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WD INTERVIEW
T
he first thing that strikes you about Karin It was something that I had wanted to write about and
Slaughter is how down to earth she is. She was on my mind, especially because I heard police officers
doesn’t really need to be—she’s a bestselling talking about it, and they were more afraid of domestic
author whose crime thrillers have been published terrorists than terrorists from outside America; that it was
in 37 languages, 120 countries, and sold 35 million copies becoming a real issue and that people were mostly afraid
around the globe. Three of her novels are in production because the tactics of domestic terrorists have started to
for film and television. mirror the tactics of international terrorism, where you
Slaughter is an incredibly successful writer by any really cannot predict what’s going to happen. You can’t tell
measure. She’s been turning out a novel (or more) per the difference between the loser who’s complaining all the
year since her first in 2001. Her primary goal in writing time and he’s never going to leave his house and the one
is to give readers the best story she can give them, every who gets fed up and does something [terrible].
time. The popularity of her Will Trent and Grant County That was at the forefront of my mind, and I’ve been
series and her four standalone novels attest to this. wanting to pull something with the CDC in, because a
Slaughter’s stories grab you by the collar, pull you in, lot of people don’t understand what it does. I love pulling
and keep you there until the last page. Her latest, The out details that people don’t necessarily know. I find that
Last Widow, will be published in August, and tackles kind of thing fascinating … that they’re response units
domestic terrorism with the breathlessly paced plot and and they’re attached to the uniformed services and all
stunning twists that she is well-known for. It continues this interesting stuff about them. I wanted to bring that
into it as well. Mostly it was just doing what crime fiction
the story of her beloved characters Will and Sara. The
should always do, which is talking about what is going
plot is so current it feels ripped right from cable news.
on in the world and why it’s bad or why it’s good.
The author has used her success to give back, too. Her
Save the Libraries nonprofit, formed in 2010, has raised
This book also brought up the idea that the world
over $300,000.
is not a safe place for women. How can storytelling
Slaughter talked with WD about her process, what
bring attention to social issues like this and make
being a writer means to her, crafting realistic characters,
change? Do you hope to make people think more
what makes good crime fiction, and how libraries are a
deeply about some of this with your books?
critical piece of the social fabric.
Primarily I’m writing to entertain, right? If I could change
the world with what I’m writing, then I would write
I’m still losing sleep over The Last Widow. Everything
very different books. But also I think, Are there things in
in the plot seems entirely plausible, which is scary. my books that I would want men to know? Like … sit-
How do you research the details that make your plots ting down with my dad during #MeToo, because he said
seem so possible? to me, “That would never happen to you” and me say-
One thing I’ve been noticing for a while, all this white ing, “Actually just by virtue of the fact I’m a woman in the
supremacist stuff—it’s not a recent thing. It’s been bub- world, that has happened to me multiple times,” and him
bling up over the last decade. We’ve been in a lot of wars being shocked, because he had this idea that it only hap-
that have been raging on and on and on. We have a lot of pened to a certain type of woman. Because this isn’t the
people coming back who were very disaffected with that kind of thing that women generally share with men.
and who are disaffected with the system, and who don’t feel One of the things I can do is say to my readers, “You’re
PHOTO © MARC BRESTER

like they’re being heard. And also just people getting angry. not alone. You’re not the only woman who knows this
That kind of stuff is not anything new. Christchurch, as code that gets passed down to us.” I want to write about
awful as it was, is not an outlier. You can trace the history and validate the experience for women. If a woman is
of these sorts of attacks as long as you can trace history. murdered, there’s almost a 50 percent chance it’ll be [by]

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Karin Slaughter

The international thriller


bestseller discusses weaving a
good crime yarn and her Save
the Libraries nonprofit.
BY ERICKA MCINTYRE

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THE WD INTERVIEW Karin Slaughter

A lot of people have fantastic ideas for books. Probably every


person in the world has at least one really good idea. But
sitting down and figuring out how that idea is going to work,
how [the characters] are going to interact, how the plot is
going to move forward—all of that stuff is the business of
being a writer. That’s the hard part.

her intimate partner. If a woman is pregnant, she’s more they get their ideas, they’re lying; they know something
likely to die from homicide than from pregnancy compli- that set them off, but they don’t know where it came from.
cations. It is a dangerous place in the world right now, as Sometimes I’m watching a news story or talking to a police
always, to be a woman. officer and suddenly my brain’s going in another direc-
tion. But you can’t draw a line to what they said and where
The Last Widow has some fascinating characters. The my brain went, because the nature of a writer’s brain is to
villains are truly repellent people. How did you craft go in crazy directions. I also think that the idea is not the
them, and what was it like spending time with these hard part. A lot of people have fantastic ideas for books.
awful people while you were writing the story? Probably every person in the world has at least one really
One of the main things I do is write about people like that good idea. But sitting down and figuring out how that idea
in a realistic way. Horrible people aren’t horrible all the is going to work, how [the characters] are going to interact,
time, otherwise they would never be able to find victims. I how the plot is going to move forward—all of that stuff is
think of people who follow charismatic leaders like that in the business of being a writer. That’s the hard part.
some way as victims. There’s a cult-like following that these
guys get. Also, I want to make them feel human, because You’ve published at least a book a year since 2001.
it’s boring to say, “This person doesn’t believe in the things What does your writing schedule look like? Are you
I believe in, so I’m just going to make them every horrible one of those writers that’s super disciplined?
caricature out there.” The thing that makes them more “Super disciplined” is a good way to describe it. I schedule
scary is that [readers] feel like, “This could be my neighbor time to write. I tour quite a lot, and touring is very impor-
or somebody I see in the grocery store.” That’s what’s terri- tant for a writer. But also being a writer is important for a
fying: the everydayness of these people; they could be any- writer. I have to be careful not to tour so much that I don’t
body. I want to write about them as real humans to show feel like I can think about writing. That’s a problem that a
that this other side of them cancels out their niceness. lot of writers who are successful have. They realize, “You
want me to go to Australia, but you also want me to write
Your books are known for really good plot twists. How a book?” I have to be careful about how I schedule my year
do you know when you’ve nailed a really good twist? and say no to things. There are countries I’m published in
When I get to that part in the book where there’s one of that I’ve been to before and I’d love to go again, but time-
those twists, it’s something that’s been in my head; it’s wise there’s no way. I have to be very judicious about that.
been mulled around. I think, I can do something really It’s important to me that I remember what it was like
cool with this and I love those moments. I can’t wait to to be a struggling college student and how many hours
write them because it’s fascinating to get to that point at minimum wage it took to save up the money to buy a
where you know that you’ve got the reader grabbed by hardcover book from my favorite author. If I could tell
the front of their shirt and then you can twist it in a dif- they hadn’t made any effort I felt personally rejected by
ferent way and it blows everything else out of the water. them. If your job is to be a writer, every story needs to be
the best you can write at that time. After this many books,
This issue’s theme is The Big Idea. Our readers always I owe it to my readers to give 100 percent.
want to know where the best writers get their ideas.
I wish I knew! I can’t say because it organically comes out What advice would you give someone who wants to
of my head. I think when authors say they know where write a series of books or has an idea for a series?

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Make sure that you want to write a series because you want
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to write a series. Publishers will say if you’re writing a series Read bonus content from Slaughter’s interview at
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standalones they tell you [that] you need to write series.
That tells you that there’s no right way to do things. You
should write the kinds of books you love to read. pline. Setting up those kinds of obstacles as a writer, I find
There are problems with each one from a writing rewarding because being disciplined enough not to over
standpoint, because when you’re writing a series, you have explain is a really hard thing, but it’s also a learned thing.
to constantly find new things to say about the characters, So that’s what I would say to new writers: Don’t let your
and you have to write about it in a way that your longtime journey of being a writer stop with getting published.
readers don’t feel bored or like they’re being talked down
to. Then you have to find something that makes your long- Why did you start your nonprofit Save the Libraries,
time readers feel rewarded for being longtime readers. and what do you want to do with it? What do you
There’s a struggle there, to say something new and inter- wish more people understood about libraries?
esting each time. With standalones, you’re creating a char- I started it at the economic downturn because so many
acter from scratch. That’s how I decide whether my next libraries were suffering; staff were getting fired. I realized a
book’s going to be a series or standalone … I feel drawn to lot of librarians were losing jobs. In my local system, they
the characters. I feel drawn to the story. cut library hours, and they usually cut them at the neediest
libraries. Right at the time when people couldn’t afford to
What’s the best writing advice you’ve ever gotten? buy books and they were cutting internet in their houses,
In an article I read by … Dorothy Allison [who wrote libraries were closing or shutting early so kids had nowhere
Bastard out of Carolina], she said the worst thing that to go. A lot of kids in rural areas, their only access to the
can happen to a writer is to get published. And the fact internet is at the library. A lot of people who want to apply
is that if you write and you’re not published, your goal is for jobs, you have to do it online; if they don’t have any
to get published. That’s all you can think about. For me it internet at home, there’s no way for them to do it other
defined how I thought of myself. I was always this strug- than the library. I thought, Let me start this charity and see
gling writer; it took 10 years for me to get an agent and a what authors can do. I got a lot of authors to do fundraisers.
book contract. I got published and thought, What’s the next We gave block grants. I donated the proceeds from a short
goal? The thing that helped me get past that was to set more story to the charity. We’ve given around $300,000. It’s great
goals for myself. So, “I want to have foreign sales, I want to that more authors are doing this because most of us got our
go to these states, I want to …” Your primary goal should start in the library … It’s really cheap for a community to
always be to learn how to be a better writer with each story. keep a library open as opposed to spending money in the
The craft of being a writer is important. I’ve had the juvenile justice system when kids get bored and do stupid
same editor from my second book on. We grew up in the things. The loss of income from children not having access
business together. We’re close friends. I trust her. She’s the to reading is massive compared to the little amount it costs
only person who edits my work closely, and I learn some- to keep the library open.
thing new with each book about myself as a writer, about
Is there anything else you’d like to share?
technique, character, and what I want to do with a story.
When you become a writer, you need to decide what suc-
Writing The Last Widow, which is very procedural and
cess is for you. That might be getting published, getting to
plot driven even though there’s a lot of layers about char-
write the books you want to write, going to the library and
acter, the time shifts in there … keeping the momentum,
seeing your book. If you say, “I want to be a number-one
knowing how much is too much, and I can skip over this
bestseller,” that is very unlikely. The odds must be worse
information, and all of those choices I made were not the
than buying a lottery ticket. For me, success is that I get to
kinds of choices I could have made when I first started.
write the books I want to write and I get to do it for living,
And then the ending of the novel, to leave that open-ended
which is very rare. I feel honored that I get to do that. WD
and not have Sara’s response, and not go into “He carries
her off into the sunset” kind of stuff, to just have that shock
of, “is that the last page?!” That takes a hell of a lot of disci- Ericka McIntyre is editor-in-chief of WD.

