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beginning of words.
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
Nobody knows why we love to hear words that begin with the same letter, but we do and Shakespeare knew
it. So he picked the word barge and worked from there. Barge begins with a B, so Shakespeare sat back and
said to himself: “The barge she sat in was like a . . .” And then (though I can’t prove this) he said: “Ba . . .
ba . . . ba . . . burnished throne.” He jotted that down and then he decided to do another. “The barge she sat in
like a burnished throne . . . ba . . . ba . . . burned? It burned on the water.” And the poop was gold? Not any
more: the poop was beaten gold. That’s four Bs in two lines. Enough to be getting on with. Shakespeare
could have got carried away and written something like:
The barge she basked in, like a burnished boat Burned by the banks, the back was beaten brass.
(Or) Thomas De Quincey, famous junkie and prose stylist, got himself all muddled up over this sentence:
At present, after exchanging a few parting words, and a few final or farewell farewells with my faithful
female agent . . .
ANAPHORA: A figure of speech that repeats the first word or group of words in sentences that follow one
another. This is especially used in poetry.
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
Anaphora (an-AFF-or-a) is starting each sentence with the same words. It’s the king of rhetorical figures. It’s
so preposterously easy to do. It’s so preposterously easy to pick some words. It’s so preposterously easy to
repeat them. Everyone can do it. Everyone can start a sentence the same way. It takes no skill. It takes . . .
Or, if you want a more modern magnificence, there is this achingly beautiful disco song by a young lady
called Katy Perry:
You’re hot then you’re cold. You’re yes then you’re no. You’re in then you’re out. You’re up then you’re down.
—> OXYMORON : form of antithesis were the two words that oppose are next to one another :
« a dark light » or « a screaming silence »
ASSONANCES: A figure of speech that uses a repetition of the same vowel sound.
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
Assonance is repeating a vowel sound: deep heat or blue moon. It is, I’m afraid, the thin and flimsy cousin of
alliteration. “Is this” has assonance on “i.” “A dagger that” has assonance on “a.” “I see before me” has
assonance on “ee.”.
BLAZON: A figure of speech in which a writer (most of the times a poet in love) makes a list of the body
parts of their lover and attach similes and comparisons to them.
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
When healthy people fall in love, they buy a bunch of flowers or an engagement ring and go and Do
Something About It. When poets fall in love, they make a list of their loved one’s body parts and attach
similes to them. Your lips are like cherries, your hair is like gold, and your eyes are like traffic lights that
make my heart stop and go. These lists are almost universally awkward.
CHIASMUS: Figure of speech which arranges the structure of a sentence on order for it to look symmetrical
: ex « The sails dropped down, down dropped the sails. »
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
Human beings, for some reason or another, like symmetry. You leave a bunch of them next to a jungle for a
couple of days and you’ll come back to find an ornamental garden. We take stones and turn them into the Taj
Mahal or St. Paul’s Cathedral. Of course, a few things in nature are symmetrical anyway —snowflakes and
leaves and the like—but their symmetry is never at a glance; you have to hold the leaf up at the right angle or
run through the blizzard with a magnifying glass. When a chap makes something symmetrical he tends to set
up a grand avenue so that you can see it is, and then he puts trees on either side. Nature is not symmetrical
and symmetry is not natural. This love of symmetry carries straight over into words. At the smallest level
you have the palindrome where the letters answer one another across the sentence. The palindrome is an old
tradition: the first thing that man ever said was, probably, “Madam, I’m Adam.” And it has caused terrible
distress to even the greatest literary minds. The only reason that T. S. Eliot insisted on the middle initial was
that he was painfully aware of what his name would have been without it, backwards. For a short while, he
became so paranoid that he decided to use his middle name instead and introduced himself as T. Stearns
Eliot. The phase did not last, but it’s probably why his first great poem was called “The Love Song of J.
Alfred Prufrock.” But beyond the microscopic symmetries of the palindrome there are the grander and more
obvious ones of chiasmus, where the words of the first half are mirrored in the second. There was a musical
that came out in 1925 called No, No, Nanette. But the only lines anybody can remember now are:
HYPERBOLE: An exaggeration.
- What Mark Forsyth tells us about it in The Elements of Eloquence:
Hyperbole (pronounced hi-PER-boh-lee) is the technical term for exaggeration, and even though we have
literally thousands of English words that mean the same thing, hyperbole is one of the few technical Greek
rhetorical terms that absolutely everybody knows. That may be because we exaggerate constantly. The
human being is the great embroiderer. It’s not enough for us to say that we waited for ten minutes; we have
to wait “for ages.” If I’ve told you twice, I’ve told you a thousand times. If you’re rich, you have a ton of
money. It’s enough to make you break down in a flood of tears.
Dearly beloved, we are gathered together in the sight of God, and in the face of this congregation, to join
together this man and this woman in Holy Matrimony . . .
Please,
Lend your little ear to my pleas
Lend a ray of cheer to my pleas
And Lennon’s explanation of his own lyrics was that in that song “I was always intrigued by the double use
of the word ‘Please.’” Of course, in those lyrics the second please is spelled pleas, but that doesn’t matter.
It’s still polyptoton if the words have a close etymological connection, or are just different parts of the same
verb.
I love the smell of napalm in the morning. You know, one time we had a hill bombed, for twelve hours. [ . . . ]
The smell, you know that gasoline smell, the whole hill. Smelled like . . . victory. Someday this war’s gonna
end . . .