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Essay 1 Peer Review
Essay 1 Peer Review
Dariana Contreras
ENGL 1301-130
21 September 2023
Border Region Behavioral Center in Laredo, Texas, engages women concerned with the
effects and possibilities of pregnancy, specifically postpartum depression, in 2023. One way they
alert their community about their services is through pamphlets so they will acknowledge and
carry them at busy times. BRBC's brochure provides advice, symptoms, and facts, the standard
information someone may see in a booklet, to understand the issue. Border Region Behavioral
Center uses the flier genre to show the purpose of postpartum depression, a medical condition
women may go through after giving birth. They demonstrate this by tailoring the aspects of a
pamphlet in an order that the audience may follow through from opening the brochure and giving
attention to the most prominent features, which are the title, subtitles, and lists.
The title is on the first page of the pamphlet that catches women’s attention or someone
concerned about a woman who can encounter this. Having “Is It Just The “Baby Blues
Or Is It Postpartum Depression?” attracts people seeking help for their mental health after
pregnancy. A reader can assume what will be shown inside with the title and either stay engaged
or not. With the title, the audience will mainly attract a woman who is uncertain of their
emotions. The woman would most likely expect to be informed inside the pamphlet to determine
make the written content easier to read and give it an organized structure. It helps readers
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navigate the pamphlet without much thought and leads them to the information they may be
skimming for. The order of the titles also keeps the readers engaged because of the developed
comprehension the author creates for them to grasp the content thoroughly. First, the title is
shown, then “postpartum depression” is shown with its definition below, and then it is “baby
blues” to show the symptoms; a woman may be curious after reading the description to be aware
of the difference between baby blues and postpartum depression then there are resources which
women would want after possibly knowing that they categorize to postpartum depression.
wording seem commonly written. In “Is It Just The “Baby Blues” Or Is It Postpartum
Depression?” Border Region Behavioral Center lists down symptoms in a brief way where there
are short sentences to highlight the critical points, for instance, “Mood swings from happy to
sad,” “Not wanting to eat or take care of yourself,” and “Irritable, overwhelmed, and anxious.”
These are all required information because they are general sentiments one may feel when
dealing with postpartum depression. Therefore, people can quickly determine what they are
explicitly experiencing. The writer also adds feelings to check if you must contact your health
provider. They list down “Severe depressive moods,” “Excessive crying,” “Difficulty bonding
with your baby,” “Inability to sleep or sleeping too much,” “reduced interest and pleasure in
activities you once enjoyed,” “Hopefulness, Shame worthlessness, guilt, and inadequacy
feelings,” which advise you that if you are undergoing these events, you should start being
Lastly, resources are shown on the last page to direct people to support and to take further
steps, which is part of their purpose. They write down their center, hotlines, and websites, all
with their contact information below them. This is shown at the end of the page, where it says,
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“Border Region Behavioral Health Center 1500 Pappas St. Laredo, TX 78041 (956) 794-3000,
24-Hour Crisis Hotline: 1-(800) 643-1102 www.borderregion.org, Crisis Text Line Text HELLO
Postpartum Depression Hotline 1 (800) PPD-MOMS,” to assist those who are now realizing that
they need care and are in urgent danger of harming themselves or their kid with postpartum or
they may have other questions to this medical condition that is not included in this pamphlet or
didn’t go in enough depth. Moreover, contact Information in a brochure lets people reach out
faster for support or questions. It leads readers to connect with the organization and take the
In 2023, the Border Region Behavioral Center assists women worried about pregnancy's
potential outcomes, particularly postpartum depression. They publish their text in a pamphlet to
offer options, symptoms, and facts—the typical information you could find in a booklet—to help
the reader comprehend the problem. Knowing the group of people they are trying to target, the
center also provides a structure their audience will almost certainly recognize and carry during a
hectic period. Border Region Behavioral Center illustrates its goal of raising awareness of
postpartum depression, a medical condition that some women experience after giving birth, by
organizing the pamphlet's elements to allow readers to pay close attention to its standout
elements after opening the brochure. It's important to notice what genre a community may use
because it shows what their audience may prefer. They chose a pamphlet to get their audience's
attention because they recognize that their readers can be focused on other responsibilities.
Readers should know the genre of a written text to have expectations of what may show up. Each
genre has distinctive conventions such as the title and subtitles, an overview of the topic, a list of
symptoms and sentiments to assist their audience in understanding their problem, and resources
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to provide more help. These elements work together to create a call to action that encourages