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THE
WD INTERVIEW

Lisa Jewell
L
isa Jewell has found her sweet spot. After writing a passing moment. Where did the idea for this
few rom-coms, then sliding into family dramas, her particular book come from?
books now land solidly in the psychological thriller Well, it wasn’t quite as picturesque or poetic as some of
category. And she’s not going anywhere. my inspirations look. The Family Upstairs was inspired
“I’m settling here,” she says. “It was destined that I by a woman I saw when I was on holiday in the south of
wasn’t going to write a thriller for my first novel, and I’m France. This one was a bit more prosaic than that, but it
quite glad I didn’t—now. But this is where I was meant to still has the same feeling of, I’ve just had an idea, and now
be, and this is where I’m going to stick.” I want to write it really badly. Somebody said the words
And why wouldn’t she? The success the British novel- “boarding school,” and I suddenly knew that I wanted to
ist has found throughout her 19 novels is impressive. The write a book that was set [there], which I’ve never done
Family Upstairs was an instant New York Times bestseller before. I had this idea of a murder mystery with a board-
and was followed by Then She Was Gone which spent ing school setting somewhere out in the countryside, in a
more than a year on the same list and sold over a million beautiful old building with stunning manicured grounds,
copies. Combined, her books have sold more than 5 mil- and what have you. As I was mentally processing my way
lion copies in 29 languages. through the grounds of this beautiful imaginary school,
Now Jewell is out with her a new novel, The Night She I saw this sign in my head, a sign saying “Dig Here.” And
Disappeared, about Tallulah, a missing teen mom whose that was the diving board from whence the story came.
own mother, Kim, will stop at nothing to find out what
happened. It has all of the hallmarks readers expect from TNSD features three different timelines that ulti-
a Lisa Jewell blockbuster: more twists and turns than you mately catch up to each other. How do you navigate
can count, red herrings galore, complex character moti- writing those different timelines and keeping them
vations, and an ending you won’t predict. Jewell knows straight for yourself as you’re drafting or revising?
the importance of a strong ending in a thriller, saying, “It Well, it’s actually the other way around. Having the vari-
comes down to such minute decisions in the end. ... It’s ous timelines is what keeps it straight. If I didn’t have so
a strange one because, for me, the ending is absolutely many timelines going on, I would get quite lost. Because
everything when you write a thriller. I’ve just read so I don’t plan when I write and I don’t have any idea where
many thrillers with disappointing endings and I couldn’t the story is going, if I was only following my writerly
bear to put a book out there that had a disappointing clues from the perspective of one person in one place
ending. So, I have to take a deep breath and hope I’ve at one time, I wouldn’t really have a lot to go on. I think
chosen the right outcome for my characters.” I would get quite stuck and end up writing myself into
JEWELL PHOTO © ANDREW WHITTON

But before we could talk about endings, we had to corners and not sure where to go. There’s sort of a pin-
start at the beginning, with the inspiration for The Night ball bouncing around from person to person, timeline
She Disappeared. to timeline, perspective to perspective, it’s what keeps it
all together. It all keeps the momentum going and gives
I always love hearing where you get your ideas me what I need as a writer in terms of clues as to what’s
for new books because sometimes it’s just a quick going on. So, I get to the end of the chapter with one

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The New York Times
bestselling British author
discusses creating thrilling
plot twists and developing
characters in her 19th novel,
The Night She Disappeared.
BY AMY JONES

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character and think, Well, now they know this fact but sions, of taking stuff out, and of going backward before I
that doesn’t really help me going on into the future with can go forward. I spend much more time now just going
this character. I need another character to come and tell forward. Wasting much less time and being much more
me another fact from their point of view. So that’s how it efficient, much more confident, and trusting my instincts
actually works. It’s much easier than it might look to a a lot more, which I think is vital. But it takes a lot of
reader, to actually break the narrative up into those sorts practice to trust your instincts.
of chunks.
Your novels are so very character-driven, and in TNSD,
I’m so interested to hear that because as I’ve been I love Tallulah. But what’s fascinating to me is where
interviewing different writers who use multiple time- she is in her life. Not only is she at an age where she’s
lines, some of them talk about discovering another going from being a teen to being an adult, but she’s
timeline as they get further into the book and having doing that while learning how to be a mom and figur-
to go back and revise and map them out and sticky ing out parts of her own sexuality that she might not
notes and dry erase boards. have known were there before. How did you figure
Oh, god, no! No, see when I die and they come to clear out all of these pieces of who she is?
out all my writerly effects, they will find nothing. There I started writing her as an afterthought. I hadn’t been
would be not one piece of evidence, apart from my pub- going to include her. I had just been going to map the
lished books and the documents in my Word folders, whole story out between Kim and Sophie [Tallulah’s
that I ever wrote a book. I don’t have anything. It’s all just boyfriend’s mother]. Then I got to a point … [where]
in my head and on the screen and then, ultimately, in a Kim and Sophie need some help here in understanding
paperback novel. what might’ve happened to Tallulah, and the only way I
My brain doesn’t work like that. I can’t take things can give them any help is by knowing what happened to
out of the novel and put them onto a Post-it Notes and Tallulah myself. The only way I’m going to find out what
put them onto a whiteboard and then reconnect them happened to Tallulah is to write the girl. So, I introduced
back to the novel. I can only work those things out in her quite a few chapters in, and the first chapter I wrote
the context of the novel, of the words I’m looking at on was her seeing this girl who I assumed would be the girl
the screen; if they’re anywhere else, they don’t make any with the swimming pool.
sense to me. It’s quite intense, but it works for me. And I knew that Tallulah had been at a pool party with
[it] does the way the other writers have what works for this girl called Scarlett. I thought, Right, let’s start writing
them. It’s the joy and the magic of it because everybody Tallulah. And I do start very, very quickly. I don’t sit and
finds their own way to do it. wait for the muse and prevaricate … I just go with the
first thing that presents itself to me. The first thing that
So how does that way of not plotting work when it presented itself to me was Tallulah sitting in the cafeteria
comes to your revisions and making sure that things at college and seeing this girl Scarlett. And I could have
work together? Do you find that you spend more gone any way with it, ’cause I didn’t really know who
time revising as a result? Tallulah was, but I found myself writing that she was
Less, actually. This is my 19th novel, and in my first 10, really aching for her baby. I also realized that she was a
12, maybe even 13 novels, I did an awful lot of revisions, teenage mother who was aching for her baby. That kind
and also lots of deletions of stuff: rejigging, printing off of formed everything else.
the manuscript and putting it on the floor, moving sheets What if she’s aching for her baby, but she’s doing this
of paper around, and changing my mind about things. other thing: She’s improving herself and making a life for
For the biggest chunk of my career, there’s been lots herself in the future, then she’s probably very responsible
of that. But that’s something I would like to think you and she’s probably not very rebellious. She probably does
should get better at—the technical aspects of writing— toe the line and do everything as expected. She probably
once you’ve been writing for 25 years and written 19 is quite quiet. She probably isn’t wild. It was that initial
novels. And I have … I do much less in the way of revi- sight of her in my mind’s eye sitting quietly in the

