Do you think small creatures can be useful to us?

I think small creatures can help us, because they can tell and give us
many things. Meanwhile, some creatures can help plants on the
ground. Sometimes they may be annoying, but they are very useful
or helpful to us. However, some of them are not (considered) good,
like flies and mosquitos mosquitoes around the house.
Small creatures can help us by telling us things we don’t know.
Some creatures tell us by their sounds and emotions, some can tell us
by their actions. For example, when dragonflies flies fly lower, that
tells us it’s going to rain very soon.
Small creatures are very helpful in the cycle of our human life. For
example, bees are very important because they pollinate food crops.
Pollination is where what happens when insects move pollen from
one plant to another, fertilizing the plants so they can produce fruit,
vegetables, seeds and so on. If all the bees went extinct, it would
destroy the delicate balance of the Earth’s ecosystem and affect
global food supplies.

Grammatically and vocabulary-wise your essay is quite good.

However, I would like to suggest some changes to improve its
coherence.
Paragraph 1: Introduce the topic (give a general statement without
including examples), e.g.
Although many of us think they are annoying, tiny creatures are
actually very useful in many different ways.
Paragraph 2: Talk about why some people are annoyed by them and
also include the fact that many of us are not aware of their
importance.
Paragraph 3: Discuss the importance of small creatures.
Remember – one main idea per paragraph!
I can see that you have done some research before writing this essay,
which is great. Feel free to include any thing we have talked about in
class, too. For example, small creatures break down dead plant and
animal material returning nutrients to plants, etc.
Altogether, well-done! Keep up the hard work! :)