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State Learning Standards RF.5.4
Identify relevant grade level standards Read with sufficient accuracy and fluency to support comprehension.
and Learning Outcomes from the State a. Read grade-level text with purpose and understanding.
Content Learning Standards, Common b. Read grade-level text orally with accuracy, appropriate rate, and expression on successive readings.
Core Standards, and school learning c. Use context to confirm or self-correct word recognition and understanding, rereading as necessary
outcomes.
Learning Targets/Objectives Lt- I can read a text fluently with the correct expression, intonation, and pace
What should the students know or be Lo- Students will be able to read fluently and accurately with the appropriate prosody and pace.
able to do after the instruction? Use a
common format with a measurable verb
that matches the cognitive domain
standard. This should be a small piece of
the standard stated in measurable
terms.
Grouping For the mini lessons students will be able to do these by themselves for the most part. If they chose to do so
Describe how and why students will be they can work with adults, teachers, peers, etc. Students will be able to read to themselves is the main goal of
divided into groups, if applicable this lesson as far as grouping.
(homogeneous, heterogenous, random /
based on ability, interest, social
purposes, etc.)
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Assessment Students will be assessed with the assessment that was first given to them. The passage will be different than
How will students demonstrate that the the initial one given to prevent students from memorizing where the steps of fluency need to take place.
focal student is making progress in
toward their fluency goals?
Instruction
Minilesson One From the reading strategies book: Lesson 4.20
1. Introduction (including setting This lesson focuses on phrasing which in my opinion, can also help with pace.
expectations and establishing The student will begin by choosing a text at their level that is interesting for them to read. Then the teacher
procedures and instructions) and student will walk over the instructions together and review when appropriate pausing is. Appropriate
2. Activate/Connect To Prior pausing is when you are supposed to pause naturally. This is usually caused by punctuation but can also be
Knowledge
caused when tension in a story builds up. To begin the lesson, I would have the students start by marking
3. Fluency Activity (including
modeled, guided, and independent where all of the punctuation is and where THEY think pauses should be. I will model this by reading the first
practice, as needed) couple of sentences of the passage then ask the student prompts such as “did it sound right when I stopped
there?” or “did the pause match the meaning of the text when I read it”. I would ask the student to continue
reading the passage while I listen. When I hear something off like read to fast or intentionally pausing in the
wrong place, I would ask the students the same prompts as before. After the student and I are finished. The
student will be able to choose another passage or practice the same passage by themselves for independent
practice.
Minilesson Two From the reading strategies book: Lesson 4.16
1. Introduction (including setting This lesson focuses on intonation and expression. This also will help with pacing while reading.
expectations and establishing The student will start out by choosing a text at their level that is interesting for them to read. The teacher and
procedures and instructions) student will walk over the instructions together and review the different punctuation and what they mean. I
2. Activate/Connect To Prior will start the lesson by modeling a section of the reading where there is a lot of expression. I will ask the
Knowledge
student what I did to match the character and how I knew that I needed to change my expression to match the
3. Fluency Activity (including
modeled, guided, and independent story. Once the student correctly answers that, the student will begin to read the story aloud to me. The
practice, as needed) objective here is to read like a storyteller so the student must put themselves in the shoes of a storyteller to an
audience looking to enjoy the story. The student will begin to read and throughout I will pause them and ask
what the character is feeling, how they should be reading, and what is making their expression the way it is. At
the end of the lesson, we will review the key components on how to expressively read. The student will be
able to do this with a partner or by themselves, either way the student choses, they can chose another passage
or keep the passage for independent or partner practice.
Instructional Materials, Copies of different grade level text the students can use to practice with
Equipment and Technology Writing utensils/highlighters to mark up text
List equipment or technology that needs
to be available. Attach a copy of ALL
materials the teacher and students will
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use during the lesson; e.g., handouts,
questions to answer, overheads,
PowerPoint slides, worksheets.
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Jessie Dahms
EDU 443
10/8/23
Dear Parents,
Today, October 5, 2023, your child and I read a piece of text for a fluency assessment. Fluency is
the ability to read with speed, accuracy, and proper expression and volume. Teachers do these
reports and assessments for students to ensure that they are ready for the next step in being able
to read, comprehension. I based my assessment off four key components that students need to
accomplish to be considered fluent. These include phrasing, expression and volume, smoothness,
and pace. Each of these components is rated on a 4-point scale with 4 being at grade level and 1
being below grade level. In this report, I will describe each score your child received in each of
the categories as well as two major goals your child should focus on. I will also include two
The first component of fluency that was on the rubric was expression and volume. When a child
reads with expression and volume, they show enthusiasm within the text and varies their tone to
match their interpretation of the passage. I have chosen to give your child a 3 for this component.