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cafeteria, aching for her baby just informed everything. was asking me about this last night, “What things do
That’s kind of how all my characters come out. I put you find you keep coming back to now you’ve got to
them somewhere because I have to start writing them. … this point in your career?” And I said, “I keep going
And that’s the joy of it. That’s why I love writing char- back to teenagers.” And she said, “Oh, I thought you
acters so much—watching them unfold on the page and were going to say houses because that is a repeating
watching these layers develop and getting to know them motif, is the houses.”
as I write them. I never come to a book with a character
fully formed in my head and I know everything about So many of your books do feature a home with
them. I know a couple of things and everything else secrets. What goes on behind closed doors, what
comes from that. people choose to reveal about themselves to the
world, how much you actually know about the peo-
Some of your books, including TNSD, explore the ple you live with, and there’s so much for novelists to
power dynamics and trust between people in posi- explore there. What about that is interesting to you?
tions of power vs. people who are in comparatively … They’re like little boxes to lock people away with
lower positions of power, like a principal vs. a stu- their secrets. Places where people can be absolutely
dent, or in this case, a quiet teen mom vs. a popular themselves and not have to worry about what anybody
teen. How do you approach working those concepts thinks or what impression they’re giving to the world.
into your novels? So, they’re bound to be the most interesting place to see
Any sort of friction is going to work in a novel. I imme- stories unfold, but that’s clearly where all the interesting
diately knew which relationships you were talking about stuff is happening.
and from which of my novels, and I didn’t actually notice Obviously, you’ve got other sorts of locked room
until you pointed that out, that there is a pattern of that environments that you can write like that boarding
in my books. I have chosen those dynamics very subcon- school, it’s a similar thing. But still, there’s nothing more
sciously it appears. I guess I liked writing about hope- intensely private than a house with a door shut and
less crushes, and I think there is an element of that with nobody else there apart from the people who live there
the headteacher in Watching You, and a few people have and their secrets and their true selves that come out.
a hopeless crush on him. … And then again here, you’ve Why wouldn’t you want to write about houses?
got Scarlett who has a whole cast of people who were in
thrall to her. A whole cast of people who actually would The importance of the ending in your books really
kill for her and do kill for her. shines through. There was one point in TNSD where
I think that’s a really interesting thing, particularly I thought, OK, perhaps I figured it out. Not only had
for me, because I’ve never been in that position. There’s I not figured it out, but there was a second twist that
never been anyone in my life who I’ve felt that way about absolutely made sense and leaves readers with a
or looked up to in that way or have that sort of obsession little gasp.
with … So maybe that’s why I like to explore it because Exactly. And it’s that little bit at the end, because so often
that’s not any feeling that I have for another human being when you set up a brilliant thriller and then you have to
in my life, yet it creates so much interesting friction on explain everything at the end, a lot of thrillers can just
the page. And as you say, it also creates all this ambigu- run out of steam with all the explaining. You can almost
ity, which is the key to a good psychological thriller. I feel the writer just like thinking, Oh, I’ve got all these
think it’s just something I’ve naturally kind of come back loose ends I need to tie up and I’ve tied that one up. Right,
to time after time and I’m doing it again with the novel now I need to tie up another one, oh, there’s another one.
I’m writing at the moment. There is some obsessive love And then you get to the end and you’re like, “Oh. OK.” I
going on there as well and a master taking control of quite often feel like that when I’m writing my endings. …
somebody who’s in thrall to them, that dynamic again. … Because it is hard to end a novel, which is why I love to
So, that’s another thing that happens when you’ve come back with a thing, a thing that, it’s usually some-
written 19 novels, you get repeating motifs. Somebody thing that I’ve been saving up for the whole book.

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It doesn’t have to be a huge twist that throws the or maybe my fifth. But she’s the only editor I’ve ever had
whole thing off-kilter, just a little thing just to make the who sees my rough first draft. Every other editor I ever
reader go, “Ohhhh, that was going on all along in the had before that, I would honestly rather cut off my toes
background. I never even thought of that.” That’s a really than let them read my rough first draft because they’re
good way of rescuing the ending of a thriller with that the ones who pay me. I don’t want them to ever see my
sort of dribbling away thing that they can do sometimes. dirty laundry, unwashed garments: the truth about my
terrible writing. But me and my U.K. editor, we just
You did that so well in TNSD and Watching You as clicked. I think this is her seventh or eighth novel with
well. That one really got me. me, and I’m not scared of her seeing my bad writing. It
Because it didn’t actually change the story, the ending of doesn’t scare me at all.
Watching You. It wasn’t a massive twist. It just gave the She works as the first reader in the way, and that is
reader a different view of things, kind of mentally scroll- highly unusual for a writer’s editor to be their first reader.
ing back through everything. I like to do that. I think It’s usually either someone they live with or a friend
that leaves the reader feeling satisfied and like it was all or their agent … At the moment, my editor is my first
worth it. It takes a long time to read a 400-page novel reader … She will fix my manuscript for me, I’ll go away
and you want to feel like it was worth your time. and rewrite it. Then we present that in one fell swoop to
my English agent, my American agent, and my American
I think my problem with your books is I enjoy them editor, who then make their own editing notes. We then
so much that I always say, “Oh, I’ll just read one do the next draft as per their input as well. So, it’s quite
more chapter,” and then it’s 2:00 a.m. Part of it is unusual, but it absolutely works for me, hugely. It’s part
because of the way you create cliffhangers at the of why I’m so relaxed about the writing process, now that
end of your chapters. I’m not scared of what happens at the end anymore.
I think it’s very instinctive for me in a way. Because, quite
often, the mechanics of just getting a chapter down on Did you have any additional writing advice for the
the page can feel quite dull. You can sometimes write a readers of Writer’s Digest?
chapter and think, all I’ve done is move my characters I think the thing that is most helpful to me now at this
out of one house into another house. And they’ve had point in my career is not overthinking things and just
a conversation and they’ve revealed a wonderful some- putting yourself on the page. Not thinking about the
thing or other. Now I’ve come to the end of the chap- market, and not thinking about the book that you read
ter, and I need something to give me the momentum to last week that was really good and why didn’t you write
jump onto the next chapter because I’m feeling like I just that book, and not thinking about will people think
wasted 1,500 words or however long the chapter is. So, I I’m stupid if I say this. There are so many things you
will just pluck anything, anything that I can possibly find can worry about when you’re writing that are all irrel-
out of thin air to put into the last paragraph of the chap- evant. Two people can write the same book and it’d be
ter to bounce it back out of whatever doldrums I felt it two completely different books. The important thing is
might have been in and bounce me into the next chapter a book that you write is your book and it’s you, and you
I’m rearing and ready to start writing. I do it for me, but put yourself into it and don’t listen to any of the inter-
I can see it, obviously, it has the byproduct of working ference from anywhere else in the world. Just you, your
quite well for the reader too. screen, your brain, your fingertips, your world, just focus
on you. Just communing with your keyboard and not
What is the general working relationship like worry about what anybody else is doing at all. WD
between you and your editors and your agents?
Because you’ve got editors and agents on both sides
of the Atlantic—how many of them get involved in
the ideation of a book?
I’ve got a very unusual relationship with my U.K. edi- Amy Jones is editor-in-chief of WD. Follow her on Twitter
tor, and she’s my fourth editor I’ve had over my career, @AmyMJones_5.

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Character Study
Bestseller Walter Mosley emphasizes the importance of characterization and the
legacy of Devil in a Blue Dress.
BY TYLER MOSS

W
alter Mosley is
known for iconic
characters. From
Easy Rawlins to
Leonid McGill and Fearless Jones,
his heroes quickly come to life on
the page in a way that draws inter-
est and empathy from readers. Their
personalities are so distinct that
legions of fans line up to buy his
books, eager to devour a new mys-
tery through the evolving lens of
their favorite sleuth.
“They’re all getting older,” says
Mosley, referring to his cast of series power to change the world.” and people, and at the same time tell-
protagonists. “So [in each book] it’s a What was your inspiration for ing a very earthy story of violence and
different time and it’s a different per- this book? prison and being a fugitive from jus-
son having that experience.” I wanted to write about how impos- tice. All that stuff, you know, is part of
That nuance may seem subtle, but sible it is to understand history, and understanding how the stories we tell
it’s illustrative of how deeply Mosley how impossible it is to escape history. inform our lives.
inhabits the minds of his charac- So you’re completely controlled by
PHOTO © WIDEVISION PHOTOGRAPHY: MARCIA WILSON

ters. In a conversation with WD, he something you can’t understand, even Devil in a Blue Dress was
reflects on the passion and craft that though you believe you understand. published almost three decades
inform his bestselling novels. My studies in political theory led me ago. How do you think your
to that belief, and just to talk about writing, or your writing process,
Your latest, John Woman, is something so heady and intellectual has changed since composing
described as a “deliciously in a very earthbound novel reminds that first novel?
unexpected novel about the me of one of my literary heroes, Émile That’s a hard question. I’m sure that it
way we tell stories and whether Zola from France. He was so great at has, but I’m not even sure how. [It’s]
the stories we tell have the talking about the culture of a country one of the things that I’ve talked to

