Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Unit 10 (5%)
Part one
What advice would you give to a peer or friend who was tempted to use AI and/or other
services/tools to write their assignment for them?
I would like to give few suggestions to those who use AI or other services to write their
assignment.
2) Assignments are designed to learn skills which are useful in future career.so I
capability.
3) Relying on AI can make trouble to find dream job. Ended up with frustration and
anger in life.
4) If my friend found struggle in assignment, I would suggest him to seek help from
which carries a minimum one-year academic time limit and allows for reapplication prior
cause. Students may appeal to the Dean to have such notations removed from their
transcripts after a certain amount of time. These actions highlight the college's
environment.
Part three
Post feedback to two of your classmates on the discussion board. Then copy and paste
that feedback on this template and submit it in the assignment folder titled “Peer
Review.” To be evaluated, your reviews must be in both the discussion board and this
document. Your response must be a minimum of 350 words (one paragraph).
Reminders:
Suggest 3-6 goal-oriented tasks for the writer. Ie.,) change your thesis to include
frameworks you will be using. Include citations to your quotes.
Draft 1
Your Feedback:
Hi Hyeongjae Jang,
America. It is well written and cover major parts of your source article. Your draft
provides insight thought on racism and partiality at workplace. Look like you describe
every information from article, I suggest you make clear topic sentence first then
explain topic sentence with author's perspective. Use CRAAP method to write your
essay. Relevance information should be used in your final essay. You effectively
highlights the challenges but you should also address other issues like gender and
economic status. In your draft your summery is on point but the introduction looks very
long and its similar to a brief summary of article. It’s my analysis on your response.
Thank you.
Draft 2
Peer’s Name:
Your Feedback:
Your critique essay is well written and organized. I personally enjoy your writing skill
because during reading of your essay sentences I found it grammarless and complex.
Readers can enjoy your writing. However, if I talk about content of your essay, there
are few area that should be improved. Your thesis statement should be include at the
end of the introduction paragraph. Another point is your responsive paragraphs are
quite smaller. Moreover citations are not used properly, I cannot track outer sources
easily. You must provide citations quotes in inverted comas. This is my suggestions in
Thank you.
Please consult your instructor if more than two peer reviews are required.