the prince and they fell in
Then 4) FIRST, THEN, FINALLY
love with each other.
What happened first?
2) SAAC METHOD First
Include the main character and
What is the name of the article, the main event/action.
State
book, or story? What happened next?
What is the name of the Then
Assign Include key details that occur
author?
Action What is the author doing? during the event/action.
Complete the sentence or What were the results of the
Finally
Complete summary with keywords and event/action?
important details.
First, there is a very beautiful
mortal named Psyche. She is so
State The Necklace beautiful that Aphrodite planned to
First
Assign Guy de Maupassant make her life miserable by
commanding his son Apollo to
Narrating/Telling in a Third make her fall in love.
Action
person point of view
But then, little did Apollo know, he
It is the story of a beautiful young Then would fall in love with this beautiful
woman born to a non-wealthy maiden.
family; she marries but dreams of
Complete Finally, Aphrodite’s plan didn’t
an affluent life. Unfortunately,
these dreams of a different life work out as planned because
Finally
eventually lead to her downfall. Apollo is secretly helping Psyche
to overcome these challenges.

3) 5Ws, 1H
5) GIVE ME THE GIST
Who Who is the story about?
● The gist is simply the essential meaning of
What What did they do?
a text or statement.
When did the action take ● It is different from a summary, which is an
When accounting of the main points of
place?
something.
Where Where did the story happen?
Why did the main character do
Why Gist Summary
what he/she did?
How did the main character do A gist has the nuance Whereas summary has
How of the core meaning the nuance of
what he/ she did?
or heart of an idea. including all the
bullet points.
1) T-CHART
TWO MAIN TECHNIQUES IN SUMMARIZING AN ACADEMIC TEXT
1. Reference Citation
2. Graphic Organizer

1) REFERENCE CITATION
REFERENCE CITATION
It means the source or It means mentioning or
the author’s name. recognizing.

Has two (2) formats.


Format 1 has the author's
citation in the body of the
sentence.

Format 2 has the author’s


citation in Brackets.

EXAMPLE
From 93 million in 2015, the country has a total
population of 103.3 million today. This number is ● Comparison and Contrast
composed of 15% senior citizens, 49.5% youth ● Cause and Effect
(14-40 years old), 20.5% other adults (41-59 years ● Mnemonics/Acronyms
old), and 15% children (13 years old and below).
These percentages are estimates as they change 2) GRID
through mortality and aging.” Cojuanco, N. (2016).
Various Sectors of the Philippines, page 5

The Philippines has a population of 103.3 million,


composed of senior citizens, mid-life adults,
children and the youth as the biggest fraction.

AUTHOR CITATION IN THE BODY OF THE SENTENCE

Cojuanco (2016) states that the Philippines has a


population of 103.3 million, composed of senior
citizens, mid-life adults, children and the youth as
the biggest fraction.

According to Cojuanco (2016)…


Conjuanco (2016) stated that… ● Comparison and Contrast
● Changes overtime
● Charts
AUTHOR CITATION IN BRACKETS
3) SPIDER MAP
The Philippines has a population of 103.3 million,
composed of senior citizens, mid-life adults,
children and the youth as the biggest fraction
(Cojuanco, 2016).

2) GRAPHIC ORGANIZER
These are shapes, lines, figures, drawings, or
sketches that are used to make a visual
display or key information.

● Brainstorming Ideas
● Vocabulary
● Example of a Central Topic
4) TIMELINE

● Historical Events
● Sequencing
● Biography

5) TABLE

● All types of data

6) VENN DIAGRAM
● Comparison/Contrast

7) H-GRAPH
● Comparison/Contrast

8) FISHBONE
● Cause and Effect

9) PIE GRAPH
● Fractions

10) BAR/LINE GRAPH


● Fractions
REVIEW FROM LAST TUESDAY
➢ KEY POINTS

Which of the following is not included in the


(NOT THE EXACT QUESTIONS) introduction?
➢ MOST VITAL INFORMATION
Chaim is writing an academic text about the
➢ MOST SPECIFIC INFORMATION
ecosystem. She is struggling on which pattern of
organization she should apply to her text. What ➢ CORE ESSENTIAL INFORMATION (The most
kind of PoG should she use? vital information is already included here in core
info)
➢ TOPICAL PATTERN because it is the best
alternative PoD when you can’t think of a good ➢ MOST GENERAL INFORMATION
one to use.
A characteristic of academic text that allows the
It pertains to the restatement of the main points. reader to follow the text.

➢ GIST ➢ STRUCTURE

It is a summarizing technique that gives the It is a summarizing technique that is similar to


essential idea or meaning of a text. chronological order.

➢ GIVE ME THE GIST ➢ FIRST, THEN, FINALLY

What part of the IMRAD structure describes how Mobile phones are used to communicate with your
the author conducted the study? loved ones. However, they are also a hindrance in
socializing with other people. What pattern of
➢ METHODS organization was used?