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people about, because a lot of people “It’s hard to separate setting from character from
worry about technique …
It’s like when you talk about paint-
the weather. All of it is in description.”
ers, and you’ll say, “Wow, look at that.
That piece looks like you could pick with all this knowledge that they have I’d like to be able to do what he does to
it up off the canvas and eat it. It looks from the whole book, and brings that answer my problems.”
that real.” I say, “Uh-huh, but that to bear.
doesn’t make it art.” That just [means] So even though it feels kind of like, What role do you feel setting
the craft is really excellent. But, you well, “He did this in the first two chap- plays in bringing a story to life?
know, you might find somebody liv- ters or three chapters”— really, it took It’s hard to separate setting from
ing on a farm in rural Tennessee who a whole book to be able to do that in character from the weather. All of
has palsy, draws a shaking outline of a the first two or three chapters. it is in description. You’re describ-
peach in a couple of strokes, and that’s ing things from the beginning to the
much more art. He has more feeling to You’ve said that in fiction, end, and how much energy you put
it. There’s more [to] the placement of there’ve historically been black into making that feel unique is what
it, the weight of it. When you feel what male protagonists and black that’s about.
was behind the drawing, even. male supporting characters, Some people are less interested in
And I say that because I’m a much, but nobody writes about black the urban environment that they’re
much better writer than I was when male heroes. In your mind, in, for instance. Honestly, I write well
I wrote Devil in a Blue Dress. But any what distinguishes a protago- about New York, but I still am not
book I’ve written now, Devil could nist from a hero? quite sure of the names of the streets
stand up against critically. Because Well you know, Richard Wright’s char- that intersect with my street.
it’s actually what you put into it that acters in all of his books, their main I’m writing another book about
makes it the art, not necessarily the characters—their protagonists—are writing, and one of the moments I
craft. I mean, you can’t be completely very serious people, but they’re deeply talk about is you go into a hospital
without craft, but craft doesn’t make flawed. And they’re not people that room and there’s a paraplegic man
art. Craft just makes good sentences. we like or we want to be. That person in a white bed in a coma. How long
isn’t representing us in the world. That would it take you to describe that
In your recent novel Down the person’s not our Captain America. scene? And the truth is, if you did
River Unto the Sea, it only takes It’s like this guy and maybe he killed it exhaustively, it would be thou-
three chapters to feel like you somebody. Because he’s completely sands of pages. Thousands. Because
intimately know and empathize destroyed by the system. there are so many things happen-
with the main character, Joe Now, I understand that a lot of ing, so many different elements. In
King Oliver. How do you achieve heroes—especially for people from a completely pristine, uninteresting,
that level of characterization so struggling classes in America—they’re unmoving room.
quickly into a novel? going to have been destroyed in some So the question becomes: How do
I think you have to know your charac- kind of way. They’re going to have to you choose what to say to explain that
ter intimately. The other thing about it then attack in some kind of way. Like room in a paragraph or two and move
is this: You’re reading this novel, right? King Oliver, you know. His whole life on? And I have an answer for that
And the notion is, well, it’s like this is has been turned upside down and question, and you have an answer for
the first time you’re ever reading these torn apart. He’s lost everything. For a that question, and all the other people
words. And maybe the last. But what’s long time: his daughter, his wife, his reading this will have an answer for
important to remember is that the job, his belongings, everything—gone. that question. It either comes from
writer wrote a draft of that chapter and But we still like him. He has his flaws, your memory or your imagination, but
then another and then another. The he’s done these things wrong. But we it doesn’t come from mine.
writer has written a whole book and identify with him in a way, and we can Tyler Moss is the editor-in-chief of
then has come back to that chapter say, “I see myself in this character, and Writer’s Digest.

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THE
WD INTERVIEW

Viet Thanh Nguyen


P
ersistence. It’s the theme that runs throughout Viet COVID-19, Nguyen found a home for the short stories
Thanh Nguyen’s writing career, and it has paid off. he’d worked on, edited a collection of essays by refugee
Nguyen’s debut novel, The Sympathizer, was the writers called The Displaced, and co-wrote a picture book,
recipient of the Pulitzer Prize, the Andrew Carnegie Medal Chicken of the Sea, with his son, Ellison. He also wrote
for Excellence in Fiction, an Edgar Award, and the Dayton the nonfiction book, Nothing Ever Dies: Vietnam and the
Literary Peace Prize, among many others. Although it Memory of War, which considers the many ways history
was his debut, it wasn’t the first book he wrote. Nguyen is remembered, misremembered, and erased. We began
worked on a short story collection, The Refugees, for 20 our conversation by considering how the idea of mem-
years before it found a home. “Twenty years of rejection ories influenced the form of his novels.
and misery and isolation was a terrible experience,” he
said. “But on the positive side of that, I came out focused Both of the novels are written as confessions or
on the writing, thinking that the writing was what memoirs of the narrator repressing troubling or
mattered.” disturbing memories and then coming to remember
With that focus in mind, Nguyen writes books that that event by way of the writing. Were the books
he would like to read, without worrying what others will always written that way, or did it take you a draft or
think of them, saying, “Write this book for yourself, not two to figure out that was the right mechanism for
for anybody else …” Because of that approach, these nov- telling his story?
els from a literature professor and avid reader are multi- The Sympathizer I knew was going to be a narrative in
layered, genre-breaking works of art that do as much to which the Sympathizer was speaking to someone else.
critique culture as they do to entertain readers. That made it a kind of confession already, but I didn’t
The Sympathizer follows an unnamed narrator on his know that it would be a formal kind of confession some-
escape to the U.S. during the Fall of Saigon, to a movie one writes down until much later in the book. I had an
set, and ultimately to a Vietnamese reeducation camp outline for the book. I knew the narrative would end up
where he writes his confession—the very book we’re read- in a reeducation camp, but actually I didn’t make the
ing. In the 2021 sequel, The Committed (set to be released connection that he would be writing his confession in
in early March), the narrator finds himself in Paris, still the reeducation camp until about two-thirds of the way
reeling from his experiences at the camp and the fallout into the book. As I was approaching the reeducation
from his time as a double-agent. Just as absurd and comi- camp, I understood exactly what the ending of the novel
NGUYEN PHOTO © BEBE JACOBS

cal and sharp as The Sympathizer, The Committed is a was going to be.
modernist experiment disguised as a thriller. I wanted to set up within The Sympathizer a structure
Between writing the novels, the publication of the whereby it would be a Vietnamese person speaking to a
first delayed to better time with the anniversary of the Vietnamese person because if I did that, then what that
end of the Vietnam War and the second delayed due to would be is that the narrator, the Sympathizer, would

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The award-winning author
discusses the challenges
of writing his second novel
and why trusting readers
can make for a more
compelling narrative.
BY AMY JONES

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not have to explain a lot of things. If you’re speaking This is also very important to me because as a writer,
to someone of the same background, you don’t have I just felt like I had to have a justification for why things
to explain the things you share in common. This was appear in the book. You know, when you read a series
important for me because very typically the way that so- and you read the second, or the third book in the series
called “ethnic” or “minority” literature operates in the or trilogy, you can see exactly when the writer is explain-
United States is that the so-called “ethnic” or “minor- ing things to the reader, like what happened in volume
ity” writer is expected to speak, to write, as if they were one and there’s no justification for it. It’s simply that a
addressing someone who needs things explained to reader has to be brought up to speed in the book. But as
them. That is, the reader, who is assumed to be of a dif- a writer, it always bothers me to see that because I know
ferent background, but it’s a majority background. it’s necessary, but at the same time, it doesn’t work in the
And that is wrong. Because if you’re a writer of the function of the narrative. So in The Committed, there’s a
majority background, you don’t have to translate. You justification for the explanation of the plot that happens
just assume that your readers have the same background, because of who he’s writing to.
and you’re probably right. But myself being this so-called
“minority,” I’m not of the majority background but I I really like that explanation of how the format of it
always approach the literature of someone like Philip helps get some of that backstory into the second
Roth or Jonathan Franzen, whoever, as someone who’s book. How else was writing the sequel different
from the first?
both an insider and outsider.
Well, one main difference is I had much more material
I didn’t plan to write a sequel to The Sympathizer, but
in advance prepared for the book. The process of writing
at the end of the novel, I thought, Oh, I’m not finished
the book was initially very easy. What had happened was
with this character yet. I’m not finished with these issues
that I finished all the edits for The Sympathizer in early
the novel raises. Since The Sympathizer is a spy novel and
2014, we decided—the publisher and I—not to publish
a thriller novel and those genres are perfectly fine with
the book until April 2015, which was well more than a
sequels and series, I thought it was perfectly legitimate to
year off. The reason why we did that was my suggestion,
continue in this vein and write another book about the
that April 2015 was the 40th anniversary of the end of the
Sympathizer. In the second book, the challenge was, how
Vietnam War and therefore there would be a lot more
do I write this in a way that both continues the action
attention paid to the book. But that meant that I had a lot
narrative of the spy-thriller story, but also continues the
of time before The Sympathizer came out. In that interim,
formal aspect of the book and the confession? I thought
I wrote Nothing Ever Dies. I had spent over a decade
in the very beginning, Well, he’ll be writing again to him- working on [The Sympathizer] and writing articles. So
self probably. But where will he be writing this? I thought, what I did there was I wrote the book from scratch based
Well, the first book he was in a reeducation camp, and on the ideas in the articles, but the narrative of the book
then in the second book, it’ll probably be a task given to was something new.
him in an asylum. Because he’s not going to be quite right I finished that in about a year and then I had a few
in his mind. I’ve got to figure out how to get to the asylum. more months. I wrote 50 pages of The Committed before
In the case of The Committed, the process was differ- I had to go on book tour for The Sympathizer and writing
ent than The Sympathizer. In The Sympathizer, I had a those first 50 pages was pretty easy. I wrote them fairly
two-page outline. In The Committed, I had something quickly, I had the outline, things were going great. Then
like 50 single-spaced pages of notes and outline. So that’s I went on the book tour and that was something that was
much more detailed. disruptive. Then the novel won the Pulitzer Prize and
So it’s a sequel; it has to function as its own novel and everything just basically went to hell, in a good way! But
this is a kind of a tricky thing to do. The Committed is for like a year, I wrote nothing because I was so over-
written so that you can read it without having read The whelmed by all of the publicity.
Sympathizer, which means certain explanatory things It was also more challenging because my thought
that have happened to explain the background and the process kept continually getting interrupted. That’s dan-
plot and all of that. The justification for that is that there gerous for a writer. The Sympathizer felt like one smooth
are these readers who need things explained to them. flow and hopefully felt that way for the reader. For The

