WRITING (21-5-2022)

Many people think that modern communication technology is having some

negative effects on social relationships.

Do you agree or disagree? Write an essay of about 150-180 words to illustrate your
points.

 Paragraph 1 - Introduction
o Sentence 1 – Paraphrase question
o Sentence 2 – Thesis statement (It is agreed …/ It is disagreed …)
o Sentence 3 - Outline sentence (This essay will discuss ….)
 Paragraph 2 – Main body 1
o Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
o Sentence 2 – Explain topic sentence
o Sentence 3 - Example
o (Sentence 4 – Conclusion)
 Paragraph 3 – Main body 1
o Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
o Sentence 2 – Explain topic sentence
o Sentence 3 - Example
o (Sentence 4 – Conclusion)
 Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
o Sentence 1 - Summary
o Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
o Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

In recent years modern technology has become more and more popular with daily
communication. And modern communication technology is thought to be having
some negative effects on social relationships. To my knowledge, I am both agree
and disagree with this statement. I will list some reasons to support my viewpoint.

Nowadays, the current extremely worrying situation is covid 19 that lead to

communication by technology is so useful. For instance, technology allows people
to communicate and chat easily in spite of geographical distance. And
communication technology can help you to connect with other people. One
example is you are able to find someone who with similar hobby in order to
confide.

On the other hand, I’m sure that there are undeniable disadvantages that modern
communication technology brings. Firstly, situation friends communication with
each other through social networks is increasing; therefore, relationships will be
far-off. For illustration, some people prefer living virtual to facing the facts that
makes them lack of confidence when communicating face to face. Secondly,
another example is communication through the phone will make words not enough
to convey what we want to say.

Ultimately, it’s true to say that communication technology provides both benefit
and harmful.