What part of the IMRAD structure reports the ➢ ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
findings of the study?
A starting point that depends on a particular idea.
➢ RESULTS
➢ THESIS-DRIVEN
A characteristic of academic text that allows
readers to use higher order of thinking. A pattern of organization that paints a vivid mental
picture to the readers.
➢ COMPLEXITY
➢ SPATIAL / DESCRIPTION
It refers to the footnotes or endnotes.
In IMRAD structure, when the writer writes the
➢ CITATIONS meaning of the results, what part is it in?

A pattern of organization that arranges how ➢ DISCUSSIONS


something looks in a physical space.
What part of the IMRAD structure highlights the
➢ SPATIAL / DESCRIPTION research question/s, research topic, and the
hypothesis?
A pattern of organization that compels the readers
to take action by stating that a dilemma exists. ➢ INTRODUCTION

➢ PROBLEM-SOLUTION What do you mean by the gist of a text?

The other aim of summarizing is to generate new ➢ CENTRAL TOPIC OF THE TEXT
ideas and key points.
A venn diagram is best used for?
➢ FALSE because it should be “to restate main
ideas and key points.” ➢ COMPARISON / CONTRAST

The largest part of an essay is the conclusion. A critical, objective paper written by a professional?

➢ FALSE because the largest part of an essay is ➢ ACADEMIC TEXT


the body where the main ideas or main points
are explained. A pattern of organization that counts or recites
numbers or a numbered list.
These are the arguments used to explain the main ➢ ENUMERATION
idea of the text.
It refers to the attitude conveyed by the text.
➢ TONE

A text structure used in thesis or research.


➢ IMRAD STRUCTURE

What point of view should an academic text use?


➢ 3RD PERSON POV

It refers to the construction or arrangement of the


parts of an academic text.
➢ STRUCTURE OF AN ACADEMIC TEXT

A feature of an academic text that shows the


writer’s certainty or uncertainty on the topic
➢ HEDGING

All academic texts are basically essays.


➢ TRUE

Students who memorize academic language are


more likely to succeed.

➢ FALSE because the word “memorize” should


be “master.”

Exemplification and Enumeration can be used with


other patterns of organization.
➢ TRUE

Summarizing aims to restate the original text in


fewer words.
➢ TRUE

Exemplification cites examples to explain the


abstract.
➢ TRUE

Summarizing a story can be used to retell the


whole story.
➢ TRUE

Colloquial words can be used as long as they are


backed up by evidence.
➢ FALSE because colloquial words or slang
should not be used in academic texts.

Objectivity reflects the author’s dignified stance.


➢ FALSE because it should be “Formality”

Sitting alone during the sunset by the beach.


➢ SPATIAL / DESCRIPTION
QUIZ 1
This reflects the dignified stance of the author in
writing.
“Men are naturally polygamous” Which feature of ➢ FORMAL
academic language is being violated?
What do we call it when we use the attributes of
➢ ACCURATE/CAUTION/OBJECTIVE one to generalize the whole??
What do you call a specialized text written by ➢ SWEEPING GENERALIZATION / HASTY
experts? GENERALIZATION
➢ ACADEMIC TEXT It is a feature of academic language that required
care since knowledge is built from proven theories
“The researchers are kinda confused about their and concepts.
topic” What feature of academic text is being
violated in this text? ➢ CAUTION
➢ FORMAL Before the reader analyzes your academic text,
what is the first thing that your reader will notice in
It’s a set of vocabularies being used in the face of your academic text?
communication in the context of daily conversation.
➢ GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION
➢ SOCIAL LANGUAGE
[Contradiction] Bowling is a sport in which the
Sasa always makes sure to give credit for the texts player with the highest score wins _______, the
she uses as evidence for her position paper. What goal in golf is to get the lowest score
characteristics of academic text is she utilizing?
➢ HOWEVER
➢ CITATION
[Summary/Conclusion] The schedule of every
What do you call a text that is subjective in nature? subject was shortened, as well as the end-of-day
➢ NON-ACADEMIC TEXT schedule ______, it’s clearly time to consider some
changes.
“The author yearns to cajole the readers to discern ➢ GIVEN THESE POINTS
his stance” In this statement, what characteristic of
academic text is violated? This feature of academic text talks about the clarity
➢ LANGUAGE of the writing structure
➢ EXPLICIT
Lulu is Lala’s friend. Lele, Lala’s younger sister,
would like to make an academic text that can make
her readers analyze her text, and utilize their
critical thinking skills. What characteristic of Use at your own discretion. Thank you Symmon
academic text should Lele utilize more? and Gerald!
➢ COMPLEXITY

What do you call a characteristic of academic text


that tells the author that opinions should be based
on suggested understanding of the pertinent body
of knowledge?
➢ EVIDENCE-BASED ARGUMENTS

A feature of academic text that states that the


writer should use lexical vocabulary.
➢ COMPLEX

Aside from using varied terminologies, what are.


other terms that we can use to avoid redundancy?
➢ SUBORDINATE CLAUSES

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