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Committed, I thought I might lose that flow. I had to me was to think, I don’t need any more of these things. I can
spend a lot of time just going back over the narrative still write this novel for myself.
over and over again, which I didn’t have to do with The
Sympathizer, to try to make sure I had this continuity of In reading the two novels, it occurred to me that you
plot and voice and emotion. are a fantastic example of a writer who knows the
“rules” and knows how to break them well. There
When you talk about being interrupted and not hav- was one choice in particular that I wanted to ask you
ing enough continuous time to stay in the frame of about—it was to do with pacing and dialogue. Your
mind to write, was any of that piled on by trying to books don’t use quotation marks for dialogue or ital-
stay out of your own mind? The Sympathizer won so ics for internal thoughts, which forced me to slow
many awards and got so much critical acclaim. How down and read carefully. But at the same time, the
did you not put irrational pressure on yourself to books are incredibly fast paced in plotting. It was a
compete with yourself? constant feeling of wanting to read fast because I
I think that’s always there and it’s something I am thinking couldn’t wait to see what happened, but then need-
every now and again: Will the book be as good as the first ing to read slow to really see what happens.
book? Will it get as much attention? You just have to stop My other life is that I’m a professor of literature. I have a
thinking about that and the way that I stopped thinking PhD in English and I read a lot and I’m very broadmin-
about that was to write. Not to get into my own mind, but ded in my reading. So I’ll read very serious modernist
to get into the mind of the Sympathizer because he and literature. I’ll read sort of lower brow literary fiction and
I are sort of alter egos. We share some similar ideas and
I’ll read so-called low brow genre fiction.
issues and personalities, but beyond that, he’s obviously a
From all of that, what I can tell is that what’s con-
very different person. I had to get into his mind. That was
sidered contemporary, legitimate literary fiction in this
the only way to solve a problem and inhabit it. So it was
country tends to lean toward the middle brow. By that
not actually hard for me not to think about all the other
I mean, it’s dominated by realism. It’s dominated by
worldly things that might concern a writer.
not being very intellectually challenging and not very
I think this is a situation and maybe it wasn’t as much
formally challenging either as if modernism never hap-
of a big deal for me because I—basically in order to write
pened. In modernism people were doing very serious,
The Sympathizer, what happened to me is that it was like
complicated stuff in the 1920s and 1930s and it’s as if
20 years of struggling with my writing. Most of it devoted
for most American fiction writers of the contemporary
to my short story collection. When I set off writing The
Refugees, I was in my 20s and a very different person period, it never happened. It’s weird.
than I am now, in a sense that back then, I cared about And to me, anything that happens in all of these
my writing, but I also cared about all the things you were genres—and I consider contemporary literary fiction a
talking about. Will it be successful? Will I be famous? Will genre, too—it’s important. They’re all interesting in their
I get awards? I mean, these are things that preoccupy a own ways. My desire in writing these novels was to write
lot of writers, but they’re utterly unimportant. They have novels that were very serious, that would be very chal-
nothing to do with the writing. Unfortunately, if I’d been lenging formally, and could be very entertaining at the
successful at 25 or 30 with that book, I probably would same time. I have trust in readers, not all readers, but I
be exactly in the position you described—worried about have trust that there’s a large number of readers out there
whether I could succeed again. that can handle this kind of combination. That want to
In writing The Committed, I wouldn’t say it’s been like, be entertained and that want to be challenged and elevated
Well, I got all these things. They’re great, I don’t need any at the same time. So what that means is that writing a
more of that. How many prizes do you want as a writer? novel with a plot was very important to me and if you
How much is going to be enough? To me, I felt like I’d got- read a lot of contemporary American literary fiction,
ten enough with The Sympathizer. I got enough awards to especially what’s produced out of MFA programs, they’re
last anybody for a lifetime. So with The Committed, I was terrible at plotting. Yes, there’s a plot loosely speaking in
free from having to worry about that. I mean, it’d be nice there, but it’s people dwelling on their alienation of one
to get more, obviously [laughs], but what was crucial for kind or another.

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But I read a manual on how to write movies, screen-


plays, and all they care about is plot. That’s bad too, but I ONLINE EXCLUSIVE
just distilled that. If you go underneath the hood of these Read more about Viet Thanh Nguyen’s nonfiction and genre-
busting novels in an extended cut of his WD interview at
two novels, you’ll discover it’s a very conventional plot WritersDigest.com/be-inspired.
structure—three act structure—all the expected turns
are happening, all the expected beats. That was what the
Sympathizer? And number two, simply by stripping away
outlines for the novels were designed to do, was to make
these features, which readers of contemporary litera-
sure that I knew where to put plot events to keep the
ture have been trained to expect, what will that do to the
reader reading.
reader? Will it awaken the reader?
Now, given that, I read a lot of genre fiction. I love to
read detective novels. The problem is, I cannot remem-
Do you have any final advice for the readers of
ber which ones I’ve read. I will be behind a year or two
Writer’s Digest?
and I’ll want to go back and I’ll start thinking, What was
Persist. I think that’s all it takes to be a writer. It’s not
the last book that I read? I cannot remember! Because
about how-to books or writing seminars or degrees. All
they’re very entertaining and they’re instantly, for me,
those things can help obviously, but no one can substi-
forgettable. That’s a serious problem. One of the rea-
tute, for you, the will to persist because for almost all
sons why those genre novels are forgettable is because
writers, except the very few whom we all love to hate,
they’re all about the plot. Some of the time the charac-
writing will be a difficult experience. The only thing
ter’s important too. But the characters sort of remain the
that will see you through is the conviction that you have
same over the trilogies and tens and tens of novels. something worthwhile to say and an interesting way of
I needed to break down that element as well. The saying it. That’s the only way for you to realize that goal
question of being deeply immersed in this narrator’s is to persist.
point of view and being subjected to his character and That persistence doesn’t mean you have to sit there
everything that he undergoes is really crucial because and write every day. I don’t write every day. I can’t write
he is designed to be unforgettable. Whether you like or every day because I have so many other obligations,
don’t like the books, I don’t think you can forget who this but I write a lot over a certain amount of time. So the
person is. That’s why the book draws heavily from mod- Malcolm Gladwell idea, that you have to do something
ernism, immersing the reader deeply into one character’s for 10,000 hours to get really good at it, I think it’s, for
very seriously warped perspective out of the belief that me at least, true. But I didn’t write 10,000 hours by writ-
all of us are deeply warped people. Whatever we pres- ing every day. I wrote 10,000 hours over 20 years. And
ent to other people within our own psyche, we’re deeply I did it simply through sheer persistence. And that is
warped people most of us, not all of us. [Laughs] what turns people into writers. That doesn’t mean that
The other issue was that when you read a lot of con- you’ll be a great writer at the end. You should at least be
temporary literary fiction, I can see the rules, as you a competent writer at the end. It doesn’t mean you’ll be
said, that are in operation. The rules include things like a published writer at the end of that, but you can write
quotation marks, explaining things to the reader, and lots something that you yourself will respect. And in the
of description. I know that none of these things actually end, that’s what it boils down to. I mean, it’s important
have to happen. They’re just conventions. I learned those obviously for a lot of people, and for me too, to be pub-
conventions for The Refugees, and I’ve learned them by lished and have our works read. But it’s also important
reading a lot. In The Sympathizer and The Committed to me to respect myself as a writer and what I’ve written
though, the challenge was in contemporary literary fic- and to know that I’ve written something that I want to
tion, when you deploy these rules, it’s not that you can’t read. And that is what made those 10,000 hours of
get into the personalities of your characters. Obviously, persistence through all the difficulties absolutely worth
these contemporary literary novels can be very immer- it. WD
sive. I feel like they serve in a certain way to separate
the reader from the character and experience that’s
unfolding. If I strip the novel of these elements, number
one, would it be possible to get the reader closer to the Amy Jones is editor-in-chief of WD.

