Many people these days rely on traditional medicines rather than going to doctors. What are the causes?

Is this a
positive or negative development?

Introduction (2 Sentences)

1. Paraphrase the background information

2. Thesis statement – Answer question 1 and 2 in the same sentence with a suitable liking device

Body 1 – Reason 1 (70 – 80 Words / 4-5 Sentences)

Firstly, ____________________________________________________________________________________________.
In other words,
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For example, _______________________________________________________________________________________

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Hence, ___________________________________________________________________________________________.

Body 2 – Reason 2 (70-80 Words/ 4-5 Sentences)

Another reason is that ___________________________________________. That is to say, ________________________

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For instance, _______________________________________________________________________________________

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Therefore, _________________________________________________________________________________________.

Body 3 – Your personal view (70-80 Words/ 4-5 Sentences)

Finally, in my view, __________________________________________________________________________________.

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Conclusion (1- 2 Sentences)

1. Paraphrase your thesis statement

2. If conditional / Suggestion