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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the
following topic:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard
enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Question:
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything
Topic
if they try hard enough.
Synonyms or related words for the key words in the writing task:
In some countries, students are educated that if they make every effort to achieve their
objectives, they will reach their goals. This perspective has its pros and cons, and I
will discuss the its impact on children following.
The advantage forof teaching this argument is that children may be motivated to work
hard, which is related to positive pysychology. Through encouraging students that
they will be successful, like promoting academic success, achieve career trajectories,
if they are able to consume much energy will become motivated to achieve their
objectives. In this case, motivated by teachers' or parents' words, students will make
efforts to achieve their goals. For instance, Tthis can be exampled seen in the
Confucian culture, such as Chinese studetnts. For most many of Chinese students,
their first classlesson after entering a primary school is that they should contribute
themselves on promotingstrive for academic su?ccess, then, they will become
advanced 'academic learners'. As a result, as Eencouraged by those words, some of
Chinese students will spend much time on lerarning, which can benefit their
performance academically academic performance.
Nevertheless, this argument can also lead to psychological anxiety and stress. This is
because, Iit is noticeable that one path to achieve ourone’s prurposes is complex, and
we there is a need to learn for many solutions. Only concentrating on hard-working
for students can be a challenge for them because students may also need other
resources and support to achieve their goals, such as access to educational materials,
guidance from teachers, and a supportive learning environment. For example, when I
was a high school students , and I was bad at learning math. My parents always said
that I was not good at learning math, because I spent less time on it. who are
struggling in a particular subject, may be overwhelmed with In this case, I suffered
from much anxiety and stress, since ? every day I spent more than five hours learning
this subject, but I still experienced bad scores for math.
In concludsion, teaching students that they will achieve anything if they are hard
working persevering has its advantages and drawbacks. One of advantages is that
students may become a hard working determined person; while a the disadvantage is
that srtudents may suffer from anxiety and stress.
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