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WD INTERVIEW

Chris Bohjalian
I
n late January, WD joined Chris Bohjalian in his writ- You’ve always told interesting stories about where
ing office via video call to talk about his newest book, you get your ideas for your books. How did you
Hour of the Witch. Like many of Bohjalian’s novels, it come up with the story for Hour of the Witch?
features a misunderstood but strong female protagonist, I have always been obsessed with a Puritan mind and
Mary Deerfield, who has to fight her way past rumors, Puritan theology. First of all, for the Puritans, Satan was
false accusations, injustices, and the control of inept (and your neighbor. Satan was a real, actual creature—as real
insecure) men in power to try to get the life she wants. “I as the midwife, as real as the minister, as real as Jesus
love my heroine,” says Bohjalian. “I love Mary Deerfield. Christ. Secondly, imagine going through life where you
She’s courageous. And like many of my female heroines— are constantly wondering, Am I among the saved or the
Serafina Bettini, Alexis Remnick, Cassie Bowden—she’s damned? That’s the reason why the Puritans were so
deeply human. I mean, these are powerful, powerful meticulous in their diaries and their ledgers. They were
women and they’re human beings. They’re imperfect, but always examining their behavior because of the great
they are so damn courageous.” catch-22: If you come to the conclusion you’re saved
Mary Deerfield is courageous. She’s a 17th-century because of your works, there’s the ultimate sin of hubris
Puritan woman married to an abusive man nearly two and you’re probably damned.
decades her senior whom she tries to divorce after he The other thing that I love about the Puritans is we
stabs her with a newfangled eating utensil—a fork, also view them as these women and men dressed in black and
called “The Devil’s Tines” because of its resemblance to coifs who were utterly humorless, but when you read the
the Satan’s accessory. Shortly thereafter she is accused poetry of Anne Bradstreet, who was the muse for Mary
of witchcraft when another fork is found buried by her Deerfield in Hour of the Witch, you realize that they were
front door. What follows is classic Chris Bohjalian— deeply passionate. I mean, there were five reasons you
moments of deep dread, extraordinary plot twists, and could divorce in the 17th century. Polygamy, you dis-
characters you love to root for paired with characters you cover that your husband has another wife in London;
love to hate. desertion, your husband runs off to New Haven; and, of
For nearly three decades, Bohjalian has been enter- course, adultery. But, among the reasons a woman could
taining readers with stories that by turn are pulled right divorce her husband was impotence. And I think that
from the headlines (an airplane pilot tries to land his speaks to the fact that the Puritans expected normal
damaged plane on a lake Sully Sullenberger-style in The conjugal relations.
Night Strangers) or surfaced from the depths of his- Where did this book come from? When I was in
tory, shining lights on little-known or nearly forgotten college, I was obsessed with Puritan theology and I’ve
events as with The Sandcastle Girls during the Armenian moved a lot since college, but the only books that have
Genocide. In all instances, he connects those events to come with me through all the moves are my books on
the inner lives and motivations of individuals, showcas- Russian literature and my books about the Puritans.
BOHJALIAN PHOTO © VICTORIA BLEWER

ing our shared humanity. Now the real inspiration for this book probably was a
In the case of Hour of the Witch, the origin story is a three-line reference from the Boston Court of Assistants
little bit of both. While the setting takes readers more in 1672. Only one of the 31 divorces in the 17th century
than 350 years into the past, the courtroom drama and was granted because of what today we would call domestic
historical thriller also has echoes of current events. The abuse—then they called cruelty—which there were three
details of how the novel came to be is where we began lines. The whole idea of a woman in 1672 standing before
our wide-ranging conversation. the Court of Assistants and saying, “My word against

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New York Times-bestselling
novelist Chris Bohjalian talks
about working with the right
editor, how he finds the
perfect ending for each novel,
and the inspiration for his
new historical thriller, Hour of
the Witch.
BY AMY JONES

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his”—because it’s all behind closed doors—“my husband is but this is a book for all of those remarkable women
a beast” and getting that divorce, fascinated me. And I just who, for the last four years, have said, “I matter, you are
thought this woman was unbelievably courageous. This is not going to diminish me.”
one of the first women to really take her destiny into her
hands and stand up against the patriarchy. You’ve written historical novels previously, more set
It’s a very timely novel for a book set in 1662, and in the recent past hundred years or so. But this one,
when one of the magistrates says to Mary Deerfield, “You you go back almost 400 years. What kind of unique
are a nasty woman,” the reference will not be lost on our challenges did that present?
readers. I mean, I could’ve said, “But her emails!” I was First of all, here’s what made it easier. No one in the 17th
writing a lot of this during the Brett Kavanaugh confir- century is alive today to point out to me any mistakes
mation hearings and I kept wanting to say, “Believe her!” I’ve made about trenchers or pillowbeers.
What made it more difficult in some ways is the same
There are so many echoes to our current political thing. There was no one I could interview. When I was
arena and that was one of the things that stuck out writing The Light in the Ruins, I interviewed an Italian cop
to me, this politicizing of something that is seem- from the 1950s who could talk to me about a Florence
ingly innocuous, a fork, and turning it into “The homicide investigation. When I was writing Skeletons at
Devil’s Times.” the Feast, I was able to interview Holocaust survivors and
Well, there are two issues. I started writing this book in Prussian refugees to tell me their stories. No one could tell
2001, and I had it with me on my laptop on 9/11 when I me what it was like to be tried as a witch in Boston. So I
was on a book tour for Trans-Sister Radio. I was actually had to deal entirely with antiquated primary sources and
on the tarmac, 7:15 a.m. in Denver, about to fly to San historians. And I loved the primary sources, and I loved
Francisco, when the towers were attacked and collapsed. the historians. It’s how I work; I love having lunch with
We never flew on to San Francisco. I returned to my someone who was there. I love having coffee with some-
Denver hotel, and I spent the next week working on this body who’d say, “No one ever asked me that,” or, “Wow.
book because I was all alone. My wife used to work on I never even told my husband that.” And so that was dif-
the 104th floor of Two World Trade. Finally, about a week ferent, but fortunately the Puritans, well, they didn’t have
later, I was able to return to Vermont and I resumed email but they saved so much of their correspondence.
work on the book. One of the things I did, the Puritans used the words
And I couldn’t write it. I was so depressed. Every thou and you, depending on whether it’s formal or
moment I spent with a manuscript brought me back informal. The writing varied dramatically depend-
to Denver and being all alone in that hotel room. So I ing on the level of education, but I made this decision.
scrapped the book and instead I started a new one that I All of the second-person pronouns would be thou,
thought would allow me to channel happier memories. I thy, thine, and thee because it felt to me 17th-century
wrote Before You Know Kindness. New England. I looked at Anne Bradstreet’s poetry. I
Years later, Trump was elected and we had the looked at 16th-century Shakespeare. One of the ways
Women’s March the Saturday after his inauguration. All that I could ground the sensibility of this book was mak-
of these remarkable women around the country stand- ing that one simple change. I know at the beginning for
ing up for women’s rights. At the time, I was writing The some readers, it’s going to feel, “Oh, dear God, no, can we
Flight Attendant and I was having a great time, but some- just have the second person we know?” So many readers
thing about the Women’s March reminded me that in a have told me that the more they read Hour of the Witch,
filing cabinet in the basement were 100 pages of Mary the more they got into the groove, and thou, thine, and
Deerfield’s story. thee were this funky music they got into once they were
I began to think, I wonder if I can emotionally deal into the book.
with this material? And the damnedest thing happened:
It invigorated me. Instead of feeling as I felt in 2001, I felt One of the things that I love discovering every time I
this is a book with a purpose. This is one of those legacy open up a new Chris Bohjalian book is seeing how it’s
books for me, like Midwives or The Sandcastle Girls. Yes, set up. I loved that Trans-Sister Radio was the five-
it’s going to be a novel of historical suspense, a slow burn, part NPR series, that The Double Bind had “medical

