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1. You risk as a parent to give him money
and that money could be used by your son
for the wrong thing.

2. Maybe it could be useful to give some

pocket money to your son only if you teach
to him/her how to spend them.

3. I can say that it could be an advantage

because it teaches children and teenagers
how to manage money buy what they want
and set aside money for hang out with
their friends.

4. In my opinion, instead of cash money,

cards should be given where parents can
put money and they can check how their
teenagers spend their money and
authorize their purchases.

5. (Conclusion) For me, this is the solution to

this problem even if everyone has a
different idea about it.

6. (Introduction) A lot of parents give their

pocket money to their sons, and in my
opinion it could be a great idea, also
because teenagers need to know how to
manage correctly your money and wasting
money for unuseless things.

7. (Conclusion) To sum up, I think, all things

could be done but in the right way.

8. Teenagers should have their own credit

card to manage their money. But parents
put a budget of money to spend each
month so teenagers don't spend all the
money once time and they can save it.

9. Pocket money is a sum of money that

parents give to their children to learn how
to manage money in their expenses.
Pocket money is a test to learn to know
the value of things and in this way the
teenager takes responsibility and decide
how to spend his money or save it.

10. Receiving pocket money could be right

especially when the children help at home
by cleaning or washing the dishes at least
as children they understand the value of
money and that you have to work to earn
it. Another reason why receiving pocket is
beneficial is they can start managing them.