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Here's an example of a clear thesis statement for the topic: The impact of social media on

society.

"The pervasive influence of social media has significantly altered societal dynamics, shaping
public discourse, interpersonal relationships, and even individual self-perception. While it has
undeniably facilitated communication and information-sharing, the negative consequences, such
as the erosion of privacy and the propagation of misinformation, demand a thoughtful
examination of how we navigate this digital landscape to ensure a more balanced and informed
society."

In this thesis statement:

Clarity:
The language is clear and easy to understand. It effectively
communicates the main idea without unnecessary complexity.
Specificity:
The thesis statement is specific, addressing the impact of social media on
societal dynamics, public discourse, interpersonal relationships, individual self-
perception, privacy, and the spread of misinformation.
Conciseness:
The thesis is concise, providing a comprehensive overview of the main
points without being overly lengthy.
Position/Argument:
The writer clearly expresses a stance on the impact of social media,
acknowledging both positive and negative consequences.
Roadmap:
The thesis provides a roadmap for the essay by indicating the main
aspects that will be explored, such as public discourse, interpersonal
relationships, privacy concerns, and misinformation.
Debatable Language:
The language is debatable, acknowledging both positive and negative
aspects of social media and suggesting that a thoughtful examination is needed.
Acknowledgment of Complexity:
The thesis acknowledges the complexity of the issue by recognizing both
positive and negative consequences of social media.
Strong Verbs:
Strong verbs like "altered," "shaping," and "demand" contribute to the
assertiveness and impact of the thesis.
Avoidance of First Person:
The thesis avoids the use of the first person and maintains an objective
and formal tone.
Parallel Structure:
The parallel structure is evident in the listing of the various impacts of
social media, contributing to the coherence of the statement.
Language Precision:
The language is precise, using terms like "erosion of privacy" and
"propagation of misinformation" to convey specific ideas.

TASK: Create thesis statements for the following essay topics: (50-60
words).
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