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records” interspersed throughout, and that Hour of no, please no!” especially in 2020—the year that Satan
the Witch has “court documents.” After reading the spawned. In Hour of the Witch, I did try out multiple
whole book, I go back and read those parts again to endings. The Flight Attendant had multiple endings. The
see what clues I missed that could inform my read- Red Lotus had multiple endings before I decided on the
ing of the book. At what point in your drafting do you one that most perfectly, in my opinion, stuck the landing.
have that part of the book figured out? I’ve often got in this room, two massive whiteboards
I am usually three-quarters of the way into a book before with black, blue, and red erasable markers showing all
I know the ending. When I was writing Hour of the of the different possible endings and what that means
Witch, I had no idea what the ending was going to be. for each character. When I’m at that stage, I’m sitting at
I did not know Mary Deerfield’s fate. And so what that that desk looking at the whiteboards there, just deciding,
means is, going back and rewriting, not simply the inter- “OK, heartbreak or happiness.”
stitial pages, but the book itself once I know the ending.
But I can’t imagine, most of the time, knowing the In terms of the craft, what do you wish you had known
ending for a book, because the pleasure for me is being when you first started almost three decades ago?
in this room and letting my characters take me by the When I graduated from college, I knew nothing about
hand and lead me through the dark and the story. In how to write fiction. I was a great reader, but I was a terri-
Hour of the Witch, I was at least halfway through the ble writer. It’s why I’m responsible for the single worst first
book before I knew who and why there were Devil’s novel ever published. Bar none. My second novel is pretty
Tines buried in the dooryard. I had no idea. bad, too. The third isn’t great. That’s why the earliest of my
All my books begin with a premise—often a character, books that I allow to remain in print is Water Witches.
but rarely the plot. I mean, alcoholic flight attendant wakes Malcolm Gladwell taught us the 10,000 hour rule.
up next to a dead body in a hotel room far from home. You’ve got to do something for 10,000 hours. And my
Love story set in the midst of the Armenian Genocide. first three books, I was putting in my 10,000 hours. That
Young Puritan woman wants to divorce her husband for was my Beatles in Hamburg phase and I wish I could
domestic violence. That’s often all there is. take those three books back. I wish my first book was
Water Witches because by then I had, first of all, learned
I want to talk more about endings. At the end of The how to move characters around a book, how to move the
Red Lotus, I gasped because I thought, Oh, there pieces around the chessboard. I didn’t know that in my
is more going on there, even if I didn’t need to see first three books.
precisely what the “more” was. Do you write mul- Secondly, I learned something so basic, that as a
tiple endings and then figure out which one works? young writer, I had lost sight of. What we do as fiction
I love an ending that is Aristotelian and that means two writers is cause and effect. If this cause, this deus ex
things. It is utterly surprising, but the reader says, “Oh, it machina cause occurs to this character, what is the most
could not have ended any other way.” I also love endings normal thing for him or her to do? What’s the effect?
that do one of two things: They either break your heart And third, research. I didn’t do a hell of a lot of
or they make you happy. There’s no in-between. In my research for those first three books. I thought, Virginia
opinion, if an ending doesn’t break your heart or leave Woolf and John Updike, did they research their books?
you happy, you have not stuck the landing. Your floor They’re just writing about human beings and the human
routine might’ve been impeccable, but without an ending condition. You can do that if you’re Virginia Woolf; you
that fits one of those two criteria, you haven’t nailed it. can do that if you’re John Updike. Clearly you can’t do
Some of my books, yes, end in utter heartbreak and that if you’re me! I have to do the homework, especially
some are happy. But I mean, think of all of the main given the kinds of books I write.
characters I’ve killed right at the end of my books! You
and I were just talking about The Red Lotus, and just Speaking of research, as I read through your books, I
when you think it’s essentially a happy ending, (I mean, sometimes saw hints of connections between earlier
not completely because one of my favorite characters books and your newer books, even though they’re
dies), but you think it’s OK. I didn’t pull—I try at least— all distinctly different stories. You’ve got a pilot in
to pull the rug out from under you so you go, “Holy cow, The Night Strangers and The Flight Attendant, or

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a story about the foster care system in The Buffalo She and Todd Doughty and Suzanne Herz and Bill
Soldier and a homeless teen who will do anything to Thomas at Doubleday got behind this book about the
avoid the foster care system in Close Your Eyes, Hold Armenian Genocide and understood that it was fun-
Hands. Do you intentionally save bits of what you damentally a love story like The English Patient or
can’t use in one story to inspire later ones, or when Atonement or Corelli’s Mandolin. It’s now the second
you’re looking for a new idea, do you go back to your bestselling novel ever about the Armenian Genocide.
older work and think, Oh, there’s something I could The only one that’s bigger is from 1933, Franz Werfel’s
explore in a whole different way? classic The Forty Days of Musa Dagh.
It’s actually a third answer. My books are weirdly auto-
biographic and filled with the things that interest me. I’m It’s interesting that that was the reaction because
obsessed with aviation. I mean, going all the way back to when I read it a few years ago my reaction was, How
Midwives when Sibyl Danforth, the midwife, her attorney did I not know about this? I’m really glad that you
Stephen Hastings is explaining all the things that have to chose to write about it and that she was behind you
go wrong for a mother to die in birth. His analogy, which in taking that risk.
is like 10 pages in the book, is all the things that have to That’s the moral for young writers and aspiring writers.
go wrong for a plane to crash. Two of my most successful books begin with a premise
So aviation, the natural world, the way children and that no one knows about. Shaye Areheart took a chance
teenagers are so often screwed by the system are clearly on Midwives and people were telling her, “Why are you
things that interest me and that recur in my books. And publishing this book? No one knows about midwives.”
autobiographically, my biggest fears are for my wife and People were saying about The Sandcastle Girls, “no one
my daughter—always—and I channel that Dread, capital cares.” And Jenny Jackson said, “You care and that’s what
D, into my work. matters.” The moral to that is write what you love.

You’ve worked with mostly the same two editors You said you’ve already got your next book finished?
over the course of your career, Shaye Areheart and Book 22 is done. Did you see the movie Once Upon a Time
Jennifer Jackson. What is it like working with the in Hollywood? It’s fantastic. It’s Hollywood 1969 and it’s
same editor for such a long time? How do you think about the Tate-LaBianca murders, but it’s also about mov-
they’ve influenced your writing? ies. So my 2022 book is called The Lions of Hollywood. It’s
Working with Shaye Areheart and Jenny Jackson has set in 1964 and it’s about an Elizabeth Taylor-like starlet
been among the greatest professional blessings of my who brings her entourage on a honeymoon safari into
life. When Shaye left Penguin Random House in 2010, the Serengeti and it all goes to hell. Think And Then There
I wanted Jenny to be my editor for a couple of reasons. Were None. How many of these nine Hollywood people
She’s smarter than me and we have the same taste in are going to be alive at the end of the book? I just loved
books. So when Shaye moved on, I went to Jenny and writing it because I’m writing about Hollywood in 1964
Jenny said, “Yeah, let’s do this.” Jenny is just brilliant, just and I’m writing about East Africa in 1964. I was in heaven
as Shaye was brilliant. Shaye was the first person in a writing it during the pandemic.
major publishing house to take a chance on me. She was
the one who read 60 pages of Midwives and said, “Oh my Any last tidbits for aspiring authors?
God, there’s a book here.” Here are the things I like to tell aspiring writers: Read a
The first book that Jenny Jackson and I did together lot. Write in whatever genre you love. If you love science
was The Sandcastle Girls about the Armenian Genocide. fiction, write science fiction. If you love romance, write
There were a lot of people in 2010, who said, “Do not romance. If you love literary fiction, write literary fiction.
write a book about the Armenian Genocide. It is a career Understand the first draft is not the last draft and try to
killer. No one cares.” But I said, “I need to write it as a be disciplined. Don’t wait for the muse. Writing is work.
grandson of two survivors.” And when I told Jenny, this It’s a marathon. Get your 10,000 hours and do it every
will be our first book together, I hoped, she said, “That’s day, even if you’ve got a full-time job. WD
wonderful. People need to know this story. And you’re Amy Jones is editor-in-chief of WD. Follow her on twitter
the perfect person to write it.” @AmyMJones_5.

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Scott Turow
PUBLIC DEFENDER
With 11 bestsellers over a
40-year career, the two-time
Authors Guild president
testifies on the secrets to
sustained success.
BY TYLER MOSS

PHOTO © JEREMY LAWSON PHOTOGRAPHY

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uthor, attorney, advocate—Scott Turow’s collec- Turow took a short recess from the courthouse and his
tive roles range in scope and responsibility, current work-in-progress to chat with WD from his home
yet each is a key exhibit in the mountain of in the Chicago suburbs.
evidence that upholds his position in writing’s
upper echelon. Between your writing and your legal practice, how in
Over the past four decades—2017 marks the 40th anni- the world do you prioritize your time?
versary of his acclaimed debut, the law-school memoir When I’m writing I usually push everything else aside and
One L—Turow has published 11 bestsellers (nine of them write in the morning until the early afternoon. Now, that
legal thrillers), served two stints as president of The Authors can be interrupted—I’ve got a court call on Monday, so
Guild, and penned op-eds for The New York Times and essays it’s not invariable. Life interferes, which is what you would
for The Atlantic, all while continuing to practice law (most of expect of life.
it pro bono) in his hometown of Chicago. When asked why Wally Stegner, who was one of my teachers at Stanford
he didn’t quit his day job after finding literary success (the [University’s writing program in the early ’70s, prior to law
way most other lawyers-turned-bestsellers do), his response school], really taught the value of putting your butt in the
is firm: “For me, having to produce a book a year would be a chair every day, especially if you’re trying to write a novel.
form of slavery.” I’ve found it a really valuable lesson. He used to say, “It’s
Indeed, it’s that kind of conviction that keeps Turow’s true the muse may not visit you every day, but you have
body of work squarely in the realm of art. to sit down and give her a chance to show up.” I thought
As president of The Authors Guild, he fought relentlessly there was great wisdom in that. The writing, now and for
many years, has had the first claim on my time.
for writers to receive a fair wage equal to their creative
output. His background as a litigator made him an ideal
How do skills honed in practicing law translate to how
candidate for the position, targeting issues such as intellec-
you approach your writing?
tual property rights and e-book piracy during his tenure.
There’s a good deal of back and forth between the two
With one foot in the literary world and the other in
callings. I learned in the courtroom a whole lot about
law, the twain meet in his novels. All are largely set in
being a novelist that I didn’t learn during my years as
Kindle County, a fictional facsimile of Chicago’s Cook
a Stegner Fellow at Stanford. I always thought the ideal
County, where the Cubs are called the Trappers, the Lake
would be to write a novel that would be equally appeal-
looms large and the courts are packed with complex cases.
ing to—as I put it in my debates with members of the fac-
It’s a setting shaped in his celebrated first novel—1987’s ulty—a bus driver and an English professor. Certainly, as
Presumed Innocent, later made into an eponymous film a prosecutor in a courtroom, you’re trying to tell a story
starring Harrison Ford—in which deputy prosecutor Rusty to a broad audience.
Sabich is charged with the murder of a beautiful colleague I learned about being concise because you don’t have
with a mysterious past. infinite patience or attention from a jury. I learned that,
His latest, Testimony, Turow’s first novel in four years, whatever I had been taught or valued about literary
drops in May: a suspenseful globe-trotter in which middle- experiments or refinements, sometimes the tried-and-
aged attorney Bill ten Boom leaves behind his life in Kindle true was a better idea. I certainly came to embrace crime
County for a role with the International Criminal Court in as a subject matter by recognizing how potent the effect
The Hague. His new position takes him to Bosnia, where was, both on jurors and everybody else watching in
he investigates an alleged genocide, has a fling with a sultry the courtroom.
barrister and becomes involved in the pursuit of a Serbian I realized pretty quickly that, without trying to press
war criminal. Turow deftly explores identity as a theme both the metaphor too far, being a prosecutor and being an
overt and subtle, as ten Boom struggles with a family secret author were more similar than I would have thought, in
that has roots reaching back to Nazi Germany. the sense that you are telling the jury a story and it’s a

