ABEE3004

Urban Design Theory

Illustrated Essay Feedback and Comments

Autumn Semester
2022-23

Student: Herbie HUDSON Provisional Grade: 80%

Aspect of Strengths Areas for Improvement

Essay
General An excellent essay and really enjoyable to
read!

Well presented and crafted essay.

Structure Good structure and organisation.
Writing Style A clear and analytical essay.

Articulately written essay.

Introduction Excellent introduction to the essay that
clearly explains the structure of the essay.
Literature Very well written literature review that
Review critically reviews key texts.

Very good range of source material for

literature review.

Quotations well used.

Demonstrates an in-depth understanding

of the topic.
Referencing Accurately referenced throughout.
Case Studies The case study is particularly strong and
‘draws upon’ the theory examined in the
literature review.

Interesting and relevant case study.

Examples Good use of examples to inform the
discussion in the literature review.
Illustrations Well illustrated with well selected and Some more of your own analytical
appropriate images. plans/diagrams would help to explain the case
study.
Sources of all illustrations accurately
referenced.
Conclusions Strongly concluded essay with insightful
thoughts.
Bibliography Complete bibliography. Bibliography should be organised
alphabetically by authors family name.

Excellent!