In the text were a few sentences with exclamation points as ending punctuation. Most of the
time, these were expressed through his reading. Out of the four exclamation points, three of them
were apparent. Also, on the second page of the passage, were quotations because another
character in the story was speaking. Ashton did a magnificent job at recognizing this and
adjusting his voice and volume to match what was happening in the story. One of Ashtons
weaknesses would be keeping at a consistent, strong volume. In some parts of the story, I noticed
his voice get slightly softer when he was unsure of what he was reading and what was going on
in the story. This is why I gave your child a score of three. A three is considered almost at grade
level. If Ashton can maintain a strong volume throughout the text and recognize and adjust to the
The second component of the rubric is phrasing. Phrasing is defined by the grouping of words
into meaningful phrases. This includes when a student reads with run on sentences or reads in a
very choppy manner. I chose to give your child a 3 in this category as well primarily because he
read with a heavy amount of run on sentences. Multiple times throughout the passage, Ashton
disregarded the natural pauses from the periods or commas. In the beginning, while Ashton was
reading, he had skipped the first two periods of the passage. This caused for a run on sentence of
half the paragraph. Another example was at the end of the second paragraph. Ashton missed the
paused and continued onto the third paragraph without the natural break that needs to happen
between paragraphs. One of Ashtons strengths were his intonation while he reads. He stressed
most of the exclamation points and quotations to really depict what the story is about.
The third component of fluency is smoothness. Smoothness refers to when the student
accomplishes word recognition that is appropriate for grade level and can self-correct when
something goes wrong. I decided to give your student a 4 in this category. I think he did a
wonderful job with self-correction and his word recognition. For example, in the fourth
paragraph of the passage, Ashton stated the wrong word, recognized it, went back, and reread it
with his self-correction. This was a prime example of self-correction. With the exception of
needing to work on phrasing and pace, which I will explain in a little bit, the smoothness of the
overall passage was impressive. It flowed very nicely, and the student hardly had any difficulty
with words.
The last category in the fluency rubric was pace. Pace refers to the rate of reading or the speed of
the reader. To get a four, we aim for the student to have a conversational pace with consistency
and an appropriate speed. For this section, I am giving your child a 2. Throughout the passage,
Ashton reads very quickly. This is what I believe to have caused him to miss the ending
punctuation of most sentences. If Ashton could slow down his pace throughout the reading, he
would most likely improve every other category in the fluency rubric. I would say that it is better
for him to read quickly rather than laboriously because when he is reading slower, it is harder to
understand if he is struggling with decoding words or understanding the story. When he reads
From these results, I have concluded two different goals for your child. These goals are pace and
expression and volume. Working on these two goals will also help improve the phrasing of the
reading. With this being said, there are things that you and your child can do at home to help
improve these areas of fluency to help get your child on the correct path in reading. I have
provided two separate activities for your students to take part in that will target these areas to
make progress. One of these activities is called Make the Pause Match the Meaning. This activity
focuses on the aspect of pace. Since pace has to do with appropriate pausing, this activity would
help the student learn when to pause within a passage such as at periods and will improve the
pace. When the reader can pause at the right time, it is easier to think about the meaning of the
story. The other activity is called Read Like a Storyteller. This activity is mainly focused
expression and intonation. I would consider this fun and engaging, and a student can do a ton
with this activity. This is one activity that will also help with pace and phrasing since the reader
is supposed to be reading like the storyteller which means the reader needs to also slow down to
fully understand the story and help the audience understand it too.
Jessie Dahms
EDU 443
10/8/23
In my work of doing a fluency assessment, it opened my eyes to where 6 th grade students really
are in terms of reading aloud. Previously I had a fifth-grade classroom as a placement but was
never able to see reading lessons since they had been taught at the end of the day. Being able to
actively engage with my students one on one was awesome. Especially since these students can
read and understand a piece of text as well as my feedback for their assessment. During this
assignment I was able to also connect with one of my students and get to know more about them,
which was awesome. I chose to do my two major goals as prosody and pace before phrasing
because pace and phrasing are similar, not the same, but working on pace will help the student
with phrasing. I chose prosody as a goal as well because I felt like the student would be able to
hit it out of the park if he had nailed it in expression and volume. I felt that if the student can
maintain a confident, strong volume, he would be able to feel more confident in his reading. The
student also knew that this was an assessment of some sort, so I think his anxiety might have
been raised which caused him to read quickly. I chose the activities I did for this student because
they are engaging. They might seem silly for a middle school student, but sometimes it’s the silly
stuff that’s the most memorable and engaging. I also chose lesson 4.16 (reading like a storyteller)
because the students can do this one with a partner. Each student would take turns reading to
each other. They could also do this by reading in different tones to depict different story tellers. I
chose 4.20 also because I felt like it is extremely easy for pause to change the meaning of a story.
When I found this activity, it made me think of the meme of why punctuation is important (lets
eat grandma vs lets eat, grandma). Pausing in a story is very effective to create a mood in a piece
of writing, which is what students would be learning later in school. Overall, this was a cool
assignment and it helped me to engage with my students and make them a little bit more
comfortable with me. Fluency is an important part of reading and students need to have