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“I was very proud to be a spokesperson for the American


authorial community because, quite frankly, as a general
matter, they’re getting screwed .”
story about how something that the community regards as appreciative of ten Boom as he is of himself. It’s like
as evil happened. You tell the story through multiple I’m given the opportunity to do further commentary—
voices—those voices happen to be called witnesses in like when you get a DVD and you’ve got the outtakes. It’s
the courtroom—but if you lose track of the need to be a chance to not only add to the book I’m writing, but to
telling a consistent narrative, you’re losing your way the books I’ve [already] written.
as a prosecutor. I truly learned a great deal in my first
couple of years as a prosecutor that I later turned into Your novels proceed at a brisk pace, full of twists
the writing of Presumed Innocent. and turns. What is your writing process like?
Essentially, I’ve preserved the writing process that I had
Novels in the milieu of the law trend toward a in writing Presumed Innocent. I was working full time
formula: crime, reveals, resolution. Yet your as an assistant U.S. attorney. The job was wonderful, but
books manage to shirk the formulaic. What’s consuming. The only time I had to write was on the
your secret? morning commuter train, because by the end of the day I
My first secret is … I don’t like formulas. [Laughs.] was too overwrought with what had gone on in the office.
I don’t like novels where I know the ending halfway So it was only in the morning, on the 30-minute train
through. It just comes from personal preference. ride, that I could write.
And you’re right: The classic detective story has a Because I only had 30 minutes, it just didn’t seem
pretty predictable ending. There’s a crime, the detective
natural to try to connect things, because there was too
investigates, the detective solves it, good triumphs
much boiling up inside of me that demanded expression.
over evil and the guilty get punished. So it’s always a
Whatever I was feeling passionate about that I could
variation on that theme. I take a certain amount of
convert into fodder for the story I was beginning to tell,
godlike pleasure in toying with readers and sort of
I’d write down that day—whether it was dialogue, or a
rubbing my hands and going, They’re never going to
particular setting, or the history of a character, a piece
figure this one out.
of internal reflection about the justice system—I wrote it
down and figured I’d someday put it all together. Were it
A hallmark of your novels is the casual reappearance
not for the invention of the personal computer, I’m not
of characters from past books. These relationships
between characters seem to extend beyond what’s
sure that would’ve happened. But in 1982 I bought the
on the page. How extensively do you develop first of the so-called portable computers, which weighed
their backstories? only 40 pounds. I began typing in all these disparate
I am deeply struck by the way people move from the pieces and thinking about how they’d fit together, trying
background to the foreground in life. I got married again to put them in order. And that’s still the process I follow.
this last summer. The woman I married is someone who For about a year I write [each story] that way. I feel
I met 30 years ago. Twenty-five years later, through a my way along: Who is the main character, what is his
remarkable set of coincidences, we begin pursuing a per- family like, what are those relationships like? I know
sonal relationship and end up married five years [after what I want to write about in general, but the specific
that]. I just love that. I love the ironies of it. I love every- contours … I’ve got a lot of thinking to do. Once I’m
thing it says about the unpredictability of life. So I’ve done with that, I’ll begin trying to shape it, and that’s
built it into the novels. just a matter of sitting there and going, “What pieces fit
Will a character in the next book be thinking back to together?” And over the course of the year some sequence
something that happened while Bill ten Boom was U.S. would’ve begun to suggest itself to me. I almost never
attorney in Kindle County? You can virtually guarantee figure out the ultimate resolution—the whodunit—
it. The reflection about ten Boom will be nowhere near at that point.

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You’ve served two stints as president of The Authors
Guild. What compelled you to take on such a public SCENE OF THE CRIME
role in the interest of the greater writing community? Turow discusses the role setting plays in his fiction, and why
the backdrop of his latest, Testimony, is so different from
Some of it is natural to somebody who has been, at past works, at writersdigest.com/jun-17.
moments, a lawyer for the downtrodden. I’ve been
unbelievably fortunate in my writing career. I have been
author’s incomes on e-books have essentially been cut
deeply conscious of the fact that, for the privileged few
in half.
of us who can call ourselves bestselling writers, almost
Then you have the entry of Amazon. And Amazon,
everything that’s happened in publishing—and there’ve
in my view, engaged in what when I was in law school
been tremendous changes since One L was published 40
was called predatory pricing. They sold e-books for less
years ago—it’s worked to our advantage. It’s a phenom-
than they were paying the publishers for them. In my
enon of American society over the last 40 years that it’s
view, the point of this was as a barrier to entry to other
become much more a winner-take-all society. While it’s
people from getting into the e-book market, because
been great for bestselling authors, it hasn’t been good for
how many other companies can afford to enter a mar-
most people in the literary community. The notion that
ket where you’re losing two to five bucks every time you
you publish a couple of books and you have a career and
sell a book?
a publisher that’ll be publishing your books for the rest
The distortions that Amazon was creating in that
of your life, that went out the window. People scuffle to
market ended up coming at the expense of authors.
make a living.
There is absolutely nothing wrong with the e-book as
My perception of that became dramatically exacer-
bated by the digital revolution. What fundamentally an institution—it’s what’s come with it that’s perilous
happened is that [up to that point] authors controlled for authors.
their copyrights so they had control of the intellectual The other thing that concerns me is that as Amazon
property, and that gave them a certain bargaining posi- gets more and more control, they have certainly dis-
tion. With the advent of digital, you had a lot of other played an attitude of trying to cut down on the share that
intellectual property owners, whether Amazon or oth- goes to publishers. If they’re ever successful in getting
ers. But it’s all big capital. All of a sudden big capital is a rid of publishers, in my view, the authors are next. There
player and they’re in control in a much different way. won’t be anywhere else to go, and if Amazon says your
The result has turned into a massive food fight in royalty will be half of what it used to be, then it will be
which all of the various constituencies have decided half of what it used to be.
to improve their position at the expense of authors. I
was very proud to be a spokesperson for the American You’ve written 11 bestsellers over a four-decade
authorial community because, quite frankly, as a general writing career. How have you sustained such consis-
matter, they’re getting screwed. There’s a lot to complain tent success?
about—not for me, but for the other 99 percent. This process, for me, has not yet become dull. The begin-
nings with a book require a lot of self-discipline to
Significant as the digital shift has been, what is the make myself sit down. But once I’m into it, I get up in
biggest challenge you currently see for writers? the morning really looking forward to writing. And I
If you look at e-books in the big picture, they have look forward to what I’m going to discover—and, also,
every potential to expand the literary marketplace, and to taking advantage of what I’ve learned in writing the
because of that, to expand author’s earnings. [But] this last book and hopefully not making the same mistakes.
becomes an example of everybody [else wanting] to eat Making new mistakes, but not the same mistakes. So to
lunch at the author’s expense. You have publishers who whatever extent I get credit, I think it’s because I have
have succeeded in changing the royalty structure from not suffered any flagging of interest in what I’m writing. I
physical books to e-books, so what used to be based still love the process. I remind myself all the time: What
on the retail price of a hardcover [is now] based on the a life! You get handsomely rewarded for going upstairs
net sales. The division of the spoils in the hardcover every day and playing with your imaginary friends. WD
world is basically 50-50 between author and publisher.
The standard e-book royalty is 25 percent of the net, so Tyler Moss is the managing editor of Writer’s Digest.

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